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* AdaptationalNameChange: In this fic, Sebastian Shaw's son is named Sean Shaw. This is because the author thinks [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-15#post-4240774 it makes more sense]] for a status obsessed, petty, rich asshole like Sebastian to name his son with a more normal sounding name than Shinobi.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: AdaptationalNameChange:
** In this fic, Sebastian Shaw's son is named Sean Shaw. This is because the author thinks [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-15#post-4240774 it makes more sense]] for a status obsessed, petty, rich asshole like Sebastian to name his son with a more normal sounding name thanShinobi.Shinobi.
** In this timeline, Rogue's real name is Anne Marie instead of Anna Marie, because ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution'' [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-23#post-6370944 never actually revealed her name]], so the author decided to change it up a little.
** In this fic, Sebastian Shaw's son is named Sean Shaw. This is because the author thinks [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-15#post-4240774 it makes more sense]] for a status obsessed, petty, rich asshole like Sebastian to name his son with a more normal sounding name than
** In this timeline, Rogue's real name is Anne Marie instead of Anna Marie, because ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution'' [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-23#post-6370944 never actually revealed her name]], so the author decided to change it up a little.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: As intelligent as Emma is, she's also [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-10#post-4222587 a sheltered girl with no applicable skills]] when it comes to living on her own, which is why why sleeps in her car.
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* SpidersAreScary: Shelob is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-11#post-4227915 a big spider that has very potent venom]]. As such, most people are at least wary of it the first time they see it.
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* MeaningfulRename: Some mutants take on self given names to symbolize leaving their human lives behind when they became mutants.
--> Peter, Jean, Kurt and even Anne Marie and herself… they all self-identified by their given names. Emma thought of herself as ‘Emma’. Their normal names. ''Human'' names.\\
These mutants, however, identified with their self-given mutant names even in their mind’s eye. Caliban, Duke, Frog-man, Callisto. They had bought into lines of thought from old pro-Mutant Rhetoric that Emma had come across in a few others she had encountered either at college or at the Club. People who had subscribed to the belief that to be a mutant meant leaving your old human self behind so that you could be reborn and take your place with your mutant brothers and sisters.
--> Peter, Jean, Kurt and even Anne Marie and herself… they all self-identified by their given names. Emma thought of herself as ‘Emma’. Their normal names. ''Human'' names.\\
These mutants, however, identified with their self-given mutant names even in their mind’s eye. Caliban, Duke, Frog-man, Callisto. They had bought into lines of thought from old pro-Mutant Rhetoric that Emma had come across in a few others she had encountered either at college or at the Club. People who had subscribed to the belief that to be a mutant meant leaving your old human self behind so that you could be reborn and take your place with your mutant brothers and sisters.
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* TheCameo: The [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68425994 janitor]] who helps Peter in Chapter 3 is none other than the King of the Cameo, Creator/StanLee.
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* TheCameo: TheCameo:
** The [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68425994 janitor]] who helps Peter inChapter Part 1.3 is none other than the King of the Cameo, Creator/StanLee.Creator/StanLee.
** In Part 3.1, Peter, Jean, and Emma run into several people who Marvel fans may recognize.
*** They meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
*** They walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs. Fisk]].
*** They meet one of Janet Van Dyne's assistants: [[Characters/AntManHeroes Rita DeMara]].
** In Part 3.2, Felicia mentions that Janet's former protégé was named [[Characters/XMenMutants Jumbo Carnation]]. We also get to meet a friend of Jan's: [[Characters/SpiderManRoguesGalleryIToZ Lorina Dodson]].
** The [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-68425994 janitor]] who helps Peter in
** In Part 3.1, Peter, Jean, and Emma run into several people who Marvel fans may recognize.
*** They meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
*** They walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs. Fisk]].
*** They meet one of Janet Van Dyne's assistants: [[Characters/AntManHeroes Rita DeMara]].
** In Part 3.2, Felicia mentions that Janet's former protégé was named [[Characters/XMenMutants Jumbo Carnation]]. We also get to meet a friend of Jan's: [[Characters/SpiderManRoguesGalleryIToZ Lorina Dodson]].
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** In Part 3.1, Peter, Jean, and Emma run into several people who Marvel fans may recognize.
*** They meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
*** They walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs. Fisk]].
*** They meet one of Janet Van Dyne's assistants: [[Characters/AntManHeroes Rita DeMara]].
** In Part 3.2, Felicia mentions that Janet's former protégé was named [[Characters/XMenMutants Jumbo Carnation]]. We also get to meet a friend of Jan's: [[Characters/SpiderManRoguesGalleryIToZ Lorina Dodson]].
*** They meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
*** They walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs. Fisk]].
*** They meet one of Janet Van Dyne's assistants: [[Characters/AntManHeroes Rita DeMara]].
** In Part 3.2, Felicia mentions that Janet's former protégé was named [[Characters/XMenMutants Jumbo Carnation]]. We also get to meet a friend of Jan's: [[Characters/SpiderManRoguesGalleryIToZ Lorina Dodson]].
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* NiceGuy: Emma notes that Peter is one of the most honest, and just plain nice, guys she's ever met.
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* NiceGuy: Peter is a nice young man who likes helping others simply because it's the right thing to do. Emma notes that Peter is one of the believes that most honest, and people want to help others, not just plain nice, guys she's ever met.themselves.
--> “I swear, darling, you give me such a headache.” Emma put a hand up to her temple and began rubbing small circles there. “You really believe that. Really, truly, deep down in your soul believe that people want to help.”
--> “I swear, darling, you give me such a headache.” Emma put a hand up to her temple and began rubbing small circles there. “You really believe that. Really, truly, deep down in your soul believe that people want to help.”
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* {{Polyamory}]: Jean is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-8#post-4213583 aiming for this]].
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* {{Polyamory}]: {{Polyamory}}: Jean is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-8#post-4213583 aiming for this]].
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* {{Polyamory}]: Jean is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-8#post-4213583 aiming for this]].
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“I mean clearly you noticed,” She said as she gave her hips an exaggerated swing,, savoring his mild discomfort. “But you pulled your attention away quite quickly. You’re already shown more poise and grace -- and class, I might add -- than half the interns I’ve had work for me.” Janet replied, “But I think I’ve gotten distracted from my main point, so again, cards on the table this time in extra super blunt mode.”
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“I mean clearly you noticed,” She said as she gave her hips an exaggerated swing,, savoring his mild discomfort. “But you pulled your attention away quite quickly. You’re already shown more poise and grace -- and class, I might add -- than half the interns I’ve had work for me.” Janet replied, “But I think I’ve gotten distracted from my main point, so again, cards on the table this time in extra super blunt mode.”
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* NotDistractedByTheSexy: Janet van Dyne compliments Peter's ability to do this.
--> “Oh, lovey.” Janet winked at him, “You managed to look my Elizabeth in the eyes while talking to her. Your delightful redheaded friend has spent more time ogling our rather zaftig server than you have and I’ve seen your eyes on me -- you’re more interested in what I’m wearing than in the fact that I have a delightfully pert little arse.”\\
Peter made the valiant attempt to reply, but couldn’t manage more than a distressed choking noise.\\
“I mean clearly you noticed,” She said as she gave her hips an exaggerated swing,, savoring his mild discomfort. “But you pulled your attention away quite quickly. You’re already shown more poise and grace -- and class, I might add -- than half the interns I’ve had work for me.” Janet replied, “But I think I’ve gotten distracted from my main point, so again, cards on the table this time in extra super blunt mode.”
--> “Oh, lovey.” Janet winked at him, “You managed to look my Elizabeth in the eyes while talking to her. Your delightful redheaded friend has spent more time ogling our rather zaftig server than you have and I’ve seen your eyes on me -- you’re more interested in what I’m wearing than in the fact that I have a delightfully pert little arse.”\\
Peter made the valiant attempt to reply, but couldn’t manage more than a distressed choking noise.\\
“I mean clearly you noticed,” She said as she gave her hips an exaggerated swing,, savoring his mild discomfort. “But you pulled your attention away quite quickly. You’re already shown more poise and grace -- and class, I might add -- than half the interns I’ve had work for me.” Janet replied, “But I think I’ve gotten distracted from my main point, so again, cards on the table this time in extra super blunt mode.”
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* MundaneUtility: Irene uses her precognition [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-7#post-4212562 in stock trading]].
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* OlderThanTheyLook: It is heavily implied that Irene has a method to keep herself youthful looking.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: It is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-5#post-4160344 heavily implied implied]] that Irene has a method to keep herself youthful looking.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: It is heavily implied that Irene makes uses of Doc's services to keep herself youthful looking.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: It is heavily implied that Irene makes uses of Doc's services has a method to keep herself youthful looking.
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** Some things that are associated with [[ComicBook/SilkMarvelComics Silk]] in the comes will instead be [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-4#post-4148491 done with Anne Marie]].
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** Some things that are associated with [[ComicBook/SilkMarvelComics Silk]] in the comes comics will instead be [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-4#post-4148491 done with Anne Marie]].
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** Some things that are associated with [[ComicBook/SilkMarvelComics Silk]] in the comes will instead be done with Anne Marie.
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** Some things that are associated with [[ComicBook/SilkMarvelComics Silk]] in the comes will instead be [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-4#post-4148491 done with Anne Marie.Marie]].
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* CompositeCharacter: Doc, a healer that knows Destiny, is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a combination of two Morlocks from comics]]: Masque and Healer. There were combined because the author [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-18#post-4306902 found the original characters bland]].
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* CompositeCharacter: CompositeCharacter:
** Some things that are associated with [[ComicBook/SilkMarvelComics Silk]] in the comes will instead be done with Anne Marie.
** Doc, a healer that knows Destiny, is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a combination of two Morlocks from comics]]: Masque and Healer. There were combined because the author [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-18#post-4306902 found the original characters bland]].
** Some things that are associated with [[ComicBook/SilkMarvelComics Silk]] in the comes will instead be done with Anne Marie.
** Doc, a healer that knows Destiny, is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a combination of two Morlocks from comics]]: Masque and Healer. There were combined because the author [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-18#post-4306902 found the original characters bland]].
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* EgocentricTeamNaming: Inverted. Jean claims that Peter's CodeName is Night Crawler due to the fact that he was the first one seen when people started calling them the Queen's Night Crawlers.
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* EgocentricTeamNaming: Inverted. Jean claims that Peter's CodeName is Night Crawler due to the fact that he was the first one seen when people started calling them the Queen's Queens Night Crawlers.
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** The codenames that the Queen's Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
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** The codenames that the Queen's Queens Night Crawlers choose are based on ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' classes.
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* ThemeNaming: Frog-man points out that the {{Code Name}}s of the Queen's Night Crawlers are based on [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons D&D]] character classes.
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* ThemeNaming: Frog-man points out that the {{Code Name}}s of the Queen's Queens Night Crawlers are based on [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons D&D]] character classes.
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: A lock of Peter's hair turns white after he is drained Anne Marie.
** The kids at school think this is Anne Marie's way of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75457048 marking Peter as hers]].
** The kids at school think this is Anne Marie's way of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75457048 marking Peter as hers]].
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* SkunkStripe: A lock of Peter's hair turns white after he is drained Anne Marie.
** The kids at school think this is Anne Marie's way of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75457048 marking Peter as hers]].
** The kids at school think this is Anne Marie's way of [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75457048 marking Peter as hers]].
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: Part of the reason Jean acts like this is because her powers is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-20#post-4327623 picking up the lust that other teenagers feel as well]].
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: Part of the reason Jean acts like this is because her powers telepathy is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-20#post-4327623 picking up the lust that other teenagers feel as well]].
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: Part of the reason Jean acts like this is because her powers is [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-20#post-4327623 picking up the lust that other teenagers feel as well]].
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* HaremGenre: Averted. Though the story will feature [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-20#post-4327317 polyamorous groups and open relationships]].
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** Doc being a touch-range bio-kinetic and being related to a bone manipulator is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a reference]] to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75453023 Panacea and Marquis]] from ''Literature/{{Worm}}''.
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** Doc being a touch-range bio-kinetic and being related to a bone manipulator is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a reference]] to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75453023 Panacea to Panacea]] [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-18#post-4307001 and Marquis]] from ''Literature/{{Worm}}''.
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* CompositeCharacter: Doc, a healer that knows Destiny, is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a combination of two Morlocks from comics]]: Masque and Healer.
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* CompositeCharacter: Doc, a healer that knows Destiny, is [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.861694/post-75448828 a combination of two Morlocks from comics]]: Masque and Healer. There were combined because the author [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/confused-and-dazed-au-x-men-evo-spider-man-sorta.14178/page-18#post-4306902 found the original characters bland]].
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* OlderThanTheyLook: It is heavily implied that Irene makes uses of Doc's services to keep herself youthful looking.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: According to Lorina Dodson, [[StatuesqueStunner Emma]] was short and skinny when they were younger.
--> '''Emma:''' That’s because I was thirteen, remember? Everyone’s short at thirteen.
--> '''Emma:''' That’s because I was thirteen, remember? Everyone’s short at thirteen.
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* NoodleIncident: When Jean asks Emma if she's ever met another telepath, Emma replies yes with a snarl, ending Jean's inquiry.
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** When Jean asks Emma if she's ever met another telepath, Emma replies yes with a snarl, ending Jean'sinquiry.inquiry.
** Janet ending her professional relationship with her former protégé Jumbo involved a scandal and a double homicide.
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* FilleFatale: Felicia Hardy tries to be this, but doesn't exactly succeed.
--> Emma’s expression had remained flat and completely unamused through the entire exchange. For his part, Peter was doing his best to keep his expression neutral, but he had to admit he alternately found the woman fascinating in a sort of helpless bumbling sort of way and maddening for the very same reason. Even without Emma’s input, he could tell she was trying her best to be charming and intriguing, but it was falling flat. Rather than coming off as a sultry minx, it was closer to watching a clumsy kitten stumble off of the edge of the couch, fall flat on its face, then pretend that everything went exactly as planned.
--> Emma’s expression had remained flat and completely unamused through the entire exchange. For his part, Peter was doing his best to keep his expression neutral, but he had to admit he alternately found the woman fascinating in a sort of helpless bumbling sort of way and maddening for the very same reason. Even without Emma’s input, he could tell she was trying her best to be charming and intriguing, but it was falling flat. Rather than coming off as a sultry minx, it was closer to watching a clumsy kitten stumble off of the edge of the couch, fall flat on its face, then pretend that everything went exactly as planned.
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*** They meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
*** They walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs.Fisk]].Fisk]].
*** They meet one of Janet Van Dyne's assistants: [[Characters/AntManHeroes Rita DeMara]].
*** They meet a security guard named [[Characters/MCUCompanies Luis]] who's also a MotorMouth.
*** They walk past someone who's identified as [[Characters/MarvelComicsTheKingpin Mrs.
*** They meet one of Janet Van Dyne's assistants: [[Characters/AntManHeroes Rita DeMara]].
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