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* ActionGirl: Caitlin, her police officer mother Mary-Ann, and to a lesser extent Serena.
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* AlienInvasion: By way of infiltration.
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* LizardFolk: The Creeps, when not in their human form.
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* OnlyInFlorida: Set in Gainesville.
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* TheMeanBrit: Billy has elements of this, but mostly he's just a ConsummateLiar.
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* TurnOfTheMillennium: Set in late 2001, shortly after TheWarOnTerror has begun. Explicitly begins a week after 9/11, with the fear of terrorism (as represented by the titular Creeps) serving as a thematic plot point.
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* TurnOfTheMillennium: Set in late 2001, shortly after TheWarOnTerror UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror has begun. Explicitly begins a week after 9/11, with the fear of terrorism (as represented by the titular Creeps) serving as a thematic plot point.
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''Creeps'' is a ''Literature/{{Goosebumps}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{Shrikecatcher}}, a DarkerAndEdgier sequel/re-imagining of the creator's favorite book in the series, ''Calling All Creeps!'' In this new story, Caitlin Webster, a 12-year-old just starting middle school in Gainesville, Florida, is drawn into the inner circle of the Creeps after calling Elliott Beamer, young cousin of Ricky from the first book and a classmate of hers, a "creep" and having it be misconstrued as knowledge of his true identity rather than a simple insult as was intended. With the help of her best friend Serena, new British student Billy, and her parents, Caitlin must put an end to the Creeps' plans.
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''Creeps'' is a ''Literature/{{Goosebumps}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{Shrikecatcher}}, @/{{Shrikecatcher}}, a DarkerAndEdgier sequel/re-imagining of the creator's favorite book in the series, ''Calling All Creeps!'' In this new story, Caitlin Webster, a 12-year-old just starting middle school in Gainesville, Florida, is drawn into the inner circle of the Creeps after calling Elliott Beamer, young cousin of Ricky from the first book and a classmate of hers, a "creep" and having it be misconstrued as knowledge of his true identity rather than a simple insult as was intended. With the help of her best friend Serena, new British student Billy, and her parents, Caitlin must put an end to the Creeps' plans.
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* OneWordTitle: As an AntagonistTitle, and a reference to its inspiration, ''Calling All Creeps!''.
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''Creeps'' is a ''{{Goosebumps}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{Shrikecatcher}}, a DarkerAndEdgier sequel/re-imagining of the creator's favorite book in the series, ''Calling All Creeps!'' In this new story, Caitlin Webster, a 12-year-old just starting middle school in Gainesville, Florida, is drawn into the inner circle of the Creeps after calling Elliott Beamer, young cousin of Ricky from the first book and a classmate of hers, a "creep" and having it be misconstrued as knowledge of his true identity rather than a simple insult as was intended. With the help of her best friend Serena, new British student Billy, and her parents, Caitlin must put an end to the Creeps' plans.
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''Creeps'' is a ''{{Goosebumps}}'' ''Literature/{{Goosebumps}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{Shrikecatcher}}, a DarkerAndEdgier sequel/re-imagining of the creator's favorite book in the series, ''Calling All Creeps!'' In this new story, Caitlin Webster, a 12-year-old just starting middle school in Gainesville, Florida, is drawn into the inner circle of the Creeps after calling Elliott Beamer, young cousin of Ricky from the first book and a classmate of hers, a "creep" and having it be misconstrued as knowledge of his true identity rather than a simple insult as was intended. With the help of her best friend Serena, new British student Billy, and her parents, Caitlin must put an end to the Creeps' plans.
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--> '''Caitlin''': ''(skeptically, upon seeing Billy's binoculars)'' "What are you looking at?"
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--> '''Caitlin''': "{{Badass}} "Badass is in my blood!"
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* BriefAccentImitation: Billy, in his opening scene, fakes an American accent to fool his teacher and classmates into thinking they were misled about a British student joining them. It works, briefly.
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* FakeAmerican: Billy, in-universe, when first introduced. He manages to fool his teacher and classmates for a short time.
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** At some point, a bake sale is involved. involved.
* CallingMeALogarithm: Although it is an actual insult, Elliott still has this reaction when he and Billy are arguing over Caitlin.
--> '''Billy''': "You're not going on a date with ''this'' ponce, are you?"
--> '''Elliott''': "I am not a ponce! What's a ponce?"
* CallingMeALogarithm: Although it is an actual insult, Elliott still has this reaction when he and Billy are arguing over Caitlin.
--> '''Billy''': "You're not going on a date with ''this'' ponce, are you?"
--> '''Elliott''': "I am not a ponce! What's a ponce?"
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* ActionizedSequel: PlayedWith, as although the story becomes much more action-packed, action-packed (after the first act), the character development is also much richer than in the original series.
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** Reference to phone calls at midnight by the Creeps. Shortly afterward, Caitlin indeed gets phone calls in the middle of the night, to keep her on her toes as a means of intimidation by Ricky.
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** Reference to [[HarassingPhoneCall phone calls at midnight by the Creeps.Creeps]]. Shortly afterward, Caitlin indeed gets phone calls in the middle of the night, to keep her on her toes as a means of intimidation by Ricky.
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* NothingIsScarier: The Creeps in their reptilian form - and what they are capable of - are not fully revealed until some way through the story, to enhance the horror that ensues when they do transform.
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* NothingIsScarier: The Creeps in their reptilian form - and what they are capable of - are not fully revealed until some way through the story, end of the first act, as a prelude to the first ChaseScene, to enhance the horror that ensues when they do transform.
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The first chapters are up: can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9960838/1/Creeps here]].
!! Tropes
* ActionGirl: Caitlin, her police officer mother Mary-Ann, and to a lesser extent Serena.
* ActionMom: Mary-Ann.
* ActionizedSequel: PlayedWith, as although the story becomes much more action-packed, the character development is also much richer than in the original series.
* ActionPrologue: Caitlin chases and catches a southern black racer (snake) in the forest while Serena tries to film it, in the style of a NatureDocumentary.
* AlienAutopsy: [[spoiler:After Caitlin blows up a gas station and kills Eddie, the authorities examine his charred body - unaware that [[WasOnceAMan he was ever human]] - and learn about the Creeps' biology.]]
* AlienInvasion: By way of infiltration.
* AntagonistTitle
* BadassFamily: The Websters. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Caitlin.
--> '''Caitlin''': "{{Badass}} is in my blood!"
* CallBack: As a sequel, there are quite a few nods to the original ''Goosebumps'' book.
** Most notably, Ricky's former subordinate status to Tasha on the ''Harding Herald'' school paper, and the change in their dynamic since then, is an important plot point.
** The main character falls for the new kid in town.
** Reference to phone calls at midnight by the Creeps. Shortly afterward, Caitlin indeed gets phone calls in the middle of the night, to keep her on her toes as a means of intimidation by Ricky.
** At some point, a bake sale is involved.
* ChaseScene: Several, most notably an epic foot chase through the city culminating in a gas station showdown.
* ChekhovsGun: The video camera. Used in the beginning of the story as Caitlin and Serena film their NatureDocumentary, it becomes important later by providing proof of the Creeps' existence (when Caitlin secretly filmed them at their hideout).
* CommonalityConnection: After getting off to a bad start when Billy's antics embarrass Caitlin in front of her entire science class, the two of them start to bond when they meet each other in the park, both birding.
--> '''Caitlin''': ''(skeptically, upon seeing Billy's binoculars)'' "What are you looking at?"
--> '''Billy''': "Tits." ''({{beat}})'' "Or as you Americans call them, chickadees."
* CoolPeopleRebelAgainstAuthority: Billy.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Than the original novel, the story's predecessor in-universe.
* DeadpanSnarker: [[WorldOfSnark Most everybody]], but ''especially'' Billy.
* DeconstructionFic: Puts the original story's premise into a more plausible setting, and examines the effects.
* DescriptivelyNamedSpecies: The Creeps. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], since this is a name the humans gave themselves after becoming reptilian monsters.
* DistressedDude: Billy, who still manages to gain a slight edge over his kidnappers by being incredibly annoying.
* DonutMessWithACop: Billy jokes about this with Caitlin's police officer mother.
* EvilRedhead: Tasha.
* {{Expy}}: Billy is basically [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Spike]] as a 12-year-old kid and with an affinity for birds.
--> '''Caitlin''': "[[LampshadeHanging ...someone wasn't very creative.]]"
* FakeAmerican: Billy, in-universe, when first introduced. He manages to fool his teacher and classmates for a short time.
* ForceFeeding: Attempted by the Creeps on Serena with the Identity Seeds, until Billy saves her.
* InsistentTerminology: In the opening, Caitlin explains to her father the difference between poisonous and venomous, of which the deadly snakes he worries about her someday handling are the latter.
--> '''Caitlin''': "Bites and stings are venom. Everything else is poison."
* JuniorHigh
* KillItWithFire
* LizardFolk: The Creeps, when not in their human form.
* TheMeanBrit: Billy has elements of this, but mostly he's just a ConsummateLiar.
* MilitaryBrat: Caitlin.
* MutagenicFood: The Identity Seeds, which look like chocolate chips and turn those who eat them into Creeps.
* NatureLover: Caitlin, Billy, and to a lesser extent Serena all love being in the wilderness looking for animals, especially birds and herps.
* NewTransferStudent: Billy, originally from England.
* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Examined. It mostly boils down to the fact that the Creeps walking among us are not fully alien, having been converted from humans, and that the Identity Seeds are designed to convert any race into the [[VoluntaryShapeshifting shapeshifters]] represented by the villains.
* NothingIsScarier: The Creeps in their reptilian form - and what they are capable of - are not fully revealed until some way through the story, to enhance the horror that ensues when they do transform.
* OnlyInFlorida: Set in Gainesville.
* OralFixation: Billy.
--> "I like having things in my mouth." [[AccidentalInnuendo Another student snickered.]] Ignoring them, Billy explained, "It helps me to concentrate."
* PityTheKidnapper: Tasha, after taking Billy hostage.
* PrecisionFStrike: Combined with CurseCutShort (this is a story based on a children's series, after all). ItMakesSenseInContext.
* PunnyName: Mary-Ann Webster, Caitlin's mother.
* RogueProtagonist: Ricky, the protagonist of the first book, is the BigBad in this follow-up ([[spoiler:actually only a BigBadWannabe]]), but this is consistent with the ending of the previous story.
* RuleOfThree: How many times does Caitlin infiltrate the Creeps' hideout (intentionally or otherwise) before they turn on her? Three times.
* SemperFi: Caitlin's father Jim is a former Marine, now a firefighter.
* ShoutOut: Two of the Creeps are named Brenda and Eddie, which leads to Caitlin quipping, "Does Music/BillyJoel know about you two?"
* TheStarscream: [[spoiler:Tasha.]]
* TeensAreMonsters: Literally, in the case of the Creeps.
* TranshumanTreachery: Played straight at first, with all the Creeps seen as devoted to the spread of their kind and the turning of all humans, but subverted later on.
* TurnOfTheMillennium: Set in late 2001, shortly after TheWarOnTerror has begun.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Creeps can transform from their human to alien forms and back at will.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Mary-Ann's fear of snakes is the only thing standing in the way of Caitlin getting one as a pet.
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* WorldOfSnark
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