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See also ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/448487/little-changes Little Changes]]'', a crossover between this fic and ''Fanfic/Little Glimpses'', co-written by tom117z and ''Glimpses'' author Skijirama.
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See also ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/448487/little-changes Little Changes]]'', a crossover between this fic and ''Fanfic/Little Glimpses'', ''Fanfic/LittleGlimpses'', co-written by tom117z and ''Glimpses'' author Skijirama.
Skijirama, staring Changeling Twilight and Princess Rainbow Dash.
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See also ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/448487/little-changes Little Changes]]'', a crossover between this fic and ''Fanfic/Little Glimpses'', co-written by tom117z and ''Glimpses'' author Skijirama.
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: When a hysterical Chrysalis confronts Celestia over [[spoiler:the apparent death of her daughter Twilight, asking why she shouldn't burn Canterlot to the ground for it]], Celestia shocks the grieving mother into submission by telling her [[spoiler:Twilight is still alive, being saved from the brink of death and is currently in a coma]].
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* CallBack: Lesson Zero, Longshot was rather traumatised upon hearing that story.
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* CallBack: Lesson Zero, Longshot was rather traumatised traumatized upon hearing that story.story.
* TheCameo: Discord in Chapter 63.
* TheCameo: Discord in Chapter 63.
* DeusExitMachina: Discord is absent for nearly the entire conflict, with his brief cameo revealing he was out on holiday in another dimension. Had he been there, he probably could have defeated Crudelis and her entire army with a single snap of his fingers.
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:Queen Imperatrix realizes 155 years after Avia leaves the hive that Avia was right about the way they should treat the ponies, and she has grown tired of being an evil queen. Before she can do anything to change the hive or herself though, she is immediately [[{{Matricide}} murdered by her daughter Crudelis.]]]]
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:Queen Imperatrix realizes 155 years after Avia leaves the hive that Avia was right about the way they should treat the ponies, and [[BeingEvilSucks she has grown tired of being an evil queen.queen]]. Before she can do anything to change the hive or herself though, she is immediately [[{{Matricide}} murdered by her daughter Crudelis.]]]]
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* TheCameo: Discord in Chapter 63.
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* ShoutOut: Right before Serpens [[spoiler:stabs Twilight in an assassination attempt on her]] he whispers to her [[spoiler:"Queen Crudelis [[Series/GameOfThrones sends her regards]]"]].
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* BadDreams: Twilight after [[spoiler:her near assassination by Infiltrator Serpens, and later after her mother's death.]]
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* PastExperienceNightmare: Twilight after [[spoiler:her near assassination by Infiltrator Serpens, and later after her mother's death.]]
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* {{Adorkable}}: Who else but Twilight Sparkle?
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: “I know that,” Carduus said sternly. “Doesn’t change the fact that she is dead, and there was nothing I could have done. Next time I will do something, even throw myself in front of a magic bolt intended for her if I must.” - [[spoiler:He does exactly that in the final battle.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: “I “I know that,” Carduus said sternly. “Doesn’t change the fact that she is dead, and there was nothing I could have done. Next time I will do something, even throw myself in front of a magic bolt intended for her if I must.” - [[spoiler:He does exactly that in the final battle.]]
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* FrameUp: [[spoiler:Serpens makes an assassination attempt on Twilight while disguised as Broad Sword, a royal guard pony, this framing Equestria for the apparent murder of the princess of the Badlands hive.]]
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: [[spoiler:The original plan Queen Crudelis has for dealing with Chrysalis and Equestria. Using an agent from another hive, she plots to assassinate Twilight, the daughter of Chrysalis, and have Equestria be blamed for it. Chrysalis will become so enraged over the death of her daughter that she will declare war on Equestria, only to be wiped out due to her hive being outnumbered and weak due to a love shortage. Also as a potential bonus, Equestria could be left in a weak enough state afterwards that Crudelis could easily conquer it herself. However, the plan fails when Twilight survives the assassination attempt, allowing Celestia to calm Chrysalis before she can do anything drastic, and work together to bring the real assassin to justice.]]
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:Queen Imperatrix realizes 155 years after Avia leaves the hive that Avia was right about the way they should treat the ponies, and she has grown tired of being an evil queen. Before she do anything to change the hive or herself though, she is immediately [[{{Matricide}} murdered by her daughter Crudelis.]]]]
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:Queen Imperatrix realizes 155 years after Avia leaves the hive that Avia was right about the way they should treat the ponies, and she has grown tired of being an evil queen. Before she can do anything to change the hive or herself though, she is immediately [[{{Matricide}} murdered by her daughter Crudelis.]]]]
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler:Queen Imperatrix realizes 155 years after Avia leaves the hive that Avia was right about the way they should treat the ponies, and she has grown tired of being an evil queen. Before she do anything to change the hive or herself though, she is immediately [[{{Matricide}} murdered by her daughter Crudelis.]]]]
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The story is complete as of October 9th 2016. A sequel has been released called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/319895/change-queen-of-the-hive Change: Queen of the Hive]].
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The story is complete as of October 9th 2016. A sequel has been released called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/319895/change-queen-of-the-hive [[Fanfic/ChangeQueenOfTheHive Change: Queen of the Hive]].
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* FakeKilleScare: Twilight becomes enraged when Captain Carduus is seemingly killed by Crudelis, but medics later find a pulse revealing that he is alive, but crippled to the point where he had to leave the Changeling Royal Guard.
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* FakeKilleScare: FakeKillScare: Twilight becomes enraged when Captain Carduus is seemingly killed by Crudelis, but medics later find a pulse revealing that he is alive, but crippled to the point where he had to leave the Changeling Royal Guard.
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* FakeKilleScare: Twilight becomes enraged when Captain Carduus is seemingly killed by Crudelis, but medics later find a pulse revealing that he is alive, but crippled to the point where he had to leave the Changeling Royal Guard.
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* CurbStompBattle: Chrysalis' changelings VS Shining Armor, Longshot and Vladimir. The latter three are overwhelmed VERY quickly.
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* HappilyAdopted: Twilight was adopted by Night Night and Twilight Velvet after they found her on their doorstep, she was a DoorstopBaby.
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* spoiler:YouKilledMyMother: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
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* spoiler:YouKilledMyMother: YouKilledMyMother: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
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* [[spoiler:YouKilledMyMother]]: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
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* [[spoiler:YouKilledMyMother]]: spoiler:YouKilledMyMother: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: “I know that,” Carduus said sternly. “Doesn’t change the fact that she is dead, and there was nothing I could have done. Next time I will do something, even throw myself in front of a magic bolt intended for her if I must.” - [[spoiler:He does exactly that in the final battle.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: “I “I know that,” Carduus said sternly. “Doesn’t change the fact that she is dead, and there was nothing I could have done. Next time I will do something, even throw myself in front of a magic bolt intended for her if I must.” - [[spoiler:He does exactly that in the final battle.]]
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* PerceptionFilter: Hides the Badlands Hive from view.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: “I know that,” Carduus said sternly. “Doesn’t change the fact that she is dead, and there was nothing I could have done. Next time I will do something, even throw myself in front of a magic bolt intended for her if I must.” - [[spoiler:He does exactly that in the final battle.]]
** Talk of the Empress and her regalia throughout acts two and three, also acts as a SequelHook.
** Talk of the Empress and her regalia throughout acts two and three, also acts as a SequelHook.
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The story is complete as of October 9th 2016. A sequel is in the works.
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The story is complete as of October 9th 2016. A sequel is in has been released called [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/319895/change-queen-of-the-hive Change: Queen of the works.
Hive]].
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'Color Coded Wizardry' was incorrect, only Crudelis and Twilight have different coloured magic to other lings.
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* ColorCodedWizardry: The magic aura of a changeling depends on what hive it comes from. Changelings from Chrysalis's hive have a green aura while the ones from Crudelis's hive have a red aura.
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* ColorCodedWizardry: The magic aura of a changeling depends on what hive it comes from. Changelings from Chrysalis's hive have a green aura while the ones from Crudelis's hive have a red aura.
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* ToneShift: It starts out with Twilight bonding with her mother, failing to fly and other slice-of-life interactions... Then [[spoiler:Twilight is almost assassinated, one or two murders happen, Twilight's hive is destroyed and her mother killed and a giant battle is fought in Ponyville. Among other things.]]
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* {{Adorkable}}: Who else but Twilight Sparkle?
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* TheCameo: Discord in Chapter 63.
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* YouWouldntShootMe: Crudelis believes Twilight won't kill her because she was raised among ponies and is a pony at heart. [[spoiler:Twilight proves her wrong, because while she might have been raised a pony she is a Changeling Queen.]]
* [[spoiler:YouKilledMyMother]]: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
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* YouWouldntShootMe: Crudelis believes Twilight won't kill her because she was raised among ponies and is a pony at heart. [[spoiler:Twilight proves her wrong, because while she might have been raised a pony she is a Changeling Queen.]]
* [[spoiler:YouKilledMyMother]]: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
* YouWouldntShootMe: Crudelis believes Twilight won't kill her because she was raised among ponies and is a pony at heart. [[spoiler:Twilight proves her wrong, because while she might have been raised a pony she is a Changeling Queen.
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* YouWouldntShootMe: Crudelis believes Twilight won't kill her because she was raised among ponies and is a pony at heart. [[spoiler:Twilight proves her wrong, because while she might have been raised a pony she is a Changeling Queen.]]
* [[spoiler:YouKilledMyMother]]: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
* [[spoiler:YouKilledMyMother]]: [[spoiler:Twilight becomes VERY pissed at Crudelis after she fatally wounds Chrysalis, who dies in her sleep shortly afterwards.]]
