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* AsTheGoodBookSays: Chloe's Alliance ring tells her she can't contact her Paris friends because 'the gulf between you is too great.' This is strangely florid for a 'cannot complete your call' message, but it is remniscent of the Biblical story of Lazarus and the rich man, where the rich man is damned and is told he cannot cross over to Heaven because of the 'great gulf' between them.
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* ChildSoldier: Katya was so bloodthirsty that she lied about her age to get into her country's military and begin killing her enemies that much faster.
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* SlutShaming: Bethany did this for months to a girl who got pregnant, and encouraged everyone else to do it too so they could make the girl repent of her sin and be worthy of Heaven.
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: When a pregnant girl Bethany had bullied and slut-shamed for months tried to kill herself, Bethany just resolved to harass and shame her even more, because in her eyes, attempting suicide was another sin she'd committed.
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: When a pregnant girl Bethany had bullied and slut-shamed for months tried to kill herself, herself but failed, Bethany just resolved to harass and shame her even more, because in her eyes, the girl had sinned yet again by attempting suicide was another sin she'd committed. suicide.
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: When a pregnant girl Bethany had bullied and slut-shamed for months tried to kill herself, Bethany just resolved to harass and shame her even more, because in her eyes, attempting suicide was another sin she'd committed.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After death, humans who committed particularly vile sins in life become demons and are sent back to Earth to tempt other humans into sinning. They gain the full knowledge that they're terrible people, but are powerless to change themselves and become better. They are TheNeedless and cannot eat or sleep; any food they put in their mouth disappears, and they will never fall asleep no matter how long they lie down and close their eyes. They cannot experience any kind of happiness--not from eating food, not from sex, not from companionship, not even from looking at a pretty flower, but they will have to fake all of those things while tempting and tormenting humans. If they don't do so, they will be tortured by their superiors.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After death, humans who committed particularly vile sins in life become demons and are sent back to Earth to tempt other humans into sinning. They gain the full knowledge that they're terrible people, but are powerless to change themselves and become better. They are TheNeedless and cannot eat or sleep; any food they put in their mouth disappears, and they will never fall asleep no matter how long they lie down and close their eyes. They cannot experience are totally incapable of feeling any kind of happiness--not from eating food, not from sex, not from companionship, not even from looking at a pretty flower, but they will have to fake all of those things while tempting and tormenting humans. If they don't do so, they will be tortured by their superiors.
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* TooDumbToLive: Luna refused to listen to five different chefs who warned her that improperly prepared fugu was lethally poisonous and had all of them fired. When she finally found a chef willing to make it for her, he didn't do it right and she predictably died from fugu poisoning.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After death, humans who committed particularly vile sins in life become demons and are sent back to Earth to tempt other humans into sinning. They gain the full knowledge that they're terrible people, but are powerless to change themselves and become better. They are TheNeedless and cannot eat or sleep. They cannot experience any kind of happiness--not from eating food, not from sex, not from companionship, not even from looking at a pretty flower, but they will have to fake all of those things while tempting and tormenting humans. If they don't do so, they will be tortured by their superiors.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After death, humans who committed particularly vile sins in life become demons and are sent back to Earth to tempt other humans into sinning. They gain the full knowledge that they're terrible people, but are powerless to change themselves and become better. They are TheNeedless and cannot eat or sleep.sleep; any food they put in their mouth disappears, and they will never fall asleep no matter how long they lie down and close their eyes. They cannot experience any kind of happiness--not from eating food, not from sex, not from companionship, not even from looking at a pretty flower, but they will have to fake all of those things while tempting and tormenting humans. If they don't do so, they will be tortured by their superiors.
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* BeingEvilSucks: After death, humans who committed particularly vile sins in life become demons and are sent back to Earth to tempt other humans into sinning. They gain the full knowledge that they're terrible people, but are powerless to change themselves and become better. They are TheNeedless and cannot eat or sleep. They cannot experience any kind of happiness--not from eating food, not from sex, not from companionship, not even from looking at a pretty flower, but they will have to fake all of those things while tempting and tormenting humans. If they don't do so, they will be tortured by their superiors.
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* AllCrimesAreEqual: The girls' various sins include murder, bullying, hate crimes, getting in gang wars, violating the Geneva Convention, committing suicide as a cry for attention, and firing personal chefs for refusing to prepare a potentially poisonous dish. But they all ended up in the same finishing school to become demons in Hell.
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* AllCrimesAreEqual: The girls' various sins include murder, bullying, hate crimes, getting in gang wars, violating the Geneva Convention, committing attempting suicide as a cry for attention, and firing personal chefs for refusing to prepare a potentially poisonous dish. But they all ended up in the same finishing school to become demons in Hell.
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* GhostAmnesia: After becoming a demon and being sent back to Earth to tempt humans, Chloe only vaguely remembers her previous life. She sees her former classmates watching a news report about her death and not feeling very sympathetic that she died, but has no reaction to it.
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* IronicName: Fatima lived a luxurious lifestyle as the stepdaughter of a general who worked for an oppressive regime, even as the rest of the country descended into poverty. Her name means "one who abstains."
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* IronicName: Fatima lived a luxurious lifestyle as the stepdaughter of a general who worked for helped enforce an oppressive regime, even as the rest of the country descended into poverty. Her name means "one who abstains."
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* IronicName: Fatima lived a luxurious lifestyle as the stepdaughter of a dictator's general, even as the rest of the country descended into poverty. Her name means "one who abstains."
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* IronicName: Fatima lived a luxurious lifestyle as the stepdaughter of a dictator's general, general who worked for an oppressive regime, even as the rest of the country descended into poverty. Her name means "one who abstains."
