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* {{Continuation}}: Essentially a fanfic where Maglor, left WanderingTheEarth after the First Age, lives to see World War I.
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** J.R.R. Tolkien is nicknamed "Lieutenant [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]]" by the company.
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** J.R.R. Tolkien is nicknamed "Lieutenant [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]]" Literature/{{Beowulf}}" by the company.
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* HistoricalAU: This fic plucks Maglor out of Middle-Earth and places him in the historical setting of UsefulNotes/WorldWarI.
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** J. R.R. Tolkien is nicknamed "Lieutenant [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]]" by the company.
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** J. R.R. Tolkien is nicknamed "Lieutenant [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]]" by the company.
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* HistoricalAU: This fic plucks Maglor out of Middle-Earth and places him in the historical setting of UsefulNotes/WorldWarI.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: The Maitlin twins are a bit part and neither speaks, but the death of one winds up revealing what Maglor is to the young J.R.R. Tolkien as Maglor was right next to him and wasn't wounded by the explosion.
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* CalmingTea: Maglor gives Johnny Matlin tea to calm him after his failed attempt to desert. Later when Tolkien begins to fall ill, he makes more tea for him, fearful of giving him tainted water.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds of valor to his name. Here, where most of his kind have gone from Middle-Earth or have faded away, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Maiar like Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds of valor to his name. Here, where most of his kind have gone from departed Middle-Earth or have faded away, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
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* IllBoy: Creator/JRRTolkien spends much of his pagetime ill with a water-borne illness.
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* ASpotOfTea: Invoked when Maglor catches Johnny Maitlin trying to desert; he brings him back to the campfire and gives him tea to calm him. He later makes tea for the ill J.R.R. Tolkien, scared to give him unheated water for fear of contamination.
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* TheMentor: Maglor to the young Tolkien, as the person who taught him Quenya.
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* TheMentor: Maglor to the young Tolkien, as the person entity who taught him Quenya.
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: Maglor requests to have his company retreat thanks to an outbreak of sickness, but his superior officers deny it.
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* ASpotOfTea: Invoked when Maglor catches Johnny Maitlin trying to desert; he brings him back to the campfire and gives him tea to calm him.
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* ASpotOfTea: Invoked when Maglor catches Johnny Maitlin trying to desert; he brings him back to the campfire and gives him tea to calm him. He later makes tea for the ill J.R.R. Tolkien, scared to give him unheated water for fear of contamination.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Tolkien suffers from trench foot shortly around the time he figures out what Maglor is, making them a literal sore point.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Tolkien suffers is suffering from trench foot shortly around the time he figures out what Maglor is, making them a literal sore point.point. In fact the only person who doesn't suffer from trench foot the entire story is Maglor himself.
* TheMentor: Maglor to the young Tolkien, as the person who taught him Quenya.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds of valor to his name. Here, where most of his kind have gone from Middle-Earth or have faded away, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
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* ASpotOfTea: Invoked when Maglor catches Johnny Maitlin trying to desert; he brings him back to the campfire and gives him tea to calm him.
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* WritersBlock: Maglor is suffering from this for much of the story. For him it's disconcerting as he spent 200 years drifting again the last time that happened.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Maglor notes the strange fact that two soldiers in his company are a pair of redheaded twins, Jack and Johnny Maitlin. Maglor's two youngest brothers Amrod and Amras were both redheaded twins, and one dies by fire.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Maglor notes the strange fact that two soldiers in his company are a pair of redheaded twins, Jack and Johnny Maitlin. Maglor's two youngest brothers Amrod and Amras were both redheaded twins, and one dies by fire. Even more coincidentally, one of the Maitlin twins is killed in an explosion, making this another death by fire.
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* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: Discussed, as this is the biggest in-universe clue to Maglor's true nature.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Tolkien suffers from trench foot shortly around the time he figures out what Maglor is, making them a literal sore point.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Maglor notes the strange fact that two soldiers in his company are a pair of redheaded twins, Jack and Johnny Maitlin. Maglor's two youngest brothers Amrod and Amras were both redheaded twins, and one died by fire.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Maglor notes the strange fact that two soldiers in his company are a pair of redheaded twins, Jack and Johnny Maitlin. Maglor's two youngest brothers Amrod and Amras were both redheaded twins, and one died dies by fire.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: In this fanfic, Maglor taught Creator/JRRTolkien some Quenya, which Tolkien would later incorporate into his stories.
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* FinalBattle: Discussed. At times Maglor wonders if the Dagor Dagorath is taking place, but dismisses the notion since not even the Valar would waste the lives of the Children of Iluvatar.
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* FinalBattle: Discussed. At times Maglor wonders if the Dagor Dagorath is taking place, if his father's Silmarils were blown to the earth's surface by a stray explosion, but dismisses the notion since not even the Valar would waste the lives of the Children of Iluvatar.Iluvatar on such a pointless endeavor.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds to his name. Here, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
* PlotTriggeringDeath: Lieutenant Saskiss, Maglor's co-commanding officer, is killed in an offensive near the Somme. The next officer sent to the front is the young Creator/JRRTolkien.
* WarIsHell: The hellish conditions near the Somme are experienced first-hand by Maglor and the soldiers under his command; constant fear of enemy attack, infected water supplies, an ObstructiveBureaucrat or two, and the general feeling of pointlessness.
* PlotTriggeringDeath: Lieutenant Saskiss, Maglor's co-commanding officer, is killed in an offensive near the Somme. The next officer sent to the front is the young Creator/JRRTolkien.
* WarIsHell: The hellish conditions near the Somme are experienced first-hand by Maglor and the soldiers under his command; constant fear of enemy attack, infected water supplies, an ObstructiveBureaucrat or two, and the general feeling of pointlessness.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds of valor to his name. Here, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
* PlotTriggeringDeath: Lieutenant Saskiss, Maglor's co-commanding officer, is killed in an offensive near theSomme.Somme in the first lines of the story. The next officer sent to the front is the young Creator/JRRTolkien.
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* FinalBattle: Discussed. At times Maglor wonders if the Dagor Dagorath is taking place, but dismisses the notion since not even the Valar would waste the lives of the Children of Iluvatar.
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"[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1283360/1/Captain-Tinkerbell Captain Tinkerbell]]" is a one-shot ''Literature/TheSilmarillion'' fanfic centering around Maglor, the last of the sons of Feanor, who was left in exile on the shores of Middle-Earth. Here, Maglor is a British officer in UsefulNotes/WorldWarI, where he winds up serving alongside a young Creator/JRRTolkien.
!!Tropes that appear in this fanfic:
* BeenThereShapedHistory: In this fanfic, Maglor taught Creator/JRRTolkien some Quenya, which Tolkien would later incorporate into his stories.
* ContrivedCoincidence: Two soldiers in Maglor's company are a pair of redheaded twins, Jack and Johnny Maitlin.
* EarAche: Maglor's ears are blistered from frequently shoving them under his helmet.
* IllBoy: Creator/JRRTolkien spends much of his pagetime ill with a water-borne illness.
* InSeriesNickname:
** The title comes from the soldiers' nickname for Maglor.
** J. R.R. Tolkien is nicknamed "Lieutenant [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]]" by the company.
* InsultToRocks: What Maglor considers the British calling the carnage "inhumane."
-->"They call this inhuman and I, on behalf of inhumanity, would like to object. This is all your handiwork, to believe anything else is to deny responsibility."
* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds to his name. Here, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
* PlotTriggeringDeath: Lieutenant Saskiss, Maglor's co-commanding officer, is killed in an offensive near the Somme. The next officer sent to the front is the young Creator/JRRTolkien.
* WarIsHell: The hellish conditions near the Somme are experienced first-hand by Maglor and the soldiers under his command; constant fear of enemy attack, infected water supplies, an ObstructiveBureaucrat or two.
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!!Tropes that appear in this fanfic:
* BeenThereShapedHistory: In this fanfic, Maglor taught Creator/JRRTolkien some Quenya, which Tolkien would later incorporate into his stories.
* ContrivedCoincidence: Two soldiers in Maglor's company are a pair of redheaded twins, Jack and Johnny Maitlin.
* EarAche: Maglor's ears are blistered from frequently shoving them under his helmet.
* IllBoy: Creator/JRRTolkien spends much of his pagetime ill with a water-borne illness.
* InSeriesNickname:
** The title comes from the soldiers' nickname for Maglor.
** J. R.R. Tolkien is nicknamed "Lieutenant [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]]" by the company.
* InsultToRocks: What Maglor considers the British calling the carnage "inhumane."
-->"They call this inhuman and I, on behalf of inhumanity, would like to object. This is all your handiwork, to believe anything else is to deny responsibility."
* NormalFishInATinyPond: In the First Age, Maglor was a relative middleweight, a High Elf but nowhere near as powerful as Gandalf or Sauron (also examples of this trope in the main canon), with few deeds to his name. Here, Maglor is an ImplacableMan who can withstand an explosion while the man next to him dies, is immune to DeadlyGas, and is only laid up for a month after being stabbed.
* PlotTriggeringDeath: Lieutenant Saskiss, Maglor's co-commanding officer, is killed in an offensive near the Somme. The next officer sent to the front is the young Creator/JRRTolkien.
* WarIsHell: The hellish conditions near the Somme are experienced first-hand by Maglor and the soldiers under his command; constant fear of enemy attack, infected water supplies, an ObstructiveBureaucrat or two.
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