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* FauxAffablyEvil: Robert John Linder Jr. always presents himself in a professional and cheerful manner even when its clear that everyone views him as the devil.
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* {{Expy}}: [=RobinRounds=] has stated that Robert John Linder Jr. is inspired by [[Franchise/GameOfThrones Tywin Lannister]], also the scheming patriarch of a BigScrewedUpFamily. The AI image used to represent him definitely bears a resemblance.

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* {{Expy}}: [=RobinRounds=] WordofGod has stated that Robert John Linder Jr. is inspired by [[Franchise/GameOfThrones Tywin Lannister]], also the scheming patriarch of a BigScrewedUpFamily. The AI image used to represent him definitely bears a resemblance.

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* EveryoneIsArmed: A standard for Night City, but when Faraday sends a Scav crew after V and Maine's crew, the crew going after Maine at the Cojo busted in on a Valentino birthday celebration, resulting the Scavs getting themselves turned into Swiss cheese for their troubles.
-->'''Falco:''' Honestly, it was like in those old west movies. Bad guy comes walkin' in and draws iron, entire saloon does the same. Almost felt bad for the other guys.



* EveryoneIsArmed: A standard for Night City, but when Faraday sends a Scav crew after V and Maine's crew, the crew going after Maine at the Cojo busted in on a Valentino birthday celebration, resulting the Scavs getting themselves turned into Swiss cheese for their troubles.
-->'''Falco:''' Honestly, it was like in those old west movies. Bad guy comes walkin' in and draws iron, entire saloon does the same. Almost felt bad for the other guys.

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* EveryoneIsArmed: A standard for Night City, but when Faraday sends a Scav crew after V and Maine's crew, {{Expy}}: [=RobinRounds=] has stated that Robert John Linder Jr. is inspired by [[Franchise/GameOfThrones Tywin Lannister]], also the crew going after Maine at the Cojo busted in on scheming patriarch of a Valentino birthday celebration, resulting the Scavs getting themselves turned into Swiss cheese for their troubles.
-->'''Falco:''' Honestly, it was like in those old west movies. Bad guy comes walkin' in and draws iron, entire saloon does the same. Almost felt bad for the other guys.
BigScrewedUpFamily. The AI image used to represent him definitely bears a resemblance.
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** Lucy gets jealous at David being friendly with their new neighbour Takami Kaneko -- [[spoiler:who is actually ''David's sister Valerie'' in disguise]].

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** Lucy gets jealous at David being friendly with their new neighbour Takami Kaneko -- [[spoiler:who is actually ''David's ''his dad's sister Valerie'' in disguise]].



* EveryoneHasStandards: Pilar may be a horndog, but he's loyal to his girlfriend, and that incest, both roleplay and genuine, is too depraved for his taste, as shown when he harshly rejects [[spoiler:Valerie (in disguise)]] when she tries to pry information out of him by pretending to be a Joytoy looking for someone to get their incest play fix and calling him "Onii-chan".

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* EveryoneHasStandards: Pilar may be a horndog, but he's loyal to his girlfriend, and that he also finds incest, both roleplay and genuine, is too depraved for his taste, as shown when he harshly rejects [[spoiler:Valerie (in disguise)]] when she tries to pry information out of him by pretending to be a Joytoy looking for someone to get their incest play fix and calling him "Onii-chan".
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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Unfortunately for them all, this all goes to hell after [[KnightOfCerebus Robert John Linder Jr.]] decides to [[VillainTakesAnInterest re-insert himself into his son's life]].

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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Unfortunately for them all, this all goes to hell after [[KnightOfCerebus Robert John Linder Jr.]] decides to [[VillainTakesAnInterest re-insert himself into his son's life]].life.
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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family.

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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Unfortunately for them all, this all goes to hell after [[KnightOfCerebus Robert John Linder Jr.]] decides to [[VillainTakesAnInterest re-insert himself into his son's life]].
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: The [[SensualSpandex Netrunner Suit]] is meant to help David's Sandevistan cool down better...but it also emphasizes Lucy's favorite curves on him.
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* BeyondRedemption: After Jackie confesses to Padre about [[spoiler:unleashing "Phonoi" in Neo-Oaxaca, Padre admits that there's no way he can absolve Jackie for taking part in something so horrendous: instead, he should [[PayEvilUntoEvil attempt to clean up as much of Night City as he can]] to seek some limited form of penance]].

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* BeyondRedemption: After Jackie confesses to Padre about [[spoiler:unleashing "Phonoi" "[[HatePlague Phonoi]]" in Neo-Oaxaca, Padre admits that there's no way he can absolve Jackie for taking part in something so horrendous: instead, he should [[PayEvilUntoEvil attempt to clean up as much of Night City as he can]] to seek some limited form of penance]].

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* BrokenAce: V, on the surface, is one of Arasaka's top Counter-Intel agents, who is able to outfight, outwit, and out-hack most characters. However, his father's cruel streak seems to have left an imprint on him, making V a ConsummateProfessional who rarely hesitates to conduct violent method on his job.
** Then it gets more literal when V [[spoiler: temporarily succumbs into cyberpsychosis]] while chasing Faraday, [[spoiler:forcing Jackie and Maine to fight him to stop him]].

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* BrokenAce: V, on the surface, is one of Arasaka's top Counter-Intel agents, who is able to outfight, outwit, and out-hack most characters. However, his father's cruel streak seems to have left an imprint on him, making V a ConsummateProfessional who rarely hesitates to conduct violent method on his job. \n** Then it gets more literal when V [[spoiler: temporarily succumbs into cyberpsychosis]] while chasing Faraday, [[spoiler:forcing Jackie and Maine to fight him to stop him]].
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** The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar in between their [[spoiler:failure to kill Faraday]], and Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.

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** The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar in between their the crew's [[spoiler:failure to kill Faraday]], and Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.
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* BastardBastard: [[spoiler: V's father, Robert John Linder Jr., is this. His mother was knocked up by a Rockerboy (heavily implied to be Johnny Silverhand himself) who never showed up to his birth or life in general, and he grew up to be an [[HateSink utter asshole]] completely determined to be everything his dad wasn't out of spite.]]

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* BastardBastard: [[spoiler: V's father, Robert John Linder Jr., is this. His mother was knocked up by a Rockerboy (heavily implied and later confirmed to be Johnny Silverhand himself) who never showed up to his birth or life in general, and he grew up to be an [[HateSink utter asshole]] completely determined to be everything his dad wasn't out of spite.]]
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* DisasterDominoes: Befalls [[TheBully Katsuo Tanaka]]. After [[GreenEyedMonster flying into a rage at David's new-found success]], he recruits a bunch of thugs to chase him down, which ends very badly after the fight is broken up by a team of Arasaka Counter-Intelligence agents led by V. This leads to Tanaka Senior being placed under investigation, at which point [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating his own employees stab him in the back]] and leak as much compromising information on the man as possible, which is enough to get him [[LiteralMetaphor terminated]] from his post, leaving his son alone and saddled with mountains of debt.

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* BreatherEpisode: The self admittedly [[CrackFic crack-y]] Chapter 24 revolves around Rebecca acquiring [[GagPenis a comically oversized cyber-dong]] for Pilar in between their [[spoiler:failure to kill Faraday]], and Chapter 25, where Robert Linder Jr. [[KickTheDog kicks so many dogs]] that you start to lose count.

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** Chapter 33, which mostly focuses on David and Lucy's life together, provides a welcome reprieve after [[spoiler:the truckloads of MedicalHorror experienced by V while mind-controlled in Chapter 32, as Robert puts his sinister plans into action]], though not without ominous {{Foreshadowing}} of events to come...



** Lucy gets jealous at David being friendly with their new neighbour Takami Kaneko -- [[spoiler:who is actually ''David's sister Valerie'' in disguise]].



* EvilDetectingDog: Shortly after David and Lucy [[FromStrayToPet adopt one of Night City's sphynx cats]], "Takami Kaneko" ([[spoiler:Valerie]]) a "new neighbour", drops by their apartment -- the feline immediately hisses at and hides from her.



* OutOfCharacterAlert: Jenkins is alerted to V's action when he, who rarely submits requests for his work, suddenly floods out various requests in one day.

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** In Chapter 33, [[spoiler:David receives a call from the doll-ified V, who invites him and Lucy to meet his parents. Asides from the odd, robotic manner the puppet is speaking in, this throws up two major red flags -- V ''hates'' Lucy, and has been very cagey about his parents. It's enough for the couple to go to Gloria with their concerns, who is able to confirm that [[ProperlyParanoid they should now stay as far away from him as possible]], given she knows very well what an evil bastard Robert is, and that V would never willingly interact with him]].
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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family.

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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, characters. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family.
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* FixFic: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family.



* KnightOfCerebus: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, who are obtaining various perks due to the FixFic plotline. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Then, however, V attracts the attention of [[ArchnemesisDad his truly vile father]], Robert John Linder Junior, a high-ranking Arasaka exec and sadistic ControlFreak who subjected V to a [[AbusiveParent torturous upbringing]], has his wife Eleanor locked in a GildedCage under twenty-four-hour surveillance, and tried to have Gloria assassinated when he discovered she was pregnant with V's child. He quickly sics mercenaries on V's family, with the aim of having them kidnapped once he deems it appropriate. Chapters 22 and 25 prove that he's ''[[KickTheDog even worse]]'' than he first appeared, showing him [[spoiler:[[EvilerThanThou upstaging Faraday]] in a horrifically brutal manner, demonstrating that he has a penchant for using [[MindControl Doll chips and brainwashing]] to control people, including his wife, who [[DrivenToSuicide has tried to kill herself multiple times]] as a result]], and is planning ''something'' deeply unpleasant for V, Gloria, David, Lucy and everyone else involved based on his twisted idea of "family". It's apparent that as soon as he shows his hand, things are going to get ''very bad'', very fast.

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* KnightOfCerebus: While there's a fair share of darker moments, especially everything pertaining to [[spoiler:[[DarkAndTroubledPast V's sudden explosion of out-of-the-norm movement & actions in Neo-Oaxaca]]]], for quite a while things are going pretty well for the characters, who are obtaining various perks due to the FixFic plotline. Maine's crew are enjoying power boosts, [[RagsToRiches having better resources]], and have avoided becoming the DwindlingParty they were in canon. Meanwhile, V, [[SparedByTheAdaptation Gloria]], David, and Jackie are slowly becoming something resembling a family. Then, however, V attracts the attention of [[ArchnemesisDad his truly vile father]], Robert John Linder Junior, a high-ranking Arasaka exec and sadistic ControlFreak who subjected V to a [[AbusiveParent torturous upbringing]], has his wife Eleanor locked in a GildedCage under twenty-four-hour surveillance, and tried to have Gloria assassinated when he discovered she was pregnant with V's child. He quickly sics mercenaries on V's family, with the aim of having them kidnapped once he deems it appropriate. Chapters 22 and 25 prove that he's ''[[KickTheDog even worse]]'' than he first appeared, showing him [[spoiler:[[EvilerThanThou upstaging Faraday]] in a horrifically brutal manner, demonstrating that he has a penchant for using [[MindControl Doll chips and brainwashing]] to control people, including his wife, who [[DrivenToSuicide has tried to kill herself multiple times]] as a result]], and is planning ''something'' deeply unpleasant for V, Gloria, David, Lucy and everyone else involved based on his twisted idea of "family". It's apparent that as soon as he shows his hand, things are going to get ''very bad'', very fast.

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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:"Robert John Linder" is the real name of Johnny Silverhand, so given that V's piece-of-work father is called Robert John Linder ''Jr'', V is his grandson -- which is why Rogue is so interested in obtaining DNA samples from him and David. Of course, this is also rather amusing given that Silverhand would be ''rolling in his grave'' to discover that he has a son and grandson who are Arasaka execs, given his [[CapitalismIsBad extreme hatred of Corpos]] and [[ArchEnemy Arasaka in particular]]. Naturally, everyone apart from V's parents themselves and Rogue is unaware of this]].

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[[spoiler:"Robert John Linder" is the real name of Johnny Silverhand, so given that V's piece-of-work father is called Robert John Linder ''Jr'', V is his grandson -- which is why Rogue is so interested in obtaining DNA samples from him and David. Of course, this is also rather amusing given that Silverhand would be ''rolling in his grave'' to discover that he has a son and grandson who are Arasaka execs, given his [[CapitalismIsBad extreme hatred of Corpos]] and [[ArchEnemy Arasaka in particular]]. Naturally, everyone apart from V's parents themselves and Rogue is unaware of this]].this]].
** Gloria sees a news report of a gang war inside the Grand Imperial Mall and someone suffering cyberpsychosis and causing absolute carnage, commenting that whoever did it was a monster. David, beside her, chokes because [[spoiler:the one under cyberpsychosis was V]].



* EveryoneIsArmed: A standard for Night City, but when Faraday sends a Scav crew after V and Maine's crew, the crew going after Maine at the Cojo busted in on a Valentino birthday celebration, resulting the Scavs getting themselves turned into Swiss cheese for their troubles.
-->'''Falco:''' Honestly, it was like in those old west movies. Bad guy comes walkin' in and draws iron, entire saloon does the same. Almost felt bad for the other guys.



* MushroomSamba: When the crew tries to raid Tyger Claw's drug-producing plant, one of the Tyger Claws tosses an explosive into the production machine, causing it to explode and exposing the crew who were in the building a heavy dose of said drugs, causing this to them.

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* MushroomSamba: When the crew tries to raid Tyger Claw's drug-producing plant, one of the Tyger Claws tosses an explosive into the production machine, causing it to explode and exposing the crew who were in the building a heavy dose of said drugs, causing this to them. The girls have to take them to Dorio's apartment for them to detox safely.



* PapaWolf: V may only enter The Martinez's life recently, but he will give it all when their life is on the line. Ask the Animal gang members responsible for Gloria's accident and Maine's crews.
* PoorCommunicationKills: ''Almost''. Maine thought Gloria ghosted after he paid for the chrome, and that a kid has the one he seeks, while Jackie and V thought someone was honey-trapping David to get the Sandevistan off him, which would kill the kid.

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* PapaWolf: V may only enter The have re-entered the Martinez's life lives recently, but he will give it all when their life is on the line. Ask the Animal gang members responsible for Gloria's accident and Maine's crews.
crew (who kidnapped David to get the Sandevistan off of him).
* PoorCommunicationKills: ''Almost''. On one end, Maine thought Gloria ghosted after he paid for the chrome, and that a kid has the one he seeks, while not knowing that it is Gloria's son, so when Lucy runs into David by chance, he gets her to bring him in to get the hardware. On the other end, Jackie and V thought don't know about Gloria's contact with Maine's crew, so when Lucy lures David in, they think someone was is honey-trapping David to get the Sandevistan off him, which would kill the kid.kid, which is why V goes in guns blazing.



* SecondActBreakup: In Chapter 28, [[spoiler:Gloria breaks down in tears and demands that Vincent leave after he confesses to her about what he did in Neo-Oaxaca]].

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* SecondActBreakup: In Chapter 28, [[spoiler:Gloria breaks down in tears and demands that Vincent leave after he confesses to her about what he did in Neo-Oaxaca]].Neo-Oaxaca and his cyberpsychosis attack at Grand Imperial Mall]].



* TooDumbToLive: The Scav group Faraday sent after V and Maine's crew had no idea that they were trespassing on a [[EveryoneIsArmed Valentino birthday celebration]], resulting the Scavs getting themselves turned into Swiss cheese for their troubles.



* TragicKeepsake: A lot of Maine's cyberware used to belong to his former squadmates (something that he hasn't told even Dorio about), hence his initial hesitation to chrome down..

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* TragicKeepsake: A lot of Maine's cyberware used to belong to his former squadmates (something that he hasn't told even Dorio about), hence his initial hesitation to chrome down..down. After Viktor convinces him to do so to save his life, he keeps his squad's old parts in his apartment.

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->''"By the time a man realizes that maybe his father was right, he usually has a son who thinks he is wrong."''
-->--'''Charles Wadsworth'''




''Cyberpunk: Fatherhood'' is a ''VideoGame/Cyberpunk2077'' x ''Anime/CyberpunkEdgerunners'' Crossover Fanfic written by [=RobinRounds=].

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\n''Cyberpunk: Fatherhood'' is a ''VideoGame/Cyberpunk2077'' x ''Anime/CyberpunkEdgerunners'' Crossover Fanfic written by [=RobinRounds=].
[=RobinRounds=], where [[RelatedInTheAdaptation V turns out to be Gloria Martinez's ex and David's father]]. Suddenly finding out that he has a son, V takes it upon himself to adapt to these new circumstances and be a real father to David, helping and supporting him however he can. But even as David tries to handle having a high-up Arasaka [[CorporateSamurai Suit]] for a dad, not only does this drag David, Gloria and their associates into the tangled web of corporate espionage, V has his own demons to wrestle with... including paternal issues of his own.



* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Chapter 31 reveals that Doll chips, or at least those used by Robert, leave the victim's true consciousness fully aware while their body becomes a mindless, obedient puppet. It's no wonder why both V and Eleanor would [[DrivenToSuicide prefer death]] to being trapped in that state]].

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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Chapter 31 32 reveals that Doll chips, or at least those used by Robert, leave the victim's true consciousness fully aware while their body becomes a mindless, obedient puppet. It's no wonder why both V and Eleanor would [[DrivenToSuicide prefer death]] to being trapped in that state]].



* BrokenAce: V, on the surface, is one of Arasaka's top Counter-Intel agents, who is able to outfight, outwit, and out-hack most characters. However, his father's cruel streak seems to have left an imprint on him, making V a ConsummateProfessional who rarely hesitate to conduct violent method on his job.

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* BrokenAce: V, on the surface, is one of Arasaka's top Counter-Intel agents, who is able to outfight, outwit, and out-hack most characters. However, his father's cruel streak seems to have left an imprint on him, making V a ConsummateProfessional who rarely hesitate hesitates to conduct violent method on his job.



* DeadMansSwitch: [[spoiler: In the event that his father would trigger his [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]], V rigged up his brain with a dead-man's switch on a 24-hour timer, and if he was Dolled and unable to reset the timer, his personal network would upload his specialized memory-wipe virus to his brain and purge the Doll chip of his father's software (or if the worst happened, wipe his brain entirely and kill him outright)]].



* MedicalHorror: [[spoiler:There's an extremely disturbing and disturbingly ''long'' scene in Chapter 31 where V, under the control of the [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]], is completely ripped apart and rebuilt [[SkipTheAnaesthetic while only sedated]], having all of his chrome replaced with whatever [[SarcasmMode his loving father]] desires. It's almost certainly a punishment for the real V, who is [[AndIMustScream locked inside his brain]] the whole time]].

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* MedicalHorror: [[spoiler:There's an extremely disturbing and disturbingly ''long'' scene in Chapter 31 32 where V, under the control of the [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]], is completely ripped apart and rebuilt [[SkipTheAnaesthetic while only sedated]], having all of his chrome replaced with whatever [[SarcasmMode his loving father]] desires. It's almost certainly a punishment for the real V, who is [[AndIMustScream locked inside his brain]] the whole time]].



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Jackie has this moment when he finds out that one of the Neo-Oaxaca's districts he & V send the [[HatePlague Phonoi]] program into was their housing complex, killing the gang's non-combatant, including children.]]

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Jackie has this moment when he finds out that one of the Neo-Oaxaca's districts he & V send the [[HatePlague Phonoi]] program into was their housing complex, killing the gang's non-combatant, non-combatants, including children.]]



* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:One of Robert's many, ''many'' KickTheDog moments in Chapter 25 is the reveal that he's implanted his own wife with a [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]][[note]]Per WordOfGod, he did this ''on their honeymoon''![[/note]] -- when he engages it, she becomes a simpering, submissive 'Stepford Wife' puppet. She's already been DrivenToSuicide because of this, but he's forcibly implanted her with chrome that ''[[ICannotSelfTerminate won't let her die]]''. Chapter 31 makes it ''even worse'', revealing that [[AndIMustScream she's conscious the whole time]]]].
* RedBaron: V is known as "The Plagues" within Arasaka's Counter-Intel circles for what he had done to [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].

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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:One of Robert's many, ''many'' KickTheDog moments in Chapter 25 is the reveal that he's implanted his own wife with a [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]][[note]]Per WordOfGod, he did this ''on their honeymoon''![[/note]] -- when he engages it, she becomes a simpering, submissive 'Stepford Wife' puppet. She's already been DrivenToSuicide because of this, but he's forcibly implanted her with chrome that ''[[ICannotSelfTerminate won't let her die]]''. Chapter 31 32 makes it ''even worse'', revealing that [[AndIMustScream she's conscious the whole time]]]].
* RedBaron: V is known as "The Plagues" within Arasaka's Counter-Intel circles for what he had done to [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]]. [[spoiler:He developed a variety of techno-viruses that could spread rapidly within a connected populace and inflict debilitating effects, from the [[HatePlague violence-instilling Phonoi]] to the [[EasyAmnesia memory-wiping Lethe]].]]


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* SecondActBreakup: In Chapter 28, [[spoiler:Gloria breaks down in tears and demands that Vincent leave after he confesses to her about what he did in Neo-Oaxaca]].
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* MedicalHorror: [[spoiler:There's an extremely disturbing and disturbingly ''long'' scene in Chapter 31 where V, under the control of the [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]] is completely ripped apart and rebuilt [[SkipTheAnaesthetic while only sedated]], having all of his chrome replaced with whatever [[SarcasmMode his loving father]] desires. It's almost certainly a punishment for the real V, who is [[AndIMustScream locked inside his brain]] the whole time]].

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* MedicalHorror: [[spoiler:There's an extremely disturbing and disturbingly ''long'' scene in Chapter 31 where V, under the control of the [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]] chip]], is completely ripped apart and rebuilt [[SkipTheAnaesthetic while only sedated]], having all of his chrome replaced with whatever [[SarcasmMode his loving father]] desires. It's almost certainly a punishment for the real V, who is [[AndIMustScream locked inside his brain]] the whole time]].



* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:One of Robert's many, ''many'' KickTheDog moments in Chapter 25 is the reveal that he's implanted his own wife with a [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]][[note:]]Per WordOfGod, he did this ''on their honeymoon''![[/note]] -- when he engages it, she becomes a simpering, submissive 'Stepford Wife' puppet. She's already been DrivenToSuicide because of this, but he's forcibly implanted her with chrome that ''[[ICannotSelfTerminate won't let her die]]''. Chapter 31 makes it ''even worse'', revealing that [[AndIMustScream she's conscious the whole time]]]].

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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:One of Robert's many, ''many'' KickTheDog moments in Chapter 25 is the reveal that he's implanted his own wife with a [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]][[note:]]Per chip]][[note]]Per WordOfGod, he did this ''on their honeymoon''![[/note]] -- when he engages it, she becomes a simpering, submissive 'Stepford Wife' puppet. She's already been DrivenToSuicide because of this, but he's forcibly implanted her with chrome that ''[[ICannotSelfTerminate won't let her die]]''. Chapter 31 makes it ''even worse'', revealing that [[AndIMustScream she's conscious the whole time]]]].

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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Chapter 31 reveals that Doll chips, or at least those used by Robert, leave the victim's true consciousness fully aware while their body becomes a mindless, obedient puppet. It's no wonder why both V and Eleanor would [[DrivenToSuicide prefer death]] to being trapped in that state]].



* EvilerThanThou: [[spoiler:After escaping, critically wounded, from the Grand Imperial Mall shootout, Faraday runs into [=RJ=] Linder Jr. He interrogates, [[ColdBloodedTorture horrifically tortures and mutilates]] the Fixer, before sending him off to Maelstrom. There, he is [[UnwillingRoboticisation turned into a borderline-full-borg]] MeatPuppet attack dog, all while deliberately letting him [[MeatgrinderSurgery suffer as much as possible]], which [[EmptyShell utterly breaks]] what's left of his mind. It's so horrible it's almost possible to feel sorry for ''[[AssholeVictim Faraday]]'', and dramatically marks Robert's ascension as the KnightOfCerebus BigBad]].

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* EvilerThanThou: EvilerThanThou:
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[[spoiler:After escaping, critically wounded, from the Grand Imperial Mall shootout, Faraday runs into [=RJ=] Linder Jr. He interrogates, [[ColdBloodedTorture horrifically tortures and mutilates]] the Fixer, before sending him off to Maelstrom. There, he is [[UnwillingRoboticisation turned into a borderline-full-borg]] MeatPuppet attack dog, all while deliberately letting him [[MeatgrinderSurgery suffer as much as possible]], which [[EmptyShell utterly breaks]] what's left of his mind. It's so horrible it's almost possible to feel sorry for ''[[AssholeVictim Faraday]]'', and dramatically marks Robert's ascension as the KnightOfCerebus BigBad]].BigBad]].
** [[spoiler:And after he initiates V's Doll chip, he tasks him with assassinating Director Abernathy. She was ''also'' trying to use V as her puppet, but unluckily for her Robert got there first]].



** And later in Chapter 26, Maine loses it watching Pilar interrogate a trio of thugs for information - using his new ''tool''.

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** And later in Chapter 26, Maine loses it watching Pilar interrogate a trio of thugs for information - -- using his new ''tool''.''tool''.
* MedicalHorror: [[spoiler:There's an extremely disturbing and disturbingly ''long'' scene in Chapter 31 where V, under the control of the [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]] is completely ripped apart and rebuilt [[SkipTheAnaesthetic while only sedated]], having all of his chrome replaced with whatever [[SarcasmMode his loving father]] desires. It's almost certainly a punishment for the real V, who is [[AndIMustScream locked inside his brain]] the whole time]].


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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:One of Robert's many, ''many'' KickTheDog moments in Chapter 25 is the reveal that he's implanted his own wife with a [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]][[note:]]Per WordOfGod, he did this ''on their honeymoon''![[/note]] -- when he engages it, she becomes a simpering, submissive 'Stepford Wife' puppet. She's already been DrivenToSuicide because of this, but he's forcibly implanted her with chrome that ''[[ICannotSelfTerminate won't let her die]]''. Chapter 31 makes it ''even worse'', revealing that [[AndIMustScream she's conscious the whole time]]]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Pilar may be a horndog, but he's loyal to his girlfriend, and that incest, both roleplay and genuine, is too depraved for his taste, as shown when he harshly rejects [[spoiler:Valerie (in disguise)]] when she tries to pry information out of him by pretending to be a Joytoy looking for someone to get their incest play fix and calling him "Onii-chan".
-->'''Pilar:''' Look, I'll admit I've watched some fucked up porn, and I know where you're going with this, but ''that's'' a line I won't cross.\\
'''[[spoiler:Valerie]]:''' Please? You're just gonna leave me out here on my own?\\
'''Pilar:''' Jesus...Nope. No way. Not happening. Not goin' to jail over this. I'm not that kind of criminal!\\
'''[[spoiler:Valerie]]:''' Not even if I can make it worth it, onii-chan?\\
'''Pilar:''' Fuck no. Get outta here you degenerate brother-fucker!
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* CorporateSamurai: This V is the Corpo Lifepath one, and it ''shows''.

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* CorporateSamurai: This V is the Corpo Lifepath one, and it ''shows''. He's an extremely skilled combatant, can be utterly ruthless when the need arises, and [[CrazyPrepared has, or at least tries to have, a plan for every situation]].

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* AllForNothing: [[spoiler: V, with Jackie's help, was tasked to remove the criminal elements in Neo-Oxaca for Arasaka to expand their reach upon. However, the aftermath of their method made the now-dead city so hazardous that Arasaka immediately canceled the plan]].

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* AllForNothing: [[spoiler: V, with Jackie's help, was tasked to remove the criminal elements in Neo-Oxaca Neo-Oaxaca for Arasaka to expand their reach upon.into the city. However, the aftermath of their method made the now-dead city so hazardous that Arasaka immediately canceled the plan]].



* CommonalityConnection: V and Rebbeca bonded over having terrible parents and being a ClosetGeek.

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* CommonalityConnection: V and Rebbeca Rebecca bonded over having terrible parents and being a ClosetGeek.



* DisappointedByTheMotive: What grinds V's gears the most about [[spoiler:why Jenkins went ahead with the ultimately pyrrhic operation to clear out Neo-Oaxaca - Jenkins botched the bidding and wasn't around to supervise it, because he was getting his rocks off in a seedy club with another executive who was supposed to get him ahead in the company]].



* GagPenis: ''The Dong-of-Dafoe''. It is so big that it is recalled out of poor sales from people's sheer aghast of it, from how Rebbeca's, David's & Lucy's react to it implies. And it is going to be attached to [[CasanovaWannabe Pilar]]...

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* GagPenis: ''The Dong-of-Dafoe''. It is so big that it is recalled out of poor sales from people's sheer aghast horror of it, from how Rebbeca's, Rebecca's, David's & Lucy's react to it implies. And it is going to be attached to [[CasanovaWannabe Pilar]]...



* GreenEyedMonster: Katsuo, after seeing David not only gets better chrome but becomes smarter than him.
** As it turns out, Katsuo is already envious of David for having a loving & caring mother and starts to hate him because he squanders it with having a side job as XBD seller.
* HatePlague: [[spoiler:V created various programs in his mission in Neo-Oxaca, with one of them, coded "Phonoi", worked like one and he used it to gradually wipe out the city's inhabitants.]]

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* GreenEyedMonster: Katsuo, after seeing David not only gets getting better chrome but becomes becoming smarter than him.
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him. As it turns out, Katsuo is was already envious of David for having a loving & caring mother and starts mother, but only started to hate him because he squanders it with David squandered his mother's efforts by having a side job as an XBD seller.
* HatePlague: [[spoiler:V created various programs in his mission in Neo-Oxaca, Neo-Oaxaca, with one of them, coded "Phonoi", worked like one and he used it to gradually wipe out the city's inhabitants.]]



** Maine, after thorough convincing, ended up Chroming down, ensuring that he won't end up having cyberpsychosis anytime soon.
* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three clueless thugs who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed'". She does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:

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** Maine, after some thorough convincing, ended up Chroming down, ensuring that he won't end up having cyberpsychosis anytime soon.
* ItMakesSenseInContext: In Chapter 24, Rebecca bought Pilar [[GagPenis a large cyber-dong]] in order to get him out of his funk from [[GroinAttack losing his original]], only for the case to be stolen by three clueless thugs who thought it looked valuable. As she's angrily chasing them down, they all run by David and Lucy out for a walk, and Rebecca shouts at them to help her. What she says causes them to briefly display [[HeroicBSOD faces "best described as 'Lovebirds.exe has crashed'". She crashed'"]], though she does explain more accurately what's going on when they get on the holo-call:holo-call.



* JerkassHasAPoint: Katsuo's MotiveRant for why he hates David hits him more deeply than he likes - in that David disrespected his mother's sacrifice to get him into Arasaka Academy only to squander the opportunity by slacking off and selling XBD videos. When the realization allows Katsuo to get in one good hit that knocks David off his feet, David doesn't retaliate, and Katsuo doesn't push further.



* LaughThemselvesSick: In Chapter 24, Falco laughs until his sides hurt when he sees Rebecca's horrified reaction to Pilar's new prosthetic penis, [[GagPenis "the Dong of Dafoe"]]. Later in the chapter, Rebecca herself collapses in laughter when David, Lucy, and a hapless wannabe thief sees what the case the latter was trying to steal actually contains (said prosthesis).
** And later in Chapter 26, Maine loses it watching Pilar interrogate a trio of thugs for information - using his new ''tool''.



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Jackie has this moment when he finds out that one of the Neo-Oxaca's districts he & V send the [[HatePlague Phonoi]] program into was their housing complex, killing the gang's non-combatant, including children.]]

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Jackie has this moment when he finds out that one of the Neo-Oxaca's Neo-Oaxaca's districts he & V send the [[HatePlague Phonoi]] program into was their housing complex, killing the gang's non-combatant, including children.]]



* NoBadassToHisValet: Being a badass samurai doesn't stop Mama Welles from throwing ''La Chancla'' at V for not keeping in touch with Gloria for almost two decades, despite always lamenting about her in his drunken stupors and Mama Welles's insistence to do so.

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* NoBadassToHisValet: Being a badass samurai CorporateSamurai doesn't stop Mama Welles from throwing ''La Chancla'' ''[[ShoeSlap La Chancla]]'' at V for not keeping in touch with Gloria for almost two decades, despite always lamenting about her in his drunken stupors and Mama Welles's insistence to do so.



** [[TheBully Katsuo]] is a believer of SelfMadeMan with an intense dislike of XBD due to his father's addiction to it means he has no time for him, and so he hates David for disrespecting Gloria's financial sacrifice by doing the bare minimum at the academy and becoming XBD seller under her nose without sharing the profit with her.

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** [[TheBully Katsuo]] is a believer of SelfMadeMan with an intense dislike of XBD due to his father's addiction to it means he has no time for him, and so he hates David for disrespecting Gloria's financial sacrifice by doing the bare minimum at the academy and becoming an XBD seller under her nose without sharing the profit with her.



* NotSoStoic: Rebbeca's shameless flirting manages to crack V's calm facade multiple times, to Lucy's amusement.

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* NotSoStoic: Rebbeca's Rebecca's shameless flirting manages to crack V's calm facade multiple times, to Lucy's amusement.



* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Rebecca is surprised to find that Nadia, Gloria's nurse, is dating Pilar without any of them knowing it.



* RedBaron: V is known as "The Plagues" within Arasaka's Counter-Intel circles for what he has done to [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: V is David's father in this fic.[[spoiler: Additionally, V's father is implied to be the bastard son of Johnny Silverhand, making the rocker boy/terrorist V and David's grandfather and great-grandfather respectively]].

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* RedBaron: V is known as "The Plagues" within Arasaka's Counter-Intel circles for what he has had done to [[spoiler:Neo-Oaxaca]].
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: V is David's father in this fic. [[spoiler: Additionally, V's father is implied to be the bastard son of Johnny Silverhand, making the rocker boy/terrorist V and David's grandfather and great-grandfather respectively]].respectively]].
* SexualEuphemism: Chapter 26 is full of these as Maine works off some of his stress with Dorio.



* ShipperWithAnAgenda: Rebbeca tries to mend V and Gloria's relationship...so she can [[MarryThemAll add herself between them and create "The Great Harem" with them]].

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* ShipperWithAnAgenda: Rebbeca Rebecca tries to mend V and Gloria's relationship...so she can [[MarryThemAll add herself between them and create "The Great Harem" with them]].



'''Rebbeca:''' Pretty much.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Rebbeca transforms from a scrappy gun-toting edgerunner into high-class arm candy through loads of V's eddies worth of fancy clothes and chrome.

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'''Rebbeca:''' '''Rebecca:''' Pretty much.
* SheCleansUpNicely: Rebbeca Rebecca transforms from a scrappy gun-toting edgerunner into high-class arm candy through loads of V's eddies worth of fancy clothes and chrome.



* SilkHidingSteel: V wants Rebbeca to be a bodyguard under the guise of arm candy on his task of infiltrating Tyger Claw's casino, and he's willing to spend eddies on luxurious clothing and chrome-works to make it convincing.
-->'''Rebbeca:''' So...what type of joy-toy should I be? Classy secretary your type? Or maybe the brain-dead bitch in heat does it for you?\\

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* SilkHidingSteel: V wants Rebbeca Rebecca to be a bodyguard under the guise of arm candy on his task of infiltrating Tyger Claw's casino, and he's willing to spend eddies on luxurious clothing and chrome-works to make it convincing.
-->'''Rebbeca:''' -->'''Rebecca:''' So...what type of joy-toy should I be? Classy secretary your type? Or maybe the brain-dead bitch in heat does it for you?\\



** Gender [[InvertedTrope inverted]]; Rebbeca ''really'' wants to bone V, much to his discomfort and David's embarrassment.
** Then [[PlayingWithATrope Played ]] [[{{Irony}} Straight]] when Rebbeca ''also'' wants to bang Gloria as well.

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** Gender [[InvertedTrope inverted]]; Rebbeca Rebecca ''really'' wants to bone V, much to his discomfort and David's embarrassment.
** Then [[PlayingWithATrope Played ]] [[{{Irony}} Straight]] when Rebbeca Rebecca ''also'' wants to bang Gloria as well.



* TortureForFunAndInformation: The only description of how Maine and Pilar shake down three thugs for information - they tie them up, pull down their pants, and give them an eyeful of Pilar's new prosthetic [[GagPenis tool]].
--> '''Maine:''' Just don't expect me to watch. Last time you ripped their ass open all the way to their guts and I don't wanna see another guy die when you pull out.



* TragicKeepsake: A lot of Maine's cyberwares were used to belongs to his former squamates', hence his initial hesitation to chrome down. now, it decorated his apartment after chroming down.

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* TragicKeepsake: A lot of Maine's cyberwares were cyberware used to belongs belong to his former squamates', squadmates (something that he hasn't told even Dorio about), hence his initial hesitation to chrome down. now, it decorated his apartment after chroming down.down..



** Instead of outright pickpocketing their target, David's first Edgerunning gig involves staging an assault with him, Lucy, and Kiwi as innocent bystanders and Rebbeca as the culprit.
* YouJustToldMe: Rebbeca tricks V to come out of his ClosetGeek by saying a FandomEnragingMisconception about Creator/PhilipKDick.
-->'''Rebbeca:''' I ain't book smart, but even I can tell you're downplaying.\\

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** Instead of outright pickpocketing their target, David's first Edgerunning gig involves staging an assault with him, Lucy, and Kiwi as innocent bystanders and Rebbeca Rebecca as the culprit.
* YouJustToldMe: Rebbeca Rebecca tricks V to come out of his ClosetGeek by saying a FandomEnragingMisconception about Creator/PhilipKDick.
-->'''Rebbeca:''' -->'''Rebecca:''' I ain't book smart, but even I can tell you're downplaying.\\



'''Rebbeca:''' Right, what was I thinkin'. You probably just browsed Pre-persons and enjoyed all the pro-abortion stuff.\\

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'''Rebbeca:''' '''Rebecca:''' Right, what was I thinkin'. You probably just browsed Pre-persons and enjoyed all the pro-abortion stuff.\\



'''Rebbeca:''' Gotcha! *''Finger guns''*\\

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'''Rebbeca:''' '''Rebecca:''' Gotcha! *''Finger guns''*\\
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 30 is easily the biggest example of this, by quite a long shot. First of all, the chapter is presented from the [=POV=] of V's sister Valerie, a cheerfully sociopathic TykeBomb and [[DaddysLittleVillain one of her father's operatives]]. From her perspective, we witness Robert ''finally'' making his move and confronting V, revealing he knows about Gloria and David, and [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine inviting him to dinner]]. Once V (very reluctantly) complies, we're treated to a creepy scene of Robert acting FauxAffablyEvil and Eleanor behaving like a Stepford Wife, which concludes with Valerie ambushing V so Robert can activate his [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]]. ''Yikes''.]]

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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 30 is easily the biggest example of this, by quite a long shot. First of all, the chapter is presented from the [=POV=] of V's sister Valerie, a cheerfully sociopathic TykeBomb and [[DaddysLittleVillain one of her father's operatives]]. From her perspective, we witness Robert ''finally'' making his move and confronting V, revealing he knows about Gloria and David, and [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine inviting him to dinner]]. Once V (very reluctantly) complies, we're treated to a creepy scene of Robert acting FauxAffablyEvil and while the brainwashed Eleanor behaving behaves like a Stepford Wife, which concludes with Valerie ambushing V so Robert can activate his [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]]. ''Yikes''.]]
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 30 is easily the biggest example of this, by quite a long shot. First of all, the chapter is presented from the [=POV=] of V's sister Valerie, a cheerfully sociopathic TykeBomb and [[DaddysLittleVillain one of her father's operatives]]. From her perspective, we witness Robert ''finally'' making his move and confronting V, revealing he knows about Gloria and David, and [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine inviting him to dinner]]. Once V (very reluctantly complies), we're treated to a creepy scene of Robert acting FauxAffablyEvil and Eleanor behaving like a Stepford Wife, which concludes with Valerie ambushing V so Robert can activate his [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]]. ''Yikes''.]]

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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 30 is easily the biggest example of this, by quite a long shot. First of all, the chapter is presented from the [=POV=] of V's sister Valerie, a cheerfully sociopathic TykeBomb and [[DaddysLittleVillain one of her father's operatives]]. From her perspective, we witness Robert ''finally'' making his move and confronting V, revealing he knows about Gloria and David, and [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine inviting him to dinner]]. Once V (very reluctantly complies), reluctantly) complies, we're treated to a creepy scene of Robert acting FauxAffablyEvil and Eleanor behaving like a Stepford Wife, which concludes with Valerie ambushing V so Robert can activate his [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]]. ''Yikes''.]]
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 30 is easily the biggest example of this, by quite a long shot. First of all, the chapter is presented from the [=POV=] of V's sister Valerie, a cheerfully sociopathic TykeBomb and [[DaddysLittleVillain one of her father's operatives]]. From her perspective, we witness Robert ''finally'' making his move and confronting V, revealing he knows about Gloria and David, and [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine inviting him to dinner]]. Once V (very reluctantly complies), we're treated to a creepy scene of Robert acting FauxAffablyEvil and Eleanor behaving like a Stepford Wife, which concludes with Valerie ambushing V so Robert can activate his [[MindControlDevice Doll chip]]. ''Yikes''.]]
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* NinjaMaid: While Nadia is Gloria's personal nurse here, she still retains her Trauma Team training.

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* NinjaMaid: While Nadia is Gloria's personal nurse here, she still retains her Trauma Team training.



---> “When I first learned it was just you and your mother, and how much she cared. I almost envied you. Then I learned more about you, and it disgusted me. I might have forgiven you if you had a valid excuse; "Oh, I didn't have time to study because I needed to work my night job to help my mom". And don't try to argue that pushing XBDs was a job. I'm sure selling illegal soft to our classmates brought in the cash, but I doubt your mom saw a single eddy of it.

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---> “When I first learned it was just you and your mother, and how much she cared. I almost envied you. Then I learned more about you, and it disgusted me. I might have forgiven you if you had a valid excuse; "Oh, I didn't have time to study because I needed to work my night job to help my mom". And don't try to argue that pushing XBDs [=XBDs=] was a job. I'm sure selling illegal soft to our classmates brought in the cash, but I doubt your mom saw a single eddy of it."

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