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* CanonDefilement: Basically changing Percy's past entirely.
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* BrokenHero: Percy, obviously.
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* BigBrotherMentor: Nico and Bianca couldn’t ask for more.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taken UpToEleven with Percy. His stepfather tortured him and his mother for years before the beginning of the story.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taken UpToEleven up to eleven with Percy. His stepfather tortured him and his mother for years before the beginning of the story.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9113198/1/Altered-Destinies Altered Destinies]]'' and it's sequel ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9203302/1/Intertwined-Destinies Intertwined Destinies]]'' are ''Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians'' fanfictions by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4111486/Anaklusmos14 Anaklusmos14]]. In this story, Percy has a different and not so happy past, leading to him being adopted by Hades and being trained since an early age for the Great Prophecy.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9113198/1/Altered-Destinies Altered Destinies]]'' and it's its sequel ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9203302/1/Intertwined-Destinies Intertwined Destinies]]'' are ''Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians'' fanfictions by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4111486/Anaklusmos14 Anaklusmos14]]. In this story, Percy has a different and not so happy past, leading to him being adopted by Hades and being trained since an early age for the Great Prophecy.
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* DarkisNotEvil: Percy’s powers as a son of Hades, as in canon.
* DemotedtoExtra: The di Angelo siblings have a lot less importance than in the original story.
* DarkisNotEvil: Percy’s powers as a son of Hades, as in canon.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taken UptoEleven UpToEleven with Percy. His stepfather tortured him and his mother for years before the beginning of the story.
*DarkisNotEvil: DarkIsNotEvil: Percy’s powers as a son of Hades, as in canon.
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* GoodisnotSoft: Percy is a good guy, [[BewareTheNiceOnes but you don't want to be on his bad side]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9113198/1/Altered-Destinies Altered Destinies]] and it's sequel [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9203302/1/Intertwined-Destinies Intertwined Destinies]] are Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians fanfictions by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4111486/Anaklusmos14 Anaklusmos14]]. In this story, Percy has a different and not so happy past, leading to him being adopted by Hades and being trained since an early age for the Great Prophecy.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Zoe and Percy. [[spoiler: even after they get together]]
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Zoe and Percy. [[spoiler: even Even after they get together]]together.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Everyone's reaction when Percy challenged [[spoiler: Dionysus]]
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* GoodisnotSoft: Percy is a good guy, [[BewareTheNiceOnes but you don't want to be on his badside]]side]].
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* JustFriends: And don’t you dare say otherwise to Percy’s and Zoe’s relationship. [[spoiler: they get over it.]]
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* JustFriends: And don’t you dare say otherwise to Percy’s and Zoe’s relationship. [[spoiler: they They get over it.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Zoe progresses from Type A to B through the story
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* JustFriends: And don’t you dare say otherwise to Percy’s and Zoe’s relatioship. [[spoiler: they get over it.]]
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: With some exceptions, the story follow canon pretty closely. Probably because the Fates want it so.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: With some exceptions, the story follow follows canon pretty closely. Probably because the Fates want it so.
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* AttendingYourOwnFuneral: Percy, with good humor
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Everyone's reaction when Percy challenged [[spoiler: Dionysus]]
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* HowDareYouDieOnMe: Percy was missing for a week after being blown out of a volcano. Zoe was not amused when he came back
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* SlapSlapKiss: As beautifully described by Annabeth and Jason:
-->'''Jason:'''"That Percy guy? I feel bad for him."
-->'''Annabeth:''' "He's the only one who can handle her"
-->'''Jason:'''"That Percy guy? I feel bad for him."
-->'''Annabeth:''' "He's the only one who can handle her"
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* HowDareYouDieOnMe: Percy was missing for a week after being blown out of a volcano. Zoe was not amused when he came back
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* Omniglot: Percy can speak English, Greek, Latin, Italian, Spanish, Mandarin Chinese, French, Arabic, Portuguese, and some Russian
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* BigFriendlyDog: Percy’s dog is no other than [[Hellhound Cerberus]] and loves getting scratched in the heads. [[AngryGuardDog Or kill his owner’s enemies]].
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* BigFriendlyDog: Percy’s dog is no other than [[Hellhound [[{{Hellhound}} Cerberus]] and loves getting scratched in the heads. [[AngryGuardDog Or kill his owner’s enemies]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9113198/1/Altered-Destinies Altered Destinies]] and it's sequel [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9203302/1/Intertwined-Destinies Intertwined Destinies]] are Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians fanfictions by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4111486/Anaklusmos14 Anaklusmos14]]. In this story, Percy has a different and not so happy past, leading to him being adopted by Hades and being trained since an early age for the Great Prophecy.
The author comes recommended in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians PJO main page]]
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!!Tropes contained in Altered Destinies:
* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Zoe and Percy. [[spoiler: even after they get together]]
* BerserkButton: Don’t mess with Percy’s family or friends. Theo learns this the hard way.
* BrokenHero: Percy, obviously
* BigFriendlyDog: Percy’s dog is no other than [[Hellhound Cerberus]] and loves getting scratched in the heads. [[AngryGuardDog Or kill his owner’s enemies]].
* BigBrotherMentor: Nico and Bianca couldn’t ask for more.
* TheChewToy: Theo in a nutshell
* CoveredWithScars: A legacy of Percy’s childhood.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taken UptoEleven with Percy. His stepfather tortured him and his mother for years before the beginning of the story.
* DarkisNotEvil: Percy’s powers as a son of Hades, as in canon
* GoodisnotSoft: Percy is a good guy, [[BewareTheNiceOnes but you don't want to be on his bad side]]
* IAmNotMyFather: The campers were not welcoming to Zoe since she was a daughter of Atlas.
* {{Jerkass}}: Theo, Son of Poseidon.
* JustFriends: And don’t you dare say otherwise to Percy’s and Zoe’s relatioship. [[spoiler: they get over it.]]
* Omniglot: Percy can speak English, Greek, Latin, Italian, Spanish, Mandarin Chinese, French, Arabic, Portuguese, and some Russian
* PowerGlows: When Percy gets angry, you can see his aura
* RunningGag: Theo’s shoulder serves only one purpose: being shot by Percy.
* SamaritanRelationshipStarter: How Zoe meets Percy
* WorthyOpponent: Percy is this to Artemis. He doesn’t enjoy it
* YouDidntAsk: Percy already knew about the Labyrinth entrance was, to everyone else’s surprise
-->’’I found the entrance like a week into being here but figured it would be better if the campers didn't know about it. I assumed Chiron and the gods already knew where it was.’’
The author comes recommended in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians PJO main page]]
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!!Tropes contained in Altered Destinies:
* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Zoe and Percy. [[spoiler: even after they get together]]
* BerserkButton: Don’t mess with Percy’s family or friends. Theo learns this the hard way.
* BrokenHero: Percy, obviously
* BigFriendlyDog: Percy’s dog is no other than [[Hellhound Cerberus]] and loves getting scratched in the heads. [[AngryGuardDog Or kill his owner’s enemies]].
* BigBrotherMentor: Nico and Bianca couldn’t ask for more.
* TheChewToy: Theo in a nutshell
* CoveredWithScars: A legacy of Percy’s childhood.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taken UptoEleven with Percy. His stepfather tortured him and his mother for years before the beginning of the story.
* DarkisNotEvil: Percy’s powers as a son of Hades, as in canon
* GoodisnotSoft: Percy is a good guy, [[BewareTheNiceOnes but you don't want to be on his bad side]]
* IAmNotMyFather: The campers were not welcoming to Zoe since she was a daughter of Atlas.
* {{Jerkass}}: Theo, Son of Poseidon.
* JustFriends: And don’t you dare say otherwise to Percy’s and Zoe’s relatioship. [[spoiler: they get over it.]]
* Omniglot: Percy can speak English, Greek, Latin, Italian, Spanish, Mandarin Chinese, French, Arabic, Portuguese, and some Russian
* PowerGlows: When Percy gets angry, you can see his aura
* RunningGag: Theo’s shoulder serves only one purpose: being shot by Percy.
* SamaritanRelationshipStarter: How Zoe meets Percy
* WorthyOpponent: Percy is this to Artemis. He doesn’t enjoy it
* YouDidntAsk: Percy already knew about the Labyrinth entrance was, to everyone else’s surprise
-->’’I found the entrance like a week into being here but figured it would be better if the campers didn't know about it. I assumed Chiron and the gods already knew where it was.’’