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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/119354553-captive-eustass-kid-x-reader Captive]]'' Is a Self Insert Manga/OnePiece fanfic by ''[[https://www.wattpad.com/user/AbyssCronica AbyssCronica]]'' which is about a young female Marine Officer captured by the Kid Pirates post time skip. She and Eustass Kid end up learning a lot about each other and themselves.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/119354553-captive-eustass-kid-x-reader Captive]]'' Is a Self Insert Manga/OnePiece fanfic by ''[[https://www.wattpad.com/user/AbyssCronica AbyssCronica]]'' [=AbyssCronica=] which is about a young female Marine Officer captured by the Kid Pirates post time skip. She and Eustass Kid end up learning a lot about each other and themselves.themselves.
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The story is continued in its tie-in story ''[[ https://www.wattpad.com/story/181101323-captive-tie-in-mission-dressrosa Mission Dressrosa]]'' and a proper sequel is in the plans.
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The story is continued in its tie-in story ''[[ https://www.''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/181101323-captive-tie-in-mission-dressrosa Mission Dressrosa]]'' and a proper sequel is in the plans.
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* ActOfTrueLove: Kid proves that he truly love Birdie by letting her go free. Even thought it nearly emotionally destroys him. Birdie leaving the Navy to go and rescue Kid and the crew in Wano is one from her end.
* ActionGirl: Birdie's specialty might be sharpshooting but she is no slouch in hand to hand either.
* AdaptationalAttractiveness: Kid is rather handsome and sexy in this fic, unlike in canon.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Heat quickly develops this toward Birdie. Booka follows not much later.
* CuteAndPsycho: Heat is the sweetest Kid pirate but he is still a Kid pirate.
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* CuteAndPsycho: Heat is the sweetest Kid pirate but he is still a Kid pirate.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Heat quickly develops this BiggerIsBetterInBed: Played with. Since Birdie is a virgin, the first times with Kid are both pleasurable and painful for her, but she finds the sex good enough that she does not mind the resulting soreness.
* ButLiquorIsQuicker: The first time Birdie has sex with Kid she has drunk her body weight in alcohol.
* CrazyJealousGuy: Kid does not handle it well when someone even looks at Birdie. He messily killed a Devil Fruit user with Xray Vision who used his powers to peep on Birdie and was not happy when X Drake offered her a spot in his crew.
* DarkSecret: Birdie killed a young boy and his parents on orders from Sakazuki to prevent a buster call to their entire island.
* DestructoNookie: Kid and Birdie end up destroying Kid's workshop while banging. Downplayed that almost everything there is metal and Kid can easily fix it with his devil fruit.
* GladToBeAliveSex: Kid and Birdie end up having it a few times after battles.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Birdie is a sniper on par with the likes of Yassop, Van Augur and Usop. Her epithet is Surprise D. D standing for Death because her targets die with a look of surprise on their faces, not knowing what happened to them.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Kid gets hot and bothered whenever he sees Birdie fight or kill someone.
* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: Kid is surprisingly this, liking to wear lipstick and nail polish. Killer is also secure enough in his masculinity to wear an apron while cooking.
* HopelessSuitor: Koby toward Birdie.Booka follows He has had a crush on her since she interfered in a bullying incident when he first came to Marineford and has been trying to get her attention ever since. [[spoiler: He attempts to rescue her from Kid and gets his legs broken for it.]]
* HornySailors: Kid certainly is unable to keep his hands off his captive sort of girlfriend. His men really enjoy their shore leave.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Kid is about 2 metres, 6 foot 7 inches tall. Birdie's size is notmuch later.
specified but everyone comments on how small and tiny she is.
*CuteAndPsycho: Heat is the sweetest Kid LoveRedeems: [[spoiler: Letting Birdie go after her FreakOut at being mistaken for a pirate but he by X Drake, is still a arguably the most selfless thing Kid pirate.
%%* FieryRedhead: Kid.has ever done.]]
* ButLiquorIsQuicker: The first time Birdie has sex with Kid she has drunk her body weight in alcohol.
* CrazyJealousGuy: Kid does not handle it well when someone even looks at Birdie. He messily killed a Devil Fruit user with Xray Vision who used his powers to peep on Birdie and was not happy when X Drake offered her a spot in his crew.
* DarkSecret: Birdie killed a young boy and his parents on orders from Sakazuki to prevent a buster call to their entire island.
* DestructoNookie: Kid and Birdie end up destroying Kid's workshop while banging. Downplayed that almost everything there is metal and Kid can easily fix it with his devil fruit.
* GladToBeAliveSex: Kid and Birdie end up having it a few times after battles.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Birdie is a sniper on par with the likes of Yassop, Van Augur and Usop. Her epithet is Surprise D. D standing for Death because her targets die with a look of surprise on their faces, not knowing what happened to them.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Kid gets hot and bothered whenever he sees Birdie fight or kill someone.
* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: Kid is surprisingly this, liking to wear lipstick and nail polish. Killer is also secure enough in his masculinity to wear an apron while cooking.
* HopelessSuitor: Koby toward Birdie.
* HornySailors: Kid certainly is unable to keep his hands off his captive sort of girlfriend. His men really enjoy their shore leave.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Kid is about 2 metres, 6 foot 7 inches tall. Birdie's size is not
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%%* FieryRedhead: Kid.
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* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Kid and Birdie fall in love with each other fairly quickly.
* QuestionableConsent: While Birdie technically consents to have sex with Kid, she is not in a position where she can say no.
* StockholmSyndrome: Called "Banaro Syndrome" in ''Manga/OnePiece''. Birdie is acutely aware that she has it but there is little she can do about it.
%%* TeamMom: Killer is this for the Kid pirates.
* QuestionableConsent: While Birdie technically consents to have sex with Kid, she is not in a position where she can say no.
* StockholmSyndrome: Called "Banaro Syndrome" in ''Manga/OnePiece''. Birdie is acutely aware that she has it but there is little she can do about it.
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* AMatchMadeInStockholm: MaleGaze: According to Mohican, Birdie has a fine ass. Wire concurs but tells Mohican not to look to closely for his own good.
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Charlotte Daifuku threatens Birdie while about to defeat Kid in combat. Said threat causes gives Kid extra willpower to destroy the Big Mom pirate.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Birdie is a nickname given to her by Eustass 'Captain' Kid, her real name is unknown. [[spoiler: author confirmed her name as Onda Lotte. Onda being a family name given to orphans and children of the sea.]]
* OperationJealousy: Kid pulled it off to perfection. By pretending that he intended to use his shore leave to visit hookers he got Birdie so jealous that she initiated and fully led a sexual encounter for the first time.
* PapaWolf:
** Any pirate captain worth his salt in One Piece is one toward his crew. Kid is no exception. [[spoiler: In the future when he and Birdiefall have three children he is a literal one.]]
** Aokiji was Birdie's mentor and he was a mild version of this toward her prior to leaving the Marines.
* PromotedToParent: Killer is only four years older than Kid, but it seems that he took over raising Kid.
* ObliviousToLove: Birdie had no idea that Koby is in love witheach other fairly quickly.
her until Kid points it out. Also, she had no idea that X Drake had a small crush on her back when he was in the navy. Enough that he is able to easily recognize years later, while in disguise.
* QuestionableConsent: While Birdie technically consents to have sex with Kid, she is not in a position where she can sayno.
no. [[spoiler: During a conversation with Killer, Kid reveals that he is very aware of this.]]
*StockholmSyndrome: Called "Banaro Syndrome" in ''Manga/OnePiece''. RevengeBeforeReason: In the battle she was captured, Birdie ended up killing the older brother of one of the cabin boys. [[spoiler: A few weeks after the capture, after Kid made it very, very obvious that as much as scratching Birdie would be a death sentence, said cabin boy tries to kill her, despite knowing that Kid would kill him in return.]]
* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler: Birdie in the past was forced to chose between killing a single child or allow an island to be anihilated via Buster call. She chose the former and has never forgiven herself for it.]]
* SecretKeeper: Killer isacutely aware that she Birdie is Surprise D and Aokiji's student. So far he has kept it but there to himself.
* SuperSenses: Birdie's Observation Haki islittle she can do about it.
%%* TeamMom:advanced way beyond the norm. The only person with a more advanced one is Charlote Katakuri.
* {{Troll}}: Killeris this for really gets a kick out of throwing Birdie from the crow's nest and right into Kid's arms. Birdie also tends to terrify the Kid pirates.pirates by showing a bit of skin and making them fear for their lives due to Kid's jealousy.
* TooDumbToLive: Birdie has a bad habit of pissing of people way above her weight class. Thankfully the Kid pirates find it endearing and before she had Aokiji to protect her. [[spoiler: The orphaned cabin boy is a very straight example of being killed by stupidity when he both attacks Birdie and then admits it to Kid, despite Birdie's attempts to cover up the incident.]]
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Charlotte Daifuku threatens Birdie while about to defeat Kid in combat. Said threat causes gives Kid extra willpower to destroy the Big Mom pirate.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Birdie is a nickname given to her by Eustass 'Captain' Kid, her real name is unknown. [[spoiler: author confirmed her name as Onda Lotte. Onda being a family name given to orphans and children of the sea.]]
* OperationJealousy: Kid pulled it off to perfection. By pretending that he intended to use his shore leave to visit hookers he got Birdie so jealous that she initiated and fully led a sexual encounter for the first time.
* PapaWolf:
** Any pirate captain worth his salt in One Piece is one toward his crew. Kid is no exception. [[spoiler: In the future when he and Birdie
** Aokiji was Birdie's mentor and he was a mild version of this toward her prior to leaving the Marines.
* PromotedToParent: Killer is only four years older than Kid, but it seems that he took over raising Kid.
* ObliviousToLove: Birdie had no idea that Koby is in love with
* QuestionableConsent: While Birdie technically consents to have sex with Kid, she is not in a position where she can say
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler: Birdie in the past was forced to chose between killing a single child or allow an island to be anihilated via Buster call. She chose the former and has never forgiven herself for it.]]
* SecretKeeper: Killer is
* SuperSenses: Birdie's Observation Haki is
%%* TeamMom:
* {{Troll}}: Killer
* TooDumbToLive: Birdie has a bad habit of pissing of people way above her weight class. Thankfully the Kid pirates find it endearing and before she had Aokiji to protect her. [[spoiler: The orphaned cabin boy is a very straight example of being killed by stupidity when he both attacks Birdie and then admits it to Kid, despite Birdie's attempts to cover up the incident.]]
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* StockholmSyndrome: Called Banaro Syndrome in One Piece. Birdie is acutely aware that she has it but there is little she can do about it.
* TeamMom: Killer is this for the Kid pirates.
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* StockholmSyndrome: Called Banaro Syndrome "Banaro Syndrome" in One Piece.''Manga/OnePiece''. Birdie is acutely aware that she has it but there is little she can do about it.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/119354553-captive-eustass-kid-x-reader Captive]]'' Is a Self Insert Manga/OnePiece fanfic by ''[[https://www.wattpad.com/user/AbyssCronica AbyssCronica]]'' which is about a young female Marine Officer captured by the Kid Pirates post time skip. She and Eustass Kid end up learning a lot about each other and themselves.
The story is continued in its tie-in story ''[[ https://www.wattpad.com/story/181101323-captive-tie-in-mission-dressrosa Mission Dressrosa]]'' and a proper sequel is in the plans.
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!!Tropes!
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Kid is certainly the baddest Supernova. It does not take Birdie long to become physically attracted to him and even fall in love. Also Ross, a very popular prostitute in John's Dockyard is madly in love with Kid.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Heat quickly develops this toward Birdie. Booka follows not much later.
* CuteAndPsycho: Heat is the sweetest Kid pirate but he is still a Kid pirate.
* FieryRedhead: Kid.
* LimaSyndrome: Kid ends up falling in love with his captive, who falls in love with him right back.
* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Kid and Birdie fall in love with each other fairly quickly.
* QuestionableConsent: While Birdie technically consents to have sex with Kid, she is not in a position where she can say no.
* StockholmSyndrome: Called Banaro Syndrome in One Piece. Birdie is acutely aware that she has it but there is little she can do about it.
* TeamMom: Killer is this for the Kid pirates.
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The story is continued in its tie-in story ''[[ https://www.wattpad.com/story/181101323-captive-tie-in-mission-dressrosa Mission Dressrosa]]'' and a proper sequel is in the plans.
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!!Tropes!
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Kid is certainly the baddest Supernova. It does not take Birdie long to become physically attracted to him and even fall in love. Also Ross, a very popular prostitute in John's Dockyard is madly in love with Kid.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Heat quickly develops this toward Birdie. Booka follows not much later.
* CuteAndPsycho: Heat is the sweetest Kid pirate but he is still a Kid pirate.
* FieryRedhead: Kid.
* LimaSyndrome: Kid ends up falling in love with his captive, who falls in love with him right back.
* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Kid and Birdie fall in love with each other fairly quickly.
* QuestionableConsent: While Birdie technically consents to have sex with Kid, she is not in a position where she can say no.
* StockholmSyndrome: Called Banaro Syndrome in One Piece. Birdie is acutely aware that she has it but there is little she can do about it.
* TeamMom: Killer is this for the Kid pirates.
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