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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: [[spoiler: Does Awakening just in time not to be ripped to shreds by ''Main/TheRake'' after witnessing it murder at least one person and then beat the crap out of all your friends before mercilessly chasing you down the streets of Tokyo in the dead of night count?]]
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* {{Fanon}}: InUniverse example. Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is older sister Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher. That they're sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.

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* {{Fanon}}: InUniverse example. Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is older sister Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher. That they're Them being sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.
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* {{Fanon}}: Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is older sister Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher. That they're sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.

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* {{Fanon}}: InUniverse example. Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is older sister Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher. That they're sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.
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* {{Fanon}}: Chapter 27 reveals that Natsuna Sakurada, the Police Superintendent from ''Manga/CodenameSailorV'' is older sister Miss Haruna, Usagi's Homeroom Teacher. That they're sisters has long been a common fan theory among Moonies for years. The author apparently decided to roll with it.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Pious, the Keeper of the Records. One of the High Keepers, he is a very abrasive and confrontational individual who is very critical of every mistake Usagi and the others makes. Of course, when you consider how much is one the line, this becomes somewhat justified. Thus far, he's also been one of the more competent of the Keepers. To quote the author (with permission): "I can understand why most of my readers would not like Pious. He's a jerk, but he's also a competent jerk."

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* GoodIsNotNice: Pious, the Keeper of the Records. One of the High Keepers, he is a very abrasive and confrontational individual who is very critical of every mistake Usagi and the others makes. Of course, when you consider how much is one on the line, this becomes somewhat justified. Thus far, he's also been one of the more competent of the Keepers. To quote the author (with permission): "I can understand why most of my readers would not won't like Pious. He's a jerk, but he's also a competent jerk."
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** The author has also made great use of news broadcasts to keep readers updated on how much the general public has figured out for itself.

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** The author has also made great use of news broadcasts to keep readers updated on [[BrokenMasquerade how much the general public has figured out for itself.]]
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** The author has also made great use of news broadcasts to keep readers updated on how much the general public has figured out for itself.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Pious, the Keeper of the Records. One of the High Keepers, he is a very abrasive and confrontational individual who is very critical of every mistake Usagi and the others makes. Of course, when you consider how much is one the line, this becomes somewhat justified. Thus far, he's also been one of the more competent of the Keepers. To quote the author (with permission): "I can understand why most of my readers would not like Pious. He's a jerk, but he's also a competent jerk."
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* {{Jerkass}} and JerkassHasAPoint: Pious. He is abrasive, unflinching, unfriendly, domineering, critical, shrewd, and calculating. He believes that the Warriors are too frivolous and frankly not ready for to properly fulfill their duties, and...given how many near misses the Warriors have suffered thanks to either lack of experience or caution, it's kinda hard to argue his point.
** However difficult he may be to get along with, he does his job well. With him in charge of investigating Jadeite and Nephrite's energy drain victims, the Keepers have successfully zeroed in on how they are being targeted. WordOfGod confirms that he is supposed to be an unpleasant, but competent individual, so this also crosses into GoodIsNotNice.
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** [[spoiler: One of Sailor Uranus's techniques, Space Sword, made it's appearance when a particularly nasty beast had Haruka backed up into a corner. Also, The Death Busters have been vaguely alluded to.]]

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** [[spoiler: One of Sailor Uranus's techniques, Space Sword, made it's appearance when a particularly nasty beast had Haruka backed up into a corner. Also, The Death Busters have been vaguely alluded to.]]


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** [[spoiler: The Death Busters have also been vaguely alluded to in Chapter 25 by Myddin.]]
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* SleazyPolitician: Rei's father, Takashi Hino, is shaping up to be this.
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*** Confirmed.
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** [[spoiler: Now he even has his own brain-washed proxy, to boot.]]
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** Chapter 25: An Uneasy Quiet, a college student named Jenn Brauer is attacked by a masked man working for [[TheSlenderManMythos Slenderman]]. He tries to abduct her in much the same fashion as Masky from ''MarbleHornets'' and even acts animalistically like your typical slenderproxy.
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* In Chapter 23: Blunder and Lightning, [[spoiler: Zoicite unleashes a horde of creatures called Wood Trolls, which are made out of dirt and wood and powered by strange coccoons implanted into them. The description of the trolls and their behavior (trying to drag people underground) is reminiscent of the ''DoctorWho'' audiobook, ''Day of the Troll''.]]

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* ** In Chapter 23: Blunder and Lightning, [[spoiler: Zoicite unleashes a horde of creatures called Wood Trolls, which are made out of dirt and wood and powered by strange coccoons implanted into them. The description of the trolls and their behavior (trying to drag people underground) is reminiscent of the ''DoctorWho'' audiobook, ''Day of the Troll''.]]



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* In Chapter 23: Blunder and Lightning, [[spoiler: Zoicite unleashes a horde of creatures called Wood Trolls, which are made out of dirt and wood and powered by strange coccoons implanted into them. The description of the trolls and their behavior (trying to drag people underground) is reminiscent of the ''DoctorWho'' audiobook, ''Day of the Troll''.]]
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** [[spoiler: Now the story's gearing up to go to Germany.]]

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** [[spoiler: Now the story's gearing up to go to Germany.Germany...and Cleveland, Ohio.]]
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** And now Rei's father, Takashi Hino has started to appear within the story, as an arrogant politician of questionable ethics.
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** So far, [[spoiler: of the reincarnated Seven Great Youma, Grandpa Hino, Reika, and Crane Game Joe have all made early on appearances and only one of them has been turned.]]
** [[spoiler: One of Sailor Uranus's techniques, Space Sword, made it's appearance when a particularly nasty beast had Haruka backed up into a corner. Also, The Death Busters have been vaguely alluded to.]]

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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 230,000 words, 26 chapters, with each chapter being about 10,000 words long, and counting!

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* TheDeterminator: Usagi, full stop. [[spoiler: Though showing a lot of signs of being traumatized and beginning to become depressed over her circumstances, she still isn't giving up the fight and has soldiered through every obstacle standing in her way.]]
* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 230,000 250,000 words, 26 28 chapters, with each chapter being about 10,000 words long, and counting!
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** [[spoiler: Now the story's gearing up to go to Germany.]]
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* ImplacableMan: So far, both The Face Taker and Entomon.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 230,000 words, 26 chapters, with each chapter being about 10,000 words long, and counting!
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** ''Chapter 22'' confirms that Rei's relationship with her father is the same.
** [[spoiler: ''Chapter 24'' reveals that Mamoru was orphaned at a young age following a car accident. He was adopted by a councilor who was treating him for the amnesia he suffers as the result.]]

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* XMeetsY: ''Celestial Warrior Moon'' is basically ''[[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]'' meets ''[[VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile Valkyrie Profile]]'' meets ''TheSCPFoundation'' meets general ''{{Creepypasta}}''.
* {{Xenafication}}: Not played entirely straight. They're more akin to [[VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile Valkyrie Profile]]-style warrior maidens, but the trope still holds.

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* XMeetsY: ''Celestial Warrior Moon'' is basically ''[[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]'' ''Franchise/SailorMoon'' meets ''[[VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile Valkyrie Profile]]'' ''VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile'' meets ''TheSCPFoundation'' meets general ''{{Creepypasta}}''.
* {{Xenafication}}: Not played entirely straight. They're more akin to [[VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile Valkyrie Profile]]-style ''VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile''-style warrior maidens, but the trope still holds.holds.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8047108/1/Celestial-Warrior-Moon Celestial Warrior Moon]] is an DarkerAndEdgier AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} of [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]. So needless to say, it is very, ''very'' different from both the manga and anime, approaching the story from a completely different angle. The story includes several [[OriginalCharacter OCs]], though they've been strictly regulated into the supporting cast so as not to take any of the limelight off the main characters. The author has changed how transformations and powers work, and has even gone as far as to introduce the Sailor Sensei/Scouts out of order just to shake things up. The villains and monsters have been made much more menacing and dangerous, leading to much more intense violence during fight scenes.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8047108/1/Celestial-Warrior-Moon Celestial Warrior Moon]] is an DarkerAndEdgier AlternateUniverse {{Fanfic}} of [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]].''Franchise/SailorMoon''. So needless to say, it is very, ''very'' different from both the manga and anime, approaching the story from a completely different angle. The story includes several [[OriginalCharacter OCs]], though they've been strictly regulated into the supporting cast so as not to take any of the limelight off the main characters. The author has changed how transformations and powers work, and has even gone as far as to introduce the Sailor Sensei/Scouts out of order just to shake things up. The villains and monsters have been made much more menacing and dangerous, leading to much more intense violence during fight scenes.
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* NotUsingTheZWord: Completely and utterly averted. Each and every monster has been quickly identified by name and species.

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* NotUsingTheZWord: Completely and utterly averted.Averted. Each and every monster has been quickly identified by name and species.



* PaperThinDisguise: ''Beautifully'' averted by the use of full suits of armor and masks.

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* PaperThinDisguise: ''Beautifully'' averted Averted by the use of full suits of armor and masks.



* RealWomenNeverWearDresses: Averted hard. In fact, now they wear armor-plated dresses!

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* RealWomenNeverWearDresses: Averted hard.Averted. In fact, now they wear armor-plated dresses!
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* XMeetsY: ''Celestial Warrior Moon'' is basically ''[[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]'' meets ''[[VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile Valkyrie Profile]]'' meets ''TheSCPFoundation'' meets ''{{Creepypasta}}''.

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* XMeetsY: ''Celestial Warrior Moon'' is basically ''[[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]'' meets ''[[VideoGame/ValkyrieProfile Valkyrie Profile]]'' meets ''TheSCPFoundation'' meets general ''{{Creepypasta}}''.
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** Not only that, but the author has taken steps to foreshadow just about every major upcoming plot point. Numerous elements that won't come into play until much later have already been mentioned and built up. [[spoiler: We've seen Nephrite and his crew working on the black crystal which will be used to awaken The seven Grear Youma, for instance.]]

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** Not only that, but the author has taken steps to foreshadow just about every major upcoming plot point. Numerous elements that won't come into play until much later have already been mentioned and built up. [[spoiler: We've seen Nephrite and his crew working on the black crystal which will be used to awaken The seven Grear Seven Great Youma, for instance.]]

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** Not only that, but the author has taken steps to foreshadow just about every major upcoming plot point. Numerous elements that won't come into play until much later have already been mentioned and built up. [[spoiler: We've seen Nephrite and his crew working on the black crystal, for instance.]]

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** Not only that, but the author has taken steps to foreshadow just about every major upcoming plot point. Numerous elements that won't come into play until much later have already been mentioned and built up. [[spoiler: We've seen Nephrite and his crew working on the black crystal, crystal which will be used to awaken The seven Grear Youma, for instance.]]


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** [[spoiler: BrokenMasquerade]]: [[spoiler: At least partially as of ''Chapter 18: The Ball''. The fact that monsters ''do'' exist has been exposed to the public at large, and the whole thing's been gradually more and more exposed with each passing chapter ever since.]]

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