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''Ash's Return'' is a short ''{{Anime/Pokemon}}'' fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[GlitchEntity "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of ''Literature/GodelEscherBachAnEternalGoldenBraid'' and ''Film/{{Inception}}'', with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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''Ash's Return'' is a short ''{{Anime/Pokemon}}'' ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[GlitchEntity "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of ''Literature/GodelEscherBachAnEternalGoldenBraid'' and ''Film/{{Inception}}'', with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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* AscendedGlitch / EldritchAbomination: Missingno itself.
* BavarianFireDrill: part of the "plan" in Chapter 3.
* BavarianFireDrill: part of the "plan" in Chapter 3.
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* {{Exposition}}: Chapter 2 is pretty much just this.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: "Wouldn't want anyone to get hurt, y'know?" and various less blatant examples.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: What happened to Professor Vattha.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: "Wouldn't want anyone to get hurt, y'know?" and various less blatant examples.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: What happened to Professor Vattha.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: "[[ShowDontTell I don't remember anything.]]"
* LoadBearingBoss: invoked explicitly by name.
* LogicBomb: the page quote at the top.
* LoadBearingBoss: invoked explicitly by name.
* LogicBomb: the page quote at the top.
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* OntologicalMystery, TheAllConcealingI: The italicized portions at the beginning of the chapters.
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* PatchworkFic: Even though the fic appears to take place in the [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Pokemon anime]], the glitch Pokemon are exclusively in the games.
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* PatchworkFic: Even though the fic appears to take place in the [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} [[Anime/PokemonTheSeries Pokemon anime]], the glitch Pokemon are exclusively in the games.
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* SoWhatDoWeDoNow: the beginning, actually.
* TeamRocketWins
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''Ash's Return'' is a short ''{{Anime/Pokemon}}'' fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[TheMissingno "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of ''Literature/GodelEscherBachAnEternalGoldenBraid'' and ''Film/{{Inception}}'', with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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''Ash's Return'' is a short ''{{Anime/Pokemon}}'' fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[TheMissingno [[GlitchEntity "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of ''Literature/GodelEscherBachAnEternalGoldenBraid'' and ''Film/{{Inception}}'', with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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'''Ash's Return''' is a short {{Anime/Pokemon}} fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[TheMissingno "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of GodelEscherBach and {{Inception}}, with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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* DivideByZero / LogicBomb: the page quote at the top.
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* LogicBomb: the page quote at the top.
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* DeadFic: The revised version has not been updated for more than a year, thus leaving readers who didn't read the original [[NoEnding utterly confused]].
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* OCStandIn: The old man in Viridian City who triggers the Missingno. glitch is given some backstory here.
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* PatchworkFic: Even though the fic appears to take place in the [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Pokemon anime]], the glitch Pokemon are exclusively in the games.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: "We all know there are 150 Pokémon, and Mewtwo is the last" (says the one who owned a Togepi in the anime)
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* {{Discontinuity}}: "We all know there are 150 Pokémon, and Mewtwo is the last" (says the one who owned a Togepi in the anime)
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* FanonDiscontinuity: "We all know there are 150 Pokémon, and Mewtwo is the last" (says the one who owned a Togepi in the anime)
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->''"All his life, Ash has had a dream: [[GottaCatchEmAll to Catch 'Em All]]. And now, he's finally done it– or has he? What mystery awaits him on Cinnabar's shore? And is he ready for where it will take him?"''
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->''"All his life, Ash has had a dream: [[GottaCatchEmAll to Catch 'Em All]]. And now, he's finally done it– it -– or has he? What mystery awaits him on Cinnabar's shore? And is he ready for where it will take him?"''
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* PaintingTheFourthWall: Chapter 3 ("Parallel Process") uses three columns of text to represent [[SimultaneousArcs three simultaneous lines]] of action. [[DynamicEntry Until...]]
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* PaintingTheFourthWall: PaintingTheMedium: Chapter 3 ("Parallel Process") uses three columns of text to represent [[SimultaneousArcs three simultaneous lines]] of action. [[DynamicEntry Until...]]
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'''Ash's Return''' is a short {{Pokemon}} fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[TheMissingno "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of GodelEscherBach and {{Inception}}, with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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'''Ash's Return''' is a short {{Pokemon}} {{Anime/Pokemon}} fanfic by "Questionnaire," following [[IdiotHero our hero Ash]]'s quest to find the mysterious [[TheMissingno "missing" Pokémon]]. Flavors of GodelEscherBach and {{Inception}}, with bits of "bored in Computation Structures class."
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It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7134905/1/Ashs_Return here]].
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It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7134905/1/Ashs_Return here]].
here]]. There is also a [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7521238/1/Ashs_Return_v2 rewritten version]], currently incomplete.
