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* ShaggyDogStory: After spending two and a half hours moving Kaiba's chair across the room and spinning it to where he can sit down, Joey realizes that not only could he have sat on the bed and not wasted so much energy, he'll have to move the chair back before Kaiba wakes up in three hours.
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* ShaggyDogStory: A humorous, one-chapter example. After spending two and a half hours moving Kaiba's chair across the room and spinning it to where he can sit down, Joey realizes that not only could he have sat on the bed and not wasted so much energy, he'll have to move the chair back before Kaiba wakes up in three hours.
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* SurvivorsGuilt: It's heavily implied that Kaiba feels guilty for living when Joey died. He almost works himself to death trying to find a way to save him.
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* SurvivorsGuilt: SurvivorGuilt: It's heavily implied that Kaiba feels guilty for living when Joey died. He almost works himself to death trying to find a way to save him.
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* OrpheanRescue: [[spoiler:When Seto refuses to leave the Soul Room, leaving his body empty, Joey heads in to rescue him]].
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* RescuedFromTheUnderworld: [[spoiler:When Seto refuses to leave the Soul Room, leaving his body empty, Joey heads in to rescue him]].
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As Joey tries to make sense of his un-life (and haunt Seto Kaiba), it soon grows apparent that he's weakening--and he has no idea how much time he has left. Joey searches for a way to save himself, and maybe save Kaiba while he's at it.
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As Joey tries to make sense of his un-life (and haunt Seto Kaiba), it soon grows apparent that he's weakening--and weakening, and he has no idea how much time he has left. Joey searches for a way to save himself, and maybe save Kaiba while he's at it.
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As Joey tries to make sense of his un-life (and haunt Seto Kaiba), it soon grows apparent that he's weakening--and he has no idea how much time he has left.
left. Joey searches for a way to save himself, and maybe save Kaiba while he's at it.
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* CreepySouvenir: Kaiba kept the trench coat he was wearing when Joey died, which is still soaked with his blood. Joey is very freaked out by it.
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* BiggerBad: The Big Five are technically behind a lot of major events in the story, as they're responsible for sabotaging [=KaibaCorp=] and siccing Morrison on Kaiba—inadvertently starting the entire plot—but aren't personally involved or seen at all. At most, they get a couple mentions.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: The Big Five. They're technically behind a lot of major events in the story, as they're responsible for sabotaging [=KaibaCorp=] and siccing Morrison on Kaiba—inadvertently starting the entire plot—but aren't personally involved or seen at all. At most, they get a couple mentions.
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* SanitySlippage: Seto Kaiba slowly loses his mind as the story progresses for a variety of reasons, including guilt over Joey's death, obsessively trying to find a way to save Joey, lack of adequate food and sleep, [=KaibaCorp=] not doing well, worry for his own life and Mokuba's, and [[spoiler:synchronization with the dying Joey]].
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* SoulJar: Joey can potentially escape death by having his soul fused to an object. [[spoiler:They end up using the Red-Eyes Black Dragon card]].
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* SoulJar: Joey can potentially escape death ceasing to exist by having his soul fused to an object. [[spoiler:They end up using the Red-Eyes Black Dragon card]].
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* SurvivorsGuilt: It's heavily implied that Kaiba feels guilty for living when Joey died. He almost works himself to death trying to find a way to save him.
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* SoulJar: Joey can potentially escape death by having his soul fused to an object. [[spoiler:They end up using the Red-Eyes Black Dragon card]].
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* IChooseToStay: A very dark version in the penultimate chapters. [[spoiler:Seto Kaiba refuses Joey's help and wants to stay in the Soul Room, trapped in his own mind forever]].
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* BiggerBad: The Big Five are technically behind a lot of major events in the story, as they're responsible for sabotaging KaibaCorp [=KaibaCorp=] and siccing Morrison on Kaiba—inadvertently starting the entire plot—but aren't personally involved or seen at all. At most, they get a couple mentions.
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* BiggerBad: The Big Five are behind a lot of major events in the story, as they're responsible for sabotaging [=KaibaCorp=] and siccing Morrison on Kaiba--inadvertently starting the entire plot--but aren't perosnally personally involved or seen at all.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Yami Bakura says he'll help save Joey if he gets the Millennium Puzzle in return. Joey adamantly refuses, so Yami Bakura makes an offer to Seto Kaiba instead--Joey's life for [=KaibaCorp=].
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* HowDareYouDieOnMe: Seto Kaiba is not happy at all that Joey dies in his arms and tries insulting him to make him stay awake. It doesn't work.
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* PleaseWakeUp: As Joey dies, Kaiba begs him to stay with him. [[spoiler:This turns out to have lasting ramifications]].
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* CantLiveWithoutYou: Yami Bakura reveals that [[spoiler:since Kaiba bonded Joey's soul to his own, Joey has been slowly killing Kaiba as his own condition worsens]].
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* UnwantedRescue: [[spoiler:When Joey goes to rescue him in the Soul Room, Kaiba refuses all help because he wants to stay there]].
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* RingRingCrunch: To put it simply, Seto Kaiba is not a morning person.
-->When the alarm goes off at 5:30AM, I hafta duck 'cause instead of turnin' it off, the freak groans, grabs the clock, and chucks it across the room. The poor clock smashes against the wall and dies.
-->When the alarm goes off at 5:30AM, I hafta duck 'cause instead of turnin' it off, the freak groans, grabs the clock, and chucks it across the room. The poor clock smashes against the wall and dies.
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* ShaggyDogStory: After spending two and a half hours moving Kaiba's chair across the room and spinning it to where he can sit down, Joey realizes that not only could he have sat on the bed and not wasted so much energy, he'll have to move the chair back before Kaiba wakes up in three hours.
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* CessationOfExistence: Since Joey is already dead, dying again means this will happen to him.
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* UndeathAlwaysEnds: Joey is in danger of ceasing to exist.
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* BatmanGambit: Joey pulls one on Yami Bakura to get him to help by saying that if Yami Yugi couldn't do it, there's no way ''he'' could. [[spoiler:Yami Bakura saw through it, but helped Joey to further his own plans]].
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Being Dead Ain't Easy is a ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic written by D. Draggy.
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* ZergRush: [[spoiler:When in the Soul Room, hundreds to ''millions'' of Funny Bunnies swarm Joey and Kaiba]].
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* OrpheanRescue: [[spoiler:When Seto refuses to leave the Soul Room, causing his body to decay, Joey heads in to rescue him]].
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* TakingTheBullet: While already banged up from an exploding limo, Joey officially dies taking a bullet for Kaiba.
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* UnfinishedBusiness: Parodied. Joey just haunts Kaiba because he has nothing teeter to do and thinks he's too smug for his own good.
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->''Walkin' around when you're dead's kinda strange, aside from the fact that you're not supposed to be walkin' around at all, I mean.''
Being Dead Ain't Easy is a ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic written by D. Draggy.
When Joey Wheeler dies saving Seto Kaiba's life, he decides that his day officially sucks. Making things worse is the fact that upon trying to enter the afterlife, he trips over his shoelace and finds himself unable to move on. As if things couldn't get worse than ''that'', it appears no one but Kaiba can see or hear him.
As Joey tries to make sense of his un-life (and haunt Seto Kaiba), it soon grows apparent that he's weakening--and he has no idea how much time he has left.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1292024/1/Being-Dead-Ain-t-Easy here]].
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BarredFromTheAfterlife: This happens by accident when Joey trips over his shoes. [[spoiler:The actual reason is because Kaiba told him to stay with him]].
* EmptyShell: After the battle with Yami Bakura, [[spoiler:Seto remains in the Soul Room, leaving his body empty]].
* FirstPersonSmartass: Joey's narration is full of this to the point that your internal voice may be replaced with his.
* TheHeroDies: Joey is killed in the very first chapter.
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler:When bonded to the Red-Eyes Black Dragon card, touching it allows Joey or Kaiba to enter their Soul Room]].
* MugglesDoItBetter: At one point Yami Bakura knocks Yami Yugi out with a lunch tray as opposed to a magic spell.
* OrpheanRescue: [[spoiler:When Seto refuses to leave the Soul Room, causing his body to decay, Joey heads in to rescue him]].
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Joey exhibits intangibility, invisibility, ''very'' limited flight, and the ability to affect the living world if he really, really concentrates.
* UnfinishedBusiness: Parodied. Joey just haunts Kaiba because he has nothing teeter to do and thinks he's too smug for his own good.
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Being Dead Ain't Easy is a ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic written by D. Draggy.
When Joey Wheeler dies saving Seto Kaiba's life, he decides that his day officially sucks. Making things worse is the fact that upon trying to enter the afterlife, he trips over his shoelace and finds himself unable to move on. As if things couldn't get worse than ''that'', it appears no one but Kaiba can see or hear him.
As Joey tries to make sense of his un-life (and haunt Seto Kaiba), it soon grows apparent that he's weakening--and he has no idea how much time he has left.
The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1292024/1/Being-Dead-Ain-t-Easy here]].
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BarredFromTheAfterlife: This happens by accident when Joey trips over his shoes. [[spoiler:The actual reason is because Kaiba told him to stay with him]].
* EmptyShell: After the battle with Yami Bakura, [[spoiler:Seto remains in the Soul Room, leaving his body empty]].
* FirstPersonSmartass: Joey's narration is full of this to the point that your internal voice may be replaced with his.
* TheHeroDies: Joey is killed in the very first chapter.
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler:When bonded to the Red-Eyes Black Dragon card, touching it allows Joey or Kaiba to enter their Soul Room]].
* MugglesDoItBetter: At one point Yami Bakura knocks Yami Yugi out with a lunch tray as opposed to a magic spell.
* OrpheanRescue: [[spoiler:When Seto refuses to leave the Soul Room, causing his body to decay, Joey heads in to rescue him]].
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Joey exhibits intangibility, invisibility, ''very'' limited flight, and the ability to affect the living world if he really, really concentrates.
* UnfinishedBusiness: Parodied. Joey just haunts Kaiba because he has nothing teeter to do and thinks he's too smug for his own good.
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