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Not everyone will feel guilty in real life even when their proven wrong. T Hat's why Sociopaths and Psychopaths exist


** Both Applejack and Rainbow Dash recall how they and the others felt like complete jerks for walking out on Twilight once she and the real Cadance crashed the first wedding; Rainbow got hit with this particularly hard, to the point where she actually ''wanted'' Twilight to yell at her and the others for betraying her, because she originally argued Twilight needed to earn back their respect after what she did during the rehearsal.

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** Both Applejack and Rainbow Dash recall how they and the others felt like complete jerks for walking out on Twilight once she and the real Cadance crashed the first wedding; Rainbow got hit with this particularly hard, to the point where she actually ''wanted'' Twilight [[HitMeDammit to yell at her her]] and the others for betraying her, because she originally argued Twilight needed to earn back their respect after what she did during the rehearsal.



* RealityEnsues: The whole point of the fic is to show how everypony would realistically react to what happened during the ACW two-parter. Everybody is wracked with guilt for deserting Twilight when they discovered that she was technically right, Shining Armor and Princess Celestia feel like total idiots for not being able to tell that something was wrong with Cadance and not being able to defend Canterlot (Shining was completely brainwashed the whole time, [[GuiltComplex but he's refusing to use it as an excuse for his failures]]), and Spike is unwilling to bring himself to face Twilight out of fear that she might reject him for what happened. [[spoiler: Meanwhile, Twilight is angry with everypony, but realizes she was out of control during her outburst and fears what could've happened if she had been wrong. The whole thing has also caused her to have trouble sharing her feelings with her friends, especially when she suffers nightmares in the next story.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Everybody is fully expecting Twilight to give this to them. When she insists on turning the other cheek, however, each and every one of them give it to themselves in their ensuing guilt. [[spoiler: Twilight finally gives a bit of one to her friends at the end during her WhatTheHellHero speech on the train ride home]].

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* RealityEnsues: The whole point of the fic is to show how everypony would realistically react to what happened during the ACW two-parter. Everybody is wracked with guilt for deserting Twilight when they discovered that she was technically right, Shining Armor and Princess Celestia feel like total idiots for not being able to tell that something was wrong with Cadance and not being able to defend Canterlot (Shining was completely brainwashed the whole time, [[GuiltComplex but he's refusing to use it as an excuse for his failures]]), and Spike is unwilling to bring himself to face Twilight out of fear that she might reject him for what happened. [[spoiler: Meanwhile, [[spoiler: Twilight is angry with everypony, but realizes she was out of control during her outburst and fears what could've happened if she had been wrong. The whole thing has also caused her to have trouble sharing her feelings with her friends, especially when she suffers nightmares in the next story.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Everybody {{Defied|Trope}}, by Twilight everyone is fully expecting Twilight to give this to them. When she insists on turning the other cheek, cheek. This is later [[PlayingWithATrope played with]] to ''The Reason We Suck Speech'' however, each and every one of them give it to themselves in their ensuing guilt. [[spoiler: Twilight finally gives a bit of one to her friends at the end during her WhatTheHellHero speech on the train ride home]].
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* ScreamingBirth: According to Pinkie, Mrs. Cake was like this when birthing the twins. Aside from screaming "these funny words to Mr. Cake that [Pinkie's] not allowed to repeat", she also apparently [[NoodleIncident grabbed a scalpel and used it on Mr. Cake and Nurse Redheart]].

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* ScreamingBirth: According to Pinkie, Mrs. Cake was like this when birthing the twins. Aside from screaming "these "[[NarrativeProfanityFilter these funny words words]] to Mr. Cake that [Pinkie's] not allowed to repeat", she also apparently [[NoodleIncident grabbed a scalpel and used it on Mr. Cake and Nurse Redheart]].

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* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse:
** Shining Armor's started calling his sister "[[AffectionateNickname Twiley]]" when he caught her using BabyTalk with an infant Spike, right after ''she'' scolded ''him'' for treating Spike like a baby.
** Used by both of Scootaloo's parents as part of their ongoing emotional and psychological abuse of their daughter.
** Dash tells Scoots that her old nickname of "Rainbow Crash" came from how she choked while running through an obstacle course once.


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** Shining Armor's started calling his sister "[[AffectionateNickname Twiley]]" when he caught her using BabyTalk with an infant Spike, right after ''she'' scolded ''him'' for treating Spike like a baby.
** Used by both of Scootaloo's parents as part of their ongoing emotional and psychological abuse of their daughter.
** Dash tells Scoots that her old nickname of "Rainbow Crash" came from how she choked while running through an obstacle course once.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarrenty: Unlike canon, Trixie doesn't have a HeelRealization after the events of "Magic Duel". Instead, still left [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity half-mad]] by the Alicorn Amulet, she fled into the Everfree Forest [[spoiler:until she's purified of the Amulet's influence and lets herself be arrested]].

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* KarmaHoudiniWarrenty: KarmaHoudiniWarranty: Unlike canon, Trixie doesn't have a HeelRealization after the events of "Magic Duel". Instead, still left [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity half-mad]] by the Alicorn Amulet, she fled into the Everfree Forest [[spoiler:until she's purified of the Amulet's influence and lets herself be arrested]].

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* {{WAFF}}: ''Post Nuptials'', apart from [[AccusationFic calling out the main characters for not believing Twilight about the fake Cadance in]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 "A Canterlot]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 Wedding"]], does what many anti-ACW {{Hate Fic}}s do not: focus solely on Twilight reconciling with her friends after suffering their biggest falling out so far.



* SequelEscalation: ''Post Nuptials'' is about [[{{WAFF}} heartwarming reconciliation]]. ''Families'' is about deep psychological and emotional trauma, and a conspiracy to discredit Celestia's public image. Judging from the author's future plans for the story, it just keeps growing.

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* SequelEscalation: ''Post Nuptials'' is about [[{{WAFF}} [[SugarWiki/{{WAFF}} heartwarming reconciliation]]. ''Families'' is about deep psychological and emotional trauma, and a conspiracy to discredit Celestia's public image. Judging from the author's future plans for the story, it just keeps growing.

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* FantasticRacism: The ponies of Canterlot are quite prejudiced against dragons, considering how much trouble they gave Spike when he and Twilight were growing up. Olive Branch's anti-Celestia conspiracy only makes it worse when he [[spoiler:paints Spike as the one who instigated the dragon attack near Ponyville]].
** Twilight admits to Applejack and Rarity during their spa time that her decision to stay in Ponyville after Nightmare Moon was partially made by seeing that the citizens of Ponyville were a lot friendlier and more accepting of Spike.

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* FantasticRacism: The ponies of Canterlot are quite prejudiced against dragons, considering how much trouble they gave Spike when he and Twilight were growing up. Olive Branch's anti-Celestia conspiracy only makes it worse when he [[spoiler:paints Spike as the one who instigated the dragon attack near Ponyville]].
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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: In ''The Visit'', [[spoiler: Scootaloo is confused on why she can't forgive her parents for their actions, since she saw several times where her friends managed to forgive each other and former enemies for their actions. Scootaloo then realizes that it's because her parents never asked for forgiveness, so she writes to Celestia asking if she could still forgive them regardless. The Princess tells the filly that she thinks forgiveness is being able to let go of your anger and hatred at a pony who wronged you, but you shouldn't allow them to escape the consequences of their actions, citing refusing to let Nightmare Moon free until the Elements decided to release her seal as an example. Celestia tells Scootaloo that if she does decide to forgive her parents, she should be wary of allowing them back into her life. Scootaloo ultimately decides to cut her parents out of her life when she sees that they have no regrets, but she'll consider talking to them again if they ever change their minds]].

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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: In ''The Visit'', [[spoiler: Scootaloo is confused on why she can't forgive her parents for their actions, since she saw several times where her friends managed to forgive each other and former enemies for their actions. Scootaloo then realizes that it's because her parents never asked for forgiveness, so she writes to Celestia asking if she could still forgive them regardless. The Princess tells the filly that she thinks forgiveness is being able to let go of your anger and hatred at a pony who wronged you, but you shouldn't allow them to escape the consequences of their actions, citing refusing to let Nightmare Moon free until the Elements decided to release her seal as an example. Celestia also tells Scootaloo that if she does decide to forgive her parents, she should be wary of allowing them back into her life. Scootaloo ultimately decides to cut her parents out of her life when she sees that they have no regrets, but she'll consider talking to them again if they ever change their minds]].



* HypocrisyNod: At the beginning of the story, when [[LargeHam Rarity]] tells Applejack she wants to help Twilight find ways not to overreact, she acknowledges she [[DramaQueen isn't really much better in that area]] when the farm girl gives her a FlatWhat look. Unlike most examples, though, Rarity insists that it's more important for Twilight, since she's the team leader and nobody wants a repeat of what had happened at the wedding.

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* LaserGuidedKarma The ultimate fate of the villains. [[spoiler:Olive Branch gets his in the form of a spell performed by Luna herself that subjects him to ''all'' the pain and torture that he has inflicted or ever will inflict onto others, directly or indirectly; Speedy and Quick, meanwhile, are "rewarded" for their abuse by being forced into a SadisticChoice: either rot in jail for the rest of their lives or be forced to give up their child in trade for lighter sentences.]]

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* LaserGuidedKarma LaserGuidedKarma: The ultimate fate of the villains. [[spoiler:Olive Branch gets his in the form of a spell performed by Luna herself that subjects him to ''all'' the pain and torture that he has inflicted or ever will inflict onto others, directly or indirectly; Speedy and Quick, meanwhile, are "rewarded" for their abuse by being forced into a SadisticChoice: either rot in jail for the rest of their lives or be forced to give up their child in trade for lighter sentences.]]
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* PunishedWithUgly: [[spoiler:Chrysalis used to be an ordinary pegasus soldier, though it's not mentioned if she was beautiful in any way or just a normal-looking pony. But when she made her deal with Discord, he transformed her into the hideous bug-like creature she is in the present day.]]

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* PunishedWithUgly: [[spoiler:Chrysalis used to be an ordinary pegasus soldier, though it's not mentioned if she was beautiful in any way or just a normal-looking pony.particularly beautiful. But when she made her deal with Discord, he transformed her into the hideous bug-like creature she is in the present day.]]
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* PunishedWithUgly: [[spoiler:Chrysalis used to be an ordinary pegasus soldier. But when she made her deal with Discord, he transformed her into the hideous bug-like creature she is in the present day.]]

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** Scootaloo's mother Quick Delivery calling her alcoholic drinks "smoothies" may be a reference to ''WesternAnimation/HeyArnold,'' where Helga's mother Miriam was addicted to smoothies (which were [[ParentalBonus implied]] but not explicitly stated to be alcohol, due to kids being the target audience).

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** Scootaloo's mother Quick Delivery calling her alcoholic drinks "smoothies" may be a reference to ''WesternAnimation/HeyArnold,'' where Helga's mother Miriam was addicted to smoothies (which were [[ParentalBonus implied]] but not explicitly stated to be alcohol, due to kids being the show's target audience).

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* ShoutOut: To {{Series/Dinosaurs}}. The first thing Spike does upon meeting Shining Armor? Shout "Not The Mama!" and hit him with a frying pan. [[spoiler: At least, that's how it happens in Pinkie's daydream.]]

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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: It's speculated in-universe that their physical change in species is the cause of things like Spike actually acting like a dog and Twilight developing a crush on Flash (when she's never even had an interest in stallions back home).



* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: It's speculated in-universe that their physical change in species is the cause of things like Spike actually acting like a dog and Twilight developing a crush on Flash (when she's never even had an interest in stallions back home).

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** Neither Applejack nor Pinkie believed the rumor that Sunset spread about Rarity having sex with several members of the football team in the locker room, with Pinkie flat-out telling Rarity that she never deserved to have such a horrible rumor spread about her. Rainbow Dash also never believed the rumor, and actually tells Twilight not to spread it around when she asks about it.

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** Neither Applejack nor Pinkie believed the rumor that Sunset spread about Rarity having sex with several members of the football soccer team in the locker room, with Pinkie flat-out telling Rarity that she never deserved to have such a horrible rumor spread about her. Rainbow Dash also never believed the rumor, and actually tells Twilight not to spread it around more when she asks her about it.



* {{Nephewism}}: Twilight's cover story for being at CHS is that she's temporarily staying with her "aunts" because her house had recently burned down and her parents, desperate for money to make ends meet, got jobs overseas.

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* {{Nephewism}}: Twilight's cover story for being at CHS is that she's temporarily staying with her "aunts" because her house had recently burned down and her parents, desperate for money to make ends meet, parents got jobs overseas.overseas to help cover the cost of recuperating the losses from that.



* NotGoodWithRejection: Flash says Sunset went ballistic after he dumped her. She thought even after she admitted that she was the one spreading rumors and bullying everyone that he would stay with her because she was popular, instead he dumps her on the spot and she punches him in the jaw. Flash says he can still feel where she hit him.

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* NotGoodWithRejection: Flash says Sunset went ballistic after he dumped her. She thought even after she admitted that she was the one spreading rumors and bullying everyone that he would stay with her because she was popular, popular; instead he dumps her on the spot and she punches him in the jaw.jaw in retaliation. Flash says he can still feel where she hit him.



** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood. The best Twilight can do in one week is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset, though it does not necessarily rule out the possibility that they could make up and become friends again later, given more time.

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** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage to their friendships by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood. The best Twilight can do do, especially since she's only in one week the Human World for a week, is convince them to at least work together long enough to help her defeat Sunset, though Sunset. However, it does not necessarily rule out the possibility that they could make up and become friends again later, given more time.time.
** Back when Flash and Sunset were dating and when Sunset was slowly gaining control of the CHS student body, Flash defended her from the accusations she was the one behind the rumors and the bullying. Then she confesses it was true because she thought even after she admitted that he would stay with her because she was getting popular through her underhanded tactics. Instead, he instantly dumped her on the spot.



* SlutShaming: After Rarity signed up for the Spring Fling running, Sunset spread rumors that she was getting extremely intimate with members of the soccer team. It reached the parents, to the point were several of them were trying to get her expelled. Thankfully, Celestia and Luna managed to convince them that it wasn't true, and most of the students figured out that it was one of Sunset's schemes so they didn't believe it (and those who did harass Rarity about it were quickly dealt with by Celestia). However, Sunset still got what she wanted; Rarity was so humiliated by what happened that she stopped her campaign. After Twiight heard about this, it strengthened her resolve to bring down Sunset so she can no longer get away with her actions.

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* SlutShaming: After Rarity signed up for the Spring Fling running, Sunset spread rumors that she was getting extremely intimate had an orgy with members of the boys' soccer team. team in the locker room. It reached the parents, PTA and the school board, to the point were several of them members were trying to get her expelled. Thankfully, Celestia and Luna managed to convince them that it wasn't true, and true. Even more thankfully, most of the students figured out that it was one of Sunset's schemes so they didn't believe it (and it, and those who did harass Rarity about it were quickly dealt with by Celestia). Celestia. However, Sunset still got what she wanted; Rarity was so humiliated by what happened that she stopped her campaign. After Twiight heard about this, it strengthened her resolve to bring down Sunset so she can no longer get away with her actions.Sunset.
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The fanfic has spawned an entire series known as the "Nuptialverse", which establishes its own DarkerAndEdgier mythos distinct from the show as depicted in Season 3 onward (as it was being written before the season has aired), eventually delving into full AlternateUniverse territory. The stories are as follows:

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The fanfic has spawned an entire series known as the "Nuptialverse", which establishes its own DarkerAndEdgier mythos distinct from the show as depicted in Season 3 onward (as it was being written before the season has aired), eventually delving into full AlternateUniverse AlternateUniverseFic territory. The stories are as follows:



* AlternateUniverse: This is the first story clearly categorized as one due to [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon season 3 playing out differently from the Nuptialverse's established continuity]]. As such, several episodes are tailored to fit this {{Fanon}}, some of which are based on WhatIf scenarios like, "What if Trixie wasn't redeemed at the end of '[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]]'?"

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* AlternateUniverse: AlternateUniverseFic: This is the first story clearly categorized as one due to [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon season 3 playing out differently from the Nuptialverse's established continuity]]. As such, several episodes are tailored to fit this {{Fanon}}, some of which are based on WhatIf scenarios like, "What if Trixie wasn't redeemed at the end of '[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]]'?"



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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/24001/Post-Nuptials Post Nuptials]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic written by Darth Link 22.

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* TheShrink: Pinkie Pie recalls that after she and the rest of the bearers had defeated Discord for good, Celestia had them all see trauma therapists, because after everyone was returned to normal, it was like waking up from a bad dream. To the Bearers, however, the effects from his brainwashing still lingered, since they were Discorded directly.



* ThereAreNoTherapists: Completely averted. Pinkie Pie recalls that after she and the rest of the bearers had defeated Discord for good, Celestia had them all see trauma therapists, because after everyone was returned to normal, it was like waking up from a bad dream. To the Bearers, however, the effects from his brainwashing still lingered, since they were Discorded directly.

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* NotADate: Averted; Rainbow knows that her hanging out with Soarin at the wedding reception could very much qualify as a date and she decides to just play it cool. Though she is surprised later when Soarin says he thought of it as a date, she does not deny it and agrees that it was one, with the two of them making plans for Soarin to visit Ponyville so they can have a proper one.



* WhatTheHellHero: Scootaloo is outright disgusted with Spike when he keeps making excuses to avoid talking to Twilight about his guilt.

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* ForcefulKiss: Soarin does this to Rainbow Dash again, giving her a surprise hello kiss after grabbing her from behind. Rainbow once again quickly kisses him back, but warns him afterwards [[KissKissSlap she is going to hurt him for that one day]].

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* FutureLoser: Rainbow Dash sees her old bully Hoops as one. While under the influence of the Changeling's LotusEaterMachine she is the Captain of the Wonderbolts and he is now her personal butler, refilling her drinks on her demand.



* NoSell: Pinkie is the only one immune to the Changeling's device to [[LotusEaterMachine make someone see their greatest dream and desires]] because she already has everything she could ever want and doesn't wish for anything impossible, instead deciding to just do whatever she can to make everyone happy.



* VillainTeamUp: Trixie recruits Lightning Dust to help her get revenge on Twilight by promising a chance of payback against Rainbow Dash. She also tries to recruit Gilda, who isn't buying (at least for the moment).

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* [[DeityOfHumanOrigin Deity of Pony Origin]]: It seems Alicorns only come into being when regular ponies of sufficient strength go through something called "the Trials of the Source".

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* [[DeityOfHumanOrigin Deity of Pony Origin]]: DeityOfHumanOrigin: It seems Alicorns only come into being when regular ponies of sufficient strength go through something called "the Trials of the Source".



* [[WasOnceAMan Was Once a Pony]]: [[spoiler:The entire Changeling race was an obscure fourth pony tribe called Flutterponies (ponies from G1 with butterfly wings) transformed by Discord to serve as Chrysalis' army; Chrysalis herself, meanwhile, was an ordinary Pegasus similarly transformed by Discord]].

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** [[spoiler: When Luna confronts him in his cell,Olive Branch tries to bring up how he tried to narc on [[ParentalAbuse Speedy's abuse]], thinking this will bring him some leeway, despite the fact that, as the author notes, this just proves he has ''one'' shred of decency when the average pony has a ''thousand''.]]

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** [[spoiler: When Luna confronts him in his cell,Olive cell, Olive Branch tries to bring up how he tried to narc on [[ParentalAbuse Speedy's abuse]], thinking this will bring him some leeway, despite the fact that, as the author notes, this just proves he has ''one'' shred of decency when the average pony has a ''thousand''.]]



* DroppedABridgeOnHim: In a conversation with Daring Do, Celestia reveals that this story's version of Storm King by the Hippogriffs and Dragons in an battle off-screen.

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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: In a conversation with Daring Do, Celestia reveals that this story's version of Storm King was killed by the Hippogriffs and Dragons in an a battle off-screen.



* [[HumanShield Equine Shield]]: [[spoiler: Trixie takes Sweetie Belle hostage during her attack.]]



* HumanShield: [[spoiler: Trixie takes Sweetie Belle hostage during her attack.]]
* IHaveNoSon: [[spoiler: When talking to an uncorrupted Trixie, Celestia reveals that, when the Royal Guards questioned her parents about her, they responded with this. Celestia isn't sure which is sadder: the fact Trixie's parents had so completely disowned her, or the fact she looked so ''relieved'' to hear this.]]



* KarmaHoudini: Unlike canon, Trixie doesn't have a HeelRealization after the events of "Magic Duel". Instead, still left [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity half-mad]] by the Alicorn Amulet, she fled into the Everfree Forest where she's eluded capture since. [[spoiler: Ultimately subverted, when she's purified of the Amulet's influence and lets herself be arrested.]]

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* KarmaHoudini: KarmaHoudiniWarrenty: Unlike canon, Trixie doesn't have a HeelRealization after the events of "Magic Duel". Instead, still left [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity half-mad]] by the Alicorn Amulet, she fled into the Everfree Forest where she's eluded capture since. [[spoiler: Ultimately subverted, when [[spoiler:until she's purified of the Amulet's influence and lets herself be arrested.]]arrested]].



* [[IHaveNoSon We Have No Daughter]]: [[spoiler: When talking to an uncorrupted Trixie, Celestia reveals that, when the Royal Guards questioned her parents about her, they responded with this. Celestia isn't sure which is sadder: the fact Trixie's parents had so completely disowned her, or the fact she looked so ''relieved'' to hear this.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Trixie's parents emotionally abused her (thankfully not to the extent of Scootaloo's), by pushing her to be the best, scolding her whenever she was less than perfect, and eventually driving her away. [[spoiler: To help but it in perspective, when told that she had been [[IHaveNoSon disowned]], Trixie actually look ''relieved'', to Celestia's dismay.]]

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* AbusiveParents: Trixie's parents emotionally abused her (thankfully not to the extent of Scootaloo's), by pushing her to be the best, scolding her whenever she was less than perfect, and eventually driving her away.

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* AbusiveParents: Trixie's parents emotionally abused her (thankfully not to the extent of Scootaloo's), by pushing her to be the best, scolding her whenever she was less than perfect, and eventually driving her away. [[spoiler: To help but it in perspective, when told that she had been [[IHaveNoSon disowned]], Trixie actually look ''relieved'', to Celestia's dismay.]]


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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: Celestia and Luna would have expelled Sunset a long time ago for all of the bullying she committed if they had the power to do so. However, since the power to expel students rests in the school board, and because of how good Sunset is at covering her tracks, the school board can't really do anything about her, much to the frustration of everybody.
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: All of the CHS students look up to Celestia and Luna because they avert AdultsAreUseless when it comes to the bullying problems in the school, and they are trying to get Sunset expelled from CHS because of everything she did. Rainbow Dash even believes that Celestia should be the superintendent because of her status as the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.

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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: All of the CHS students look up to Celestia and Luna because they avert AdultsAreUseless when it comes to the bullying problems in the school, and they are trying to get Sunset understand that they would have expelled from CHS because of everything she did. Sunset a long time ago if the school board didn't get in the way. Rainbow Dash even believes that Celestia should be the superintendent because of her status as the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.superintendent.
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* AHundredPercentApprovalRating: All of the CHS students look up to Celestia and Luna because they avert AdultsAreUseless when it comes to the bullying problems in the school, and they are trying to get Sunset expelled from CHS because of everything she did. Rainbow Dash even believes that Celestia should be the superintendent because of her status as the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.

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* AHundredPercentApprovalRating: HundredPercentAdorationRating: All of the CHS students look up to Celestia and Luna because they avert AdultsAreUseless when it comes to the bullying problems in the school, and they are trying to get Sunset expelled from CHS because of everything she did. Rainbow Dash even believes that Celestia should be the superintendent because of her status as the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.

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* AHundredPercentApprovalRating: All of the CHS students look up to Celestia and Luna because they avert AdultsAreUseless when it comes to the bullying problems in the school, and they are trying to get Sunset expelled from CHS because of everything she did. Rainbow Dash even believes that Celestia should be the superintendent because of her status as the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.



** Averted in the case of Celestia and Luna. Since this AU has Celestia present when Twilight and Spike chase Sunset through the portal, she and Luna know what is going on from the beginning. They both agree to help Twilight get her crown back from the school board, give her a place to stay, provide her with things she needs to pass herself off as an ordinary human girl, and register her as a temporary student. Celestia ''does'' feel useless as a principal, however, because she can never find evidence that Sunset is hurting her beloved students, despite the fact that ''everybody'' knows she's connected somehow. Despite this, all of the students look up to the sisters for at least trying to actually ''do'' something to end Sunset's bullying.

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** Averted in the case of Celestia and Luna. Since this AU has Celestia present when Twilight and Spike chase Sunset through the portal, she and Luna know what is going on from the beginning. They both agree to help Twilight get her crown back from the school board, give her a place to stay, provide her with things she needs to pass herself off as an ordinary human girl, and register her as a temporary student. Celestia ''does'' feel useless as a principal, however, because she can never find evidence that Sunset is hurting so good at covering up her beloved students, tracks when it comes to her misdeeds that she can't bring any evidence to the school board, despite the fact that ''everybody'' knows she's connected somehow. Despite this, all of the students look up to the sisters for at least trying to actually ''do'' something to end Sunset's bullying.
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** In another sequence, Big Mac [[SelfDemonstrating/TheIncredibleHulk Hulks Out]].

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** In another sequence, Big Mac [[SelfDemonstrating/TheIncredibleHulk [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk Hulks Out]].
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* ItsPersonal: Sunset takes it as a personal attack when she sees support posters for Twilight's campaign with her holding hands with Flash Sentry, Sunset's ex-boyfriend and "best conquest." She then immediately makes plans to humiliate Twilight.

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* ItsPersonal: A villainous example; Sunset takes it as a personal attack when she sees support posters for Twilight's campaign with her holding hands with Flash Sentry, Sunset's ex-boyfriend and "best conquest." She then immediately makes plans to humiliate Twilight.



** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood. The best Twilight can do for now is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset, though it does not necessarily rule out the possibility that they could make up and become friends again later, given more time.

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** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood. The best Twilight can do for now in one week is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset, though it does not necessarily rule out the possibility that they could make up and become friends again later, given more time.
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** [[Spoiler: When Luna confronts him in his cell,Olive Branch tries to bring up how he tried to narc on [[ParentalAbuse Speedy's abuse]], thinking this will bring him some leeway, despite the fact that, as the author notes, this just proves he has ''one'' shred of decency when the average pony has a ''thousand''.]]

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** [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: When Luna confronts him in his cell,Olive Branch tries to bring up how he tried to narc on [[ParentalAbuse Speedy's abuse]], thinking this will bring him some leeway, despite the fact that, as the author notes, this just proves he has ''one'' shred of decency when the average pony has a ''thousand''.]]

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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Because Sunset is such a horrible bully, everyone hates and fears her except for her posse, and even they are only working with her to gain more power.



** Averted in the case of Celestia and Luna. Since this AU has Celestia present when Twilight and Spike chase Sunset through the portal, she and Luna knew what was going on since the beginning. They both agree to help Twilight get her crown back from the school board, give her a place to stay, and register her as a temporary student. Celestia ''does'' feel useless as a principal, however, because she can never find evidence Sunset is hurting her beloved students, despite the fact that ''everybody'' knows she's connected somehow. Despite this, all of the students look up to the sisters for at least trying to actually ''do'' something to end Sunset's bullying.

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** Averted in the case of Celestia and Luna. Since this AU has Celestia present when Twilight and Spike chase Sunset through the portal, she and Luna knew know what was is going on since from the beginning. They both agree to help Twilight get her crown back from the school board, give her a place to stay, provide her with things she needs to pass herself off as an ordinary human girl, and register her as a temporary student. Celestia ''does'' feel useless as a principal, however, because she can never find evidence that Sunset is hurting her beloved students, despite the fact that ''everybody'' knows she's connected somehow. Despite this, all of the students look up to the sisters for at least trying to actually ''do'' something to end Sunset's bullying.



** Rarity warns Twilight not to bother Fluttershy or Rainbow Dash about the rumor that they were in a romantic relationship.
** Neither Applejack nor Pinkie believed the rumor that Sunset spread about Rarity having sex with several members of the football team in the locker room, with Pinkie flat-out telling Rarity that she never deserved to have such a horrible rumor spread about her. Rainbow Dash also never believed the rumor, and actually tells Twilight not to spread it around when she asks about it.

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** Rarity warns Twilight not to bother Fluttershy or Rainbow Dash about the rumor that they were in a romantic sexual relationship.
** Neither Applejack nor Pinkie believed the rumor that Sunset spread about Rarity having sex with several members of the football team in the locker room, with Pinkie flat-out telling Rarity that she never deserved to have such a horrible rumor spread about her. Rainbow Dash also never believed the rumor, and actually tells Twilight not to spread it around when she asks about it.



* HatesBeingTouched: When Twilight attempts to hold Fluttershy's hand in an attempt to comfort her, the yellow girl pulls it away and apologizes because she doesn't want anybody to get the wrong idea.

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* HatesBeingTouched: When Twilight attempts to hold Fluttershy's hand in an attempt to comfort her, the yellow girl pulls it away and apologizes because she doesn't want anybody to get the wrong idea. It turns out this is because years ago, a rumor was spread about her and Rainbow Dash being in a sexual relationship.


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* HumbleHero: Human Rainbow Dash is this, much to Twilight's surprise, since she's used to Pony Dash being boastful and arrogant.
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** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood. The best Twilight can do is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset.

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** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood. The best Twilight can do for now is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset.Sunset, though it does not necessarily rule out the possibility that they could make up and become friends again later, given more time.

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** Averted in the case of Celestia and Luna. Since this AU has Celestia present when Twilight and Spike chase Sunset through the portal, she and Luna knew what was going on since the beginning. They both agree to help Twilight get her crown back from the school board, give her a place to stay, and register her as a temporary student. Celestia ''does'' feel useless as a principal, however, because she can never find evidence Sunset is hurting her beloved students, despite the fact that ''everybody'' knows she's connected somehow. Despite this, all of the students look up to the sisters for at least trying to actually ''do'' something to get Sunset expelled from CHS.
** Most students see the school board supervisor, Hope, as this, because no matter what Sunset does and no matter what Celestia brings to her about the teen, she dismisses every single case.

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** Averted in the case of Celestia and Luna. Since this AU has Celestia present when Twilight and Spike chase Sunset through the portal, she and Luna knew what was going on since the beginning. They both agree to help Twilight get her crown back from the school board, give her a place to stay, and register her as a temporary student. Celestia ''does'' feel useless as a principal, however, because she can never find evidence Sunset is hurting her beloved students, despite the fact that ''everybody'' knows she's connected somehow. Despite this, all of the students look up to the sisters for at least trying to actually ''do'' something to get Sunset expelled from CHS.end Sunset's bullying.
** Most CHS students see the school board supervisor, Hope, as this, because no matter what Sunset does and no matter what Celestia brings to her about the teen, she dismisses every single case.



** Neither Applejack nor Pinkie believed the rumor that Sunset spread about Rarity having sex with several members of the football team in the locker room, with Pinkie flat-out telling Rarity that she never deserved to have such a horrible rumor spread about her.

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** Neither Applejack nor Pinkie believed the rumor that Sunset spread about Rarity having sex with several members of the football team in the locker room, with Pinkie flat-out telling Rarity that she never deserved to have such a horrible rumor spread about her. Rainbow Dash also never believed the rumor, and actually tells Twilight not to spread it around when she asks about it.
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': Rarity’s a lot of things, but she’s not ''that''.



* HopeSpot: When Twilight is convincing Rainbow to help with her campaign, she reveals that she managed to convince Pinkie Pie, Applejack, and Rarity to work together. Rainbow starts to consider it, thinking that it would be just like old times again. Then Twilight mentions that Fluttershy is also helping her, angering Rainbow to the point where [[spoiler: she punches Twilight in the face for putting Fluttershy in harm's way]].



** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. They admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood, much to Twilight's distress. The best Twilight can do is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset.
** Most of the students and faculty buy Twilight's cover story, but it hits a snag when Golden Cross, the school nurse, asks why Celestia or Luna had never mentioned her before. Twilight quickly says that her parents and her "aunts" were never extremely close as kids.

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** Twilight thinks that showing Pinkie, Applejack, and Rarity the proof that Sunset engineered their break-up will get them to reconcile immediately. They Much to Twilight's distress, they admit that while Sunset might have catalyzed things, they still did most of the damage by their own hands and they can't automatically get over all of the bad blood, much to Twilight's distress.blood. The best Twilight can do is convince them to at least work together long enough to defeat Sunset.
** Most of the students and faculty buy Twilight's cover story, but it hits a snag when Golden Cross, the school nurse, asks why Celestia or Luna had never mentioned her before.before, since they never stated that the sisters had another sibling. Twilight quickly says that her parents and her "aunts" were never extremely close as kids.



* SlutShaming: After Rarity signed up for the Spring Fling running, Sunset spread rumors that she was getting extremely intimate with members of the soccer team. It reached the parents, to the point were several of them were trying to get her expelled. Thankfully, Celestia and Luna managed to convince them that it wasn't true, and most of the students figured out that it was one of Sunset's schemes so they didn't believe it (and those who did harass Rarity about it were quickly dealt with by Celestia). However, Sunset still got what she wanted; Rarity was so humiliated that she stopped her campaign. After Twiight heard about this, it strengthened her resolve to bring down Sunset so she can no longer get away with her actions.

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* SlutShaming: After Rarity signed up for the Spring Fling running, Sunset spread rumors that she was getting extremely intimate with members of the soccer team. It reached the parents, to the point were several of them were trying to get her expelled. Thankfully, Celestia and Luna managed to convince them that it wasn't true, and most of the students figured out that it was one of Sunset's schemes so they didn't believe it (and those who did harass Rarity about it were quickly dealt with by Celestia). However, Sunset still got what she wanted; Rarity was so humiliated by what happened that she stopped her campaign. After Twiight heard about this, it strengthened her resolve to bring down Sunset so she can no longer get away with her actions.



* TakeThat: When the Keeper shows Twilight different universes where different outcomes occurred, Twilight is horrified to see one world where she is bitter and angry at her friends for what they did to her during the wedding rehearsal. This is a common occurrence in many [[AccusationFic Accusations Fics]] about "A Canterlot Wedding" where Twilight just gets mad and yells at her friends.

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* TakeThat: When the Keeper shows Twilight different universes where different outcomes occurred, Twilight is horrified to see one world where she is bitter and angry at her friends for what they did to her during the wedding rehearsal.rehearsal and completely broke off her relationships with them. This is a common occurrence in many [[AccusationFic Accusations Fics]] about "A Canterlot Wedding" where Twilight just gets mad and yells at her friends.



* TranquilFury: When Sunset gets the mass email about Twilight and Flash holding hands together, she ''snaps'' her smartphone in her hand. She then calmly orders the Sirens, Snips, and Snails to start digging up info to use against Twilight.

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* TranquilFury: When Sunset gets the mass email about Twilight and Flash holding hands together, she ''snaps'' her smartphone in her hand. She then calmly orders the Sirens, Snips, and Snails to start digging up info to use against Twilight.Twilight, which freaks them out even more than her breeaking her phone.

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