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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278008/the-undesirables The Undesirables]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/DEI+Caboose DEI Caboose]] and published on Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278008/the-undesirables The Undesirables]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/DEI+Caboose DEI Caboose]] and published on Website/FimfictionDotNet.
Platform/FimfictionDotNet.
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* [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority Dragon Lord Ember]]: The youthful but inexperienced Princess of the Dragon Lands.
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* [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority [[AsskickingLeadsToLeadership Dragon Lord Ember]]: The youthful but inexperienced Princess of the Dragon Lands.
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!!''The Undesirables'' contains examples of:
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!!''The Undesirables'' contains provides examples of:of:
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-->'''Princess Luna''': "Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes, [[spoiler:Starlight?]]"
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-->'''Princess Luna''': "Does Luna:''' Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes, [[spoiler:Starlight?]]"[[spoiler:Starlight?]]
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-->'''Princess Luna:''' As We were saying, I-
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' Who's We?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Me.
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' You?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Aye!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' I?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Yes!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' Me?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' SILENCE!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' Who's We?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Me.
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' You?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Aye!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' I?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' Yes!
-->'''Lightning Dust:''' Me?
-->'''Princess Luna:''' SILENCE!
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-->'''Princess Luna:''' As We were saying, I-
-->'''LightningI--\\
'''Lightning Dust:''' Who'sWe?
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'''Princess Luna:'''Me.
-->'''LightningMe.\\
'''Lightning Dust:'''You?
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'''Princess Luna:'''Aye!
-->'''LightningAye!\\
'''Lightning Dust:'''I?
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'''Princess Luna:'''Yes!
-->'''LightningYes!\\
'''Lightning Dust:'''Me?
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'''Princess Luna:'''SILENCE!SILENCE!
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-->'''Princess Luna''': “Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes, [[spoiler:Starlight?]]”
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-->'''Princess Luna''': “Does "Does it ever occur to you what might happen if the Elements of Harmony, your friends, don't return one day? If they venture out to combat a threat and end up failing? What will you do if that day comes, [[spoiler:Starlight?]]”[[spoiler:Starlight?]]"
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* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] kidnaps Starlight Glimmer.
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* ShoutOut: A ponified [[Series/AgentsOfSHIELD Agent Coulson]] kidnaps Starlight Glimmer. And later, Trixie does a variant on his famous StealthHiBye entrance from the show's pilot.
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* ThirdPersonPerson: Trixie, naturally. Lightning Dust calls her out on it when they meet.
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* TheAlcoholic: Lightning Dust has turned to the bottle ever since she dropped out of Wonderbolt Academy.
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* TheAlcoholic: Lightning Dust has turned to the bottle ever since she dropped out of Wonderbolt Academy. She starts to get better about her drinking after Luna recruits her.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop [[Main/TakeOverTheWorld trying to take over the world]] and ''to stop defacing Starwirl The Bearded's statue''.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop [[Main/TakeOverTheWorld trying to take over the world]] and ''to stop defacing Starwirl Starswirl The Bearded's statue''.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop [[Main/TakeOverTheWorld trying to take over the world]] and ''to not deface Starwirl The Bearded's statue''.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop [[Main/TakeOverTheWorld trying to take over the world]] and ''to not deface stop defacing Starwirl The Bearded's statue''.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop [[Main/TakeOverTheWorld trying to take over the world]] and ''to not deface Starwirl The Bearded's statue'm.statue''.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop trying to take over the world and to not deface Starwirl The Bearded's statue, which she fails.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop [[Main/TakeOverTheWorld trying to take over the world world]] and to ''to not deface Starwirl The Bearded's statue, which she fails.statue'm.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Sonata's rehabilitation by Luna requires her to attend friendship lessons, be a generally good pony, to stop trying to take over the world and to not deface Starwirl The Bearded's statue, which she fails.]]
