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* HumongousMecha: In the first thread, Cirno makes one out of magic and ice. A thread later, she smashes up ''five'' Kappa mechas.
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** Who she then shanghais into building another four {{Humongous Mecha}} for her friends. Which can ''also'' [[CombiningMecha combine]] with [=DyCirno=].
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* ShesGotLegs: Eiki, of all people. This marks a rare adult portrayal of her in fandom,[[note]]which is actually more in line with canon, as she is described is being slightly shorter than the "intimidatingly tall" Komachi[[/note]] rather than the preteen/child form usually preferred.
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* AuthorTract: The outcome of Meiling's attempt at getting a man results in the one guy she talks to overlooking her in an insensitive fashion by asking about possibly having a shot at one of the other Scarlet Devil members despite Meiling initially trying to have a shot a ''him''. As confirmed by his response to a few posts, Keymaster takes issue with how often Meiling gets neglected on the Touhou Project site, with any chances of getting votes often overshadowed by the other cast members.
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* AuthorTract: The outcome of Meiling's attempt at getting a man results in the one guy she talks to overlooking her in an insensitive fashion by asking about possibly having a shot at one of the other Scarlet Devil members members, despite Meiling initially trying to have a shot a ''him''. As confirmed by his response to a few posts, Keymaster takes issue with how often Meiling gets neglected on the Touhou Project site, thread site this fanfic was posted in, with any chances of getting votes often overshadowed by the other cast members.
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* HypocriticalHumor: ''Tenshi'' telling the other five girls in their party to the underground that they should be more responsible. Keep in mind, this is the same girl who started a Gensokyo wide incident ''out of boredom''. Iku does not appreciate this.
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* HypocriticalHumor: ''Tenshi'' telling the other five girls in their party to the underground that they should be more responsible. Keep in mind, this is the same girl who started a Gensokyo wide incident ''out of boredom''. boredom'', and at the moment is engaging in a risky game of improvised baseball with her sword and Utsuho's explosive fireballs. Iku does not appreciate this.this, having needed to be restrained by the others to prevent her throttling the celestial.
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* ForgotAboutTheMindReader: As Meiling thinks to herself about what happened on the night out while drunk, Satori questions her priorities about winning the fight against Yuugi over all the other problems that have possibly happened.
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* AuthorTract: The outcome of Meiling's attempt at getting a man results in the one guy she talks to overlooking her in an insensitive fashion by asking about possibly having a shot at one of the other Scarlet Devil members despite Meiling initially trying to have a shot a ''him''. As confirmed by his response to a few posts, Keymaster takes issue with how often Meiling gets neglected on the Touhou Project site, with any chances of getting votes often overshadowed by the other cast members.
-->"Bottom line, Meiling needs a lot more love."
-->"Bottom line, Meiling needs a lot more love."
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''[[https://dry-water-e911.ao365.workers.dev/works/37794298 Being Meiling]]'' is a ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' {{Gamebook|s}} fanfic written by Keymaster on the Touhouproject.com forums which ran for ten threads. Keymaster had originally wrote two one-shots, called ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/161976.html#162111 Being Meiling]]'' and ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/163837.html#163853 Being Meiling at Christmastime]]'', with the same general theme: [[AnimeChineseGirl Meiling]], gatekeeper of the Scarlet Devil Mansion, contemplating over her life. This fic, however, branches out from that into a more general Meiling-focused romance/slice-of-life story that explores what goes on behind the scenes in Gensokyo.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Sakuya's attempt to reprimand Meiling for her work ethnic (ie sleeping standing up) getting met with the latter grabbing Sakuya's wrist as quickly seems like a quick response to straightforward reflex on Meiling's part, but Sakuya also notes she had her , time stop enabled when she tried to wake her up, meaning Meiling couldn't have been able to perceive or sense her until they undo their ability, but she still did anyways.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Meiling grabbing Sakuya's wrist as a quick response to her , but
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* SpiderSenses: Meiling has the ability to sense whoever is on the premises of the mansion when she's around, allowing her to know when someone (namely Marisa) is intruding.
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* SpiderSenses: SpiderSense: Meiling has the ability to sense whoever is on the premises of the mansion when she's around, allowing her to know when someone (namely Marisa) is intruding.
* ThrowTheDogABone: In contrast to her common ButtMonkey portrayal established in the prequel story, Meiling herself gets the opportunity to defy said portrayal by getting back at Marisa by snatching her trinkets to turn the tide.
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* {{Tsundere}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by one of the older fairy maids while giving advice to Pameel about Marisa. And as the reader sees, this is a fairly accurate assessment of Marisa's attitude towards the fairy.
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* {{Tsundere}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] {{Conversed|Trope}} by one of the older fairy maids while giving advice to Pameel about Marisa. And as As for the reader sees, latter two, this is a fairly accurate assessment of Marisa's attitude towards the fairy.fairy by the latter half.
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%%* MundaneMadeAwesome: read: Live-action ''TabletopGame/SettlersOfCatan'', ''TabletopGame/{{Risk}}'', ''TabletopGame/{{Battleship}}''.%%
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--> '''Meiling''': Apparently, stopping time lets Sakuya do some very interesting things. As does Yuuka's plant control.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: The satori don't take being drunk too well, to the point of having accidentally [[spoiler:married Shou in a drunken spree because they suddenly wanted tacos. Also, Flan, who can stay upright at least and not go overboard.]] But then again, the people of Gensokyo seem to have a bit of a problem with this.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Everyone in Gensokyo seems to resort to DrowningTheirSorrows away, with some having particular problem keeping themselves in check.
** Flandre can at least stay upright when intoxicated, and her antics in this state consists of philosophical rants, destroying walls, and {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es for particular people. But being a PersonOfMassDestruction with an unstable personality, who's power is plenty dangerous whenever she's in one of her "moods", drunk Flandre is cause for concern all the same.
** The satori don't take being drunk too well, to the point of having accidentally [[spoiler:married Shou in a drunken spree because they suddenly wantedtacos. Also, Flan, who can stay upright at least and not go overboard.]] But then again, the people of Gensokyo seem to have a bit of a problem with this.tacos.]]
** Flandre can at least stay upright when intoxicated, and her antics in this state consists of philosophical rants, destroying walls, and {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es for particular people. But being a PersonOfMassDestruction with an unstable personality, who's power is plenty dangerous whenever she's in one of her "moods", drunk Flandre is cause for concern all the same.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: Meiling herself gets a lucky break. The Prequel one-shot fics and start of the story establish that Meiling had been subject to the no respect ButtMonkey portrayal in the past, with her vengeance against Marisa being the turning point of her reputation.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: In contrast to her common ButtMonkey portrayal established in the prequel story, Meiling herself gets a lucky break. The Prequel one-shot fics and start of the story establish that Meiling had been subject opportunity to the no respect ButtMonkey defy said portrayal in the past, with her vengeance against by getting back at Marisa being by snatching her trinkets to turn the turning point of her reputation.tide.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: Meiling herself gets a lucky break. The Prequel one-shot fics and start of the story establish that Meiling had been subject to the no respect ButtMonkey portrayal in the past, with her vengeance against Marisa being the turning point of her reputation.
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* OhCrap: Marisa, when Meiling and Sakuya show up at her house, hours after she humiliated the latter.
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* PowerPerversionPotential:PowerPerversionPotential: Implied in Meiling's monologue about her sexual activities with [[TimeStandsStill Sakuya]] and [[GreenThumb Yuuka]].
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: The entire reason for the Hakurei-Scarlet wedding.]] Everyone involved knew that Aya would never be able to resist showing up to cover such a grand event, which will draw her to a specific and well-guarded place to be recaptured.
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The entire reason for the Hakurei-Scarlet wedding.]] Everyone involved knew that Aya would never be able to resist showing up to cover such a grand event, which will draw her to a specific and well-guarded place to be recaptured.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: The satori don't take being drunk too well, to the point of having accidentally [[spoiler: married [[spoiler:married Shou in a drunken spree because they suddenly wanted tacos. Also, Flan, who can stay upright at least and not go overboard.]] But then again, the people of Gensokyo seem to have a bit of a problem with this.
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* EpicFail: The ''other'' problem with fairy maids is that with most of them, this is what happens when they try to do anything other than some very specific tasks.
** Also, Sakuya's "attempts" at gardening when she and Meiling swap jobs for a day.
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* EpicFail: EpicFail:
** The ''other'' problem with fairy maids is that with most of them, this is what happens when they try to do anything other than some very specifictasks.
tasks. More often than not, they'll trash the place in one day.
** Also, Sakuya's "attempts" at gardening when she and Meiling swap jobs for a day. It starts with getting caught in a thorn bramble, but her repeated attempts at stopping time somehow results in her getting more unkempt and scarred each time.
** The ''other'' problem with fairy maids is that with most of them, this is what happens when they try to do anything other than some very specific
** Also, Sakuya's "attempts" at gardening when she and Meiling swap jobs for a day. It starts with getting caught in a thorn bramble, but her repeated attempts at stopping time somehow results in her getting more unkempt and scarred each time.
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* HypocriticalHumor: ''Tenshi'' telling the other five girls in their party to the underground that they should be more responsible. Iku does not appreciate this.
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* HypocriticalHumor: ''Tenshi'' telling the other five girls in their party to the underground that they should be more responsible. Keep in mind, this is the same girl who started a Gensokyo wide incident ''out of boredom''. Iku does not appreciate this.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: The first guy that Meiling talks to during a girls night out seem to show interest in Meiling, even buttering her up with what he knows about her. But then he had to give Meiling's hopes up by asking her to introduce the Scarlet Devil group to him, as if he only talked to Meiling to date the other girls instead. Meiling naturally closes off the conversation with "You're gonna die cold and alone" after being shafted.
* OfficialCouple: Remilia, after spending much of her life since meeting Reimu holding a strong crush for the shrine maiden, finally closed the gap after a successful date/get together. Unfortunately, they now have to contend with Flandre wanting grand-children.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Rinnosuke, the half-youkai human shopkeeper, who's crime in canon consists of being a CollectorOfTheStrange, is responsible for the horrendous events the girls go through.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Rinnosuke, the half-youkai human shopkeeper, who's crime in canon consists of being a CollectorOfTheStrange, CollectorOfTheStrange who operates on InsaneTrollLogic, is responsible for the horrendous events the girls go through.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:Rinnosuke, the half-youkai human shopkeeper, who's crime in canon consists of being a CollectorOfTheStrange, is responsible for the horrendous events the girls go through.]]
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* SwappedRoles: For one day, Meiling and Sakuya takes up the job, duties, and even clothes of each-other. Naturally for Meiling, she finds herself struggling with keeping the maid fairies, cooking, and clean-up in check -- daily tasks that Sakuya could take care of no problem with her time-stopping capabilities. Funnily enough, Sakuya has had her own struggles with Meiling's job as a gatekeeper and gardener, particularly the latter [[EpicFail with the use of her time-stopping powers]].
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** A semi-inversion pops up at the end of Being Meiling, [[spoiler: where after the Watatsukis have been utterly shamed, the forest fire fairy Malla goes a tad loopy after donning the Robe of Fire Rat.]]
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** A semi-inversion pops up at the end of Being Meiling, ''Being Meiling'', [[spoiler: where after the Watatsukis have been utterly shamed, the forest fire fairy Malla goes a tad loopy after donning the Robe of Fire Rat.]]
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* HopeSpot: With several other of the Scarlet Devil group's efforts at finding a man going south for several reasons, Meiling's attempt with a guy might've bared fruit, due to her more down-to-earth approach and said guy seemingly shows interest. But then the problem arises when the guy she meets proceeds to ask for a meeting with all the present Scarlet Devil members, [[InnocentlyInsensitive leaving Meiling out of picture despite being the first to talk to him]].
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* IndyPloy: A variant; Meiling's advice to Cirno against the Kappa mechas right before their fight: "It's time to use... THAT!" Meiling herself didn't plan anything for "that" to mean anything, at most banking on Cirno knowing what to do in response.
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* ButtMonkey: In the first few threads, Marisa is humiliated by Meiling twice, which culminates in her being forced to marry Pameel, one of the SDM's fairy maids. In thread three, Aya also gets slammed. '''''Heavily.''''' As in, '''''has to get her own adventure to redeem herself kind of heavy.'''''
--> (on Aya's Cirno obsession) '''Anon:''' Good job making me want to use [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Power#Balefire balefire]] on Aya. It takes skill for a writer to evoke emotions in their readers.
--> (on Aya's Cirno obsession) '''Anon:''' Good job making me want to use [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Power#Balefire balefire]] on Aya. It takes skill for a writer to evoke emotions in their readers.
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** In the first few threads, Marisa is humiliated by Meiling twice, which culminates in her being forced to marry Pameel, one of the SDM's fairymaids. In thread three, Aya also gets slammed. '''''Heavily.''''' As in, '''''has to get her own adventure to redeem herself kind of heavy.'''''
--> (on Aya's Cirno obsession) '''Anon:''' Good job making me want to use [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Power#Balefire balefire]] on Aya. It takes skill for a writer to evoke emotions in their readers.maids.
** In the first few threads, Marisa is humiliated by Meiling twice, which culminates in her being forced to marry Pameel, one of the SDM's fairy
--> (on Aya's Cirno obsession) '''Anon:''' Good job making me want to use [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Power#Balefire balefire]] on Aya. It takes skill for a writer to evoke emotions in their readers.
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: It takes a lot of force, and application to the right spot on the skull, but it turns out this is a (semi)reliable way to get Flandre out of one of her "moods".
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: It takes a lot of force, and application to the right spot on the skull, but it turns out this is a (semi)reliable (semi)-reliable way to get Flandre out of one of her "moods". "moods".
* HateSink: Aya. She's a ImmoralJournalist like her {{Flanderized}} depiction, but she also develops an unhealthy obsession with Cirno since the latter's [=DyCirno=] debut, to the point of outright ''lusting'' after her. By the end of the fanfic, she's considered a wanted, unstable criminal. It took another story along with some major CharacterDevelopment for Aya to redeem herself InUniverse and out.
-->'''Anon:''' Good job making me want to use [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Power#Balefire balefire]] on Aya. It takes skill for a writer to evoke emotions in their readers.
* HateSink: Aya. She's a ImmoralJournalist like her {{Flanderized}} depiction, but she also develops an unhealthy obsession with Cirno since the latter's [=DyCirno=] debut, to the point of outright ''lusting'' after her. By the end of the fanfic, she's considered a wanted, unstable criminal. It took another story along with some major CharacterDevelopment for Aya to redeem herself InUniverse and out.
-->'''Anon:''' Good job making me want to use [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Power#Balefire balefire]] on Aya. It takes skill for a writer to evoke emotions in their readers.
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: For a given definition of "mundane," as in, FLAN. She takes her games seriously, and is a much better anti-Marisa anti-Aya defense!
** read: [[spoiler: Only good for removing unwanted people if drunk]]
** read: Live-action ''TabletopGame/SettlersOfCatan'', ''TabletopGame/{{Risk}}'', ''TabletopGame/{{Battleship}}''.
** read: [[spoiler: Only good for removing unwanted people if drunk]]
** read: Live-action ''TabletopGame/SettlersOfCatan'', ''TabletopGame/{{Risk}}'', ''TabletopGame/{{Battleship}}''.
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''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/sdm/res/54956.html Being Meiling]]'' is a ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' {{Gamebook|s}} fanfic written by Keymaster on the Touhouproject.com forums which ran for ten threads. Keymaster had originally wrote two one-shots, called ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/161976.html#162111 Being Meiling]]'' and ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/163837.html#163853 Being Meiling at Christmastime]]'', with the same general theme: [[AnimeChineseGirl Meiling]], gatekeeper of the Scarlet Devil Mansion, contemplating over her life. This fic, however, branches out from that into a more general Meiling-focused romance/slice-of-life story that explores what goes on behind the scenes in Gensokyo.
After the first story ended, Keymaster wrote two sequels: [[https://www.touhou-project.com/others/res/51333+50.html Pleasant Meadows]], and [[https://www.touhou-project.com/youkai/res/22769.html#22769 Tengu of (Mis)Fortune]], summarized below under the A Day In The Limelight entry.
After the first story ended, Keymaster wrote two sequels: [[https://www.touhou-project.com/others/res/51333+50.html Pleasant Meadows]], and [[https://www.touhou-project.com/youkai/res/22769.html#22769 Tengu of (Mis)Fortune]], summarized below under the A Day In The Limelight entry.
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* {{Flanderization}}: The fic averts fanon for the most part, with three exceptions: Aya[[note]]and even this is PlayedForDrama in ''Misfortune'', where she becomes closer to her canon counterpart through CharacterDevelopment[[/note]] and the [[JerkAssSue Watatsuki Sisters]]. In Pleasant Meadows, it's [[spoiler: [[BigBad Rinnosuke]]]]
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* {{Flanderization}}: The fic averts fanon for the most part, with three exceptions: Aya[[note]]and even this is PlayedForDrama in ''Misfortune'', where she becomes closer to her canon counterpart through CharacterDevelopment[[/note]] and the [[JerkAssSue Watatsuki Sisters]].Sisters. In Pleasant Meadows, it's [[spoiler: [[BigBad Rinnosuke]]]]
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Aya's status after her Cirno obsession comes to light, on top of her previous behavior. It takes a lot of apologies, explanations, soul-searching, and hard work supporting Hina to reverse it.
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* HatedByAll: Aya's status after her Cirno obsession comes to light, on top of her previous behavior. It takes a lot of apologies, explanations, soul-searching, and hard work supporting Hina to reverse it.
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''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/sdm/res/54956.html Being Meiling]]'' is a ''VideoGame/{{Touhou}}'' {{Gamebook|s}} fanfic written by Keymaster on the Touhouproject.com forums which ran for ten threads. Keymaster had originally wrote two one-shots, called ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/161976.html#162111 Being Meiling]]'' and ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/163837.html#163853 Being Meiling at Christmastime]]'', with the same general theme: [[AnimeChineseGirl Meiling]], gatekeeper of the Scarlet Devil Mansion, contemplating over her life. This fic, however, branches out from that into a more general Meiling-focused romance/slice-of-life story that explores what goes on behind the scenes in Gensokyo.
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''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/sdm/res/54956.html Being Meiling]]'' is a ''VideoGame/{{Touhou}}'' ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' {{Gamebook|s}} fanfic written by Keymaster on the Touhouproject.com forums which ran for ten threads. Keymaster had originally wrote two one-shots, called ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/161976.html#162111 Being Meiling]]'' and ''[[http://www.touhou-project.com/th/res/163837.html#163853 Being Meiling at Christmastime]]'', with the same general theme: [[AnimeChineseGirl Meiling]], gatekeeper of the Scarlet Devil Mansion, contemplating over her life. This fic, however, branches out from that into a more general Meiling-focused romance/slice-of-life story that explores what goes on behind the scenes in Gensokyo.
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* ManipulativeBastard: The tengu elders begin trying to take control of Hatate with visits to her family, encouraging her and gently trying to convince her paper to suit their standards.
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* ManipulativeBastard: The tengu elders begin trying to take control of Hatate with visits to her family, encouraging her and gently trying to convince her to change her paper to suit their standards.
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* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: The tengu have stagnated into an utterly static society. Part of Aya's ultimate redemption hinges on finding a way of getting them out of it.
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* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: The tengu have stagnated into an utterly static society.society, contrasting with the development of the Underground into a dynamic, functioning city of oni. Part of Aya's ultimate redemption hinges on finding a way of getting them out of it.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Alfred lets loose an absolutely blistering one on [[spoiler:Rinnosuke at the climax of Pleasant Meadows, tearing apart his plans and outlining in great detail how badly the storekeeper has fucked up, all in a bid to make him {{Blinded By Rage.}} It works.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Alfred lets loose an absolutely blistering one on [[spoiler:Rinnosuke at the climax of Pleasant Meadows, tearing apart his plans and outlining in great detail how badly the storekeeper has fucked up, all in a bid to make him {{Blinded By Rage.}} BlindedByRage. It works.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: The tengu elders begin trying to take control of Hatate with visits to her family, encouraging her and gently trying to convince her paper to suit their standards.
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* TookALevelInBadass: More like Lost Several Levels in Suck. Aya was once the premier tengu badass, to the point of even exceeding ''Lord Tenma'' - but eventually, she grew tired of the wanton slaughter and tried to record her race's atrocities. However, by this point, the tengu had begun developing into a more human shape and mindset, and found anything that reminded them of their horrid past utterly distasteful and clashing with the image they had developed, so when Aya refused to sanitize history for them, she was exiled and very nearly went insane. At the Trade Expo, Aya finds the tengu elders trying to keep their people under their thumb and deny them the truth of their history, so she rushes to her blade and reminds everyone that in the end her ultimate devotion is to Truth.
* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: The tengu have stagnated into an utterly static society. Part of Aya's ultimate redemption hinges on finding a way of getting them out of it.
* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: The tengu have stagnated into an utterly static society. Part of Aya's ultimate redemption hinges on finding a way of getting them out of it.
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* MasterSwordsman: Aya, once upon a time. Her passion for her art eventually curdled into utter hate for the blade after acknowledging and attempting to record the dark side of her race, eventually pushing her on the path to madness.
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* Didn'tSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:Rinnosuke was not expecting Alfred to be there, and badly mishandles his response to this unexpected variable.]]
* Didn'tThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Even more than Alfred being a {{Spanner In The Works}}, this is the main problem with Rinnosuke's plan: how is he supposed to fool the many friends and allies the Touhous he's attempting to brainwash when he gets back to Gensokyo? Which includes Yukari's servant Ran, the Tengu, Reimu, the Goddess of Makai, and the entire goddamn {{Celestial Bureaucracy}}.]]
* Didn'tThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Even more than Alfred being a {{Spanner In The Works}}, this is the main problem with Rinnosuke's plan: how is he supposed to fool the many friends and allies the Touhous he's attempting to brainwash when he gets back to Gensokyo? Which includes Yukari's servant Ran, the Tengu, Reimu, the Goddess of Makai, and the entire goddamn {{Celestial Bureaucracy}}.]]
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* Didn'tSeeThatComing: DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:Rinnosuke was not expecting Alfred to be there, and badly mishandles his response to this unexpected variable.]]
*Didn'tThinkThisThrough: DidntThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Even more than Alfred being a {{Spanner In The Works}}, this is the main problem with Rinnosuke's plan: how is he supposed to fool the many friends and allies the Touhous he's attempting to brainwash when he gets back to Gensokyo? Which includes Yukari's servant Ran, the Tengu, Reimu, the Goddess of Makai, and the entire goddamn {{Celestial Bureaucracy}}.]]
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