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* FlippingTheBird: During the final sol, as the crew sings a parody of David Bowie's ''A Space Oddity'', Mark instructs Fireball to "Tell Mars what [he] thinks of it". Fireball raises his middle claw to the surface, replying "It knows!"

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* FlippingTheBird: During the final sol, as the crew sings a parody of David Bowie's ''A Space Oddity'', Mark instructs Fireball sings to everyone to "Tell Mars just what [he] thinks we think of it". Fireball raises his middle claw to the surface, replying Dragonfly, with her empathic abilities, comes back with "It knows!"
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* FlippingTheBird: During the final sol, as the crew sings a parody of David Bowie's ''A Space Oddity'', Mark instructs Fireball to "Tell Mars what [he] thinks of it". Fireball raises his middle claw to the surface, replying "It knows!"
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Of course, first she needs to get there to claim it.

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Of course, first she needs to get ''get'' there to claim it.

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* InterspeciesFriendship: To be expected in a [=MLP:FiM=] fanfic, but a few of the less conventional ones include:
** Cherry Berry and several of her changeling co-workers. Of particular note is Cherry and Chrysalis.
** The martian castaways; spend over 500 days working to survive and you definitely get FireForgedFriends.
* IsThisThingStillOn:
** ''[=CSP=]'': As [=CSP=]-23 is en route to the moon, Twilight and Chrysalis bicker on a hot mic. Neither co-flight directors Occupant and Applejack, nor [=CAPCOM=] Dragonfly want to be the one who tells them that they're supplying material for the reporters sitting in Horeston's press gallery.
** ''The Maretian'': On Sol 426 the castaways test voice radio communication with ''Hermes''. While waiting for message turnaround, Mark and Fireball have a long conversation about quitting the astronaut biz. (This while rescue is still over four months away.) Their mikes are hot for all of it. And because of lightspeed lag, they don't find out for ''over nine minutes''. Mark backpedals immediately once he finds out: the two realize and agree that they shouldn't resign until Mark gets his backpay and Fireball gets back his worldly possessions from the Dragon Lord, respectively.



* IsThisThingStillOn: As [=CSP=]-23 is en route to the moon, Twilight and Chrysalis bicker on a hot mic. Neither co-flight directors Occupant and Applejack, nor [=CAPCOM=] Dragonfly want to be the one who tells them that they're supplying material for the reporters sitting in Horeston's press gallery.



* IsThisThingStillOn: On Sol 426 the castaways test voice radio communication with ''Hermes''. While waiting for message turnaround, Mark and Fireball have a long conversation about quitting the astronaut biz. (This while rescue is still over four months away.) Their mikes are hot for all of it. And because of lightspeed lag, they don't find out for ''over nine minutes''. Mark backpedals immediately once he finds out: the two realize and agree that they shouldn't resign until Mark gets his backpay and Fireball gets back his worldly possessions from the Dragon Lord, respectively.



* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: To create an instance of WorldsBestCharacter: After the ponies spent a sol, on Mars, grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet."

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* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: OverlyNarrowSuperlative:
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To create an instance of WorldsBestCharacter: After the ponies spent a sol, on Mars, grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet.""
** Part of Dragonfly’s pep-talk to Starlight during the cave fart is a reminder that the unicorn is the mightiest wizard on the planet. The immediacy of the crisis prevents reflection on the fact that she is the ''only'' magic specialist on Mars.

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* ExactWords:
** ''Changeling Space Program'': After Rainbow Dash's Almost Bad Day, Pinkie withdraws from active work with the Equestrian Space Agency, declaring that she couldn't set hoof at Cape Friendship again and limiting herself to preparing food. However, that doesn't mean she can't show up at Horseton Space Center to help out with robotic control systems.
** ''Counting Noses'': Chrysalis has never lied once in her life:
---> "Of course," Cherry echoed. "It was a lot more than once."



* ExactWords: After Rainbow Dash's Almost Bad Day, Pinkie withdraws from active work with the Equestrian Space Agency, declaring that she couldn't set hoof at Cape Friendship again and limiting herself to preparing food. However, that doesn’t mean she can’t show up at Horseton Space Center to help out with robotic control systems.


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* AllergicToRoutine: Paussus/Short Pause will enthusiastically tackle any new task he's assigned, but after two or three times, he gets bored and looks for something different to do.
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* PreferableImpersonator: In ''CSP'', one of the changelings took place of a construction worker who died in an accident by FakingAmnesia. By the time of this story, it's been a year that his 'adopted' wife and daughter know of it... and they both are okay with it, much to Chrysalis' bafflement.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Before disappearing from the hive, Paussus held several different jobs both there and at Horseton Space Center over the course of a few months. Anything new is exciting to him the first time he does it, but unbearably boring if he has to do it again. He ultimately ends up working at a low-budget TV studio in Manehattan, where he gets to play a lot of different roles and do other jobs (writing scripts, building sets, etc.) from time to time. It's heaven for him.

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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Before disappearing from the hive, Paussus held several different jobs both there and at Horseton Space Center over the course of a few months. Anything new is exciting to him the first time he does it, but unbearably boring if he has to do it again. He ultimately ends up working becomes an actor at a low-budget TV studio in Manehattan, where he gets to play a lot of different roles and do other jobs (writing scripts, building sets, etc.) from time to time. It's heaven for him.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Before disappearing from the hive, Paussus held several different jobs both there and at Horseton Space Center over the course of a few months. Anything new is exciting to him the first time he does it, but unbearably boring if he has to do it again. He ultimately ends up working at a low-budget TV studio in Manehattan, where he gets to play a lot of different roles and write scripts from time to time. It's his dream job.

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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Before disappearing from the hive, Paussus held several different jobs both there and at Horseton Space Center over the course of a few months. Anything new is exciting to him the first time he does it, but unbearably boring if he has to do it again. He ultimately ends up working at a low-budget TV studio in Manehattan, where he gets to play a lot of different roles and write scripts do other jobs (writing scripts, building sets, etc.) from time to time. It's his dream job.heaven for him.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Before disappearing from the hive, Paussus held several different jobs both there and at Horseton Space Center over the course of a few months. Anything new is exciting to him the first time he does it, but unbearably boring if he has to do it again. He ultimately ends up working at a low-budget TV studio in Manehattan, where he gets to play a lot of different roles and write scripts from time to time. It's his dream job.
* BecomingTheMask: In his natural form, Paussus is an utterly unremarkable-looking drone who doesn't stick in anyone's mind. When he transforms into Short Pause, the unicorn identity he uses for his TV work, everyone recognizes and respects him. Chrysalis even allows him to fill out his census form using "Short Pause" as his real name and "Paussus" as an alias.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546559/counting-noses Counting Noses]]'': When Chrysalis decides to take a census of her hive, she discovers one extra name in the records -- belonging to a changeling who doesn't seem to exist. (Set between ''Changeling Space Program'' and ''The Maretian''. In progress.)

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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546559/counting-noses Counting Noses]]'': When Chrysalis decides to take a census of her hive, she discovers one extra name in the records -- belonging to a changeling who doesn't seem that no one seems to exist.be able to find. (Set between ''Changeling Space Program'' and ''The Maretian''. In progress.Complete.)
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546559/counting-noses Counting Noses]]": When Chrysalis decides to take a census of her hive, she discovers one extra name in the records -- belonging to a changeling who doesn't seem to exist. (Set between ''Changeling Space Program'' and ''The Maretian''. In progress.)

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* "[[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546559/counting-noses Counting Noses]]": Noses]]'': When Chrysalis decides to take a census of her hive, she discovers one extra name in the records -- belonging to a changeling who doesn't seem to exist. (Set between ''Changeling Space Program'' and ''The Maretian''. In progress.)

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There are four related works.

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There are four five related works.


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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546559/counting-noses Counting Noses]]": When Chrysalis decides to take a census of her hive, she discovers one extra name in the records -- belonging to a changeling who doesn't seem to exist. (Set between ''Changeling Space Program'' and ''The Maretian''. In progress.)

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* HappyDance:
** ''[=CSP=]'':
*** Occupant and Marked Knee indulge in one of these[[note]]specifically, the Hustle[[/note]] when they find they have all of the elements[[note]]except authorization from CSP leadership[[/note]] needed to launch the ill-fated CSP Mission R1.
*** To celebrate the successful trans-lunar injection of CSP mission R2, Marked Knee and Pinkie Pie do the Funky Chicken.
** ''The Maretian'':
*** The successful test of ''Angel 2'' (dimension-hopping probe) results in (an [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite especially discoordinated]]) one from Twilight on ''Amicitas'' mission day 110 (Sol 111).



* HappyDance:
** Occupant and Marked Knee indulge in one of these[[note]]specifically, the Hustle[[/note]] when they find they have all of the elements[[note]]except authorization from CSP leadership[[/note]] needed to launch the ill-fated CSP Mission R1.
** To celebrate the successful trans-lunar injection of CSP mission R2, Marked Knee and Pinkie Pie do the Funky Chicken.


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* ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules: The exact status of the Changeling Hive vis-a-vis Equestrian tax law is under (very slow and tedious) negotiation. To deny Celestia opportunities to interfere with her plans, Chrysalis is keeping scrupulous records of all tax-related matters for the various enterprises associated with the Hive, and is even going out of her way to avoid attempts to reduce the final bill, against the advice of her accountants and lawyers, who feel it their duty to get her the best possible deal.
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* FantasySequence:
** After rendezvous and docking with ''Amicitas'' in lunar orbit, Chrysalis indulges in a fairly extensive one exploring what would happen if she disabled Twilight and Rainbow Dash and proceeded to attempt an actual landing. For various reasons, the fantasy does not live up to her expectations.
** On the verge of setting hoof on the moon, Chrysalis gets a two-fer. One where she proceeds with her original plan to seize the moon's power, and another where she embraces continued cooperation with the other races of Equus with the long-term objective of conquering the stars.


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* IsThisThingStillOn: As [=CSP=]-23 is en route to the moon, Twilight and Chrysalis bicker on a hot mic. Neither co-flight directors Occupant and Applejack, nor [=CAPCOM=] Dragonfly want to be the one who tells them that they're supplying material for the reporters sitting in Horeston's press gallery.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed / NoHistoricalFiguresWereHarmed: Many of the scientific and technical experts Chrysalis recruits are based on pioneers in rocketry, mathematics, and electronics. A few other pioneers and notable space-related celebrities make an appearance as part of competing programs or tourists.

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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed / NoHistoricalFiguresWereHarmed: Many of the scientific and technical experts Chrysalis recruits are based on pioneers in rocketry, mathematics, and electronics. A few other pioneers and notable space-related celebrities make an appearance as part of competing programs or tourists.

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* HeadDesk:
** ''[=CSP=]'': Following Jet Set and Upper Crust showing up at the Hive with their Space Tourism demand, Chrysalis is reduced to head thumps on a table after exhausting her supply of {{Angrish}}. When informed of the situation, Cherry Berry is tempted to join her.
** ''The Maretian'': On Sol 33, Starlight indulges in a bout of cranial percussion with a cabinet when she learns about how ''Amicitas'' misjumped.



** Often one of the recovery team leaders. In situations where no-ling knows where the capsule will land, it's her team that usually ends up the closest.

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** Often one of the recovery team leaders. In situations where no-ling knows where the capsule will land, it's her his team that usually ends up the closest.



* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Many of the scientific and technical experts Chrysalis recruits are based on pioneers in rocketry, mathematics, and electronics. A few other pioneers and notable space-related celebrities make an appearance as part of competing programs or tourists.

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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: NoCelebritiesWereHarmed / NoHistoricalFiguresWereHarmed: Many of the scientific and technical experts Chrysalis recruits are based on pioneers in rocketry, mathematics, and electronics. A few other pioneers and notable space-related celebrities make an appearance as part of competing programs or tourists.



* HeadDesk: On Sol 33, Starlight indulges in a bout of cranial percussion with a cabinet when she learns about how ''Amicitas'' misjumped.
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* {{Angrish}}: Queen Chrysalis rant is half this after finding out that Elytron took the two Canterlot unicorns' bits and tossed them in the existing pile of hive funds without counting them first. Which meant they couldn't be refunded (at that point in the story, the CSP had not worked out a means of accommodating passengers).
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* ExcitedShowTitle: For the ShowWithinAShow, the ''Look At It!'' documentary covering CSP Mission 9, complete with Changeling-positive commercial spots.
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* OhCrap: Mark Whatney's reaction upon seeing Fireball trying to scoop some [[MadeOfIncendium perchlorate]] with a food pack.

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* OhCrap: Mark Whatney's Watney's reaction upon seeing Fireball trying to scoop some [[MadeOfIncendium perchlorate]] with a food pack.



Can you say, oh shit? Sure, I knew you could. And I’ll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.''

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Can you say, oh shit? Sure, I knew you could. And I’ll I'll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.''
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* OhCrap: Mark Whatney's reaction upon seeing Fireball trying to scoop some [[MadeOfIncendium perchlorate]] with a food pack.
-->''Yeah. Open flame around magnesium perchlorate and an organic fuel source.\\
Can you say, oh shit? Sure, I knew you could. And I’ll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.''
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* TryNotToDie:

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* TryNotToDie:TryNotToDie: Ember's message. Though the rest of the crew is a bit appalled, by dragons' standards that's rather mushy (according to Fireball).



* WritingLines: As punishment for being sloppy with ''Amicitas’'' power management, Starlight assigns Fireball to typing out "I will not fail to properly power down the ship when not in use." 100 times. Unfortunately, to the confusion and irritation of onlookers, he elects to use the ''Pathfinder'' chat system (rather than a word processing program or whiteboards) for the task.

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* WritingLines: As punishment for being sloppy with ''Amicitas’'' ''Amicitas''[='=] power management, Starlight assigns Fireball to typing out "I will not fail to properly power down the ship when not in use." 100 times. Unfortunately, to the confusion and irritation of onlookers, he elects to use the ''Pathfinder'' chat system (rather than a word processing program or whiteboards) for the task.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPlushies: Mark fancifully wishes for plushies of all of his companions. Hasbro, along with a plethora of not-necessarily-authorized independent fan-creators have them for sale by the time the castaways are ready to leave Mars.
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Never mind.


* BrickJoke: The print version of the story includes a guide to the many footnotes at the start of the prelude, including how the reader "won't have to go farther than at most one page" to find what a footnote is referring to. This is all well and good, until footnote 308 on page 467 notes:
--> Admittedly, this is [[ExactWords the first page]] after the contents, dedication, and preface.
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Explaining the joke always makes it funnier.


* BrickJoke: The print version of the story includes a guide to the many footnotes at the start of the prelude, including how the reader won't need to go back more than one page to find what a footnote is referring to. This is all well and good, until footnote 308 on page 467 notes:
--> Admittedly, this is the first page after the contents, dedication, and preface.

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* BrickJoke: The print version of the story includes a guide to the many footnotes at the start of the prelude, including how the reader won't need "won't have to go back more farther than at most one page page" to find what a footnote is referring to. This is all well and good, until footnote 308 on page 467 notes:
--> Admittedly, this is [[ExactWords the first page page]] after the contents, dedication, and preface.
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Typo fix.


* BrickJoke: The print version of the story includes a guide to the many footnotes at the start of the premise, including how the reader won't need to go back more than one page to find what a footnote is referring to. This is all well and good, until footnote 308 on page 467 notes:

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* BrickJoke: The print version of the story includes a guide to the many footnotes at the start of the premise, prelude, including how the reader won't need to go back more than one page to find what a footnote is referring to. This is all well and good, until footnote 308 on page 467 notes:
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Kris slipped in one more joke in the print version of CSP.

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* BrickJoke: The print version of the story includes a guide to the many footnotes at the start of the premise, including how the reader won't need to go back more than one page to find what a footnote is referring to. This is all well and good, until footnote 308 on page 467 notes:
--> Admittedly, this is the first page after the contents, dedication, and preface.
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--> Mark read it again, frowned, and said, “License is permission to do a thing. In this case, a company wants to buy your name and face.”\\
“What??” Cherry Berry’s forehooves flew to her face. “You said you have no magic! I still using those!”

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--> Mark -->Mark read it again, frowned, and said, “License "License is permission to do a thing. In this case, a company wants to buy your name and face.”\\
“What??”
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"What??"
Cherry Berry’s Berry's forehooves flew to her face. “You "You said you have no magic! I still using those!”those!"



* GenreSavvy: Mark is snapped out of his catatonic state when placed in a situation common to many Sci-fi/horror movies:

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* GenreSavvy: Mark is snapped out of his catatonic state when placed in a situation common to many Sci-fi/horror sci-fi/horror movies:

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