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* CanonForeigner: Before this was [[{{Retcon}} retconned]], Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in "Camp [=YoyleStone=]".
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* CanonForeigner: CanonForeigner:
** Before this was [[{{Retcon}} retconned]], Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in "Camp [=YoyleStone=]".
** Before this was [[{{Retcon}} retconned]], Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in "Camp [=YoyleStone=]".
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* FreudianExcuse: The reason the original contestants act more cruel towards each other is due to the fact that since Dream Island is gone, they have to compete again and might never find the island. Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost are completely unaware about this, though.
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* FreudianExcuse: FreudianExcuse:
** The reason the original contestants act more cruel towards each other is due to the fact that since Dream Island is gone, they have to compete again and might never find the island. Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost are completely unaware about this, though.
** The reason the original contestants act more cruel towards each other is due to the fact that since Dream Island is gone, they have to compete again and might never find the island. Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost are completely unaware about this, though.
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Episodes 1-8 can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11264226/1/Battle-for-Dream-Island-Again-Do-Over here]], and 9-11 (Now deprecated, read the [=AO3=] version instead) [[https://paw-patrol-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/BFDIADO_9:_Camp_YoyleStone here]]. The Object Show Fanon Pedia page is [[https://objectshowfanonpedia.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_For_Dream_Island_Again_Do-Over here]]! An Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn port is also underway here, and all future chapters will be posted there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166
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Episodes 1-8 can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11264226/1/Battle-for-Dream-Island-Again-Do-Over here]], and 9-11 (Now deprecated, read the [=AO3=] version instead) [[https://paw-patrol-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/BFDIADO_9:_Camp_YoyleStone here]]. The Object Show Fanon Pedia page is [[https://objectshowfanonpedia.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_For_Dream_Island_Again_Do-Over here]]! An Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn port is also underway here, and all future chapters will be posted there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166
there ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166 link]]).
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Episodes 1-8 can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11264226/1/Battle-for-Dream-Island-Again-Do-Over here]], and 9-11 (Now deprecated, read the AO3 version instead) [[https://paw-patrol-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/BFDIADO_9:_Camp_YoyleStone here]]. The Object Show Fanon Pedia page is [[https://objectshowfanonpedia.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_For_Dream_Island_Again_Do-Over here]]! An Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn port is also underway here, and all future chapters will be posted there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166
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Episodes 1-8 can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11264226/1/Battle-for-Dream-Island-Again-Do-Over here]], and 9-11 (Now deprecated, read the AO3 [=AO3=] version instead) [[https://paw-patrol-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/BFDIADO_9:_Camp_YoyleStone here]]. The Object Show Fanon Pedia page is [[https://objectshowfanonpedia.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_For_Dream_Island_Again_Do-Over here]]! An Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn port is also underway here, and all future chapters will be posted there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166
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Episodes 1-8 can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11264226/1/Battle-for-Dream-Island-Again-Do-Over here]], and 9-11 [[https://paw-patrol-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/BFDIADO_9:_Camp_YoyleStone here]]. The Object Show Fanon Pedia page is [[https://objectshowfanonpedia.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_For_Dream_Island_Again_Do-Over here]]! An Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn port is also underway here, and all future chapters will be posted there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166
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Episodes 1-8 can be found [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11264226/1/Battle-for-Dream-Island-Again-Do-Over here]], and 9-11 (Now deprecated, read the AO3 version instead) [[https://paw-patrol-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/BFDIADO_9:_Camp_YoyleStone here]]. The Object Show Fanon Pedia page is [[https://objectshowfanonpedia.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_For_Dream_Island_Again_Do-Over here]]! An Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn port is also underway here, and all future chapters will be posted there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/35676343/chapters/88953166
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** BFDIADO 6: Pulling the Eiffel Tower to a place 2,763 miles away via giant magnet is probably going to break it in half.
** BFDIADO 6: Pulling the Eiffel Tower to a place 2,763 miles away via giant magnet is probably going to break it in half.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** BFDIADO 6: Pulling the Eiffel Tower to a place 2,763 miles away via giant magnet is probably going to break it in half.
** BFDIADO 6: Pulling the Eiffel Tower to a place 2,763 miles away via giant magnet is probably going to break it in half.
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* CanonImmigrant: [[spoiler:Profily]] has some lines in BFDIADO, but he was completely ignored altogether.
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* WhatAnIdiot: So many examples that it has [[WhatAnIdiot/BattleForDreamIslandAgainDoOver its own page]].
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Famous Last Words is no longer a trope.
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* FamousLastWords: Puffball Speaker Box unfortunately suffers this…
-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "Can you guess what time it is?"]]
-->[[spoiler:Coiny: It's time for Cake at Stake."]]
-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "That's right! It's time for Cake at [[KilledMidSentence Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE]]!"]]
-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "Can you guess what time it is?"]]
-->[[spoiler:Coiny: It's time for Cake at Stake."]]
-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "That's right! It's time for Cake at [[KilledMidSentence Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE]]!"]]
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* {{Retcon}}: Blizzard, Tundra, Mistyfoot, Hawkfrost, Mothwing, and Brambleclaw only show up in deleted scenes. And the very existence of IDFB has also been retconned because BFDIADO made it past episode 5.
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* CanonForeigner: Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in "Camp [=YoyleStone=]".
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* CanonForeigner: Before this was [[{{Retcon}} retconned]], Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in "Camp [=YoyleStone=]".
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** Larry Koopa from Franchise/SuperMario also joins, 3 episodes later in “Eliminated Escalation”.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Donut and Teardrop, just like in the canon BFDIA, but Dora does not suffer this trope because Dora gets a little more screen time than the original and even rejoins in "Mine Your Own Business".
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Donut and Teardrop, just like in the canon BFDIA, but Dora does not suffer this trope because Dora gets a little more screen time than the original and even rejoins in "Mine Your Own Business".Business".
* WhatAnIdiot: So many examples that it has [[WhatAnIdiot/BattleForDreamIslandAgainDoOver its own page]].
* WhatAnIdiot: So many examples that it has [[WhatAnIdiot/BattleForDreamIslandAgainDoOver its own page]].
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* CanonForeigner: Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in “Camp [=YoyleStone=]”. Unlike his original depiction, he has made friends with Pen and Yellow Face, but parts of his original personality became more exaggerated[[note]]Like the prank on [=FreeSmart=] and Team No-Name in BFDIADO 9 and 10[[/note]], making him more like Blocky in some aspects because DeathIsCheap.
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* CanonForeigner: Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in “Camp [=YoyleStone=]”. "Camp [=YoyleStone=]".
** Hawkfrost, too, also has a major role. Unlike his original depiction, he has made friends withPen and Yellow Face, Face during their commercials, but parts of his original personality has also became more exaggerated[[note]]Like like Blocky[[note]]Like the prank on [=FreeSmart=] and Team No-Name in BFDIADO 9 and 10[[/note]], making him more like Blocky in some aspects because DeathIsCheap.
** Hawkfrost, too, also has a major role. Unlike his original depiction, he has made friends with
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-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "That's right! It's time for Cake at [KilledMidSentence Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE]]!"]]
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-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "That's right! It's time for Cake at [KilledMidSentence [[KilledMidSentence Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE]]!"]]
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-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "That's right! It's time for Cake at Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE!"]]
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-->[[spoiler:Puffball Speaker Box: "That's right! It's time for Cake at Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE!"]][KilledMidSentence Sta—AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE]]!"]]
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* FreudianExcuse: The reason the original contestants act more cruel towards each other is due to the fact that since Dream Island is gone, they have to compete again and might never find the island. Blizzard is completely unaware about this, though.
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* FreudianExcuse: The reason the original contestants act more cruel towards each other is due to the fact that since Dream Island is gone, they have to compete again and might never find the island. Blizzard is Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost are completely unaware about this, though.
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* CanonForeigner: Blizzard, a PAW Patrol OC created by [=TundraTheSnowPup=], joined in “Camp [=YoyleStone=]”. Unlike his original depiction, he has made friends with Pen and Yellow Face, but parts of his original personality became more exaggerated[[note]]Like the prank on [=FreeSmart=] and Team No-Name in BFDIADO 9 and 10[[/note]], making him more like Blocky in some aspects because DeathIsCheap.
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* CanonForeigner: Blizzard, a PAW Patrol OC created by [=TundraTheSnowPup=], Brambleclaw, the [=ThunderClan=] Deputy at the time of joining, joined in “Camp [=YoyleStone=]”. Unlike his original depiction, he has made friends with Pen and Yellow Face, but parts of his original personality became more exaggerated[[note]]Like the prank on [=FreeSmart=] and Team No-Name in BFDIADO 9 and 10[[/note]], making him more like Blocky in some aspects because DeathIsCheap.
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* DudeNotFunny: {{Exaggerated}} — Firey's reaction to [[OutOfCharacterMoment Blizzard's prank]] was this, outright scolding him for doing so.
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* DudeNotFunny: {{Exaggerated}} — Firey's reaction to [[OutOfCharacterMoment Blizzard's prank]] Hawkfrost's prank was this, outright scolding him for doing so.it.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: The Puffball Speaker Box, while still being nice to the contestants, was adapted into a jerkass, insulting Firey by saying that the show would be better without him as well as [[KickTheDog sending Chase and Marshall]] [[EjectTheLoser to the TLC]], [[LaserGuidedKarma indirectly causing her murder in the next episode]].
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: The Puffball Speaker Box, while still being nice to the contestants, was adapted into a jerkass, insulting Firey by saying that the show would be better without him as well as [[KickTheDog sending Chase Brambleclaw and Marshall]] Mistyfoot]] [[EjectTheLoser to the TLC]], [[LaserGuidedKarma indirectly causing her murder in the next episode]].
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Tundra ends up suffering this while in the TLC, and acts more of a {{Jerkass}} later on when she escapes the Tower Rave of Loser Luxuries.
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Tundra Mothwing ends up suffering this while in the TLC, and acts more of a {{Jerkass}} later on when she escapes the Tower Rave of Loser Luxuries.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Donut, Dora, and Teardrop, just like in the canon BFDIA, even though Dora gets a little more screen time than the original.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Donut, Dora, Donut and Teardrop, just like in the canon BFDIA, even though but Dora does not suffer this trope because Dora gets a little more screen time than the original.original and even rejoins in "Mine Your Own Business".
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote:Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[/labelnote]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote:Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[/labelnote]]rule because [[HelloInsertNameHere her name is too long for the HPRC to register]][[/labelnote]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote:Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[labelnote/]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote:Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[labelnote/]]rule[[/labelnote]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote|Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[labelnote/]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote|Well, [[labelnote:Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[labelnote/]]
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** The Puffball Speaker Box was also made more of a jerkass, insulting Firey by saying that the show would be better without him as well as [[KickTheDog sending Chase and Marshall]] [[EjectTheLoser to the TLC]], [[TemptingFate indirectly causing her murder in the next episode]].
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote|Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[/labelnote]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Pretty much true for everyone, and the HPRC means that Death is Cheap.[[labelnote|Well, mostly…]] The Puffball Speaker Box is the exception to the rule[[/labelnote]]rule[[labelnote/]]
* BitchInSheepsClothing: The Puffball Speaker Box, while still being nice to the contestants, was adapted into a jerkass, insulting Firey by saying that the show would be better without him as well as [[KickTheDog sending Chase and Marshall]] [[EjectTheLoser to the TLC]], [[LaserGuidedKarma indirectly causing her murder in the next episode]].
* BitchInSheepsClothing: The Puffball Speaker Box, while still being nice to the contestants, was adapted into a jerkass, insulting Firey by saying that the show would be better without him as well as [[KickTheDog sending Chase and Marshall]] [[EjectTheLoser to the TLC]], [[LaserGuidedKarma indirectly causing her murder in the next episode]].