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** Jon reading Willem's letter, [[spoiler: while going through his belongings after the latter dies.]]
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** Jon reading Willem's letter, [[spoiler: while [[spoiler:while going through his belongings after the latter dies.]]dies]].
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** [[spoiler: Greatjon and Jorelle Mormont]] get married in the godswood of Winterfell, but the wording initially implies it was [[spoiler: Jon and Sansa]].
** Melissandre has [[spoiler: Gilly]] killed and glamors herself as her, but the wording initially implies it was [[spoiler: Val]].
** Melissandre has [[spoiler: Gilly]] killed and glamors herself as her, but the wording initially implies it was [[spoiler: Val]].
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** [[spoiler: Greatjon [[spoiler:Greatjon and Jorelle Mormont]] get married in the godswood of Winterfell, but the wording initially implies it was [[spoiler: Jon [[spoiler:Jon and Sansa]].
** Melissandre has[[spoiler: Gilly]] [[spoiler:Gilly]] killed and glamors herself as her, but the wording initially implies it was [[spoiler: Val]].[[spoiler:Val]].
** Melissandre has
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* CanonForeigner: Ser Willem Royce, a cousin of Lord Yohn who ends up becoming Jon's best friend.
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* CanonForeigner: CanonForeigner:
** Ser Willem Royce, a cousin of Lord Yohn who ends up becoming Jon's best friend.
** Ser Willem Royce, a cousin of Lord Yohn who ends up becoming Jon's best friend.
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* CoolSword: Robar's sword, which becomes the object of Jon's promise.
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* CoolSword: CoolSword:
** Robar's sword, which becomes the object of Jon's promise.
** Robar's sword, which becomes the object of Jon's promise.
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** As in canon, Lady Fornlorn, another Valyrian steel blade belonging to Ser Lynn Corbray. [[spoiler: It tranformes into Lightbringer after Corbray's execution/Jon's funeral.]].
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** As in canon, Lady Fornlorn, another Valyrian steel blade belonging to Ser Lynn Corbray. [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It tranformes into Lightbringer after Corbray's execution/Jon's funeral.]].]]
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* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Bloodraven tells Bran that Jon will die if he goes to the Wall. Bran does everything he can think of to protect his cousin, including possessing a giant to fight the Others with him. He thinks that he's changed Jon's fate, only for Bloodtaven to remind him that he said Jon would die if he ''went'' to the Wall, not ''at the Wall''. Sure enough, Jon is murdered on his way back to Winterfell, [[BackFromTheDead though it doesn't stick.]]]]
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* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Bloodraven tells Bran that Jon will is fated to die if he goes to the Wall. Bran does everything he can think of to protect his cousin, including possessing a giant to fight the Others with him. He thinks that he's changed Jon's fate, only for Bloodtaven Bloodraven to remind him that he said Jon would die if he ''went'' to the Wall, not ''at the Wall''. Sure enough, Jon is murdered on his way back to Winterfell, [[BackFromTheDead though it doesn't stick.]]]]
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* MonsterClown: Patchface, even more than in canon, since [[spoiler: he's the one who made the Grey fever spread faster by contaminating the drinking water, and kills several of Stannis's men including Davos, to drive Stannis [[SanitySlippage closer and closer to the edge.]] It's implied that there is no real Patchface, and the fool is just a mouthpiece for the Others.]]
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* MonsterClown: Patchface, even more than in canon, since [[spoiler: he's the one who made the Grey fever spread faster by contaminating the drinking water, and kills several of Stannis's men men, including Davos, to drive Stannis [[SanitySlippage closer and closer to the edge.]] It's implied that there is no real Patchface, and the fool is just a mouthpiece for the Others.]]
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* UnscrupulousHero: [[spoiler: Bran the Builder, who enslaved hundreds of giants in order to build the Wall and Winterfell.]]
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* UnscrupulousHero: UnscrupulousHero:
** [[spoiler: Bran the Builder, who enslaved hundreds of giants in order to build the Wall and Winterfell.]]
** [[spoiler: Bran the Builder, who enslaved hundreds of giants in order to build the Wall and Winterfell.]]
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler: Whitefyre]], the name of Jon's newly created noble house.
