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* BiTheWay: David's drawings reveal that he's bi.
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* FurryFandom: David is a furry and that ends up bringing a lot of problems to him.
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* TheWoobie: David.
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* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenic furry]].
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''Dakota'', by Vermin616, is a {{VideoGame/Star Fox}} fanfiction where Fox McCloud is sent years back in time and crashes his ship into Earth. A furry gamer teenager by the name of David Dakota ends up meeting him and brings him to his house before the military could get a hold of him. Now, Dakota, with one of his favorite video game characters in his house, has the objective of hiding him from humanity at all costs.
The fanfic has been praised for its plot and its jaw-dropping unexpectable ending. It's filled with {{Foreshadowing}} and has no shipping involved. Dakota and Fox are nothing but [[HeterosexualLifePartners friends]].
The story has 7 Chapters (8 if you count the extra one) and can be read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11139731/1/Dakota
The fanfic has been praised for its plot and its jaw-dropping unexpectable ending. It's filled with {{Foreshadowing}} and has no shipping involved. Dakota and Fox are nothing but [[HeterosexualLifePartners friends]].
The story has 7 Chapters (8 if you count the extra one) and can be read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11139731/1/Dakota
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''Dakota'', by Vermin616, is a {{VideoGame/Star Fox}} ''VideoGame/StarFox'' fanfiction where Fox McCloud [=McCloud=] is sent years back in time and crashes his ship into Earth. A furry gamer teenager by the name of David Dakota ends up meeting him and brings him [=McCloud=] to his house before the military could can get a hold of him. Now, Dakota, with one of his favorite video game characters in his house, has the objective of hiding him from humanity at all costs.
The fanfic has been praised for its plot and its jaw-droppingunexpectable ending. TwistEnding. It's filled with {{Foreshadowing}} {{foreshadowing}} and has no shipping involved. Dakota and Fox [=McCloud=] are nothing but [[HeterosexualLifePartners friends]].
The story has7 Chapters (8 seven chapters (eight if you count the extra one) and can be read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11139731/1/Dakota
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The fanfic has been praised for its plot and its jaw-dropping
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* AbusiveParents: David's dad not only beats him up at a certain point of the fanfic, but he also [[spoiler: forces David to eat whatever is left of his lunch after he's done with it. And that isn't the first time he does that.]]
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: One of the theories is that the whole fanfic was David daydreaming about the future as he was making his way to the principal's office about the drawing]].
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* AbusiveParents: David's dad not only beats him up at a certain point of in the fanfic, but he also [[spoiler: forces [[spoiler:forces David to eat whatever is left of his lunch after he's done with it. And that isn't the first time he does that.]]
* AlliterativeName: David Dakota
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: One of the theories is that the whole fanfic was David daydreaming about the future as he was making his way to the principal's office about thedrawing]].drawing.]]
* AlliterativeName: David Dakota
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* CooldownHug: Fox gives one to David after [[spoiler:Wolf murders his David's parents]].
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* HeroicBSOD: Fox has one after he [[spoiler: sees [[spoiler:sees David's drawings]].
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* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: David's town is never revealed. All the information we got is that it's not really know across America.
* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenic furry]].
* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenic furry]].
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* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: David's town is never revealed. All the information we got is that it's not really know known across America.
* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenicfurry]].furry]].
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* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenic
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* MeaningfulName: The name Dakota means "friend" and "ally".
* [[spoiler:NukeEm: One of David's biggest nightmares is that America gets nuked by North Korea. That eventually happens...[[MindScrew or does it?]]]]
* MeaningfulName: The name Dakota means "friend" and "ally".
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''For how long can David Dakota keep his favorite video game character under the covers?''
''Dakota'', by Vermin616, is a {{VideoGame/Star Fox}} fanfiction where Fox McCloud is sent years back in time and crashes his ship into Earth. A furry gamer teenager by the name of David Dakota ends up meeting him and brings him to his house before the military could get a hold of him. Now, Dakota, with one of his favorite video game characters in his house, has the objective of hiding him from humanity at all costs.
The fanfic has been praised for its plot and its jaw-dropping unexpectable ending. It's filled with {{Foreshadowing}} and has no shipping involved. Dakota and Fox are nothing but [[HeterosexualLifePartners friends]].
The story has 7 Chapters (8 if you count the extra one) and can be read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11139731/1/Dakota
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!!''Dakota'' contains examples of:
* AbusiveParents: David's dad not only beats him up at a certain point of the fanfic, but he also [[spoiler: forces David to eat whatever is left of his lunch after he's done with it. And that isn't the first time he does that.]]
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: One of the theories is that the whole fanfic was David daydreaming about the future as he was making his way to the principal's office about the drawing]].
* AnotherDimension
* BiTheWay: David's drawings reveal that he's bi.
* CooldownHug: Fox gives one to David after [[spoiler:Wolf murders his parents]].
* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: David, after shooting his bully at school, shoots himself in the head right after. He survives and is sent to a sanatorium...[[MindScrew or does he?]]]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: A lot.
* FurryFandom: David is a furry and that ends up bringing a lot of problems to him.
* GainaxEnding: One of the biggest Star Fox fanfiction [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] in existance.
* GoshDangItToHeck: Fox does not like swearing and therefore, he always says "Gosh" instead of "God".
* HeroicBSOD: Fox after he [[spoiler: sees David's drawings]].
* [[spoiler:NukeEm: One of David's biggest nightmares is that America gets nuked by North Korea. That eventually happens...[[MindScrew or does it?]]]]
* JerkAss: Unsurprisingly, [[spoiler:Wolf]].
** Also, David's father..
* OnlyFriend: Fox is David's only friend after the school incident.
* TheWoobie: David.
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: David's town is never revealed. All the information we got is that it's not really know across America.
* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenic furry]].
''Dakota'', by Vermin616, is a {{VideoGame/Star Fox}} fanfiction where Fox McCloud is sent years back in time and crashes his ship into Earth. A furry gamer teenager by the name of David Dakota ends up meeting him and brings him to his house before the military could get a hold of him. Now, Dakota, with one of his favorite video game characters in his house, has the objective of hiding him from humanity at all costs.
The fanfic has been praised for its plot and its jaw-dropping unexpectable ending. It's filled with {{Foreshadowing}} and has no shipping involved. Dakota and Fox are nothing but [[HeterosexualLifePartners friends]].
The story has 7 Chapters (8 if you count the extra one) and can be read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11139731/1/Dakota
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!!''Dakota'' contains examples of:
* AbusiveParents: David's dad not only beats him up at a certain point of the fanfic, but he also [[spoiler: forces David to eat whatever is left of his lunch after he's done with it. And that isn't the first time he does that.]]
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: One of the theories is that the whole fanfic was David daydreaming about the future as he was making his way to the principal's office about the drawing]].
* AnotherDimension
* BiTheWay: David's drawings reveal that he's bi.
* CooldownHug: Fox gives one to David after [[spoiler:Wolf murders his parents]].
* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: David, after shooting his bully at school, shoots himself in the head right after. He survives and is sent to a sanatorium...[[MindScrew or does he?]]]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: A lot.
* FurryFandom: David is a furry and that ends up bringing a lot of problems to him.
* GainaxEnding: One of the biggest Star Fox fanfiction [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] in existance.
* GoshDangItToHeck: Fox does not like swearing and therefore, he always says "Gosh" instead of "God".
* HeroicBSOD: Fox after he [[spoiler: sees David's drawings]].
* [[spoiler:NukeEm: One of David's biggest nightmares is that America gets nuked by North Korea. That eventually happens...[[MindScrew or does it?]]]]
* JerkAss: Unsurprisingly, [[spoiler:Wolf]].
** Also, David's father..
* OnlyFriend: Fox is David's only friend after the school incident.
* TheWoobie: David.
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: David's town is never revealed. All the information we got is that it's not really know across America.
* WordOfGod: Vermin thought the ending of the story was too confusing and made an extra chapter, where he explains all of the story and reveals that [[spoiler: Fox and Wolf are nothing but David's split personalities and that the whole fanfic was David simply trying to accept that he was a schizophrenic furry]].
