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''Achilles Heel'' is a ''VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon''-based story. It predates ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', so it doesn't take influence from it or it's canonical reunion scene.
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''Achilles Heel'' is a ''VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon''-based story. It predates ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', so it doesn't take influence from it or it's its canonical reunion scene.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Lusamine says this about herself. No matter her trauma over Mohn, that doesn't excuse her past behavior.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Lusamine says this about herself. No matter her trauma over Mohn, that doesn't excuse her past behavior.behavior and mistreatment of her children.
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* OhMyGods: During her rant towards Mohn, Lusamine states that she had previously been "losing [her] Arceus-damn mind".
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* OhMyGods: During "Arceus" gets used instead of "God". For example, during her rant towards Mohn, Lusamine states that she had previously been "losing [her] Arceus-damn mind".
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It's Lillie's birthday and she's celebrating with friends, Her mother Lusamine keeps her distance from the party because she doesn't feel comfortable being around Lillie or her peers. While outside, Lusamine is reunited with her amnesiac estranged husband Mohn, who came for Lillie's party.
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It's Lillie's fifteenth birthday and she's celebrating with friends, Her mother Lusamine keeps her distance from the party because she doesn't feel comfortable being around Lillie or her peers. While outside, Lusamine is reunited with her amnesiac estranged husband Mohn, who came for Lillie's party.
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* AffectionateNickname: Mohn used to call Lusamine "Lucy". However, it upsets her when he tries to call her it after so many years.
* DarkFic: Lusamine's psyche is given more depth. Even years after the events of the games, she's still early in her recovery and is deeply troubled by her past behavior.
* DarkFic: Lusamine's psyche is given more depth. Even years after the events of the games, she's still early in her recovery and is deeply troubled by her past behavior.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Lusamine says this about herself. No matter her trauma over Mohn, that doesn't excuse her past behavior.
* IHaveNoSon: Used non-conventionally when Lusamine wonders whether she has the right to call Gladion and Lillie her children after their upbringing.
* IHaveNoSon: Used non-conventionally when Lusamine wonders whether she has the right to call Gladion and Lillie her children after their upbringing.
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* OhMyGods: During her rant towards Mohn, Lusamine states that she had previously been "losing [her] Arceus-damn mind".
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* ParentalSubstitute:
** Growing up, Wicke was closer to being Gladion and Lillie's mother than their actual mother.
** Lusamine claims that Kukui and Burnet were better parents to Lillie in the three months Lillie lived with them than Lusamine ever was.
** Growing up, Wicke was closer to being Gladion and Lillie's mother than their actual mother.
** Lusamine claims that Kukui and Burnet were better parents to Lillie in the three months Lillie lived with them than Lusamine ever was.
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''Achilles Heel'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' oneshot that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9513713 here]].
It's Lillie's birthday and she's celebrating with friends, Her mother Lusamine keeps her distance from the party because she doesn't feel comfortable being around Lillie or her peers. While outside, Lusamine is reunited with her amnesiac estranged husband Mohn, who came for Lillie's party.
''Achilles Heel'' is a ''VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon''-based story. It predates ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', so it doesn't take influence from it or it's canonical reunion scene.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: Selene is named "Moon".
* DecompositeCharacter: Both the male and female protagonist co-exist as siblings.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Even a few years afterwards, Lusamine is still feeling the effects of the toxins. She's also more explicitly mentally ill than in canon.
* FamilyThemeNaming: The ''SM'' protagonists are siblings named "Sun" and "Moon".
* NamedByTheAdaptation: The male protagonist doesn't have a CanonName, but the fic goes with "Sun".
* ParentalNeglect: Lusamine didn't know how to raise a son, so she neglected Gladion more than Lillie.
* WeightWoe: It's implied that Lusamine has an eating disorder.
It's Lillie's birthday and she's celebrating with friends, Her mother Lusamine keeps her distance from the party because she doesn't feel comfortable being around Lillie or her peers. While outside, Lusamine is reunited with her amnesiac estranged husband Mohn, who came for Lillie's party.
''Achilles Heel'' is a ''VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon''-based story. It predates ''VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon'', so it doesn't take influence from it or it's canonical reunion scene.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: Selene is named "Moon".
* DecompositeCharacter: Both the male and female protagonist co-exist as siblings.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Even a few years afterwards, Lusamine is still feeling the effects of the toxins. She's also more explicitly mentally ill than in canon.
* FamilyThemeNaming: The ''SM'' protagonists are siblings named "Sun" and "Moon".
* NamedByTheAdaptation: The male protagonist doesn't have a CanonName, but the fic goes with "Sun".
* ParentalNeglect: Lusamine didn't know how to raise a son, so she neglected Gladion more than Lillie.
* WeightWoe: It's implied that Lusamine has an eating disorder.
