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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: When Michiru thinks he's going to have to go back to Xanth for more dragon dung to act as fertilizer for the new "[[FanFic/DoctorShikigamisMonster Monsters]]" Mari has ordered, he's unenthusiastic. When Goku volunteers his students, he is ''very'' relieved. Unfortunately, when Kakashi, Korin, and Happosai (the non-perv one that Mari and Thunderstrike know) see the Monster and want to up said orders even more, he is robbed of said relief, and they don't listen to him when he tries to get them to understand the difficulty of growing them.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: When Michiru thinks he's going to have to go back to Xanth for more dragon dung to act as fertilizer for the new "[[FanFic/DoctorShikigamisMonster Monsters]]" Mari has ordered, he's unenthusiastic. When Goku volunteers his students, he is ''very'' relieved. Unfortunately, when Kakashi, Korin, and Happosai (the non-perv one that Mari and Thunderstrike know) see the Monster and want to up said orders even more, he is robbed of said relief, and they don't listen to him when he tries to get them to understand the difficulty of growing them.them (and eventually send '''[[Anime/DragonBallSuper Beerus, the freaking God of Destruction]]''' to do some "leaning-on").
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* DangerousPhlebotinumInteraction: The Loshol Charges are a new weapon that replicates the same reaction of Pym Particles and Arpeture Science portal energy that destroyed the original mansion. The result is the affected person or object having bits and pieces of it rapidly growing and shrinking at random until it rips itself apart.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: [[spoiler:When Mari comes across one of the CHIMERA supers responsible for what happened to Mana, she shoves a "Loshol Charge" down his throat. The result is not pleasant for him]].
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: [[spoiler:When Mari comes across one of the CHIMERA supers responsible for what happened to Mana, she shoves a "Loshol Charge" down his throat. The result is not pleasant for him]]. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that the [[spoiler:super in question is a Gero Android. During ''[[Fanfic/CorelineOperationEndgame Operation Endgame]]'', Mari fought Gero Androids twice and was quickly defeated both times. Thus she knew that she needed to resort to extreme measures in order to deal with this one. Though she makes no bones about the fact that she doesn't regret doing so in the slightest.]]
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Tele-Frag describes a situation where one thing is teleported into a second, thus destroying the second thing.
* DangerousPhlebotinumInteraction: The Loshol Charges are a new weapon that replicates the same reaction of Pym Particles and Arpeture Science portal energy that destroyed the original mansion. The result is the affected person or object having bits and pieces of it rapidly growing and shrinking at random until it rips itself apart.
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* PapaWolf: Doom and Amora's twin children were extracted from her womb and stolen away by CHIMERA. Doom is understandably upset (to the point that he's acting like a mear carbon copy of his canon self), and it's predicted that the responsible parties will be in deep shit when he finds them.
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* PapaWolf: Doom and Amora's twin children were extracted from her womb and stolen away by CHIMERA. Doom is understandably upset (to the point that he's acting like a mear mere carbon copy of his canon self), and it's predicted that the responsible parties will be in deep shit when he finds them.
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* LoyalPhlebotinum: The new "Project Mighty" weapons are bonded to the chi of their wielders, preventing anyone from taking them and using them against its owner.
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* PapaWolf: Doom and Amora's twin children were extracted from her womb and stolen away by CHIMERA. Doom is understandably upset, upset (to the point that he's acting like a mear carbon copy of his canon self), and it's predicted that the responsible parties will be in deep shit when he finds them.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Mari is very determined ''not'' to fall into this.
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** This also comes up when debating the merits of hiring a security force or using robots, the former can be killed, or be susceptible to bribes, etc., if not chosen carefully, while the latter can be hacked, but recycled if destroyed.
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* DidYouJustScamCthulhu: Mana tricks Beerus into destroying the RestrainingBolt tech in the Mansion.
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* LoyalPhlebotinum: The new "Project Mighty" weapons are bonded to the chi of their wielders, preventing anyone from taking them and using them against
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* {{Nanotechnology}}: [[spoiler:After CHIMERA fell, the remnant group enhanced its soldiers with powerful nanotechnology]].
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:A CHIMERA aligned Killer Frost alt turns into one to avoid being frozen solid by Mari, and some of it's powers are apparently ''Kryptonian'' level, with any hits she lands on Mari sending her ''flying''. And she's not the only one...]]
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** Doom, as a result of his and Amora's children being stolen from their mother's womb by CHIMERA, is understandably less cordial than he was previously.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Rex/War Machine is told by Spider-Man Kensuke that he's under arrest for violating the anti-tech hero ordinance put in place as a result of CHIMERA's cyber-attack. Since the only reason Rex used his powers was to deal with a fire that was threatening innocents, keeping it under control until backup could arrive, he isn't exactly happy.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Rex/War Machine is told by Spider-Man Kensuke that he's under arrest for violating the anti-tech hero ordinance put in place as a result of CHIMERA's cyber-attack. Since the only reason Rex used his powers was to deal with a fire that was threatening innocents, keeping it under control until backup could arrive, he isn't exactly happy. Kensuke do gets chewed out over that afterwards... alongside Rex, because he hacked Ken's suit jets.
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* OriginStory: Chapter Five is Ax's. What kind of thing can an Andalite do that is bad enough for freaking ''Merlin'' to go and curse him? [[spoiler:Betray his fellow Animorphs and almost cause TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt-by-GeneralRipper-Andalites]], that's what.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: When Michiru thinks he's going to have to go back to Xanth for more dragon dung to act as fertilizer for the new "[[FanFic/DoctorShikigamisMonster Monsters]]" Mari has ordered, he's unenthusiastic. When Goku volunteers his students, he is ''very'' relieved. Unfortunately, when Kakashi, Korin, and Happosai (the non-perv one that Mari and Thunderstrike know) see the Monster and want to up said orders even more, he is robbed of said relief.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: When Michiru thinks he's going to have to go back to Xanth for more dragon dung to act as fertilizer for the new "[[FanFic/DoctorShikigamisMonster Monsters]]" Mari has ordered, he's unenthusiastic. When Goku volunteers his students, he is ''very'' relieved. Unfortunately, when Kakashi, Korin, and Happosai (the non-perv one that Mari and Thunderstrike know) see the Monster and want to up said orders even more, he is robbed of said relief.relief, and they don't listen to him when he tries to get them to understand the difficulty of growing them.
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Poor, poor Toji. XD
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Here's hoping the next chapter comes soon!
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* UniquenessDecay: Not only is there the big Monster, and plans to make more, but Yajirobe and some others constructed secret senzu bean farms.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: When Michiru thinks he's going to have to go back to Xanth for more dragon dung to act as fertilizer for the new "[[FanFic/DoctorShikigamisMonster Monsters]]" Mari has ordered, he's unenthusiastic. When Goku volunteers his students, he is ''very'' relieved. Unfortunately, when Kakashi, Korin, and Happosai (the non-perv one that Mari and Thunderstrike know) see the Monster and want to up said orders even more, robbing him he is robbed of said relief.
