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* AdaptationalKarma: While neither have died in this fic, both Tanakas were apprehended by V, an Arasaka's Counter-intel agent, which is arguably a FateWorseThanDeath.
* AffectionateNickname: Lucy calls David "Puppy", on the fact that she is his first relationship ever. This is also how the other crew members describe David's affection for Lucy.

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* AdaptationalKarma: Tanaka Sr. dies from being assaulted by Tygers not long after he was arrested by V. While neither have died in this fic, both Tanakas were apprehended by V, an Arasaka's Counter-intel agent, which Katsuo is arguably a FateWorseThanDeath.
his father's sole inheritor, he also inherits the debt his father racks up from feeding his XBD addiction, forcing him to sell almost everything to settle it, leaving him with some clothes and bare furnitures.
* AffectionateNickname: Lucy calls David "Puppy", on the fact that she is his first romantic relationship ever. This is also how the other crew members describe David's affection for Lucy.



* GreenEyedMonster: Katsuo, after seeing David not only get better chrome, but become smarter than him.

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* GreenEyedMonster: Katsuo, after seeing David not only get gets better chrome, chrome but become becomes smarter than him.him.
** As it turns out, Katsuo is already envious of David for having a loving & caring mother and starts to hate him because he squanders it with having a side job as XBD seller.



* KnightOfCerebus: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, who are obtaining various perks due to the FixFic plotline. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Then, however, V attracts the attention of [[ArchnemesisDad his truly vile father]], Robert John Linder Junior, a high-ranking Arasaka exec and sadistic ControlFreak who subjected V to a [[AbusiveParent torturous upbringing]], has his wife Eleanor locked in a GildedCage under twenty-four-hour surveillance, and tried to have Gloria assassinated when he discovered she was pregnant with V's child. He quickly sics mercenaries on V's family, with the aim of having them kidnapped once he deems it appropriate. Chapters 22 and 25 prove that he's ''[[KickTheDog even worse]]'' than he first appeared, showing him [[spoiler:[[EvilerThanThou upstaging Faraday]] in a horrifically brutal manner, demonstrating that he has a penchant for using [[MindControl Doll chips and brainwashing]] to control people, including his wife, who [[DrivenToSuicide has tried to kill herself multiple times]] as a result]], and is planning ''something'' deeply unpleasant for V, Gloria, David, Lucy and everyone else involved based on his twisted idea of "family". It's apparent that as soon as he shows his hand, things are going to get ''very bad'', very fast.

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* KnightOfCerebus: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, who are obtaining various perks due to the FixFic plotline. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Then, however, V attracts the attention of [[ArchnemesisDad his truly vile father]], Robert John Linder Junior, a high-ranking Arasaka exec and sadistic ControlFreak who subjected V to a [[AbusiveParent torturous upbringing]], has his wife Eleanor locked in a GildedCage under twenty-four-hour surveillance, and tried to have Gloria assassinated when he discovered she was pregnant with V's child. He quickly sics mercenaries on V's family, with the aim of having them kidnapped once he deems it appropriate. Chapters 22 and 25 prove that he's ''[[KickTheDog even worse]]'' than he first appeared, showing him [[spoiler:[[EvilerThanThou upstaging Faraday]] in a horrifically brutal manner, demonstrating that he has a penchant for using [[MindControl Doll chips and brainwashing]] to control people, including his wife, who [[DrivenToSuicide has tried to kill herself multiple times]] as a result]], and is planning ''something'' deeply unpleasant for V, Gloria, David, Lucy and everyone else involved based on his twisted idea of "family". It's apparent that as soon as he shows his hand, things are going to get ''very bad'', very fast.



* NobleDemon: As business-driven as Saburo Arasaka is, he still implements family-oriented policies in the company, such as an immediate message to an employee's loved ones if they are passing.

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* NobleDemon: NobleDemon:
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As business-driven as Saburo Arasaka is, he still implements family-oriented policies in the company, such as an immediate message to an employee's loved ones if they are passing.passing.
** [[TheBully Katsuo]] is a believer of SelfMadeMan with an intense dislike of XBD due to his father's addiction to it means he has no time for him, and so he hates David for disrespecting Gloria's financial sacrifice by doing the bare minimum at the academy and becoming XBD seller under her nose without sharing the profit with her.
---> “When I first learned it was just you and your mother, and how much she cared. I almost envied you. Then I learned more about you, and it disgusted me. I might have forgiven you if you had a valid excuse; "Oh, I didn't have time to study because I needed to work my night job to help my mom". And don't try to argue that pushing XBDs was a job. I'm sure selling illegal soft to our classmates brought in the cash, but I doubt your mom saw a single eddy of it.



* PapaWolf: V may only entered The Martinez's life recently, but he will give it all when their life is on the line. Ask the Animal gang members responsible for Gloria's accident and Maine's crews.
* PoorCommunicationKills: ''Almost''. Maine thought Gloria ghosted after he pay for the chrome, and that a kid has the one he seeks, while Jackie and V thought someone was honey-trapping David to get the Sandy off him, which would kill the kid.
* RedBaron: V is known as "The Plagues" within Arasaka's Counter-Intel circles from what he has done to [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].

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* PapaWolf: V may only entered enter The Martinez's life recently, but he will give it all when their life is on the line. Ask the Animal gang members responsible for Gloria's accident and Maine's crews.
* PoorCommunicationKills: ''Almost''. Maine thought Gloria ghosted after he pay paid for the chrome, and that a kid has the one he seeks, while Jackie and V thought someone was honey-trapping David to get the Sandy Sandevistan off him, which would kill the kid.
* RedBaron: V is known as "The Plagues" within Arasaka's Counter-Intel circles from for what he has done to [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].



* ScrewLearningIHavePhlebotinum: Training Shards is this, which Gloria dislikes, finding it to be a "shortcut" that makes her hard work putting David into Arasaka Academy to be AllForNothing.

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* ScrewLearningIHavePhlebotinum: Training Shards is this, which Gloria dislikes, finding it to be a "shortcut" that makes her hard work putting David into Arasaka Academy to be AllForNothing.
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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: V & David has one when they went to the Trauma Center after the first day of the exam.

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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: V & David has have one when they went to the Trauma Center after the first day of the exam.
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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: Lucy refuses to admit that she has feelings for David despite constant needling from the rest of the Crew. Kiwi has to trick her into admitting she went home and fell asleep in bed with him after watching some movies (Lucy denies actually having sex with him, and what we do see implies she's right).

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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: Lucy refuses to admit that she has feelings for David despite constant needling from the rest of the Crew. Kiwi has to trick her into admitting she went home and fell asleep in bed with him after watching some movies (Lucy denies actually having sex with him, and what we do see implies she's right).right).
* HigherUnderstandingThroughDrugs: Misty always wishes to experience this, so when Jackie gets high by overexposure to drug explosion, she decided to document his rambling, hoping that his acid trip turns out to be this.
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* MushroomSamba: When the crew tries to raid Tyger Claw's drug-producing plant, one of the Tyger Claws tosses an explosive into the production machine, causing it to explode and exposing the crew who were in the building a heavy dose of said drugs, causing this to them.


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* SecretlyWealthy: As it turns out, Dorio has a well-kept, clean, fancy apartment she got from her Suit parents.
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* TragicKeepsake: A lot of Maine's cyberwares were used to belongs to his former squamates', hence his initial hesitation to chrome down. now, it decorated his apartment after chroming down.
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* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three clueless thugs who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed''. She does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:

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* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three clueless thugs who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed''.crashed'". She does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:
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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar in between their [[spoiler:failure on killing Faraday]], and Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.

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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar in between their [[spoiler:failure on killing to kill Faraday]], and Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.



* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three green goons who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed''. She does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:

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* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three green goons clueless thugs who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed''. She does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:
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-->'''Kiwi:''' And you're (Lucy) stuck with the love-struck puppy who's begging for your attention.
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* StacysMom: Gender [[InvertedTrope inverted]]; Rebbeca ''really'' wants to bone V, much to his discomfort and David's embarrassment.

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* StacysMom: StacysMom:
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Gender [[InvertedTrope inverted]]; Rebbeca ''really'' wants to bone V, much to his discomfort and David's embarrassment.embarrassment.
** Then [[PlayingWithATrope Played ]] [[{{Irony}} Straight]] when Rebbeca ''also'' wants to bang Gloria as well.
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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar, and is followed by Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.

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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar, Pilar in between their [[spoiler:failure on killing Faraday]], and is followed by Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler:In Chapter 25, V's [[AbusiveParents father]] goes to Dogtown to meet with Kurt Hansen, the leader of Barghest and one of the main antagonists of Phantom Liberty. Linder is impressed by the control Hansen exerts over Dogtown, and the two seem to be building up to a [[VillainTeamUp Villain Team-Up.]]]]
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* FullConversionCyborg: Gloria decided to get a full Chrome conversion during her stay at the Trauma Center, as the injuries suffered during the car crash would never fully heal and cause her chronic pain. This involves transplanting her brain into a fully customized "Gemini" frame that looks exactly like her previous body. This new was supposed to be a base-line civilian model, but V's ([[ProperlyParanoid justified]]) paranoia led him to make it capable of SuperStrength and [[MadeOfIron immune to everything but anti-tank weaponry]].

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* FullConversionCyborg: Gloria decided to get a full Chrome conversion during her stay at the Trauma Center, as the injuries suffered during the car crash would never fully heal and cause her chronic pain. This involves transplanting her brain into a fully customized "Gemini" frame that looks exactly like her previous body. This new body was supposed to be a base-line civilian model, but V's ([[ProperlyParanoid justified]]) paranoia led him to make it capable of SuperStrength and [[MadeOfIron immune to everything but anti-tank weaponry]].
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* FullConversionCyborg: Gloria decided to get a full Chrome conversion during her stay at the Trauma Center, which means putting her brain in a fully customized body that looked like her previous body.

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* FullConversionCyborg: Gloria decided to get a full Chrome conversion during her stay at the Trauma Center, which means putting as the injuries suffered during the car crash would never fully heal and cause her chronic pain. This involves transplanting her brain in into a fully customized body "Gemini" frame that looked looks exactly like her previous body.body. This new was supposed to be a base-line civilian model, but V's ([[ProperlyParanoid justified]]) paranoia led him to make it capable of SuperStrength and [[MadeOfIron immune to everything but anti-tank weaponry]].
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** Then it gets more literal when V [[spoiler: temporarily succumbs into cyberpsychosis]] while chasing Faraday.

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** Then it gets more literal when V [[spoiler: temporarily succumbs into cyberpsychosis]] while chasing Faraday.Faraday, [[spoiler:forcing Jackie and Maine to fight him to stop him]].
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* FullConversionCyborg: Gloria decided to get a full Chrome conversion during her stay at the Trauma Center, which means putting her brain in a fully customized body that looked like her previous body.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Jackie has this moment when he finds out that one of the Neo-Oxaca's districts he & V send the HatePlague program into was their housing complex, killing the gang's non-combatant, including children.]]

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Jackie has this moment when he finds out that one of the Neo-Oxaca's districts he & V send the HatePlague [[HatePlague Phonoi]] program into was their housing complex, killing the gang's non-combatant, including children.]]
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* AllForNothing: [[spoiler: V, with Jackie's help, was tasked to remove the criminal elements in Neo-Oxaca for Arasaka to expand their reach upon. However, the aftermath of their method made the now-dead city so hazardous that Arasaka immediately canceled the plan]].



* ShaggyDogStory: [[spoiler: V, with Jackie's help, was tasked to remove the criminal elements in Neo-Oxaca for Arasaka to expand their reach upon. However, the aftermath of their method made the now-dead city so hazardous that Arasaka immediately canceled the plan]].
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* BeyondRedemption: After Jackie confesses to Padre about [[spoiler:unleashing a HatePlague in Neo-Oaxaca, Padre admits that there's no way he can absolve Jackie for taking part in something so horrendous: instead, he should [[PayEvilUntoEvil attempt to clean up as much of Night City as he can]] to seek some limited form of penance]].

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* BeyondRedemption: After Jackie confesses to Padre about [[spoiler:unleashing a HatePlague "Phonoi" in Neo-Oaxaca, Padre admits that there's no way he can absolve Jackie for taking part in something so horrendous: instead, he should [[PayEvilUntoEvil attempt to clean up as much of Night City as he can]] to seek some limited form of penance]].



* ConsummateProfessional: Jackie describes V as this as he explains to David why his father did what he do at [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].

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* ConsummateProfessional: Jackie describes V as this as he explains to David why his father did what he do did at [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].



* HatePlague: [[spoiler:V created a program that worked like one during his time in Neo-Oaxaca and used it to gradually wipe out its inhabitants.]]

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* HatePlague: [[spoiler:V created a program that various programs in his mission in Neo-Oxaca, with one of them, coded "Phonoi", worked like one during his time in Neo-Oaxaca and he used it to gradually wipe out its the city's inhabitants.]]
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** [[spoiler:A mortally wounded Faraday is eventually found by Junior, and subjected to a FateWorseThanDeath so horrifying that you can ''almost'' feel sorry for the foul Fixer]].

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** [[spoiler:A mortally wounded Faraday is eventually found by Junior, and subjected to a FateWorseThanDeath so horrifying horrifying[[note]]Being brutally tortured, then [[MeatgrinderSurgery converted by Maelstrom]] into a chromed-up remotely controllable attack dog[[/note]] that you can ''almost'' feel sorry for the foul Fixer]].

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* AssholeVictim: Considering how Jimmy Kurosaki purposefully drove people into madness in the process of creating his [=XBDs=] just so he could entertain himself with their suffering, his slow and agonizing demise at V's hands is ''very'' well-deserved.

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* AssholeVictim: AssholeVictim:
** V tracks down the pack of Animals who caused David and Gloria's car accident, and subjects them to a vicious hack that [[CookedToDeath essentially cooks them alive]] with their own cyberware.
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Considering how Jimmy Kurosaki purposefully drove people into madness in the process of creating his [=XBDs=] just so he could entertain himself with their suffering, his slow and agonizing demise at V's hands is ''very'' well-deserved.well-deserved.
** [[spoiler:A mortally wounded Faraday is eventually found by Junior, and subjected to a FateWorseThanDeath so horrifying that you can ''almost'' feel sorry for the foul Fixer]].
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* BeyondRedemption: After Jackie confesses to Padre about [[spoiler:unleashing a HatePlague in Neo-Oaxaca, Padre admits that there's no way he can absolve Jackie for taking part in something so horrendous: instead, he should [[PayEvilUntoEvil attempt to clean up as much of Night City as he can]] to seek some limited form of penance]].
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* TheAce: V is one of Arasaka's top Counter-Intel agents, able to outfight, outwit, and out-hack most characters.


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* BrokenAce: V, on the surface, is one of Arasaka's top Counter-Intel agents, who is able to outfight, outwit, and out-hack most characters. However, his father's cruel streak seems to have left an imprint on him, making V a ConsummateProfessional who rarely hesitate to conduct violent method on his job.
** Then it gets more literal when V [[spoiler: temporarily succumbs into cyberpsychosis]] while chasing Faraday.
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* TrespassingToTalk: Rogue visits Gloria in the Trauma Center to find out more about her, which appalled V because Platinum Trauma Plan means that no one is allowed to visit Gloria without either his or her permission and/or knowing.

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* TrespassingToTalk: Rogue visits Gloria in the Trauma Center to find out more about her, which appalled V because Platinum Trauma Plan means that no one is should've been allowed to visit Gloria without either his or her permission and/or knowing.
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-->''"Help me dammit! Gangoons took my penis!"''

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-->''"Help -->'''Rebecca:''' Help me dammit! Gangoons took my penis!"''penis!
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* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three green goons who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed''. She does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:
-->''"Help me dammit! Gangoons took my penis!"''
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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar, and is followed by Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog butchers an entire pet store's worth of (figurative) puppies]].

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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar, and is followed by Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog butchers an entire pet store's worth of (figurative) puppies]].kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.
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* BastardBastard: [[spoiler: V's father, Robert John Linder Jr., is this. His mother was knocked up by a rocker boy who never showed up to his birth or life in general, and he grew up to be an [[HateSink utter asshole]] completely determined to be everything his dad wasn't out of spite.]]

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* BastardBastard: [[spoiler: V's father, Robert John Linder Jr., is this. His mother was knocked up by a rocker boy Rockerboy (heavily implied to be Johnny Silverhand himself) who never showed up to his birth or life in general, and he grew up to be an [[HateSink utter asshole]] completely determined to be everything his dad wasn't out of spite.]]
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* BastardBastard: [[spoiler: V's father, Robert John Linder Jr., is this. His mother was knocked up by a rocker boy years, and he grew up to be an [[HateSink utter asshole.]]]]

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* BastardBastard: [[spoiler: V's father, Robert John Linder Jr., is this. His mother was knocked up by a rocker boy years, who never showed up to his birth or life in general, and he grew up to be an [[HateSink utter asshole.]]]]asshole]] completely determined to be everything his dad wasn't out of spite.]]
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* HatesTheirParent: V utterly ''despises'' his father [[AbusiveParents for completely justified reasons]]. Fitting considering said father, Robert John Linder Jr., hates ''his'' father, [[spoiler:heavily implied to be Johnny Silverhand]], for being a no-show for his entire life including birth.
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* KnightOfCerebus: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, who are obtaining various perks due to the FixFic plotline. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Then, however, V attracts the attention of [[ArchnemesisDad his truly vile father]], Robert John Linder Junior, a high-ranking Arasaka exec and sadistic ControlFreak who subjected V to a [[AbusiveParent torturous upbringing]], has his wife Eleanor locked in a GildedCage under twenty-four-hour surveillance, and tried to have Gloria assassinated when he discovered she was pregnant with V's child. He quickly sics mercenaries on V's family, with the aim of having them kidnapped once he deems it appropriate. Chapters 22 and 25 prove that he's ''[[KickTheDog even worse]]'' than he first appeared, showing him [[spoiler:[[EvilerThanThou upstaging Faraday]] in a horrifically brutal manner, demonstrating that he has a penchant for using [[MindControl Doll chips and brainwashing]] to control people, including his wife, who [[DrivenToSuicide has tried to kill herself multiple times]] as a result]], and is planning ''something'' deeply unpleasant for V, Gloria, David, Lucy and everyone else involved based on his twisted idea of "family". It's very apparent that as soon as he shows his hand, things are going to get ''very bad'', very fast.

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* KnightOfCerebus: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, who are obtaining various perks due to the FixFic plotline. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Then, however, V attracts the attention of [[ArchnemesisDad his truly vile father]], Robert John Linder Junior, a high-ranking Arasaka exec and sadistic ControlFreak who subjected V to a [[AbusiveParent torturous upbringing]], has his wife Eleanor locked in a GildedCage under twenty-four-hour surveillance, and tried to have Gloria assassinated when he discovered she was pregnant with V's child. He quickly sics mercenaries on V's family, with the aim of having them kidnapped once he deems it appropriate. Chapters 22 and 25 prove that he's ''[[KickTheDog even worse]]'' than he first appeared, showing him [[spoiler:[[EvilerThanThou upstaging Faraday]] in a horrifically brutal manner, demonstrating that he has a penchant for using [[MindControl Doll chips and brainwashing]] to control people, including his wife, who [[DrivenToSuicide has tried to kill herself multiple times]] as a result]], and is planning ''something'' deeply unpleasant for V, Gloria, David, Lucy and everyone else involved based on his twisted idea of "family". It's very apparent that as soon as he shows his hand, things are going to get ''very bad'', very fast.

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