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* ShutUpKirk: After hearing Yang call him a monster repeatedly, Adam gives a lengthy lecture in which he points out that [[NotSoDifferent her species is guilty of all the things she despises the Faunus for]] and that, in spite of what she might claim, [[IDidWhatIHadToDo there really was no other viable way for the Faunus to fully break free of oppression.]] Despite her deep hatred of the man, [[VillainHasAPoint Yang fights it hard to argue.]]
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* ShutUpKirk: After hearing Yang call him a monster repeatedly, Adam gives a lengthy lecture in which he points out that [[NotSoDifferent [[NotSoDifferentRemark her species is guilty of all the things she despises the Faunus for]] and that, in spite of what she might claim, [[IDidWhatIHadToDo there really was no other viable way for the Faunus to fully break free of oppression.]] Despite her deep hatred of the man, [[VillainHasAPoint Yang fights it hard to argue.]]
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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Weiss]] is subjected to various means of torture for months on end. She has eventually left a complete wreck both physically and mentally.
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An alternate-timeline ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10944917/ Tharkun140]]. In this story Blake, instead of leaving her partner Adam as per canon, decides to accompany him on his quest to bring humanity down to its knees. Without Blake, and by extension team RWBY to protect Remnant, the world falls into a bloody war, followed by a victory for the forces of darkness. And that's just the beginning.
The story is told from multiple perspectives, heroes and villains alike, keeping a grim tone all throughout. It features multiple dark themes and is generally much less light-hearted then its source material
The story is told from multiple perspectives, heroes and villains alike, keeping a grim tone all throughout. It features multiple dark themes and is generally much less light-hearted then its source material
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An alternate-timeline ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10944917/ Tharkun140]]. In this story story, Blake, instead of leaving her partner Adam as per canon, decides to accompany him on his quest to bring humanity down to its knees. Without Blake, and by extension team RWBY to protect Remnant, the world falls into a bloody war, followed by a victory for the forces of darkness. And that's just the beginning.
The story is told from multiple perspectives, heroes and villains alike, keeping a grim tone all throughout. It features multiple dark themes and is generally much less light-heartedthen than its source material
The story is told from multiple perspectives, heroes and villains alike, keeping a grim tone all throughout. It features multiple dark themes and is generally much less light-hearted
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* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to some butterly effect, the White Fang goes from a terrorist groups with limited numbers and resources to a conquering force which attemps and ultimately succeeds in taking the entire Remnant over. Special mention goes to Adam Taurus, who goes from being viable to be defeated by two huntresses-in-training to a OneManArmy capable of anhilating entire armies all by himself.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While he is still unambiguously evil, Adam exibits some AffablyEvil tendencies he lacks in canon. He shows a measure of respect towards his enemies, seems genuinely concerned about Blake's well-being and generally acts like a sane person in contrast to an AxCrazy, {{Narcissist}} madman he was originally.
* AdaptationalVillainy: As per premise of the story, Blake decides to stay with Adam and the White Fang despite seeing them become more radical and violent. While she is reluctant to commit evil deeds at first, she eventually turns into a remorseless kiler on par with Adam himself.
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Weiss]] is subjected to various means of torture for months on end. She is eventually left a complete wreck both physcially and mentally.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While he is still unambiguously evil, Adam exibits some AffablyEvil tendencies he lacks in canon. He shows a measure of respect towards his enemies, seems genuinely concerned about Blake's well-being and generally acts like a sane person in contrast to an AxCrazy, {{Narcissist}} madman he was originally.
* AdaptationalVillainy: As per premise of the story, Blake decides to stay with Adam and the White Fang despite seeing them become more radical and violent. While she is reluctant to commit evil deeds at first, she eventually turns into a remorseless kiler on par with Adam himself.
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Weiss]] is subjected to various means of torture for months on end. She is eventually left a complete wreck both physcially and mentally.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to some butterly butterfly effect, the White Fang goes from a terrorist groups group with limited numbers and resources to a conquering force which attemps that attempts and ultimately succeeds in taking the entire Remnant over. Special mention goes to Adam Taurus, who goes from being viable to be defeated by two huntresses-in-training to a OneManArmy capable of anhilating annihilating entire armies all by himself.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While he is still unambiguously evil, Adamexibits exhibits some AffablyEvil tendencies he lacks in canon. He shows a measure of respect towards his enemies, seems genuinely concerned about Blake's well-being and generally acts like a sane person in contrast to an AxCrazy, {{Narcissist}} madman he was originally.
in the original canon series.
* AdaptationalVillainy: As per the premise of the story, Blake decides to stay with Adam and the White Fang despite seeing them become more radical and violent. While she is reluctant to commit evil deeds at first, she eventually turns into a remorselesskiler killer on par with Adam himself.
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Weiss]] is subjected to various means of torture for months on end. Sheis has eventually left a complete wreck both physcially physically and mentally.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While he is still unambiguously evil, Adam
* AdaptationalVillainy: As per the premise of the story, Blake decides to stay with Adam and the White Fang despite seeing them become more radical and violent. While she is reluctant to commit evil deeds at first, she eventually turns into a remorseless
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Weiss]] is subjected to various means of torture for months on end. She
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* GreenEyedMonster: Cinder clearly envies Adam his position as Salem's right-hand-man and considers him an enemy, even though the two of them are technically at the same side.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Cinder clearly envies Adam his position as Salem's right-hand-man and considers him an enemy, even though the two of them are technically at on the same side.
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* KilledMidSentence: Two of those in short succession. [[spoiler:Weiss manages to kill Ilia when she is distracted giving an apology speech and Adam kills Winter as she taunts him, though the former spent a couple moments silently bleeding out.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: Two of those in short succession. [[spoiler:Weiss manages to kill Ilia when she is distracted giving an apology speech and Adam kills Winter as she taunts him, though the former spent a couple of moments silently bleeding out.]]
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* MadeASlave: After White's Fang victory, a good portion of humanity has been subjected to slavery. [[spoiler:That includes Weiss, after the White Fang got bored of torturing her that is.]]
* ModestRoyalty: Blake feels somewaht ashamed at ''not'' being that and fully enjoying the luxuries that come with her new position. Lionheart plays it straight, at least in terms of his choice of living quaters.
* OneManArmy: Thanks to receiving "help" from Salem, Adam becomes an unstoppable monster capable of slaughtering hunstmen with little effort and regural soldier with even less effort.
* PragmaticVillainy: For all their FantasticRacism, the White Fang are willing to accept help from humans and avert RewardedAsATraitorDeserves by treating the defectors as equal to the faunus in their regime.
* ModestRoyalty: Blake feels somewaht ashamed at ''not'' being that and fully enjoying the luxuries that come with her new position. Lionheart plays it straight, at least in terms of his choice of living quaters.
* OneManArmy: Thanks to receiving "help" from Salem, Adam becomes an unstoppable monster capable of slaughtering hunstmen with little effort and regural soldier with even less effort.
* PragmaticVillainy: For all their FantasticRacism, the White Fang are willing to accept help from humans and avert RewardedAsATraitorDeserves by treating the defectors as equal to the faunus in their regime.
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* MadeASlave: After White's Fang victory, a good portion of humanity has been subjected to slavery. [[spoiler:That includes Weiss, Weiss after the White Fang got bored of torturing her that is.]]
* ModestRoyalty: Blake feelssomewaht somewhat ashamed at ''not'' being that and fully enjoying the luxuries that come with her new position. Lionheart plays it straight, at least in terms of his choice of living quaters.
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* OneManArmy: Thanks to receiving "help" from Salem, Adam becomes an unstoppable monster capable of slaughteringhunstmen Huntsmen with little effort and regural soldier regular soldiers with even less effort.
* PragmaticVillainy: For all their FantasticRacism, the White Fang are willing to accept help from humans and avert RewardedAsATraitorDeserves by treating the defectors as equal to thefaunus Faunus in their regime.
* ModestRoyalty: Blake feels
* OneManArmy: Thanks to receiving "help" from Salem, Adam becomes an unstoppable monster capable of slaughtering
* PragmaticVillainy: For all their FantasticRacism, the White Fang are willing to accept help from humans and avert RewardedAsATraitorDeserves by treating the defectors as equal to the
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* ShutUpKirk: After hearing Yang call him a monster repeatedly, Adam gives a lenghty lecture in which he points out that [[NotSoDifferent her species is guilty of all the things she despises the faunus for]] and that, in spite of what she might claim, [[IDidWhatIHadToDo there really was no other viable way for the faunus to fully break free of oppression.]] Despite her deep hatred of the man, [[VillainHasAPoint Yang fights it hard to argue.]]
* SlaveBrand: The scar on Adam's face is confirmed to have been made by Schnee Dust Company when he was enslaved by them. Weiss also gets multiple marks before being MadeASlave, but in this case this is not as much a way of marking her as simply a method of [[ColdBloodedTorture inflicting pain.]]
* SlaveBrand: The scar on Adam's face is confirmed to have been made by Schnee Dust Company when he was enslaved by them. Weiss also gets multiple marks before being MadeASlave, but in this case this is not as much a way of marking her as simply a method of [[ColdBloodedTorture inflicting pain.]]
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* ShutUpKirk: After hearing Yang call him a monster repeatedly, Adam gives a lenghty lengthy lecture in which he points out that [[NotSoDifferent her species is guilty of all the things she despises the faunus Faunus for]] and that, in spite of what she might claim, [[IDidWhatIHadToDo there really was no other viable way for the faunus Faunus to fully break free of oppression.]] Despite her deep hatred of the man, [[VillainHasAPoint Yang fights it hard to argue.]]
* SlaveBrand: The scar on Adam's face is confirmed to have been made by Schnee Dust Company when he was enslaved by them. Weiss also gets multiple marks before being MadeASlave, but in thiscase case, this is not as much a way of marking her as simply a method of [[ColdBloodedTorture inflicting pain.]]
* SlaveBrand: The scar on Adam's face is confirmed to have been made by Schnee Dust Company when he was enslaved by them. Weiss also gets multiple marks before being MadeASlave, but in this
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* SparedByAdaptation: Since the villains had much easier time than they did in the original, [[spoiler:Roman Torchwick, Leonardo Lionheart and Adam Taurus]] are all alive and well over two years after the original storyline begins. On the plus side, [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos]] appears alive as well.
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* SparedByAdaptation: Since the villains had a much easier time than they did in the original, [[spoiler:Roman Torchwick, Leonardo Lionheart and Adam Taurus]] are all alive and well over two years after the original storyline begins. On the plus side, [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos]] appears alive as well.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: The White Fang attempt and ultimately succeed in subjigating the entirety of Remnant under their rule.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: The White Fang attempt and ultimately succeed in subjigating subjugating the entirety of Remnant under their rule.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilised: Adam's revolution is certainly not one of the good sort, as it involves mass murder, slavery, assasinations, torturing prisoners and killing innocents as a means of terror.
* TragicBigot: Yang muses that most of the "loyalists" are hateful or at least resentful towards the faunus, but it's just a natural consequence of having fought the White Fang for so long.
* TragicBigot: Yang muses that most of the "loyalists" are hateful or at least resentful towards the faunus, but it's just a natural consequence of having fought the White Fang for so long.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilised: Adam's revolution is certainly not one of the good sort, sorts, as it involves mass murder, slavery, assasinations, assassinations, torturing prisoners and killing innocents as a means of terror.
* TragicBigot: Yang muses that most of the "loyalists" are hateful or at least resentful towards thefaunus, Faunus, but it's just a natural consequence of having fought the White Fang for so long.
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* WeHaveReserves: While it's not their only advantage, White Fang has some major reserves that they utilise during the invasion of Atlas.
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* ShutUpKirk: After hearing Yang call him a monster repeatedly, Adam gives a lenghty lecture in which he points out that [[NotSoDifferent her species is guilty of all the things she despises the faunus for]] and that, in spite of what she might claim, [[IDidWhatIHadToDo there really was no other viable way for the faunus to fully break free of oppression.]] Despite her deep hatred of the man, [[VillainHasAPoint Yang fights it hard to argue.]]
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* GreenEyedMonster: Cinder clearly envies Adam his position as Salem's right-hand-man and considers him an enemy, even though the two of them are technically at the same side.
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* MadeASlave: After White's Fang victory, a good portion of humanity has been subjected to slavery. [[spoiler:That includes Weiss, after the White Fang got bored of torturing her that is.]]
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* VillainWorld: What the setting turns into after the white Fang's victory.
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* VillainWorld: What the setting turns into after the white White Fang's victory.
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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of all things the White Fang has done, reintroducing slavery to Remnant is treated as a MoralEventHorizon for all of them. Even Adam himself doesn't appear happy with the idea, but he reasons that forced labor is necessary to keep the regime going.
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* SlaveBrand: The scar on Adam's face is confirmed to have been made by Schnee Dust Company when he was enslaved by them. Weiss also gets multiple marks before being MadeASlave, but in this case this is not as much a way of marking her as simply a method of [[ColdBloodedTorture inflicting pain.]]
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of all the things the White Fang has done, reintroducing slavery to Remnant is treated as a MoralEventHorizon for all of them. Even Adam himself doesn't appear happy with the idea, but he reasons that forced labor is necessary to keep the regime going.
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of all the things the White Fang has done, reintroducing slavery to Remnant is treated as a MoralEventHorizon for all of them. Even Adam himself doesn't appear happy with the idea, but he reasons that forced labor is necessary to keep the regime going.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Weiss]] is subjected to various means of torture for months on end. She is eventually left a complete wreck both physcially and mentally.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: While Adam is certainly glad that he was amde a new ruler of Remnant, he does not enjoy having to deal with Salem's other subordinates like [[{{Narcissist}} Cinder]], [[DirtyCoward Lionheart]], or [[AxCrazy Tyrian]].
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* SurroundedByIdiots: While Adam is certainly glad that he was amde made a new ruler of Remnant, he does not enjoy having to deal with Salem's other subordinates like [[{{Narcissist}} Cinder]], [[DirtyCoward Lionheart]], or [[AxCrazy Tyrian]].
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* VillainRespect: Yang and her team managed to earn that from Adam after making a decent attempt to kill him.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: The White Fang attempt and ultimately succeed in subjigating the entirety of Remnant under their rule.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Quite a few characters. So far the list consists of [[spoiler:Taiyang Xiao-Long, Ilia Amitola, Winter Schnee, Cardin Winchester, the entire Beacon staff and probably Jacques Schnee.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: Quite a few characters. So far the list consists of [[spoiler:Taiyang Xiao-Long, Ilia Amitola, Winter Schnee, Cardin Winchester, Coco Adel, the entire Beacon staff and probably Jacques Schnee.]]
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* VillainWorld: What the setting turns into after the white Fang's victory.
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* WarIsHell: The war between the White Fang and the Kingdoms was a nightmare for both sides. That said, what came to pass after its end isn't much better.
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* LaResistance: The "Valean Resistance Front" with team JNPR as the leading figures.
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* RebelLeader: Jaune assumes this role after Vale falls to the White Fang. He finds the role unsuited for him and extremely stressful, but he manages quite well.
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* TragicBigot: Yang muses that most of the "loyalists" are hateful or at least resentful towards the faunus, but it's just a natural consequence of having fought the White Fang for so long.
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* WeHaveReserves: While it's not their only advantage, White Fang has some major reserves that they utilise during the invasion of Atlas.
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They told me I can trope my own fics, so why the heck not. If you think I'm showing any bias either way, please feel free to delete or edit whatever you feel like.
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->''It is almost funny how one person's decisions can change the fate of the world they live in, either for better, or for so much worse. In this timeline, there was never a team called RWBY. The heroes were not strong enough to repel the forces of darkness. White Fang was free to bring Remnant to its knees... and then remake it in their own image.''
-->-- Website/FanFictionDotNet summary.
An alternate-timeline ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10944917/ Tharkun140]]. In this story Blake, instead of leaving her partner Adam as per canon, decides to accompany him on his quest to bring humanity down to its knees. Without Blake, and by extension team RWBY to protect Remnant, the world falls into a bloody war, followed by a victory for the forces of darkness. And that's just the beginning.
The story is told from multiple perspectives, heroes and villains alike, keeping a grim tone all throughout. It features multiple dark themes and is generally much less light-hearted then its source material
Currently ongoing.
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13038418/1/Black-Out-The-Sky here]] at Website/FanFictionDotNet.
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!! The work contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to some butterly effect, the White Fang goes from a terrorist groups with limited numbers and resources to a conquering force which attemps and ultimately succeeds in taking the entire Remnant over. Special mention goes to Adam Taurus, who goes from being viable to be defeated by two huntresses-in-training to a OneManArmy capable of anhilating entire armies all by himself.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While he is still unambiguously evil, Adam exibits some AffablyEvil tendencies he lacks in canon. He shows a measure of respect towards his enemies, seems genuinely concerned about Blake's well-being and generally acts like a sane person in contrast to an AxCrazy, {{Narcissist}} madman he was originally.
* AdaptationalVillainy: As per premise of the story, Blake decides to stay with Adam and the White Fang despite seeing them become more radical and violent. While she is reluctant to commit evil deeds at first, she eventually turns into a remorseless kiler on par with Adam himself.
* DeathByAdaptation: Quite a few characters. So far the list consists of [[spoiler:Taiyang Xiao-Long, Ilia Amitola, Winter Schnee, Cardin Winchester, the entire Beacon staff and probably Jacques Schnee.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Weiss, though by [[spoiler:Ilia's]] hands instead of Cinder's.
* KilledMidSentence: Two of those in short succession. [[spoiler:Weiss manages to kill Ilia when she is distracted giving an apology speech and Adam kills Winter as she taunts him, though the former spent a couple moments silently bleeding out.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Weiss and Yang]] both think that death would be preferable to the things they have to endure - [[spoiler:constant torture and being blinded and imprisoned respectively.]]
* ModestRoyalty: Blake feels somewaht ashamed at ''not'' being that and fully enjoying the luxuries that come with her new position. Lionheart plays it straight, at least in terms of his choice of living quaters.
* OneManArmy: Thanks to receiving "help" from Salem, Adam becomes an unstoppable monster capable of slaughtering hunstmen with little effort and regural soldier with even less effort.
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of all things the White Fang has done, reintroducing slavery to Remnant is treated as a MoralEventHorizon for all of them. Even Adam himself doesn't appear happy with the idea, but he reasons that forced labor is necessary to keep the regime going.
* SparedByAdaptation: Since the villains had much easier time than they did in the original, [[spoiler:Roman Torchwick, Leonardo Lionheart and Adam Taurus]] are all alive and well over two years after the original storyline begins. On the plus side, [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos]] appears alive as well.
* SurroundedByIdiots: While Adam is certainly glad that he was amde a new ruler of Remnant, he does not enjoy having to deal with Salem's other subordinates like [[{{Narcissist}} Cinder]], [[DirtyCoward Lionheart]], or [[AxCrazy Tyrian]].
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Various members of Salem's cabal find it hard to work alongside one another. Blake despises Cinder and Roman, Cinder resents Adam for being chosen as Salem's NumberTwo over her, nobody likes Tyrian very much and Adam feels like he's SurroundedByIdiots, not to mention has his doubts about Salem's plans.
* TragicBigot: Yang muses that most of the "loyalists" are hateful or at least resentful towards the faunus, but it's just a natural consequence of having fought the White Fang for so long.
-->-- Website/FanFictionDotNet summary.
An alternate-timeline ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10944917/ Tharkun140]]. In this story Blake, instead of leaving her partner Adam as per canon, decides to accompany him on his quest to bring humanity down to its knees. Without Blake, and by extension team RWBY to protect Remnant, the world falls into a bloody war, followed by a victory for the forces of darkness. And that's just the beginning.
The story is told from multiple perspectives, heroes and villains alike, keeping a grim tone all throughout. It features multiple dark themes and is generally much less light-hearted then its source material
Currently ongoing.
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13038418/1/Black-Out-The-Sky here]] at Website/FanFictionDotNet.
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!! The work contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Thanks to some butterly effect, the White Fang goes from a terrorist groups with limited numbers and resources to a conquering force which attemps and ultimately succeeds in taking the entire Remnant over. Special mention goes to Adam Taurus, who goes from being viable to be defeated by two huntresses-in-training to a OneManArmy capable of anhilating entire armies all by himself.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While he is still unambiguously evil, Adam exibits some AffablyEvil tendencies he lacks in canon. He shows a measure of respect towards his enemies, seems genuinely concerned about Blake's well-being and generally acts like a sane person in contrast to an AxCrazy, {{Narcissist}} madman he was originally.
* AdaptationalVillainy: As per premise of the story, Blake decides to stay with Adam and the White Fang despite seeing them become more radical and violent. While she is reluctant to commit evil deeds at first, she eventually turns into a remorseless kiler on par with Adam himself.
* DeathByAdaptation: Quite a few characters. So far the list consists of [[spoiler:Taiyang Xiao-Long, Ilia Amitola, Winter Schnee, Cardin Winchester, the entire Beacon staff and probably Jacques Schnee.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Weiss, though by [[spoiler:Ilia's]] hands instead of Cinder's.
* KilledMidSentence: Two of those in short succession. [[spoiler:Weiss manages to kill Ilia when she is distracted giving an apology speech and Adam kills Winter as she taunts him, though the former spent a couple moments silently bleeding out.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Weiss and Yang]] both think that death would be preferable to the things they have to endure - [[spoiler:constant torture and being blinded and imprisoned respectively.]]
* ModestRoyalty: Blake feels somewaht ashamed at ''not'' being that and fully enjoying the luxuries that come with her new position. Lionheart plays it straight, at least in terms of his choice of living quaters.
* OneManArmy: Thanks to receiving "help" from Salem, Adam becomes an unstoppable monster capable of slaughtering hunstmen with little effort and regural soldier with even less effort.
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of all things the White Fang has done, reintroducing slavery to Remnant is treated as a MoralEventHorizon for all of them. Even Adam himself doesn't appear happy with the idea, but he reasons that forced labor is necessary to keep the regime going.
* SparedByAdaptation: Since the villains had much easier time than they did in the original, [[spoiler:Roman Torchwick, Leonardo Lionheart and Adam Taurus]] are all alive and well over two years after the original storyline begins. On the plus side, [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos]] appears alive as well.
* SurroundedByIdiots: While Adam is certainly glad that he was amde a new ruler of Remnant, he does not enjoy having to deal with Salem's other subordinates like [[{{Narcissist}} Cinder]], [[DirtyCoward Lionheart]], or [[AxCrazy Tyrian]].
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Various members of Salem's cabal find it hard to work alongside one another. Blake despises Cinder and Roman, Cinder resents Adam for being chosen as Salem's NumberTwo over her, nobody likes Tyrian very much and Adam feels like he's SurroundedByIdiots, not to mention has his doubts about Salem's plans.
* TragicBigot: Yang muses that most of the "loyalists" are hateful or at least resentful towards the faunus, but it's just a natural consequence of having fought the White Fang for so long.