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** Chapter 25 is the first after the hiatus ends and it's a doozy: [[spoiler: Reigen goes to the Mogami house fresh with the knowledge that Mob was there the whole time and Reigen left twice without him, gets his feelings out, then returns to his apartment to inform Mob that he was the one who killed Shishou, not Mob, and that Mob should call him "Shishou" now. Meanwhile, Ritsu gets caught breaking into an office building to search for Mob by Isa Maki which leads to...]]
** Chapter 26 [[spoiler: Isa has Ritsu meet her at a cafe to discuss his delinquent behavior and Ritsu, angry at her over his perception that she and the other police officers gave up on Mob, ends up revealing himself as a psychic to Isa and reveals his deals with spirits to find his brother plan to her. Isa then has to deal with her own guilt at letting Mob's case grow cold and how it pushed Ritsu down his current path.]]
** Chapters 28 and 29 reveal that [[spoiler: [[UnexpectedCharacter Ichi Mezato]] was also present in the cafe during the events of chapter 26 and now also know about Ritsu's powers and general bad decisions. She confronts Ritsu and attempts to blackmail him into telling her more, but the confrontation ends in a draw after Teru intervenes and deletes her blackmail pictures. After she threatens to confront Ritsu again without Teru present, Ritsu has her possessed by a member of his spirit hoard.]] And because [[spoiler: Mob and Reigen are also at the mall the previous scene takes place in, the spirit possessed Ichi spots Mob as the two of them leave.]]
** Chapter 25 is the first after the hiatus ends and it's a doozy: [[spoiler: Reigen goes to the Mogami house fresh with the knowledge that Mob was there the whole time and Reigen left twice without him, gets his feelings out, then returns to his apartment to inform Mob that he was the one who killed Shishou, not Mob, and that Mob should call him "Shishou" now. Meanwhile, Ritsu gets caught breaking into an office building to search for Mob by Isa Maki which leads to...]]
** Chapter 26 [[spoiler: Isa has Ritsu meet her at a cafe to discuss his delinquent behavior and Ritsu, angry at her over his perception that she and the other police officers gave up on Mob, ends up revealing himself as a psychic to Isa and reveals his deals with spirits to find his brother plan to her. Isa then has to deal with her own guilt at letting Mob's case grow cold and how it pushed Ritsu down his current path.]]
** Chapters 28 and 29 reveal that [[spoiler: [[UnexpectedCharacter Ichi Mezato]] was also present in the cafe during the events of chapter 26 and now also know about Ritsu's powers and general bad decisions. She confronts Ritsu and attempts to blackmail him into telling her more, but the confrontation ends in a draw after Teru intervenes and deletes her blackmail pictures. After she threatens to confront Ritsu again without Teru present, Ritsu has her possessed by a member of his spirit hoard.]] And because [[spoiler: Mob and Reigen are also at the mall the previous scene takes place in, the spirit possessed Ichi spots Mob as the two of them leave.]]
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* ImportantHaircut: In Chapter 26, [[spoiler: Mob allows Reigen to cut his hair, trading his Rapunzel Hair for his a long-ish bob as Mob isn't able to handle a full return to the trademark bowl-cut, bowl cut, but if you ask ONE he should have kept the hair and stayed is still a major step in that tower because Reigen doesn't even know how to use shampoo, let alone wash his hair, took her 26 chapters for mob to stop lookin grimy as fuck ayo!]].healing process]].
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* MessyHair: As a result of barrier-related trauma, Mob hasn't intentionally cut his hair in years. It's described in-story as being just below shoulder-length, though in fanart it can be wildly exaggerated until it more closely resembles RapunzelHair. It's messy enough that Mob can't get it properly clean, even once he has access to shampoo to use on it. [[spoiler: Later chapters resolve this as Mob becomes more comfortable enough around scissors to have his hair cut.]]
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** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:he has been trapped in a shitty fanfic, where people act like a he’s an uwu tragic hero when he’s just whitewashed savior that does everything for mob. All on Reigen's birthday, before season 2 aired no less!]]
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A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 [[https://youtu.be/0oaz5PlRCdg phantomrose96]].
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* ImportantHaircut: In Chapter 26, [[spoiler: Mob allows Reigen to cut his hair stating that he wants to make an effort to change his old self and get stronger. This results in him hair, trading his RapunzelHair Rapunzel Hair for his trademark bowl-cut]].bowl-cut, but if you ask ONE he should have kept the hair and stayed in that tower because Reigen doesn't even know how to use shampoo, let alone wash his hair, took her 26 chapters for mob to stop lookin grimy as fuck ayo!]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Most of Chapter 23 focuses on Reigen celebrating his birthday with Mob as they go out for delicious ramen and even agree to reopen the Spirits and Such business as a master and psy-kick duo. But when Reigen is preparing the cake to end such a fun night, [[spoiler: he goes into shock when he figures out that Mob's shinshou was none other than [[TheDreaded Mogami]]]].YOUR MOM]].
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** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:Mob had been kidnapped by Mogami and held in his basement, meaning he inadvertently left him there twice. He also learns Mob thinks that he and Mogami are friends because of this. All on Reigen's birthday, no less!]]
** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:Mob had been kidnapped by Mogami and held in his basement, meaning he inadvertently left him there twice. He also learns Mob thinks that he and Mogami are friends because of this. All on Reigen's birthday, no less!]]
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Chapter 25 has Teruki coldly questioning Ritsu if his plan of having the spirits send him to places with more dangerous spirits will get him anywhere close to finding his lost brother.
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* StrictParentsMakeSneakyKids: After losing their son, Mr. and Mrs. Kageyama are stricter with letting Ritsu do anything outside of the house in fear of losing him. But once he awakens his psychic powers, he begins to sneak out and create elaborate lies in order to use his powers, and supernatural allies, to look for Shigeo.
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* ISurrenderSuckers: Ritsu ''attempts'' to pull this during his fight with Teruki, only for the literal SuckerPunch to fail miserably.
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-> ''“My dear my dear I am having the hardest time my dear.” Teru spun her around, guiding her back where she came. “See my sister just adores my handknit crafts, and her 16th birthday is coming up soon. I have this new ribbed pattern I want to try out—a simple knit-3 purl-3, ribbing about yay-big—and I am just beside myself finding a color and texture to my liking— […]”''
->''“—I was thinking something cocoa colored. She has these gorgeous chocolate brown eyes—oh, quite like yours—that I think would sparkle marvelously with—oh now don’t be bashful! Your eyes are glimmering love. Anyway, a chalky cocoa, but not too dense hmm? I want the rib pattern to show through, and if the yarn is too frilly it hides the pattern. And I considered larger needle size but who needs a loosely-knit sweater my dear am I right?”''
-->-- Teru being reduced to a homophobic stereotype for #woke points.
A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6F5azNTnaOI phantomrose96]].
-> ''“My dear my dear I am having the hardest time my dear.” Teru spun her around, guiding her back where she came. “See my sister just adores my handknit crafts, and her 16th birthday is coming up soon. I have this new ribbed pattern I want to try out—a simple knit-3 purl-3, ribbing about yay-big—and I am just beside myself finding a color and texture to my liking— […]”''
->''“—I was thinking something cocoa colored. She has these gorgeous chocolate brown eyes—oh, quite like yours—that I think would sparkle marvelously with—oh now don’t be bashful! Your eyes are glimmering love. Anyway, a chalky cocoa, but not too dense hmm? I want the rib pattern to show through, and if the yarn is too frilly it hides the pattern. And I considered larger needle size but who needs a loosely-knit sweater my dear am I right?”''
-->-- Teru being reduced to a homophobic stereotype for #woke points.
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** Chapters 14-16 introduces Teru and has him and Ritsu get into a long, ugly fight. [[spoiler:fuck abot reigen lives ryoma baba is skinny]]
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** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:he has been trapped in a shitty fanfic that makes him a creepy incel and people act like a he’s an uwu tragic hero when he’s just white savior that does everything for mob. All before season 2 airs no less!]]
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the chapter 15 reveal that Jun might be pregnant.]]
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-> ''This is a world in which Mob and Reigen's paths have never crossed, in which 10-year-old Mob found psychic guidance in the form of the aging, retired tv personality Keiji Mogami, in which Reigen followed through on his plans to close the Spirits and Such Agency, in which a cruel twist of Mob's powers forces him to confront how dangerous he really is.''
-> ''10 year old Shigeo Kageyama has vanished, his trail instantly cold, and his case gathers dust in police archives as a kidnapping never solved. Four years pass before a chain of events causes his path to cross with that of the despondent, unfulfilled fake-psychic-turned-fake-investigator, Arataka Reigen. Reigen finds himself in over his head caring for an escaped victim of abuse who, for reasons unfathomable, has been taught to believe his very existence is a horrifically dangerous thing…''
-->-- The fic's summary.
-> ''10 year old Shigeo Kageyama has vanished, his trail instantly cold, and his case gathers dust in police archives as a kidnapping never solved. Four years pass before a chain of events causes his path to cross with that of the despondent, unfulfilled fake-psychic-turned-fake-investigator, Arataka Reigen. Reigen finds himself in over his head caring for an escaped victim of abuse who, for reasons unfathomable, has been taught to believe his very existence is a horrifically dangerous thing…''
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-> ''This is a world in which Mob ''“My dear my dear I am having the hardest time my dear.” Teru spun her around, guiding her back where she came. “See my sister just adores my handknit crafts, and Reigen's paths her 16th birthday is coming up soon. I have never crossed, in which 10-year-old Mob found psychic guidance in this new ribbed pattern I want to try out—a simple knit-3 purl-3, ribbing about yay-big—and I am just beside myself finding a color and texture to my liking— […]”''
->''“—I was thinking something cocoa colored. She has these gorgeous chocolate brown eyes—oh, quite like yours—that I think would sparkle marvelously with—oh now don’t be bashful! Your eyes are glimmering love. Anyway, a chalky cocoa, but not too dense hmm? I want theform of rib pattern to show through, and if the aging, retired tv personality Keiji Mogami, in which Reigen followed through on his plans to close yarn is too frilly it hides the Spirits and Such Agency, in which pattern. And I considered larger needle size but who needs a cruel twist of Mob's powers forces him to confront how dangerous he really is.''
-> ''10 year old Shigeo Kageyama has vanished, his trail instantly cold, and his case gathers dust in police archives as a kidnapping never solved. Four years pass before a chain of events causes his path to cross with that of the despondent, unfulfilled fake-psychic-turned-fake-investigator, Arataka Reigen. Reigen finds himself in over his head caring for an escaped victim of abuse who, for reasons unfathomable, has been taught to believe his very existence is a horrifically dangerous thing…''
loosely-knit sweater my dear am I right?”''
-->--The fic's summary.
Teru being reduced to a homophobic stereotype for #woke points.
->''“—I was thinking something cocoa colored. She has these gorgeous chocolate brown eyes—oh, quite like yours—that I think would sparkle marvelously with—oh now don’t be bashful! Your eyes are glimmering love. Anyway, a chalky cocoa, but not too dense hmm? I want the
-> ''10 year old Shigeo Kageyama has vanished, his trail instantly cold, and his case gathers dust in police archives as a kidnapping never solved. Four years pass before a chain of events causes his path to cross with that of the despondent, unfulfilled fake-psychic-turned-fake-investigator, Arataka Reigen. Reigen finds himself in over his head caring for an escaped victim of abuse who, for reasons unfathomable, has been taught to believe his very existence is a horrifically dangerous thing…''
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** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:Mob had been kidnapped by Mogami and held in his basement, meaning he inadvertently left him there twice. He also learns Mob thinks that he and Mogami are friends because of this. All on Reigen's birthday, no less!]]
** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:Mob had been kidnapped by Mogami and held in his basement, meaning he inadvertently left him there twice. He also learns Mob thinks that he and Mogami are friends because of this. All on Reigen's birthday, no less!]]
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A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6F5azNTnaOI phantomrose96]].
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Much of the tension of the plot arises from the fact that Tetsuo has no idea Reigen's currently pseudo-adopted the very same boy that's the subject of his own case. Additionally, Reigen has no idea that Mob's "Shishou" was actually Mogami and that Mob's barrier isn't a delusion.
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* BigBrotherWorship: As with canon, Ritsu looks up to Mob, despite not having seen him in four years. He explicitly refers to Mob as 'the strongest esper', not that he knows many for comparison.
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* BigBrotherWorship: As with canon, Ritsu looks up to Mob, despite not having seen him in four years. He explicitly refers to Mob as 'the strongest esper', not that he knows many for comparison.comparison[[note]] The event where ???% comes out when the three bullies threaten Mob and Ritsu does not happen in this fic, as Mob was kidnapped before this could occur, meaning that Ritsu never develops a fear of Mob[[/note]].
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* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 9, where Mob escapes Mogami's house and runs into Reigen.
** Chapter 12, which starts Ritsu's plot line with the spirit hoard.
** Chapters 14-16 introduces Teru and has him and Ritsu get into a long, ugly fight. [[spoiler:Often forgotten in this commotion is the chapter 15 reveal that Jun might be pregnant.]]
** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:Mob had been kidnapped by Mogami and held in his basement, meaning he inadvertently left him there twice. He also learns Mob thinks that he and Mogami are friends because of this. All on Reigen's birthday, no less!]]
** Chapter 9, where Mob escapes Mogami's house and runs into Reigen.
** Chapter 12, which starts Ritsu's plot line with the spirit hoard.
** Chapters 14-16 introduces Teru and has him and Ritsu get into a long, ugly fight. [[spoiler:Often forgotten in this commotion is the chapter 15 reveal that Jun might be pregnant.]]
** Chapter 23, where Reigen learns that [[spoiler:Mob had been kidnapped by Mogami and held in his basement, meaning he inadvertently left him there twice. He also learns Mob thinks that he and Mogami are friends because of this. All on Reigen's birthday, no less!]]
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** Mogami's got a much more potent one [[spoiler:around his corpse hanging in the attic]]
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* OutOfFocus: Isa Maki, who plays a supporting role in Act 1, has not had a point-of-view section since early Act 2.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Much of the tension of the plot arises from the fact that Tetsuo has no idea Reigen's currently pseudo-adopted the very same boy that's the subject of his own case. Additionally, Reigen has no idea that Mob's "Shishou" was actually Mogami and that Mob's barrier isn't a delusion.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Much of the tension of the plot arises from the fact that Tetsuo has no idea Reigen's currently pseudo-adopted the very same boy that's the subject of his own case. Additionally, Reigen has no idea that Mob's "Shishou" was actually Mogami and that Mob's barrier isn't a delusion.
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* OriginalCharacter: Jun and Tetsuo Isari, as well as the background police officers and Dr. Wong.
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: Since Mob believes that his barrier will destroy anything in its radius because he was told it would by Mogami, the barrier acts accordingly to his beliefs. It's discussed by Mogami who tells Reigen that psychics manifest whatever powers they think they have.
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* TheWoobie: Mob certainly qualifies as one.
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* BareHandedBladeBlock: In an attempt to stop Mogami from [[SlashedThroat cutting Tetsuo's throat]], Reigen grabs hold of the blade. While he succeeds, it does give him some nasty cuts on his fingers and palm as a result.
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* AfterActionPatchup: A non-romantic version between Ritsu and Teruki makes up the entirety of chapter 17,
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-> ''This is a world in which Mob and Reigen's paths have never crossed, in which 10-year-old Mob found psychic guidance in the form of the aging, retired tv personality Keiji Mogami, in which Reigen followed through on his plans to close the Spirits and Such Agency, in which a cruel twist of Mob's powers forces him to confront how dangerous he really is.''
-> ''10 year old Shigeo Kageyama has vanished, his trail instantly cold, and his case gathers dust in police archives as a kidnapping never solved. Four years pass before a chain of events causes his path to cross with that of the despondent, unfulfilled fake-psychic-turned-fake-investigator, Arataka Reigen. Reigen finds himself in over his head caring for an escaped victim of abuse who, for reasons unfathomable, has been taught to believe his very existence is a horrifically dangerous thing…''
-->-- The fic's summary.
A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 phantomrose96]].
It features Mob and Reigen under drastically changed circumstances - [[ForWantOfANail Mob never came to Reigen for advice that fateful day]]. Instead, he's the victim of a four-year-long kidnapping and Reigen has become a private investigator for hire well on his way to becoming jaded with his line of work. That is, until a client walks in, asking him to tail her husband for fear of an affair...
It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8472670/chapters/19413469 here]].
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!! This show provides examples of:
* AfterActionPatchup: A non-romantic version between Ritsu and Teruki makes up the entirety of chapter 17,
* BigBrotherWorship: As with canon, Ritsu looks up to Mob, despite not having seen him in four years. He explicitly refers to Mob as 'the strongest esper', not that he knows many for comparison.
* BreakTheCutie: Essentially the basis of the entire fic - Mob goes from a cute and cheerful ten-year-old to a broken fourteen-year-old who's terrified to get close to ''anyone'' for fear of hurting or killing them by accident.
* CasualDangerDialog: Teruki keeps this up through the entire fight with Ritsu. For example...
--> '''Teruki:''' ''[having just slammed Ritsu into the goalpost of a soccer goal from across the length of the field]'' That's a shame. I usually score with those shots.
* CreepyBasement: Mob's kept in the basement of Mogami's house, which qualifies as this because of the whole 'basement of a condemned house with a 25-years-dead corpse strung up in one of the rooms' thing.
* CurbStompBattle: Teruki vs. Ritsu very rapidly turns into something between this and NoHoldsBarredBeatdown, with Ritsu inflicting only minor injuries on Teruki while ending up with a whole laundry list of his own injuries due to lacking a barrier or any real experience with using his powers for combat.
* DemonicPossession: More like Evil Spirit Possession, but Mogami's possession of Tetsuo counts. He's doing it to buy food and other supplies for Mob.
* DramaticDislocation: Ritsu dislocates his shoulder partway through the fight with Teruki as a result of accidentally grabbing his tie. Teruki pops it back into place for him after the fight using his psychic powers.
* DramaticIrony: Mob tells Reigen his apartment is much better than his 'Shishou's' house, and Reigen thinks of Mogami's house as a comparison - without realising that that's ''exactly'' the place Mob is referring to.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Mob, as a result of four years in the basement where the only window's a slit high up on the wall. Might even classify as LooksLikeCesare.
* EvilMentor: Mogami. He convinces Mob that he's dangerous and preys on his trust (you could even say he [[TitleDrop breaches it]]) to lock him in his basement... could you really call him anything else?
* {{Fingore}}: Reigen ends up cutting the fingers and palm of his right hand open while trying to keep Mogami from cutting Tetsuo's throat.
* HopeSpot: Chapter 5 ends with Reigen hearing noises from the basement... and doing nothing about them, as he has other things to deal with. Had he investigated the noises, he'd have found Mob a lot sooner.
* InstantDeathRadius: Mob's barrier functions this way, shredding any and all organic matter that tries to pass through it.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Ritsu ''attempts'' to pull this during his fight with Teruki, only for the literal SuckerPunch to fail miserably.
* MessyHair: As a result of barrier-related trauma, Mob hasn't intentionally cut his hair in years. It's described in-story as being just below shoulder-length, though in fanart it can be wildly exaggerated until it more closely resembles RapunzelHair. It's messy enough that Mob can't get it properly clean, even once he has access to shampoo to use on it.
* MistakenForCheating: Jun initially hires Reigen to investigate Tetsuo, her husband, for fear that he's cheating on her as his behaviour's taken a turn for the worse. It turns out he was 'just' possessed, as opposed to sleeping with another woman.
* MustHaveCaffeine: To avoid having to sleep - which reminds him too much of when Mogami was in control - Tetsuo turns to a constant supply of coffee to try and keep himself awake.
* OriginalCharacter: Jun and Tetsuo Isari, as well as the background police officers and Dr. Wong.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Much of the tension of the plot arises from the fact that Tetsuo has no idea Reigen's currently pseudo-adopted the very same boy that's the subject of his own case.
* PowerIncontinence: To an even more severe degree than in canon - Mob's barrier is uncontrollable and shreds anything living that tries to pass through it. He can't consciously turn it off, and it's unclear what actually deactivates it.
* PrivateDetective: After an incident involving a possessed client with a knife, Reigen closes Spirits and Such and re-opens it as a private detective agency, following through on plans mentioned - but not ultimately followed - in canon.
* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic: Reigen in particular is prone to interrupting himself, backpedaling, and going off on slight tangents, especially when caught off-guard.
* RuggedScar: Reigen has one on his cheek, as a result of a confrontation with a possessed, knife-wielding client. He closed Spirits and Such the day after.
* TakeMeInstead: In an attempt to make Mogami stop possessing Tetsuo, Reigen offers himself as an alternative on the condition that Reigen gets to make one last attempt at attacking him. Luckily for him, that attack succeeds.
* UnfamiliarCeiling: Waking up after his first night at Reigen's place leaves Mob bewildered by the softness of his bedding before he realises where he is.
* TheWoobie: Mob certainly qualifies as one.
* YourMindMakesItReal: It's heavily implied that Mob's barrier is only the InstantDeathRadius it is because Mogami ''told'' him it would be. Mogami also uses this to check whether or not Reigen's bluffing about being a psychic, by telling him his own powers will burn him when Mogami approaches.
-->'''Mogami:''' Psychics are impressionable. Psychics will manifest the powers they’re led to believe they have. All I had to do was tell you that your powers would burn you, and if you believed me, you would burn.
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-> ''This is a world in which Mob and Reigen's paths have never crossed, in which 10-year-old Mob found psychic guidance in the form of the aging, retired tv personality Keiji Mogami, in which Reigen followed through on his plans to close the Spirits and Such Agency, in which a cruel twist of Mob's powers forces him to confront how dangerous he really is.''
-> ''10 year old Shigeo Kageyama has vanished, his trail instantly cold, and his case gathers dust in police archives as a kidnapping never solved. Four years pass before a chain of events causes his path to cross with that of the despondent, unfulfilled fake-psychic-turned-fake-investigator, Arataka Reigen. Reigen finds himself in over his head caring for an escaped victim of abuse who, for reasons unfathomable, has been taught to believe his very existence is a horrifically dangerous thing…''
-->-- The fic's summary.
A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 phantomrose96]].
It features Mob and Reigen under drastically changed circumstances - [[ForWantOfANail Mob never came to Reigen for advice that fateful day]]. Instead, he's the victim of a four-year-long kidnapping and Reigen has become a private investigator for hire well on his way to becoming jaded with his line of work. That is, until a client walks in, asking him to tail her husband for fear of an affair...
It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/8472670/chapters/19413469 here]].
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!! This show provides examples of:
* AfterActionPatchup: A non-romantic version between Ritsu and Teruki makes up the entirety of chapter 17,
* BigBrotherWorship: As with canon, Ritsu looks up to Mob, despite not having seen him in four years. He explicitly refers to Mob as 'the strongest esper', not that he knows many for comparison.
* BreakTheCutie: Essentially the basis of the entire fic - Mob goes from a cute and cheerful ten-year-old to a broken fourteen-year-old who's terrified to get close to ''anyone'' for fear of hurting or killing them by accident.
* CasualDangerDialog: Teruki keeps this up through the entire fight with Ritsu. For example...
--> '''Teruki:''' ''[having just slammed Ritsu into the goalpost of a soccer goal from across the length of the field]'' That's a shame. I usually score with those shots.
* CreepyBasement: Mob's kept in the basement of Mogami's house, which qualifies as this because of the whole 'basement of a condemned house with a 25-years-dead corpse strung up in one of the rooms' thing.
* CurbStompBattle: Teruki vs. Ritsu very rapidly turns into something between this and NoHoldsBarredBeatdown, with Ritsu inflicting only minor injuries on Teruki while ending up with a whole laundry list of his own injuries due to lacking a barrier or any real experience with using his powers for combat.
* DemonicPossession: More like Evil Spirit Possession, but Mogami's possession of Tetsuo counts. He's doing it to buy food and other supplies for Mob.
* DramaticDislocation: Ritsu dislocates his shoulder partway through the fight with Teruki as a result of accidentally grabbing his tie. Teruki pops it back into place for him after the fight using his psychic powers.
* DramaticIrony: Mob tells Reigen his apartment is much better than his 'Shishou's' house, and Reigen thinks of Mogami's house as a comparison - without realising that that's ''exactly'' the place Mob is referring to.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Mob, as a result of four years in the basement where the only window's a slit high up on the wall. Might even classify as LooksLikeCesare.
* EvilMentor: Mogami. He convinces Mob that he's dangerous and preys on his trust (you could even say he [[TitleDrop breaches it]]) to lock him in his basement... could you really call him anything else?
* {{Fingore}}: Reigen ends up cutting the fingers and palm of his right hand open while trying to keep Mogami from cutting Tetsuo's throat.
* HopeSpot: Chapter 5 ends with Reigen hearing noises from the basement... and doing nothing about them, as he has other things to deal with. Had he investigated the noises, he'd have found Mob a lot sooner.
* InstantDeathRadius: Mob's barrier functions this way, shredding any and all organic matter that tries to pass through it.
* ISurrenderSuckers: Ritsu ''attempts'' to pull this during his fight with Teruki, only for the literal SuckerPunch to fail miserably.
* MessyHair: As a result of barrier-related trauma, Mob hasn't intentionally cut his hair in years. It's described in-story as being just below shoulder-length, though in fanart it can be wildly exaggerated until it more closely resembles RapunzelHair. It's messy enough that Mob can't get it properly clean, even once he has access to shampoo to use on it.
* MistakenForCheating: Jun initially hires Reigen to investigate Tetsuo, her husband, for fear that he's cheating on her as his behaviour's taken a turn for the worse. It turns out he was 'just' possessed, as opposed to sleeping with another woman.
* MustHaveCaffeine: To avoid having to sleep - which reminds him too much of when Mogami was in control - Tetsuo turns to a constant supply of coffee to try and keep himself awake.
* OriginalCharacter: Jun and Tetsuo Isari, as well as the background police officers and Dr. Wong.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Much of the tension of the plot arises from the fact that Tetsuo has no idea Reigen's currently pseudo-adopted the very same boy that's the subject of his own case.
* PowerIncontinence: To an even more severe degree than in canon - Mob's barrier is uncontrollable and shreds anything living that tries to pass through it. He can't consciously turn it off, and it's unclear what actually deactivates it.
* PrivateDetective: After an incident involving a possessed client with a knife, Reigen closes Spirits and Such and re-opens it as a private detective agency, following through on plans mentioned - but not ultimately followed - in canon.
* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic: Reigen in particular is prone to interrupting himself, backpedaling, and going off on slight tangents, especially when caught off-guard.
* RuggedScar: Reigen has one on his cheek, as a result of a confrontation with a possessed, knife-wielding client. He closed Spirits and Such the day after.
* TakeMeInstead: In an attempt to make Mogami stop possessing Tetsuo, Reigen offers himself as an alternative on the condition that Reigen gets to make one last attempt at attacking him. Luckily for him, that attack succeeds.
* UnfamiliarCeiling: Waking up after his first night at Reigen's place leaves Mob bewildered by the softness of his bedding before he realises where he is.
* TheWoobie: Mob certainly qualifies as one.
* YourMindMakesItReal: It's heavily implied that Mob's barrier is only the InstantDeathRadius it is because Mogami ''told'' him it would be. Mogami also uses this to check whether or not Reigen's bluffing about being a psychic, by telling him his own powers will burn him when Mogami approaches.
-->'''Mogami:''' Psychics are impressionable. Psychics will manifest the powers they’re led to believe they have. All I had to do was tell you that your powers would burn you, and if you believed me, you would burn.
