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From the same author as ''Fanfic/MyLittlePonyChronicles''. It is still a work in progress.
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** There have also been a lot of allusions to [[TheSlenderManMythos The Slender Man]], but that particular pasta monster has yet to appear. In all likelihood, it's all build-up to his inevitable appearance.

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** There have also been a lot of allusions to [[TheSlenderManMythos [[Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos The Slender Man]], but that particular pasta monster has yet to appear. In all likelihood, it's all build-up to his inevitable appearance.



** Chapter 25: An Uneasy Quiet, a college student named Jenn Brauer is attacked by a masked man working for [[TheSlenderManMythos Slenderman]]. He tries to abduct her in much the same fashion as Masky from ''WebVideo/MarbleHornets'' and even acts animalistically like your typical slenderproxy.

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** Chapter 25: An Uneasy Quiet, a college student named Jenn Brauer is attacked by a masked man working for [[TheSlenderManMythos [[Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos Slenderman]]. He tries to abduct her in much the same fashion as Masky from ''WebVideo/MarbleHornets'' and even acts animalistically like your typical slenderproxy.



* [[TheSlenderManMythos Slender Man]]: [[spoiler: Officially made his first appearance in Chapter 20, in ''Germany'', the place said to be his place of origin, no less.]]

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* [[TheSlenderManMythos [[Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos Slender Man]]: [[spoiler: Officially made his first appearance in Chapter 20, in ''Germany'', the place said to be his place of origin, no less.]]
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* TheMasquerade: The Keepers have impose this on the secondary world of creatures, monsters, and other mythological beings. It's explicably stated in the backstory that part of the main reason mankind was being held back from progress was because they spent most of their days cowering in fear of monsters or were fighting them off.

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* TheMasquerade: The Keepers have impose imposes this on the secondary world of creatures, monsters, and other mythological beings. It's explicably explicitly stated in the backstory that part of the main reason mankind was being held back from progress was because they spent most of their days cowering in fear of monsters or were fighting them off.

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** [[spoiler: That's to say nothing of poor Crane Game Joe when the youma sleeping inside him is awakened. The slow, horrible transformation seems to imply that the insect-like monster ''grew'' and '''burst out'' from inside him!]]
* BloodierAndGorier: The monsters in ths fic are very violent and very brutal. Gone are the energy-sucking cute monster girls. In their place are creatures like [[{{Creepypasta}} The Rake]].

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** [[spoiler: That's to say nothing of poor Crane Game Joe when the youma sleeping inside him is awakened. The slow, horrible transformation seems to imply that the insect-like monster ''grew'' and '''burst ''burst out'' from inside him!]]
* BloodierAndGorier: The monsters in ths this fic are very violent and very brutal. Gone are the energy-sucking cute monster girls. In their place are creatures like [[{{Creepypasta}} The Rake]].



** There have also been a lot of allusions to [[TheSlenderManMythos The Slender Man]], but that particular pasta monster has yet to appear. In all likelihood,it's all build-up to his inevitable appearance.

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** There have also been a lot of allusions to [[TheSlenderManMythos The Slender Man]], but that particular pasta monster has yet to appear. In all likelihood,it's likelihood, it's all build-up to his inevitable appearance.



** And ''[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings The Lord of the Rings]]'', apparently, at least in the setting's distance past.

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** And ''[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings The Lord of the Rings]]'', apparently, at least in the setting's distance distant past.



* TheDeterminator: Usagi, full stop. [[spoiler: Though showing a lot of signs of being traumatized and beginning to become depressed over her circumstances, she still isn't giving up the fight and has soldiered through every obstacle standing in her way.]]

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* TheDeterminator: {{Determinator}}: Usagi, full stop. [[spoiler: Though showing a lot of signs of being traumatized and beginning to become depressed over her circumstances, she still isn't giving up the fight and has soldiered through every obstacle standing in her way.]]



* EarlyBirdCameo: So far, Ami, Makoto, Rei, Kunzite, Nephrite, Minako during her time as Sailor V, and Haruka.
** So far, [[spoiler: of the reincarnated Seven Great Youma, Grandpa Hino, Reika, and Crane Game Joe have all made early on appearances and only one of them has been turned.]]
** [[spoiler: One of Sailor Uranus's techniques, Space Sword, made it's appearance when a particularly nasty beast had Haruka backed up into a corner.]]



* EarlyBirdCameo: So far, Ami, Makoto, Rei, Kunzite, Nephrite, Minako during her time as Sailor V, and Haruka.
** So far, [[spoiler: of the reincarnated Seven Great Youma, Grandpa Hino, Reika, and Crane Game Joe have all made early on appearances and only one of them has been turned.]]
** [[spoiler: One of Sailor Uranus's techniques, Space Sword, made it's appearance when a particularly nasty beast had Haruka backed up into a corner.]]



* {{Jerkass}} and JerkassHasAPoint: Pious. He is abrasive, unflinching, unfriendly, domineering, critical, shrewd, and calculating. He believes that the Warriors are too frivolous and frankly not ready for to properly fulfill their duties, and...given how many near misses the Warriors have suffered thanks to either lack of experience or caution, it's kinda hard to argue his point.

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* {{Jerkass}} and JerkassHasAPoint: Pious. He is abrasive, unflinching, unfriendly, domineering, critical, shrewd, and calculating. He believes that the Warriors are too frivolous and frankly not ready for to properly fulfill their duties, and...and... given how many near misses the Warriors have suffered thanks to either lack of experience or caution, it's kinda hard to argue his point.
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From the same author as [[Fanfic/MyLittlePonyChronicles My Little Pony Chronicles]]. It is still a work in progress.

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From the same author as [[Fanfic/MyLittlePonyChronicles My Little Pony Chronicles]].''Fanfic/MyLittlePonyChronicles''. It is still a work in progress.
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!! Celestial Warrior Moon'' has examples of the following tropes:

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!! Celestial ''Celestial Warrior Moon'' has examples of the following tropes:
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While it follows the same basic outline of the original story, the main characters instead transform into armored [[LadyOfWar Ladies of War]], armed with swords, bows and arrows, and other such weapons instead of PrincessClassic-style [[MagicalGirl magical girls]] who wear sailor fukos and tiaras. The roles of Luna and Artemis have also been changed considerably. In this fic, they're members of a secret organization called ''The Keepers'', which is made up of descendants of the Moon Kingdom's royal court. They basically play the role of TheMenInBlack.

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While it follows the same basic outline of the original story, the main characters instead transform into armored [[LadyOfWar Ladies of War]], armed with swords, bows and arrows, and other such weapons instead of PrincessClassic-style [[MagicalGirl magical girls]] who wear sailor fukos fukus and tiaras. The roles of Luna and Artemis have also been changed considerably. In this fic, they're members of a secret organization called ''The Keepers'', which is made up of descendants of the Moon Kingdom's royal court. They basically play the role of TheMenInBlack.
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* FourIsDeath: The Shitennou. [[CaptainObvious It's in their name, after all.]]

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* FourIsDeath: The Shitennou. [[CaptainObvious It's in their name, after all.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8047108/1/Celestial-Warrior-Moon Celestial Warrior Moon]] is a DarkerAndEdgier AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/SailorMoon''. So needless to say, it is very, ''very'' different from both the manga and anime, approaching the story from a completely different angle. The story includes several [[OriginalCharacter OCs]], though they've been strictly regulated into the supporting cast so as not to take any of the limelight off the main characters. The author has changed how transformations and powers work, and has even gone as far as to introduce the Sailor Sensei/Scouts out of order just to shake things up. The villains and monsters have been made much more menacing and dangerous, leading to much more intense violence during fight scenes.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8047108/1/Celestial-Warrior-Moon Celestial Warrior Moon]] is a DarkerAndEdgier AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/SailorMoon''. So needless to say, it is very, ''very'' different from both the manga and anime, approaching the story from a completely different angle. The story includes several [[OriginalCharacter OCs]], though they've been strictly regulated into the supporting cast so as not to take any of the limelight off the main characters. The author has changed how transformations and powers work, and has even gone as far as to introduce the Sailor Sensei/Scouts Senshi/Scouts out of order just to shake things up. The villains and monsters have been made much more menacing and dangerous, leading to much more intense violence during fight scenes.



** It also looks like the plot of Chapter 4 of the manga/episode 22 of the anime, which involves the Sensei and the villains both attending a masquerade ball to get their hands on a jewel which might be the Silver Crystal ([[spoiler: it's not]]), will be taking place in Buckingham Palace, London, England.

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** It also looks like the plot of Chapter 4 of the manga/episode 22 of the anime, which involves the Sensei Senshi and the villains both attending a masquerade ball to get their hands on a jewel which might be the Silver Crystal ([[spoiler: it's not]]), will be taking place in Buckingham Palace, London, England.
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* {{Fanon}}: InUniverse example. Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is older sister Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher. Them being sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.

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* {{Fanon}}: InUniverse example. Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is the older sister of Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher.homeroom teacher. Them being sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.
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* FourIsDeath: The Four Shitennou.

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* FourIsDeath: The Four Shitennou.Shitennou. [[CaptainObvious It's in their name, after all.]]
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** Chapter 25: An Uneasy Quiet, a college student named Jenn Brauer is attacked by a masked man working for [[TheSlenderManMythos Slenderman]]. He tries to abduct her in much the same fashion as Masky from ''MarbleHornets'' and even acts animalistically like your typical slenderproxy.

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** Chapter 25: An Uneasy Quiet, a college student named Jenn Brauer is attacked by a masked man working for [[TheSlenderManMythos Slenderman]]. He tries to abduct her in much the same fashion as Masky from ''MarbleHornets'' ''WebVideo/MarbleHornets'' and even acts animalistically like your typical slenderproxy.



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** Chapter 41: Echoes of the Past, [[spoiler: Setsuna finally makes an appearance, though this time she's less of [[TheStoic the Stoic]], and takes more after [[Series/DoctorWho The Eleventh Doctor.]]]]
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Sailor V. The implication at this point is that her struggles from [[Manga/CodenameSailorV Codename: Sailor V]] are happening behind the scenes.

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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Sailor V. The implication at this point is that her struggles from [[Manga/CodenameSailorV Codename: Sailor V]] ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' are happening behind the scenes.
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** In Chapter 23: Blunder and Lightning, [[spoiler: Zoicite unleashes a horde of creatures called Wood Trolls, which are made out of dirt and wood and powered by strange coccoons implanted into them. The description of the trolls and their behavior (trying to drag people underground) is reminiscent of the ''DoctorWho'' audiobook, ''Day of the Troll''.]]

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** In Chapter 23: Blunder and Lightning, [[spoiler: Zoicite unleashes a horde of creatures called Wood Trolls, which are made out of dirt and wood and powered by strange coccoons implanted into them. The description of the trolls and their behavior (trying to drag people underground) is reminiscent of the ''DoctorWho'' audiobook, ''Series/DoctorWho'' audiobook ''Day of the Troll''.]]
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* XMeetsY: ''Celestial Warrior Moon'' is basically ''Franchise/SailorMoon'' meets ''VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile'' meets ''TheSCPFoundation'' meets general ''{{Creepypasta}}''.
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* DieOrFly: [[spoiler: Does Awakening just in time not to be ripped to shreds by ''Main/TheRake'' after witnessing it murder at least one person and then beat the crap out of all your friends before mercilessly chasing you down the streets of Tokyo in the dead of night count?]]

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* DieOrFly: [[spoiler: Does Awakening just in time not to be ripped to shreds by ''Main/TheRake'' ''WebOriginal/TheRake'' after witnessing it murder at least one person and then beat the crap out of all your friends before mercilessly chasing you down the streets of Tokyo in the dead of night count?]]



* StarterVillain: ''[[Main/{{Creepypasta}} The]] [[Main/TheRake Rake]]''. Chapters 1-5 are basically a little mini-arc within the story where the famed creepypasta monster plays the role of main villain.

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* StarterVillain: ''[[Main/{{Creepypasta}} The]] [[Main/TheRake [[WebOriginal/TheRake Rake]]''. Chapters 1-5 are basically a little mini-arc within the story where the famed creepypasta monster plays the role of main villain.
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* MyGreatestFailure: It's a little early to tell, but it appears that Usagi views [[spoiler: Crane Game Joe's death and Entomon's subsequent escape]] as this.
** Also, [[spoiler: Makoto]] considers the entire ''past year'' to be this. Apparently she fell in with the wrong crowd, started doing drugs, physically assaulted at least one close friend, and [[spoiler: disappointed her senpai, as well as going through four schools in that time frame.]]
* MyGreatestSecondChance: How [[spoiler: Makoto]] views working with the Keepers for the [[MyGreatestFailure above]] reason.


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* OhCrap: Dozens, but a particularly light-hearted one is when Usagi accidentally lets slip in the middle of class that Makoto's injury was a ''knife wound''.
** A very satisfying one from [[spoiler: Jadeite]] when [[spoiler: Orion]] nearly shoots and kills him.
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** In chapter 32 [[spoiler: the bride's mother kills an ''arachnotaur'' and is prepared to throw down with Nephrite]].


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* CurbStompBattle: Zoicite owns Jupiter when they go one-on-one at the radio station
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* MonsterOfTheWeek: Yep, but with a twist. Not all the monsters have been killed after their encounter with the Warriors (one was even let go and another came back for more).

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* MonsterOfTheWeek: Yep, but with a twist. Not all the monsters have been killed after their encounter with the Warriors (one was even let go and another came back for more). In fact, one thing the author seems to be trying to avoid is having meaningless monsters of the week.
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** There have also been a lot of allusions to [[TheSlenderManMythos The Slender Man]], but that particular pasta monster has yet to appear. In all likelihood,it's all build-up to his inevitable appearace.

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** There have also been a lot of allusions to [[TheSlenderManMythos The Slender Man]], but that particular pasta monster has yet to appear. In all likelihood,it's all build-up to his inevitable appearace.appearance.
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** You can also tell Jupiter is one of his favorite Senshi.
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* AncientConspiracy: The Keepers are a rare benevolent example.

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* AncientConspiracy: The Keepers are a rare benevolent example. The Dark Kingdom plays it straight, though.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8047108/1/Celestial-Warrior-Moon Celestial Warrior Moon]] is an DarkerAndEdgier AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/SailorMoon''. So needless to say, it is very, ''very'' different from both the manga and anime, approaching the story from a completely different angle. The story includes several [[OriginalCharacter OCs]], though they've been strictly regulated into the supporting cast so as not to take any of the limelight off the main characters. The author has changed how transformations and powers work, and has even gone as far as to introduce the Sailor Sensei/Scouts out of order just to shake things up. The villains and monsters have been made much more menacing and dangerous, leading to much more intense violence during fight scenes.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8047108/1/Celestial-Warrior-Moon Celestial Warrior Moon]] is an a DarkerAndEdgier AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} of ''Franchise/SailorMoon''. So needless to say, it is very, ''very'' different from both the manga and anime, approaching the story from a completely different angle. The story includes several [[OriginalCharacter OCs]], though they've been strictly regulated into the supporting cast so as not to take any of the limelight off the main characters. The author has changed how transformations and powers work, and has even gone as far as to introduce the Sailor Sensei/Scouts out of order just to shake things up. The villains and monsters have been made much more menacing and dangerous, leading to much more intense violence during fight scenes.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Tuxedo Mask, who has been made into Phantom Mask, a [[ComicBook/{{Batman}} Batman]]-like figure that wields a sword and gets into the thick of things and manages to ''hold his own''. Needless to say, he's thrown no roses and made no cheesy one-liners here.

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* AdaptationalBadass: Tuxedo Mask, who has been made into Phantom Mask, a [[ComicBook/{{Batman}} Batman]]-like Franchise/{{Batman}}-like figure that wields a sword and gets into the thick of things and manages to ''hold his own''. Needless to say, he's He's thrown no roses and made no cheesy one-liners here.
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* HistoricalBadassUpgrade: This story somehow manages to do this for England's Elizabeth II, who frankly doesn't need the help. As this fic tells it, she was a high ranking Keeper who apparently spearheaded several important operations to save the world, and saved the underwater city of Atlantis from The Dark Kingdom by having a Keeper-manned submarine launched.
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* NoodleIncident: A few. Apparently, The Dark Kingdom laid siege to Atlantis, which is a living underwater city in this setting, with some kind of ship which was downed by a Keeper-manned submarine. Oh, and Elizabeth II (back when she was a high ranking Keeper prior to becoming Queen of England) spearheaded the operation.
** And this next one crosses with TheGreatOffScreenWar. Something called ''The Underground War'' occurred shortly after Elizabeth II retired from The Keepers in order to become Queen. All we know is that the Keepers fought in it, and it's been outright stated to have been a hellish ordeal by Luna.

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* DieOrFly: [[spoiler: Does Awakening just in time not to be ripped to shreds by ''Main/TheRake'' after witnessing it murder at least one person and then beat the crap out of all your friends before mercilessly chasing you down the streets of Tokyo in the dead of night count?]]



* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: [[spoiler: Does Awakening just in time not to be ripped to shreds by ''Main/TheRake'' after witnessing it murder at least one person and then beat the crap out of all your friends before mercilessly chasing you down the streets of Tokyo in the dead of night count?]]
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: The Rake. Though only present in the first few chapters, The Rake is instrumental in setting the tone for both the story and all the villains that would follow after him. Through him, the author also introduced the story's heavy horror elements, the first of the multitude of [[DarkWorld dark worlds]] that exist in the setting, and lays down the first bits of {{Foreshadowing}} for the Slender Man's eventual appearance.

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* StarterVillain: Zoicite. Yes, ''really'', but not a straight example. While it's true that Zoicite has thus far taken Jadeite's place as the first primary antagonist going up against Usagi and her Warriors, it comes with a twist. [[spoiler: He's acting as a distraction for Jadeite and Nephrite. While he keeps the Warriors busy, they gather energy to feed The Entity.]]
** Also diverging from the norm, [[spoiler: Zoicite ''survived'' the events of the doom bus, which was where Jadeite died in the manga. However, he was badly injured and Nephrite is temperarily taking over his duties while he recovers.]]

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* StarterVillain: Zoicite.''[[Main/{{Creepypasta}} The]] [[Main/TheRake Rake]]''. Chapters 1-5 are basically a little mini-arc within the story where the famed creepypasta monster plays the role of main villain.
** Zoicite, starting at Chapter 6.
Yes, ''really'', but not a straight example. While it's true that Zoicite has thus far taken takes Jadeite's place as the first primary antagonist going Shitennou to go up against Usagi and her Warriors, it comes with a twist. [[spoiler: He's acting as a distraction for Jadeite and Nephrite. While he keeps the Warriors busy, they gather energy from humans to feed The Entity.]]
** [[spoiler: Also diverging from the norm, [[spoiler: Zoicite ''survived'' the events of the doom bus, which was where Jadeite died in the manga. manga and where Zoicite suffers his first true defeat in this fic. However, he was merely badly injured and taken out of commission for a while. Nephrite is temperarily taking takes over his duties while he recovers.]]

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