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* PurpleEyes: [[spoiler:A Malonixed Pokemon's eyes. Also, they're the color of Sombra's eyes.]]
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--> '''Emma:''' I was just about to ask why [[spoiler:his fur is that color]].
--> '''Amber:''' Not again... [[spoiler:A science experiment made him part demon, and it darkened his fur.]]
--> '''Emma:''' *stares* That's a load of bull hockey. Just saying [[spoiler:‘it was a mutation’]] makes a lot more sense than that!
--> '''Amber:''' Not again... [[spoiler:A science experiment made him part demon, and it darkened his fur.]]
--> '''Emma:''' *stares* That's a load of bull hockey. Just saying [[spoiler:‘it was a mutation’]] makes a lot more sense than that!
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'''Amber:''' Not again... [[spoiler:A science experiment made him part demon, and it darkened his fur.
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'''Emma:''' *stares* That's a load of bull hockey. Just saying [[spoiler:‘it was a mutation’]] makes a lot more sense than that!
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain hat everyone hates...
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] comeuppance for the villain hat everyone hates...
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-->[[spoiler:'''Entei''']]: ''Farewell, my daughter...''
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-->[[spoiler:'''Brock''']]: Did you notice that scar on her right arm within the past two weeks?
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--> '''Team Vortex Scientist:''' When I scanned the blood on your whip, it revealed that the little Cyndaquil [[spoiler:was a Semi-Legendary]].
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-->'''[[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Magic Box]]:''' ''(to Cinnamon)'' Like Cyndaquil, [[spoiler:half of your blood is Legendary]].
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-->'''Nurse Joy:''' Don't worry, they're all healthy... but it says here that the [[spoiler:Cyndaquil (Quinn)]] and the [[spoiler:Quilava (Cindy)]] share the same mother!
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-->'''Dr. Tortilla:''' Tell Bolton to kill the [[spoiler:Cyndaquil (her brother, Quinn)]].
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-->'''Vibora:''' Asesina, Vispera. I've located them. Be prepared to attack. They're not to be underestimated.
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-->'''Alyssa:''' What kinds of sick, twisted minds do these people have? And whose idea was Team Vortex anyway?
-->'''Shawn:''' My father's.
-->'''Shawn:''' My father's.
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'''Shawn:''' My father's.
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-->'''Anonimo:''' So... have you finished our [[spoiler:Explosive Blood Serum]]?
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-->'''Celebi:''' Come on! I thought you didn't want my autograph anymore! ''You even shoved a bowl of noodles in my face!''
-->'''Beedrill:''' '''''That''' was my FATHER!''
-->'''Beedrill:''' '''''That''' was my FATHER!''
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'''Beedrill:''' '''''That''' was my FATHER!''
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-->'''Chelsea:''' When did this game become a terrorist attack?
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-->'''Cindy:''' [[spoiler:This unnatural cramp was not a cramp, Ty... it was a conception. *grabs Ty by the arms* Ty, what’s going on? How am I pregnant?]]
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-->'''Amber:''' Are you INSANE?!
-->'''[[spoiler:Sombra]]:''' Celebi! You crazy Pokémon!
-->'''[[spoiler:Sombra]]:''' Celebi! You crazy Pokémon!
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-->'''Amber:''' Are you INSANE?!
-->'''[[spoiler:Sombra]]:'''INSANE?!\\
'''[[spoiler:Sombra]]:''' Celebi! You crazy Pokémon!
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'''[[spoiler:Sombra]]:''' Celebi! You crazy Pokémon!
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An incredibly long, yet unfinished ''Pokemon'' fanfiction by [[http://crazynutbob.deviantart.com CrazyNutBob]] on deviantArt.
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An incredibly long, yet unfinished ''Pokemon'' ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fanfiction by [[http://crazynutbob.deviantart.com CrazyNutBob]] on deviantArt.
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* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl/Woman and Her Cyndaquil/Quilava/Typhlosion]]
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* [[ABoyAndHisX ABoyAndHisX: A Girl/Woman and Her Cyndaquil/Quilava/Typhlosion]]Cyndaquil/Quilava/Typhlosion.
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain [[TheScrappy that everyone hates]]...
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain [[TheScrappy that hat everyone hates]]...hates...
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*** Though Hailey did [[CrowningMomentOfFunny climb a tree once]].
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*** Though Hailey did [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments climb a tree once]].
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain [[TheScrappy that everyone hates]]...
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain [[TheScrappy that everyone hates]]...
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* TheVillainMakesThePlot: Had it not been for Team Vortex, Anonimo, and the Malonix, these events wouldn't happen.
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Earlier chapters are also being heavily edited for presentation on FanFictionDotNet, though the basic storyline will remain intact.
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Earlier chapters are also being heavily edited for presentation on FanFictionDotNet, Website/FanFictionDotNet, though the basic storyline will remain intact.
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* {{Badass}}: Most of the characters.
** BadassCrew
** BadassFamily: [[spoiler:Jenna, Cindy, and Quinn]].
*** [[spoiler:Cindy, Ty, the Quiltuplets, and the two sets of twins]].
*** [[spoiler:Quinn, Jamie, and Mantle (and perhaps the triplets)]].
*** [[spoiler:Charlie, Diana, Minnie, and Scales]].
** BadassCrew
** BadassFamily: [[spoiler:Jenna, Cindy, and Quinn]].
*** [[spoiler:Cindy, Ty, the Quiltuplets, and the two sets of twins]].
*** [[spoiler:Quinn, Jamie, and Mantle (and perhaps the triplets)]].
*** [[spoiler:Charlie, Diana, Minnie, and Scales]].
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* {{Badass}}: Most of the characters.
**BadassCrew
** * BadassFamily: [[spoiler:Jenna, Cindy, and Quinn]].
*** ** [[spoiler:Cindy, Ty, the Quiltuplets, and the two sets of twins]].
*** ** [[spoiler:Quinn, Jamie, and Mantle (and perhaps the triplets)]].
*** ** [[spoiler:Charlie, Diana, Minnie, and Scales]].
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** Alyssa and Cindy's bonding scene is similar to Hiccup and Toothless' bonding scene in ''Film/HowToTrainYourDragon.''
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** Alyssa and Cindy's bonding scene is similar to Hiccup and Toothless' bonding scene in ''Film/HowToTrainYourDragon.''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon.''
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** It goes one step further in ''Bittersweet Days'': [[spoiler:Some characters actually fight the Malonixed Pokemon, and they nearly get themselves killed while doing so]].
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Although the story tends to [[GoshDarnItToHeck avoid foul language]] and sexual content, there's still these moments:
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Although the story tends to [[GoshDarnItToHeck avoid foul language]] and explicit sexual content, there's still these moments:
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** Jamie's tail wraps around Quinn... and Jamie smacks it, telling it to stop.
** [[spoiler:Joey learns where babies come from the hard way...]]
** [[spoiler:Joey learns where babies come from the hard way...]]
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** Jamie's tail wraps around Quinn... and Jamie smacks it, telling it to stop.
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*** Same thing happens with Mantle later on.
**[[spoiler:Joey Joey learns where babies come from the hard way...]]
*** Same thing happens with Mantle later on.
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** Ty blames himself for [[spoiler:every Malonix-related mishap, because he not only was he bitten, but he also killed the Malonix that bit him, sealing its virus inside him until who-knows-when]]. It's especially prevalent when [[spoiler:a pregnancy Cindy grows more bloodthirsty and aggressive due to a Malo-STI, which is also implied to be killing her from the inside]].
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** Ty blames himself for [[spoiler:every Malonix-related mishap, because he not only was he bitten, but he also killed the Malonix that bit him, sealing its virus inside him until who-knows-when]]. It's especially prevalent when [[spoiler:a pregnancy pregnant Cindy grows more bloodthirsty and aggressive due to a Malo-STI, which is also implied to be killing her from the inside]].
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* PlayingWithFire: Cindy, Cinnamon, [[spoiler:Quinn, Charlie, Canela, the Quiltuplets]], etc.
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** [[CoolBigSis Amber's]] tomboy to her sister [[SpoiledBrat Pelee's]] girly-girl.
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** [[CoolBigSis Amber's]] tomboy to her sister [[SpoiledBrat [[BrattyTeenageDaughter Pelee's]] girly-girl.
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** Ivy and Bella.
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** A heroic character killing an Electabuzz by <i>twisting its head</i>.
** And so much more. This fic strangely straddles the line between this trope and slapstick.
** And so much more. This fic strangely straddles the line between this trope and slapstick.
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** A heroic character killing an Electabuzz by <i>twisting ''twisting its head</i>.
head.''
** And so much more. This fic strangely straddles the line between this trope and slapstick.
** And so much more. This fic strangely straddles the line between this trope and slapstick.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: You wouldn't think that an author whose artwork is in a cute style and usually drawn for comedy could write a story with such shocking moments such as:
** The brutal beating of a baby Pokemon.
** Accounts of Fire Type Pokemon actively burning down cities and attacking innocents.
** Demon Pokemon biting characters and turning them into monsters.
** A heroic character killing an Electabuzz by <i>twisting its head</i>.
** And so much more. This fic strangely straddles the line between this trope and slapstick.
** The brutal beating of a baby Pokemon.
** Accounts of Fire Type Pokemon actively burning down cities and attacking innocents.
** Demon Pokemon biting characters and turning them into monsters.
** A heroic character killing an Electabuzz by <i>twisting its head</i>.
** And so much more. This fic strangely straddles the line between this trope and slapstick.
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain we LoveToHate...
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* RingOfFire: This was a signal (to Anonimo and Alyssa) that not only was Cindy [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry ticked off]], but she was ready to invoke [[spoiler:a joint evolution/Blue Fire Frenzy]]. And it was [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome such a sweet start of a comeuppance]] for the villain we LoveToHate...[[TheScrappy that everyone hates]]...
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** Lunacy: [[spoiler:Any Pokémon with a dormant Malonix virus turns into a bloodthirsty monster upon looking at it, the very action activating said virus]].
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** Lunacy: {{Lunacy}}: [[spoiler:Any Pokémon with a dormant Malonix virus turns into a bloodthirsty monster upon looking at it, the very action activating said virus]].
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* BadMoonRising: When the moon is red, that means there's trouble brewing. [[spoiler:Any Pokémon with a dormant Malonix virus turns into a bloodthirsty monster upon looking at it, the very action activating said virus]].
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* BadMoonRising: When the moon is red, that means there's trouble brewing.
** Lunacy: [[spoiler:Any Pokémon with a dormant Malonix virus turns into a bloodthirsty monster upon looking at it, the very action activating said virus]].
** Lunacy: [[spoiler:Any Pokémon with a dormant Malonix virus turns into a bloodthirsty monster upon looking at it, the very action activating said virus]].
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* '''Nerves Of Steel:''' (221 - ?)
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* '''Nerves Of Steel:''' (221 - ?)?) Jenna, her grandkids, and their friends are enjoying a Winter Festival. Unfortunately, Team Vortex has plans to hasten to Ultimate Revenge, and this time, their target is Pelee...
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Subverted. [[spoiler:Dr. Tortilla, as part of his KickTheDog moment, calls Quinn (who's just barely hanging onto life at that point) Jenna's ReplacementGoldfish for Cindy, who Jenna had believed to have died, but is actually standing right there and believing her brother's dead. Dr. Tortilla kicked even harder by saying he was worth less because he wasn't a Semi-Legendary like his sister. Didn't matter whether or not what he said was true; Cindy's still very ticked off that he'd say that about Quinn, and proceeds to go BFF on him]].
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** Lest we forget Team Vortex's scheme for [[spoiler:the tenth "torchbearer" (who has to be a descendant of Cindy) to be born]]. And since it's believed that [[spoiler:Cindy's unable to bear anymore offspring]], they're planning on [[spoiler:one of her daughters providing "number ten"]]. Let the implications sink in.
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** An interesting case is [[spoiler:that Ash's Cyndaquil/Quilava has more focus on him ([[AmbiguousGender the author assumes he's male]]) than any other of Ash's Pokémon in this fic. He's even a major character as a Typhlosion (fic only), and has had his own overarching story arc ever since ''Demon Infection.'']]
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*** [[spoiler:When Ty was infected by the Malonix, all Cindy could think about was her children's safety.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ty's Malonix infection. To clarify]]:
***[[spoiler:When Ty was infected by the Malonix, all [[spoiler:In ''Demon Infection'', Cindy could think about was fears for the Quiltuplets' safety when they follow her children's safety.]]as she searches for him, and when she's attacked by Malo!Ty, she attempts a retreat with all five of them in tow. And then when they are captured ''again'', he attempts to kill the kids, setting off Cindy's MamaBear mode with her trademark UnstoppableRage. And then Malo!Ty wins the battle, in front of a crowd, including the injured Quiltuplets. And then Ty manages to snap of his evil mode after his daughter loses it, and then he sees what he has done...]]
*** Subsequent events involving [[spoiler:Ty's Malonix virus]] have this fear as part of the reason why Ty is implied to be suffering from SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:His SuperpoweredEvilSide is growing stronger, and he knows that when it takes over, all his loved ones are ''dead'']].
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*** Subsequent events involving [[spoiler:Ty's Malonix virus]] have this fear as part of the reason why Ty is implied to be suffering from SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:His SuperpoweredEvilSide is growing stronger, and he knows that when it takes over, all his loved ones are ''dead'']].
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** And then later, Team Vortex has been dismantled, and Cindy begins her new life as a Typhlosion. A few years later, a holdout attacks the group, announces that they have an Ultimate Revenge for her, and begins trouble for the characters.
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** And then later, Team Vortex has been dismantled, and Cindy begins her new life as a Typhlosion. A few years later, a holdout attacks the group, announces that they have an Ultimate Revenge for her, and begins even more trouble for the characters.
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* TroubleFromThePast: A single character case with Cindy. She thinks that her past with Anonimo is behind her, and had a good three-year run with Alyssa--and then a Team Vortex scientist informs their leader, Anonimo, that the Cyndaquil he formerly owned was [[spoiler:a Semi-Legendary]]. Needless to say, Team Vortex tracks the girls down and begin to cause trouble.
** And then later, Team Vortex has been dismantled, and Cindy begins her new life as a Typhlosion. A few years later, a holdout attacks the group, announces that they have an Ultimate Revenge for her, and begins trouble for the characters.
** Think that Malonix problem was solved in that three-chapter arc? ''Demon Infection'' proves this is not the case.
** And then later, Team Vortex has been dismantled, and Cindy begins her new life as a Typhlosion. A few years later, a holdout attacks the group, announces that they have an Ultimate Revenge for her, and begins trouble for the characters.
** Think that Malonix problem was solved in that three-chapter arc? ''Demon Infection'' proves this is not the case.
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* TapOnTheHead: Played with. Any brain damage is usually fixed by Celebi. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Joey and Amber didn't have Celebi around to fix their heads when they both received brain injuries. The damage done hasn't been explored very much though, only Joey's eyesight and Amber being a little uptight]].
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* TapOnTheHead: Played with. Any Usually the HardHead trope is played straight, and any brain damage is usually fixed by Celebi. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Joey and Amber didn't have Celebi around to fix their heads when they both received brain injuries. The damage done hasn't been explored very much though, only Joey's eyesight and Amber being a little uptight]].
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* ComingOfAgeStory: The first 100+ chapters (From the prologue of ''Shattered Spirit'' to the end of ''Prison'') are basically this for both Cindy and Alyssa. It's especially noticeable that the two grow up together (Alyssa's child to Cindy's Cyndaquil, teenager to Quilava, adult to Typhlosion).
** Later chapters have this as a subplot for [[spoiler:Cindy's offspring and their friends]]. Most of them end up growing up in the same manner as above.
** Later chapters have this as a subplot for [[spoiler:Cindy's offspring and their friends]]. Most of them end up growing up in the same manner as above.
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** ''Brother and Sister:'' [[spoiler:Quinn is an official member of the group, the ridiculous relationship of Buzz and Jamie is over, Pancho, Villa, and Dr. Tortilla are in jail... oh, and Cindy and Quinn's mother is still in Team Vortex's possession, with Cindy still wanting to meet her and Quinn missing her]].
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* BittersweetEnding: ''ShatteredSpirit:'' Cindy is away from Anonimo and under the care of better humans, but Cindy's already broken down into a mess, and [[spoiler:proceeds to raze New Bark Town]]. Another bittersweet thing about it is that Cindy finally learns to ignite at will, but the trigger being her anger.
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* BittersweetEnding: ''ShatteredSpirit:'' ''Shattered Spirit:'' Cindy is away from Anonimo and under the care of better humans, but Cindy's already broken down into a mess, and [[spoiler:proceeds to raze New Bark Town]]. Another bittersweet thing about it is that Cindy finally learns to ignite at will, but the trigger being her anger.
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* BittersweetEnding: ''ShatteredSpirit:'' Cindy is away from Anonimo and under the care of better humans, but Cindy's already broken down into a mess, and [[spoiler:proceeds to raze New Bark Town]]. Another bittersweet thing about it is that Cindy finally learns to ignite at will, but the trigger being her anger.
** ''Sombra:'' [[spoiler:The eponymous character is a good guy! Wait... only Amber, Celebi, Mantle, Pelee, and Dynamite like him. Oh, and Team Vortex has returned and wants revenge]].
** ''Dirty Secrets:'' [[spoiler:Blaze has gone into Blue Fire Frenzy, destroyed a city, and is suffering from a HeroicBSOD. Team Vortex's plan succeeded and they're one step closer to the Ultimate Revenge. The upside? His siblings survive the attacks on them, and Blaze and Ivy mend their strained friendship]].
** ''Bittersweet Days:'' [[spoiler:New members of the family? Check. Everybody survived? Check. Cinnamon's daughter has a Malonix virus now? Check. Cindy ends up a sickly shell of her former self after a rough pregnancy that nearly killed her? Check. Smoky's blind and sent somewhere else for rehabilitation with his older brother Joey? Check. Ty's Malonix side getting stronger? Check. Dynamite's Malonix side becoming more active? Check]].
** ''Sombra:'' [[spoiler:The eponymous character is a good guy! Wait... only Amber, Celebi, Mantle, Pelee, and Dynamite like him. Oh, and Team Vortex has returned and wants revenge]].
** ''Dirty Secrets:'' [[spoiler:Blaze has gone into Blue Fire Frenzy, destroyed a city, and is suffering from a HeroicBSOD. Team Vortex's plan succeeded and they're one step closer to the Ultimate Revenge. The upside? His siblings survive the attacks on them, and Blaze and Ivy mend their strained friendship]].
** ''Bittersweet Days:'' [[spoiler:New members of the family? Check. Everybody survived? Check. Cinnamon's daughter has a Malonix virus now? Check. Cindy ends up a sickly shell of her former self after a rough pregnancy that nearly killed her? Check. Smoky's blind and sent somewhere else for rehabilitation with his older brother Joey? Check. Ty's Malonix side getting stronger? Check. Dynamite's Malonix side becoming more active? Check]].
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* '''Adventures Through Johto:''' (9 - 27) The segment where Cindy becomes Alyssa's Pokémon and travels with her, the two learning how to get along. Along the way, Chelsea (Alyssa's cousin) and Cinnamon (a Fakemon named Kittiember) join them. [[spoiler:She also befriends Ash's Cyndaquil (assumed to be male)]].
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* '''Adventures Through Johto:''' Johto/A Journey Builds Character:''' (9 - 27) The segment where Cindy becomes Alyssa's Pokémon and travels with her, the two learning how to get along. Along the way, Chelsea (Alyssa's cousin) and Cinnamon (a Fakemon named Kittiember) join them. [[spoiler:She also befriends Ash's Cyndaquil (assumed to be male)]].
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: YMMV. The addition of Fakemon, Fanmade Regions, and fanmade attacks in the story doesn't seem to be a problem with its readers; Cinnamon, Hailey, and the Benenix are very well liked, Malonix makes for some pure terror, and some of the fanmade attacks are kind of cool.
** We also have [[spoiler:Semi-Legendaries]], which are practically the Pokémon version of [[spoiler:Demigods]].
** We also have [[spoiler:Semi-Legendaries]], which are practically the Pokémon version of [[spoiler:Demigods]].
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: YMMV. The addition of Fakemon, Fanmade Regions, [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl/Woman and fanmade attacks in the story doesn't seem to be a problem with its readers; Cinnamon, Hailey, and the Benenix are very well liked, Malonix makes for some pure terror, and some of the fanmade attacks are kind of cool.
** We also have [[spoiler:Semi-Legendaries]], which are practically the Pokémon version of [[spoiler:Demigods]].Her Cyndaquil/Quilava/Typhlosion]]
** We also have [[spoiler:Semi-Legendaries]], which are practically the Pokémon version of [[spoiler:Demigods]].
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: When Joey gets injured, Emma, who had been a massive jerk to him the entire time they knew each other, is immediately sorrowful and regrets her actions. The way she talks to his unconscious body and puts her paw on his while vowing to treat him better suggests that [[ShipTease she's developing feelings for him]].
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: When Joey gets injured, Emma, who had been a massive jerk to him the entire time they knew each other, is immediately sorrowful and regrets her actions. The way she talks to his unconscious body and puts her paw on his while vowing to treat him better suggests that [[ShipTease she's developing feelings for him]].
