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* ShoutOut: [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare "Your tree-killing skills are remarkable."]]
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** [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare "Your tree-killing skills are remarkable."]]"]]
** ''VideoGame/{{Fallout 3}}'' gets mentioned in chapter 9.
** [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare "Your tree-killing skills are remarkable.
** ''VideoGame/{{Fallout 3}}'' gets mentioned in chapter 9.
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** Damon is never seen without his rifle and pistol of choice. The [[http://www.jtactical.com/rogue M14 Rouge Chassis]][[note]]A bullpup conversion of the M14 battle rifle[[/note]] rifle, and the Glock 37 pistol.
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** Damon is never seen without his rifle and pistol of choice. The [[http://www.jtactical.com/rogue Juggernaut Tactical M14 Rouge Chassis]][[note]]A Chassis]][[note]]One of many bullpup conversion of conversions available for the M14 battle rifle[[/note]] rifle, and the Glock 37 pistol.
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* BackstabBackfire: In chapter 7 a young bandit Damon had interrogated and intended to spare tries shooting him once he started walking away. Damon is faster on the draw.
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* BeingHumanSucks: In chapter 8 Damon rants about how squishy humans are compared to ship girls.
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* GunPorn: The amount of attention paid to firearms can get a bit indulgent.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Damon's reaction to getting shot in the shoulder in chapter 8.
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* InSeriesNickname: Damon calls Amatsukaze "Amy" because he finds her name a mouthful.
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** Damon is never seen without his rifle and pistol of choice. The [[http://www.jtactical.com/rogue M14 Rouge Chassis]][[note]]A bullpup conversion of the M14 battle rifle[[/note]] rifle, and the Glock 37pistol.pistol.
** He later recovers more files about the F.L.E.E.T. Project, which note that ship girls are proficient with a large variety of infantry small arms. Each type of ship girl has, among the types they are proficient with, types of guns that they prefer. For example, the destroyer girls prefer pistols all the way up to assault rifles, light cruisers girls prefer all those including battle rifles, and carriers are specialized in and prefer long rifles ([=DMRs=], sniper rifles, and anti-materiel rifles).
** Damon is never seen without his rifle and pistol of choice. The [[http://www.jtactical.com/rogue M14 Rouge Chassis]][[note]]A bullpup conversion of the M14 battle rifle[[/note]] rifle, and the Glock 37
** He later recovers more files about the F.L.E.E.T. Project, which note that ship girls are proficient with a large variety of infantry small arms. Each type of ship girl has, among the types they are proficient with, types of guns that they prefer. For example, the destroyer girls prefer pistols all the way up to assault rifles, light cruisers girls prefer all those including battle rifles, and carriers are specialized in and prefer long rifles ([=DMRs=], sniper rifles, and anti-materiel rifles).
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* WeaponOfChoice: Damon is never seen without his rifle and pistol of choice. The [[http://www.jtactical.com/rogue M14 Rouge Chassis]][[note]]A bullpup conversion of the M14 battle rifle[[/note]] rifle, and the Glock 37 pistol.
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* BulletCatch: In chapter 8 Amatsukaze catches a shotgun slug.
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* TapOnTheHead: In chapter 7, Damon knocks out a bandit ringleader [[PistolWhipping with the butt of his pistol]] to the head.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 7. Damon and Murakumo find Amatsukaze.
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: In chapter 7, Damon witnesses a pair of clashing bandit groups.
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* TemptingFate: In chapter 7. "There's a possibility that we could get through here without any trouble, but-" Cue explosion, which gets a LampshadeHanging right after.
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* HandCannon: Mr. Harrison gives Damon a [[BlingBlingBANG decorated]] IMI Desert Eagle to use on the scientists behind the Genesis Theta Project.
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** The F.L.E.E.T. Project that created the ship girls.
** The Genesis Theta Project [[spoiler:that Damon is the only surviving success of.]]
** The F.L.E.E.T. Project that created the ship girls.
** The Genesis Theta Project [[spoiler:that Damon is the only surviving success of.]]
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* EveryoneIsArmed: Invoked in Mobile, where everyone above 18 is required to bear arms in order to deter troublemakers.
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* DividedStatesOfAmerica: After the war, private sovereignties developed within the American South.
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* TheWorldsExpertOnGettingKilled: Damon's mother told him that his father was part of a team meant to stop nukings... who was killed in a nuking.
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* ConcealmentEqualsCover: Averted in chapter 2, where bullets go through the decayed wood and brick Damon was hiding behind.
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* SceneryGorn: The world is in ruins and the narration doesn't hesitate to remind you of it.
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** The Arleigh Burke-class guided missile destroyer ''USS John Paul Jones'' is seen attacking Mobile during an early arc within the story.
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See also ''Fanfic/AmbiencePlatoonMoebiusFour'' by the same author, but do note that despite the similar titles, they do not share a continuity.
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See also ''Fanfic/AmbiencePlatoonMoebiusFour'' by the same author, but do note that despite the similar titles, they do not share a continuity.
with which it shares original characters with, and can be considered alternate universes of each other.
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* AfterTheEnd: The fic starts off almost 20 years after a nuclear exchange between the United States and Iran.
* CoolShip: There are some examples.
** The Arleigh Burke-class destroyer ''USS John Paul Jones'' is seen attacking a city that Damon is staying in.
** The ''USS Alabama'' museum ship, moored at Battleship Memorial Park in Mobile, Alabama, contains clues that provide Damon a better insight as to how the ship girls operate.
* MercyKill: When a group of bandits in trucks arrive at the house where Damon had found Murakumo, he's forced to perform this on an infant that he found in one of the trucks after realizing that his opening of the door had exposed it to what was essentially lethal amounts of radiation for the poor child.
* TechnicolourEyes: Damon, whose eyes can change colour at will and provide him with extra modes of vision. [[spoiler:He was a participant in a genetic experiment while he was an infant, and was the SoleSurvivor of that project.]]
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All was not well however. While many ship girls were successfully built, none were activated, and some never even reaching their assigned naval yards before the outbreak of World War III in 2010 that saw the United States and Iran throw nukes at other.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10333897 Ambience: A Fleet Symphony]]'' is a ''VideoGame/KantaiCollection'' AlternateUniverseFic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3863164/Hieda-no-Akyuu Hieda no Akyuu]].
In an alternate universe, following the [[UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror September 11th attacks]], "The F.L.E.E.T. Project", or the Fleet Expansion and Enhancement Test, was initiated by a team of American engineers, codenamed "Constitution", who were contracted by the U.S. Navy to research and develop enhancements for the United States Navy. Specifically, how to condense [=WWII=]-era ship technology into the size of a human being. Essentially, making ship girls.
All was not well however. While many ship girls were successfully built, none were activated, and some never even reaching their assigned naval yards before the outbreak of World War III in 2010 that saw the United States and Iran throw nukes at other.
The year is now 2029. Enter our hero, Damon Polchow. Born shortly after the war, he has basically seen all of what life had to offer AfterTheEnd. He's hot on the trail of a possible ship girl, following a lead provided by a scientist who had worked on the F.L.E.E.T project, and eventually ending up in the scientist's former home in the suburbs of what used to be Houston, Texas. It is here that he encounters his first ship girl, Fubuki-class destroyer ''Murakumo''.
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In an alternate universe, following the [[UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror September 11th attacks]], "The F.L.E.E.T. Project", or the Fleet Expansion and Enhancement Test, was initiated by a team of American engineers, codenamed "Constitution", who were contracted by the U.S. Navy to research and develop enhancements for the United States Navy. Specifically, how to condense [=WWII=]-era ship technology into the size of a human being. Essentially, making ship girls.
All was not well however. While many ship girls were successfully built, none were activated, and some never even reaching their assigned naval yards before the outbreak of World War III in 2010 that saw the United States and Iran throw nukes at other.
The year is now 2029. Enter our hero, Damon Polchow. Born shortly after the war, he has basically seen all of what life had to offer AfterTheEnd. He's hot on the trail of a possible ship girl, following a lead provided by a scientist who had worked on the F.L.E.E.T project, and eventually ending up in the scientist's former home in the suburbs of what used to be Houston, Texas. It is here that he encounters his first ship girl, Fubuki-class destroyer ''Murakumo''.
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