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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed on the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take of the town drunk for the night.
On the bright though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.
On the bright though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.
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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed on the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.
On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.
On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.
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* TheBigGuy: Melon Rind is the Gentle Giant type.
* BrainsAndBrawn: Trixie and Melon are the brains and brawn respectively, though mildly subverted both ways, as Trixie is just far more experienced and less naive than Melon Rind and though Melon is stronger physically, Trixie more then makes up for it with her magic.
* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Melon becomes this to some extent.
* BrainsAndBrawn: Trixie and Melon are the brains and brawn respectively, though mildly subverted both ways, as Trixie is just far more experienced and less naive than Melon Rind and though Melon is stronger physically, Trixie more then makes up for it with her magic.
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* AntiHero: Trixie is ''not'' interested in being a guard or the work that entails, only joining to get out being punished for the Alicorn Amulet incident. But when the town she is station in might be in danger, she does step up to save the day, even if through some unconventional methods.
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* RememberWhenWeBlewUpTheTown: RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: Trixie taking an entire town hostage and personally banishing the Princess of Friendship is brought up repeatedly. Melon Rind is astonished when he first hers this, but the other guards are used to her and quickly brush it off.
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We Rent the Night, is a Mystery/BuddyCop comedy My Little Pony Fanfic, written by TotallyNotABrony.
After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed on the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take of the town drunk for the night.
On the bright though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.
* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to a naïve and kind hearted farm kid.
* AwesomeEgo: Trixie of course, though six months at remote outpost has really mellowed her out, the old show mare in her still shines through when she wants to.
* {{Alcoholic}}: Strawberry Rhyme is the town drunk.
BatManGambit: How Trixie lures in their first suspect.
* BuddyCop: The bulk of the story, between Trixie and Melon Rind.
* BunnyEaredLawyer: Lt. Mirror is a very eccentric leader.
* CharacterDevelopment: Trixie, both before and during the story. Being stationed on a remote island with nothing to do, but try and stave off boredom while waiting for the end of her enlistment in four years, has left her a miserable and cynical shell of her former self. But the mystery and having a new partner to mentor, eventually gives her enough drive to become a confident and resourceful guard, who would even consider making the situation permanent.
* CasanovaWannabe: Melon got sent to the island for pulling a “Flash Sentry”.
--> ‘’’Trixie:(without missing a beat) Which princess did you hit on?’’’
* DeadPannedSnarker: Trixie and her fellow Night Guard, sans Melon Rind.
* DudeWheresMyRespect:
-->’’’Trixie: Does nopony take the Great and Powerful Trixie seriously!?’’’
*DevilInPlainSight: The cult leader is [[spoiler: the lady who sales salt.]]
* GentleGiant: Melon Rind is a very large and powerful stallion, but is a sweet guy at heart.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Pretty much all of the Night Guard on the island, including Trixie, are this.
* JourneyToFindOneself: Down played, Trixie unknowingly ends up doing this, throughout the story, changing from a JerkAss, who just wants to get her tour over with, to a confident guard. Lt. Mirror even laminates this:
-->’’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.
* LargeHam: Trixie, though being stationed on Wash Margin for two weeks has ‘’really’’ dulled her attitude, she still has her moments.
* MagnificentBastard: Trixie demonstrates this trope on Melon to show her new partner, just how naïve he is and how he needs to wise up. [[spoiler: Trixie later fools the BigBad, into thinking her phony god of destruction was real and confessing to her crimes.]]
* NiceGuy: Melon Rind.
* NaiveNewComer: Again, Melon.
* ObfuscatingInsanity: Lt. Mirror is implied to be doing this.
*OhCrap: The BigBad has one of these, when the EvilGod come after. [[spoiler: It’s just an illusion created by Trixie.]]
*[[spoiler: PhonyReligion: The cult turns out to be a sham, to draw in UnwittingPawns, for a smuggling operation.]]
* ReassignedToAntarctica: Apparently why anyone’s stationed at Camp Driftwood. Other than Trixie and Melon, Corporal Dusty Daze and Private Meteor, tried to seduce a senior officer and knocked over Celestia’s cake and tried to blame on her bird, respectively.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror are both this, in their own way and encourage Trixie to, become a better guard.
* RememberWhenWeBlewUpTheTown: Trixie taking an entire town hostage and personally banishing the Princess of Friendship is brought up repeatedly. Melon Rind is astonished when he first hers this, but the other guards are used to her and quickly brush it off.
*RoomFullOfCrazy: One of the cult members has one of these.
*ShellGame: Trixie use one to show Melon Rind, just how much he needs to learn.
‘’’Trixie: It’s not under any of them. You ‘’are’’ an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.’’’
* TitleDrop: The ending.
*TookALevelInBadass: Trixie goes from a miserable and uncaring guard, who is just trying to pass to time, until she can leave, into a confident and resourceful soldier, with lots of potential in the guard.
*UnwittingPawn: The cult members turn out to be [[spoiler: innocent ponies, who have been brainwashed into being part of an illegal smuggling operation.]]
* VoluntaryShapeShifting: All Night Guards are given this ability with their amour, though only (Commander) actually uses it.
*YourAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Both Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror give Trixie this, though she doesn’t listen at first.
After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed on the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take of the town drunk for the night.
On the bright though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.
* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to a naïve and kind hearted farm kid.
* AwesomeEgo: Trixie of course, though six months at remote outpost has really mellowed her out, the old show mare in her still shines through when she wants to.
* {{Alcoholic}}: Strawberry Rhyme is the town drunk.
BatManGambit: How Trixie lures in their first suspect.
* BuddyCop: The bulk of the story, between Trixie and Melon Rind.
* BunnyEaredLawyer: Lt. Mirror is a very eccentric leader.
* CharacterDevelopment: Trixie, both before and during the story. Being stationed on a remote island with nothing to do, but try and stave off boredom while waiting for the end of her enlistment in four years, has left her a miserable and cynical shell of her former self. But the mystery and having a new partner to mentor, eventually gives her enough drive to become a confident and resourceful guard, who would even consider making the situation permanent.
* CasanovaWannabe: Melon got sent to the island for pulling a “Flash Sentry”.
--> ‘’’Trixie:(without missing a beat) Which princess did you hit on?’’’
* DeadPannedSnarker: Trixie and her fellow Night Guard, sans Melon Rind.
* DudeWheresMyRespect:
-->’’’Trixie: Does nopony take the Great and Powerful Trixie seriously!?’’’
*DevilInPlainSight: The cult leader is [[spoiler: the lady who sales salt.]]
* GentleGiant: Melon Rind is a very large and powerful stallion, but is a sweet guy at heart.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Pretty much all of the Night Guard on the island, including Trixie, are this.
* JourneyToFindOneself: Down played, Trixie unknowingly ends up doing this, throughout the story, changing from a JerkAss, who just wants to get her tour over with, to a confident guard. Lt. Mirror even laminates this:
-->’’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.
* LargeHam: Trixie, though being stationed on Wash Margin for two weeks has ‘’really’’ dulled her attitude, she still has her moments.
* MagnificentBastard: Trixie demonstrates this trope on Melon to show her new partner, just how naïve he is and how he needs to wise up. [[spoiler: Trixie later fools the BigBad, into thinking her phony god of destruction was real and confessing to her crimes.]]
* NiceGuy: Melon Rind.
* NaiveNewComer: Again, Melon.
* ObfuscatingInsanity: Lt. Mirror is implied to be doing this.
*OhCrap: The BigBad has one of these, when the EvilGod come after. [[spoiler: It’s just an illusion created by Trixie.]]
*[[spoiler: PhonyReligion: The cult turns out to be a sham, to draw in UnwittingPawns, for a smuggling operation.]]
* ReassignedToAntarctica: Apparently why anyone’s stationed at Camp Driftwood. Other than Trixie and Melon, Corporal Dusty Daze and Private Meteor, tried to seduce a senior officer and knocked over Celestia’s cake and tried to blame on her bird, respectively.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror are both this, in their own way and encourage Trixie to, become a better guard.
* RememberWhenWeBlewUpTheTown: Trixie taking an entire town hostage and personally banishing the Princess of Friendship is brought up repeatedly. Melon Rind is astonished when he first hers this, but the other guards are used to her and quickly brush it off.
*RoomFullOfCrazy: One of the cult members has one of these.
*ShellGame: Trixie use one to show Melon Rind, just how much he needs to learn.
‘’’Trixie: It’s not under any of them. You ‘’are’’ an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.’’’
* TitleDrop: The ending.
*TookALevelInBadass: Trixie goes from a miserable and uncaring guard, who is just trying to pass to time, until she can leave, into a confident and resourceful soldier, with lots of potential in the guard.
*UnwittingPawn: The cult members turn out to be [[spoiler: innocent ponies, who have been brainwashed into being part of an illegal smuggling operation.]]
* VoluntaryShapeShifting: All Night Guards are given this ability with their amour, though only (Commander) actually uses it.
*YourAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Both Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror give Trixie this, though she doesn’t listen at first.