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* [[OriginalCharacter OC]]: Though cannon characters are mentioned, Trixie is the only one to appear in the story, while the rest of the cast is made up entirely of OriginalCharacters.

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* [[OriginalCharacter OC]]: %%* OriginalCharacter: Though cannon canon characters are mentioned, Trixie is the only one to appear in the story, while the rest of the cast is made up entirely of OriginalCharacters.original characters.



* RoomFullOfCrazy: One of the cult members has one of these.

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* ShellGame: Trixie uses one to show Melon Rind just how much he needs to learn.
-->'''Trixie''': It's not under any of them. You are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.
* TitleDrop: The ending.

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* %%* ShellGame: Trixie uses one to show Melon Rind just how much he needs to learn.
-->'''Trixie''': %%-->'''Trixie''': It's not under any of them. You are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.
* %%* TitleDrop: The ending.
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On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperienced partner to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence that a cult worshiping a god of destruction may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.

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On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the ''the new girl’’, girl'', while giving her a new and inexperienced partner to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence that a cult worshiping a god of destruction may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.



--> '''Trixie:''' “What’s wrong with taking pride in being a hero?”
--> '''Strawberry:''' “If you’re truly a hero, or good at magic, or your job, or whatever, others will tell you.”

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--> '''Trixie:''' “What’s "What's wrong with taking pride in being a hero?”
hero?"
--> '''Strawberry:''' “If you’re "If you're truly a hero, or good at magic, or your job, or whatever, others will tell you."



* CasanovaWannabe: Melon got sent to the island for pulling a “Flash Sentry”.

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* CasanovaWannabe: Melon got sent to the island for pulling a “Flash Sentry”."Flash Sentry".



* OhCrap: The BigBad has one of these, when the [[EvilGod God Of Destruction]] comes after her. [[spoiler:It’s just an illusion created by Trixie.]]
* ReassignedToAntarctica: Apparently why anyone’s stationed at Camp Driftwood. Other than Trixie and Melon, Corporal Dusty Daze and Private Meteor, tried to seduce a senior officer and knocked over Celestia’s cake and tried to blame on her bird, respectively.

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* OhCrap: The BigBad has one of these, when the [[EvilGod God Of Destruction]] comes after her. [[spoiler:It’s [[spoiler:It's just an illusion created by Trixie.]]
* ReassignedToAntarctica: Apparently why anyone’s anyone's stationed at Camp Driftwood. Other than Trixie and Melon, Corporal Dusty Daze and Private Meteor, tried to seduce a senior officer and knocked over Celestia’s Celestia's cake and tried to blame on her bird, respectively.



-->'''Trixie''': It’s not under any of them. You are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.

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-->'''Trixie''': It’s It's not under any of them. You are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.



*YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Both Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror give Trixie this, though she doesn’t listen at first.

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*YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Both Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror give Trixie this, though she doesn’t doesn't listen at first.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to be a naive and kind-hearted farm kid.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to be a naive and kind-hearted farm kid.
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Another sequel,''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/433774/return-the-night-or-no-deposit Return the Night, or no Deposit]]'', was released in March 2019.
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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given the circumstances, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed in the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.

On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshiping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.

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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given the circumstances, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking lowest-ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed in the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.

On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, inexperienced partner to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, evidence that a cult worshiping a god of destruction, destruction may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.



!!''We Rent The Night'' contains examples of

* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to a naive and kind hearted farm kid.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to be a naive and kind hearted kind-hearted farm kid.



* AntiHero: Trixie is ''not'' interested in being a guard or the work that entails, only joining to get out being punished for the Alicorn Amulet incident. But when the town she is station in might be in danger, she does step up to save the day, even if through some unconventional methods.

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* AntiHero: Trixie is ''not'' interested in being a guard or the work that entails, only joining to get out of being punished for the Alicorn Amulet incident. But when the town she is station stationed in might be in danger, she does step up to save the day, even if through some unconventional methods.



* CharacterDevelopment: Trixie, both before and during the story. Being stationed on a remote island with nothing to do, but try and stave off boredom while waiting for the end of her enlistment in four years, has left her a miserable and cynical shell of her former self. But the mystery and having a new partner to mentor, eventually gives her enough drive to become a confident and resourceful guard, who would even consider making the situation permanent.

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* CharacterDevelopment: Trixie, both before and during the story. Being stationed on a remote island with nothing to do, do but try and stave off boredom while waiting for the end of her enlistment in four years, has left her a miserable and cynical shell of her former self. But the mystery mystery, and having a new partner to mentor, eventually gives her enough drive to become a confident and resourceful guard, who would even consider making the situation permanent.



* DevilInPlainSight: The cult leader is [[spoiler: the lady who sales salt.]]

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* DevilInPlainSight: The cult leader is [[spoiler: the lady mare who sales sells salt.]]
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We Rent the Night, is a Mystery/[[BuddyCopShow BuddyCop]] comedy My Little Pony Fanfic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/totallynotabrony TotallyNotABrony]], that can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/298293/we-rent-the-night here.]]

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\nWe ''We Rent the Night, Night'', is a Mystery/[[BuddyCopShow BuddyCop]] comedy My 'My Little Pony Fanfic, Pony'' fanfic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/totallynotabrony TotallyNotABrony]], that can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/298293/we-rent-the-night here.]]

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* AccidentallyAccurate: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had to crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they find gum.

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!!We !!''We Rent The Night Night'' contains examples of
* AccidentallyAccurate: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had to crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they find gum.


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* JokeAndReceive: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had to crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they find gum.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they.

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* AccidentallyAccurate: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had to crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they.they find gum.
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* TheAlcoholic: Strawberry Rhyme is the town drunk.



* TheAlcoholic: Strawberry Rhyme is the town drunk.

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* TheAlcoholic: ArmorPiercingResponse: During Trixie's conversation with Strawberry Rhyme is the town drunk.drunk near the end of the story, the latter manages to throw Trixie a line that shakes her to her very core:
--> '''Trixie:''' “What’s wrong with taking pride in being a hero?”
--> '''Strawberry:''' “If you’re truly a hero, or good at magic, or your job, or whatever, others will tell you.”
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* AccidentallyRight: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they.

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* AccidentallyRight: AccidentallyAccurate: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they.
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* AccidentallyRight: Upon seeing the safe she and her partner had crack was made by the [[SnakeOilSalesman Flim Flam brothers]], Trixie sarcastically says she'd be surprised if it wasn't being held together by gum. Sure enough, when they crack it open they.


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* GoodCopBadCop: Lt. Mirror has Trixie and herself do this, while interrogating a cult member... without making clear which is which.


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* InsistentTerminology:
--> '''Melon:''' Aren't you a con artist?
--> '''Trixie:''' I'm an illusionist.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Lt. Mirror is a very eccentric leader.

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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Lt. Mirror is a very rather eccentric leader. commander: Mirror is introduced hanging upside down from a water pipe in her office for no discernable reason, smokes pieces of string, asks Trixie to do magic tricks for her, casually greets her subordinates, etc. But is still shown to be wise leader, when she has to be.



* UnholyMatrimony: The two cult members we meet, both married and old childhood sweethearts. [[spoiler: It is revealed that the cult leader has been manipulating them both, since they were children.]]

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* UnholyMatrimony: The two Two of the cult members we meet, are both married and old childhood sweethearts. [[spoiler: It is revealed that the cult leader has been manipulating them both, since they were children.]]
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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But the given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed in the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.

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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But the given circumstance, the circumstances, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed in the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.
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Has a sequel, ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/317811/play-stupid-games-win-stupid-prizes Play Stupid Games, Win Stupid Prizes]]'', which focuses on the side character Melon Rind after a TimeSkip.
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!!We Rent The Night contains examples of



*YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Both Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror give Trixie this, though she doesn’t listen at first.

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*YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Both Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror give Trixie this, though she doesn’t listen at first.first.
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* LargeHam: Trixie, though being stationed on Wash Margin for two weeks has ''really'' dulled her attitude, she still has her moments.

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* LargeHam: Trixie, though being stationed on Wash Margin at Camp Driftwood for two weeks six months has ''really'' dulled her attitude, she still has her moments.
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* BaitAndSwitch: "It was be locked up somewhere, nopony could here her talk about herself or go to prison."

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* BaitAndSwitch: "It was be locked up somewhere, somewhere nopony could here hear her talk about herself or go to prison."



--> '''Trixie''':(without missing a beat) Which princess did you hit on?’’’

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--> '''Trixie''':(without '''Trixie:'''(without missing a beat) Which princess did you hit on?’’’ on?



-->’’’Trixie: Does nopony take the Great and Powerful Trixie seriously!?’’’

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-->’’’Trixie: -->'''Trixie:''' Does nopony take the Great and Powerful Trixie seriously!?’’’seriously!?



* JourneyToFindOneself: Down played, Trixie unknowingly ends up doing this, throughout the story, changing from a JerkAss, who just wants to get her tour over with, to a confident guard. Lt. Mirror even laminates this:
-->’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.
* LargeHam: Trixie, though being stationed on Wash Margin for two weeks has ‘’really’’ dulled her attitude, she still has her moments.

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* JourneyToFindOneself: Down played, Downplayed, Trixie unknowingly ends up doing this, this throughout the story, changing from a JerkAss, JerkAss who just wants to get her tour over with, to a confident guard. Lt. Mirror even laminates lampshades this:
-->’’Lt. Mirror: -->'''Lt. Mirror:''' You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.
* LargeHam: Trixie, though being stationed on Wash Margin for two weeks has ‘’really’’ ''really'' dulled her attitude, she still has her moments.



* ScamReligion: [[spoiler:The cult turns out to be a sham, to draw in UnwittingPawns, for a smuggling operation.]]
* ScoobyDooHoax: [[spoiler:The cult worshiping the ''God of Destruction'', turns to just be an elaborate scam, used to recruit pawns in a smuggling operation.]]

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* ScamReligion: [[spoiler:The cult turns out to be a sham, to draw in UnwittingPawns, in UnwittingPawn(s) for a smuggling operation.]]
* ScoobyDooHoax: [[spoiler:The cult worshiping worshipping the ''God of Destruction'', turns out to just be an elaborate scam, scam used to recruit pawns in a smuggling operation.]]
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--> ‘’’Trixie:(without missing a beat) Which princess did you hit on?’’’

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--> ‘’’Trixie:(without '''Trixie''':(without missing a beat) Which princess did you hit on?’’’



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror are both this, in their own way and encourage Trixie to, become a better guard.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Sergeant Hasta and Lt. Mirror are both this, in their own way and encourage Trixie to, to become a better guard.



-->'''Trixie: It’s not under any of them. You are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.

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-->'''Trixie: -->'''Trixie''': It’s not under any of them. You are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.



* TookALevelInBadass: Trixie goes from a miserable and uncaring guard, who is just trying to pass to time, until she can leave, into a confident and resourceful soldier, with lots of potential in the guard.

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* TookALevelInBadass: Trixie goes from a miserable and uncaring guard, who is just trying to pass to the time, until she can leave, into a confident and resourceful soldier, with lots of potential in the guard.
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* ShellGame: Trixie use one to show Melon Rind, just how much he needs to learn.
-->‘’’Trixie: It’s not under any of them. You ‘’are’’ an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.’’’

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* ShellGame: Trixie use uses one to show Melon Rind, Rind just how much he needs to learn.
-->‘’’Trixie: -->'''Trixie: It’s not under any of them. You ‘’are’’ are an imbecile because you let yourself get baited into an argument, let me pick the game, and forgot that a unicorn can cheat using magic.’’’



* UnholyMatrimony: The two cult members we meet, both married and old childhood sweethearts. [[spoiler: It is revealed that the cult leader has been manipulating them both, sense they children.]]

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* UnholyMatrimony: The two cult members we meet, both married and old childhood sweethearts. [[spoiler: It is revealed that the cult leader has been manipulating them both, sense since they were children.]]



* VoluntaryShapeShifting: All Night Guards are given the ability to morph into Bat-ponies, thanks to their enchanted amour. Though Lt. Mirror is the only that uses it.

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* VoluntaryShapeShifting: All Night Guards are given the ability to morph into Bat-ponies, thanks to their enchanted amour. Though Lt. Mirror is the only one that uses it.

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* BaitAndSwitch: "It was be locked up somewhere, nopony could here her talk about herself or go to prison."



-->’’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.

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-->’’’Lt.-->’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.



* OhCrap: The BigBad has one of these, when the EvilGod come after. [[spoiler:It’s just an illusion created by Trixie.]]

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* OhCrap: The BigBad has one of these, when the EvilGod come after.[[EvilGod God Of Destruction]] comes after her. [[spoiler:It’s just an illusion created by Trixie.]]
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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed on the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.

On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.


* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to a naïve and kind hearted farm kid.

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After the fallout of the Alicorn Amulet incident, Trixie is arrested and is facing imprisonment. But the given circumstance, Princess Luna takes pity on Trixie and offers her a way out, if she joins the Lunar Guard. Six months later, Private Trixie Lulamoon is the second lowest ranking out of half a dozen ponies stationed on in the small and remote post of Camp Driftwood, on the small and remote island community of Wash Margin, where she miserably awaits the end of her tour, in another three and half years with nothing to do, but march from one side of the island to the other and occasionally take care of the town drunk for the night.

On the bright side though, a new recruit has just arrived, putting an end to her status as ‘’the new girl’’, while giving her a new and inexperience partner, to show around. Oh, and there is this little matter of evidence, that a cult worshipping worshiping a god of destruction, may have surfaced on the island. Well, it puts an end to her boredom.


* {{Adorkable}}: Private Melon Rind, Trixie’s new partner and the new recruit at Camp Driftwood. He at first tries to put up a tough guy act, but is immediately revealed to a naïve naive and kind hearted farm kid.



-->’’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.

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-->’’’Lt.-->’’’Lt. Mirror: You know what you want; you know what you are like. I think you know who you are, and also who you want to be.



* ScoobyDooHoax: [[spoiler:The cult worshiping the ''God of Distruction'', turns to just be an elaborate scam, used to recruit pawns in a smuggling operation.]]

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* ScoobyDooHoax: [[spoiler:The cult worshiping the ''God of Distruction'', Destruction'', turns to just be an elaborate scam, used to recruit pawns in a smuggling operation.]]
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* UnholyMatrimony: The two cult members we meet, both married and old childhood sweethearts. [[spoiler: It is revealed that the cult leader has been manipulating them both, sense they children.]]

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