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* DeadPersonConversation: Walker with Lugo and Adams. Walker initially believes that Adams is still alive and in need of rescue and is proven extremely wrong. When Lugo shows up, he doesn't bother pretending he's still alive.]]
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* DeadPersonConversation: Walker with Lugo [[spoiler:Lugo and Adams. Walker initially believes that Adams is still alive and in need of rescue and is proven extremely wrong. When Lugo shows up, he doesn't bother pretending he's still alive.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Walker claims that Adams' death was one of these, but his hallucination of Adams says it was SuicideByCop.]]
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* SanitySlippage: At the end of the game, Walker was...not quite right, to put it lightly. He does ''not'' get better:
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* SanitySlippage: At the end of the game, Walker was...not quite right, to put it lightly. He does ''not'' get better:better as indicted by the fact he's hallucinating a dead [[spoiler:Lugo and Adams]] alongside sporting a BeardOfSorrow:
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A fanfic for ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' written by Unfaithful. The morning after his disatrous mission, Walker awakes in Konrad's penthouse and attempts to make his way home from Dubai. But the city's not quite finished with him yet.
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A 2016 fanfic for ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' written by Unfaithful. The morning after his disatrous mission, Walker awakes in Konrad's penthouse and attempts to make his way home from Dubai. But the city's not quite finished with him yet.
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* DeadPersonConversation: Walker with [[spoiler:Lugo and Adams. Walker initially believes that Adams is still alive and in need of rescue. Walker is extremely wrong. When Lugo shows up, he doesn't bother pretending he's still alive.]]
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* DeadPersonConversation: Walker with [[spoiler:Lugo Lugo and Adams. Walker initially believes that Adams is still alive and in need of rescue. Walker rescue and is proven extremely wrong. When Lugo shows up, he doesn't bother pretending he's still alive.]]
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* PornStash: Apparently, the Damned had a few hidden around the city.
* SanitySlippage: At the end of the game Walker was...not quite right, to put it lightly. He does ''not'' get better:
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* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: [[spoiler: Walker's still having hallucinations about dead people. The narration implies that the sandstorm is sentient and actively trying to hunt him down. And when Falcon-1 shows up at the end, Walker initially assumes that they are yet another hallucinaton.]]
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* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: [[spoiler: Walker's still having hallucinations about dead people. The narration implies that the sandstorm is sentient and actively trying to hunt him down. And when Falcon-1 shows up at the end, Walker initially assumes that they are yet another hallucinaton.]]]]
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A fanfic for ''VideoGame/SpecOpsTheLine'' written by Unfaithful. The morning after his disatrous mission, Walker awakes in Konrad's penthouse and attempts to make his way home from Dubai. But the city's not quite finished with him yet.
You can read it [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6983116 here]] on ArchiveOfOurOwn or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12236790/1/Afterglow here]] on FanfictionDotNet.
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!!Afterglow contains examples of:
* ArcWords: "Too stubborn to stay dead", and variations.
* ContinuityNod: The fic states that Walker was an Army Ranger before being selected for Delta Force. This is TruthInTelevision for the majority of Delta operators but it doubles as a nod to the earlier ''Spec Ops'' games, which featured Army Rangers as protagonists.
* DeadPersonConversation: Walker with [[spoiler:Lugo and Adams. Walker initially believes that Adams is still alive and in need of rescue. Walker is extremely wrong. When Lugo shows up, he doesn't bother pretending he's still alive.]]
* {{Determinator}}: Among Walker's {{Fatal Flaw}}s is his utter inability to give up, ever. [[spoiler:It's also implied to be the reason he won't kill himself.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: According to the fic, Walker's been suicidal since his NearDeathExperience in Kabul.[[spoiler:At one point he attempts suicide by deliberately walking into a sandstorm, but he backs out before it can kill him.]]
* DueToTheDead: Walker buries Lugo [[spoiler: and Adams]] in what's left of the refugee camp:
-->'''Walker''': Sleep tight, gentlemen. [[WeAllDieSomeday I'll see you again someday.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Walker claims that Adams' death was one of these, but his hallucination of Adams says it was SuicideByCop.]]
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Walker's in dire need of "a [[ShowerOfAngst shower]] and a beer or five". He eventually starts drinking his way through the Damned's leftover booze.
* TheInsomniac: Walker. When he actually manages to fall asleep, he has nightmares.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The sandstorm's treated this way in-uinverse; there are theories that it could be anything from an inexplicable natural phenomenon to the work of aliens to the literal wrath of God. Also, Walker tries to convince himself that his hallucinations are actually ghosts or some other kind of supernatural phenomena.
* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: You really can buy caviar-topped ice cream sundaes in Dubai.
* PornStash: Apparently, the Damned had a few hidden around the city.
* SanitySlippage: At the end of the game Walker was...not quite right, to put it lightly. He does ''not'' get better:
-->'''[[spoiler: Lugo]]''': I'm diggin' the [[BeardOfSorrow beard]], though. Very hobo chic. It brings out that [[ThousandYardStare hollow look in your eyes.]]
* RedemptionInTheRain: Attempted by Walker. It doesn't quite stick; he decides that the rain was intended for the dying refugees, not for him.
* RejectedApology: [[spoiler: Walker tries to apologize for causing Lugo's death and generally running their mission into the ground. Lugo's response? He brushes it off and tells Walker to kill himself.]]
-->'''[[spoiler: Lugo''']]: Just saying, you already killed off most of the city. Might as well pick up the spare.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Walker encounters a soldier from the Damned who is attempting to flee the city.
* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: [[spoiler: Walker's still having hallucinations about dead people. The narration implies that the sandstorm is sentient and actively trying to hunt him down. And when Falcon-1 shows up at the end, Walker initially assumes that they are yet another hallucinaton.]]
You can read it [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6983116 here]] on ArchiveOfOurOwn or [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12236790/1/Afterglow here]] on FanfictionDotNet.
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!!Afterglow contains examples of:
* ArcWords: "Too stubborn to stay dead", and variations.
* ContinuityNod: The fic states that Walker was an Army Ranger before being selected for Delta Force. This is TruthInTelevision for the majority of Delta operators but it doubles as a nod to the earlier ''Spec Ops'' games, which featured Army Rangers as protagonists.
* DeadPersonConversation: Walker with [[spoiler:Lugo and Adams. Walker initially believes that Adams is still alive and in need of rescue. Walker is extremely wrong. When Lugo shows up, he doesn't bother pretending he's still alive.]]
* {{Determinator}}: Among Walker's {{Fatal Flaw}}s is his utter inability to give up, ever. [[spoiler:It's also implied to be the reason he won't kill himself.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: According to the fic, Walker's been suicidal since his NearDeathExperience in Kabul.[[spoiler:At one point he attempts suicide by deliberately walking into a sandstorm, but he backs out before it can kill him.]]
* DueToTheDead: Walker buries Lugo [[spoiler: and Adams]] in what's left of the refugee camp:
-->'''Walker''': Sleep tight, gentlemen. [[WeAllDieSomeday I'll see you again someday.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Walker claims that Adams' death was one of these, but his hallucination of Adams says it was SuicideByCop.]]
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Walker's in dire need of "a [[ShowerOfAngst shower]] and a beer or five". He eventually starts drinking his way through the Damned's leftover booze.
* TheInsomniac: Walker. When he actually manages to fall asleep, he has nightmares.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The sandstorm's treated this way in-uinverse; there are theories that it could be anything from an inexplicable natural phenomenon to the work of aliens to the literal wrath of God. Also, Walker tries to convince himself that his hallucinations are actually ghosts or some other kind of supernatural phenomena.
* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: You really can buy caviar-topped ice cream sundaes in Dubai.
* PornStash: Apparently, the Damned had a few hidden around the city.
* SanitySlippage: At the end of the game Walker was...not quite right, to put it lightly. He does ''not'' get better:
-->'''[[spoiler: Lugo]]''': I'm diggin' the [[BeardOfSorrow beard]], though. Very hobo chic. It brings out that [[ThousandYardStare hollow look in your eyes.]]
* RedemptionInTheRain: Attempted by Walker. It doesn't quite stick; he decides that the rain was intended for the dying refugees, not for him.
* RejectedApology: [[spoiler: Walker tries to apologize for causing Lugo's death and generally running their mission into the ground. Lugo's response? He brushes it off and tells Walker to kill himself.]]
-->'''[[spoiler: Lugo''']]: Just saying, you already killed off most of the city. Might as well pick up the spare.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Walker encounters a soldier from the Damned who is attempting to flee the city.
* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: [[spoiler: Walker's still having hallucinations about dead people. The narration implies that the sandstorm is sentient and actively trying to hunt him down. And when Falcon-1 shows up at the end, Walker initially assumes that they are yet another hallucinaton.]]
