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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: [[spoiler crossdressing]] Mello to [[OriginalCharacter Falstaff]] [[spoiler: who he's been flirting with all evening]].
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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: [[spoiler crossdressing]] crossdressing Mello to [[OriginalCharacter Falstaff]] [[spoiler: who he's been flirting with all evening]].evening.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: L gives the phrase “violent protest” a whole new meaning.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Any time Light's "advice column" comes up; the very last line of the story.
** "Are you sure you weren't dating Mello?"
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Most of Chapter 18.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Any time Light's "advice column" comes up; the very last line of the story.
** "Are you sure you weren't dating Mello?"
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Most of Chapter 18.
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* FridgeLogic: How have Light and L managed to get their shirts on and off if L’s been hiding the key to the Kinky Chain?
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* BoysLove
* UnsettlingGenderReveal: [[spoiler crossdressing]] Mello to [[OriginalCharacter Falstaff]] [[spoiler: who he's been flirting with all evening]].
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* BoysLove
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* DroppedABridgetOnHim: Mello to Falstaff.
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* BoysLove
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** [[TheDarkKnight "I am an agent of chaos." "Do you know what a dog does when it catches a car?"]]
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** [[TheDarkKnight [[Film/TheDarkKnight "I am an agent of chaos." "Do you know what a dog does when it catches a car?"]]
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* BrandNamesAreBetter: Mello concedes that Light might not be so bad-- after all, the boy did buy him brand-name chocolate chips.* ButtMonkey: Light, oh so much.
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* BrandNamesAreBetter: Mello concedes that Light might not be so bad-- after all, the boy did buy him brand-name chocolate chips.chips.
* ButtMonkey: Light, oh so much.
* ButtMonkey: Light, oh so much.
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* HeroicBSOD: Light, after he [[spoiler: walks in on Matt and Mello. [[IGotBetter He gets better.]]]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Light, after he [[spoiler: walks in on Matt and Mello. [[IGotBetter He gets better.]]]]]]
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''The End is Near'' (available at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4661655/1/The_End_Is_Near Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://community.livejournal.com/tierfallen/55263.html Livejournal]]) is a LighterAndSofter AlternateUniverse ''Manga/DeathNote'' {{fan fiction}} by Tierfal.
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''The End is Near'' (available at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4661655/1/The_End_Is_Near Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://community.livejournal.com/tierfallen/55263.html Livejournal]]) is a LighterAndSofter AlternateUniverse ''Manga/DeathNote'' {{fan fiction}} by Tierfal.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1204552/Tierfal Tierfal]].
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* BrandNamesAreBetter: Mello concedes that Light might not be so bad-- after all, the boy did buy him brand-name chocolate chips.
* ButtMonkey: Light, oh so much.
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* BrandNamesAreBetter: Mello concedes that Light might not be so bad-- after all, the boy did buy him brand-name chocolate chips.
chips.* ButtMonkey: Light, oh so much.
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Misuse.
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* VanInBlack: Matt and Mello make a bet whether there's one [[LittleKidLover involved in Near's kidnapping.]] [[spoiler: There's not.]]
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* VanInBlack: Matt and Mello make a bet whether there's one [[LittleKidLover involved in Near's kidnapping.]] kidnapping. [[spoiler: There's not.]]
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''The End is Near'' (available at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4661655/1/The_End_Is_Near Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://community.livejournal.com/tierfallen/55263.html Livejournal]]) is a LighterAndSofter AlternateUniverse ''DeathNote'' {{fan fiction}} by Tierfal.
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''The End is Near'' (available at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4661655/1/The_End_Is_Near Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://community.livejournal.com/tierfallen/55263.html Livejournal]]) is a LighterAndSofter AlternateUniverse ''DeathNote'' ''Manga/DeathNote'' {{fan fiction}} by Tierfal.
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* FanGirl: Light is [[EstrogenBrigadeBait pretty popular]] with quite a few of the girls at Wammy’s House.
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* FanGirl: Light is [[EstrogenBrigadeBait [[MrFanservice pretty popular]] with quite a few of the girls at Wammy’s House.
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-> L: Where'd you learn to drive a getaway car like this?
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->'''Light''': Higuchi's still raving. Apparently he just says the same thing over and over—'Everyone who touched it should be dead.'
->'''L''': Touched what?
->'''Mello''': Bow chicka ''bow'' wow.
->'''L''': Touched what?
->'''Mello''': Bow chicka ''bow'' wow.
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre:
->'''Light''': Higuchi's still raving. Apparently he just says the same thing over and over—'Everyone who touched it should be dead.'
->'''L''': Touched what?
->'''Mello''': Bow chicka ''bow'' wow.
->'''Light''': Higuchi's still raving. Apparently he just says the same thing over and over—'Everyone who touched it should be dead.'
->'''L''': Touched what?
->'''Mello''': Bow chicka ''bow'' wow.
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* ForWantOfANail: In this ficverse [[spoiler: Light never regains his Kira memories because Higuchi's [[EveryCarIsAPinto car explodes]] during the ChaseScene.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: In this ficverse [[spoiler: Light never regains his Kira memories because Higuchi's [[EveryCarIsAPinto car explodes]] Higuchi burns the notebook during the ChaseScene.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: In this ficverse [[spoiler: Light never regains his Kira memories because Higuchi's [[EveryCarIsAPinto car explodes]] during the ChaseScene.]]
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* DividedWeFall: Mello notes that the problem with this investigation is that you have three Type A personalities together in one room...
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* HangingSeparately: Mello notes that the problem with this investigation is that you have three Type A personalities together in one room...
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* WithACapitalT: ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny ”Weirdos like that-- they spell trouble with a capital M-E-L-L-O. Er, T.”]]''
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* WithACapitalT: ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny ”Weirdos "Weirdos like that-- they spell trouble with a capital M-E-L-L-O. Er, T.”]]''"]]''
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* ArsonMurderAndAdmiration – Mello and Light.
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* ArsonMurderAndAdmiration – ArsonMurderAndAdmiration: Mello and Light.
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* ButtMonkey - Light, oh so much.
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* ButtMonkey - ButtMonkey: Light, oh so much.
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* DudeWheresMyRespect - Light.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: There’s a betting pool among the Wammy kids on how long it will take Matt and Mello to hook up.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: There’s a betting pool among the Wammy kids on how long it will take Matt and Mello to hook up.
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* DudeWheresMyRespect - DudeWheresMyRespect: Light.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt:There’s There's a betting pool among the Wammy kids on how long it will take Matt and Mello to hook up.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt:
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** TheHero – L
** TheLancer – Light, Mello
** TheBigGuy – Matt
** TheSmartGuy- well, everyone.
** TheChick / DamselInDistress – Near
** TheSixthRanger – Light
*** Really more a FourTemperamentEnsemble-- Mello's Sanguine, Light's Choleric, L's Melancholic, and Matt is Phlegmatic.
** TheLancer – Light, Mello
** TheBigGuy – Matt
** TheSmartGuy- well, everyone.
** TheChick / DamselInDistress – Near
** TheSixthRanger – Light
*** Really more a FourTemperamentEnsemble-- Mello's Sanguine, Light's Choleric, L's Melancholic, and Matt is Phlegmatic.
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** TheHero – TheHero: L
**TheLancer – TheLancer: Light, Mello
**TheBigGuy – TheBigGuy: Matt
**TheSmartGuy- TheSmartGuy: well, everyone.
** TheChick /DamselInDistress – DamselInDistress: Near
**TheSixthRanger – TheSixthRanger: Light
*** Really more aFourTemperamentEnsemble-- FourTemperamentEnsemble: Mello's Sanguine, Light's Choleric, L's Melancholic, and Matt is Phlegmatic.
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* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: Matt’s BlindWithoutEm.
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* GottaCatchEmAll
--> Mello: It’s like Near’s version of a breadcrumb trail, right? So we follow the pieces and find him.
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* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: Matt’s Matt's BlindWithoutEm.
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--> Mello:It’s It's like Near’s version of a breadcrumb trail, right? So we follow the pieces and find him.
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--> Mello:
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-> L: Where’d you learn to drive a getaway car like this?
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Matt at the club. Too bad he’s the designated driver.
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-> L: Where’d Where'd you learn to drive a getaway car like this?
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Matt at the club. Too badhe’s he's the designated driver.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Matt at the club. Too bad
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* ItAmusedMe – Mello wants to see someone's head get bitten off, even if it's his own. [[OnlySaneMan L tries to point out to him that]] [[TeachHimAnger Teaching Light Anger]] [[CuteAndPsycho is a suicidal idea...]]
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* ItAmusedMe – ItAmusedMe: Mello wants to see someone's head get bitten off, even if it's his own. [[OnlySaneMan L tries to point out to him that]] [[TeachHimAnger Teaching Light Anger]] [[CuteAndPsycho is a suicidal idea...]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold – Mello and Light.
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* RunningGag: Light’s imaginary advice column.
** Light overhearing UnEntendre conversations between Mello and Matt that are invariably not what they look like… except for the one time he ''doesn’t'' assume that he’ll regret seeing what’s going on behind that door.
** Light overhearing UnEntendre conversations between Mello and Matt that are invariably not what they look like… except for the one time he ''doesn’t'' assume that he’ll regret seeing what’s going on behind that door.
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* RunningGag: Light’s Light's imaginary advice column.
** Light overhearing UnEntendre conversations between Mello and Matt that are invariably not what they look like… except for the one time he''doesn’t'' ''doesn't'' assume that he’ll regret seeing what’s going on behind that door.
** Light overhearing UnEntendre conversations between Mello and Matt that are invariably not what they look like… except for the one time he
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* SealedEvilInACan – SealedEvilInACan: Light. He still has his watch... [[spoiler: and in this ficverse it's implied that the existence of the scrap in the watch alone is what is allowing Higuchi to keep his memories... so if Light ever fiddles with it he could potentially become Kira again...]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Light, after he [[spoiler: [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean walks in on Matt and Mello]]. [[IGotBetter He gets better.]]]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Light, after he [[spoiler: [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean walks in on Matt and Mello]].Mello. [[IGotBetter He gets better.]]]]
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* ItAmusedMe – Mello wants to see someone's head get bitten off, even if it's his own. [[OnlySaneMan L tries to point out to him that]] [[TeachHimAnger Teaching Light Anger]] [[{{Yangire}} is a suicidal idea...]]
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* ItAmusedMe – Mello wants to see someone's head get bitten off, even if it's his own. [[OnlySaneMan L tries to point out to him that]] [[TeachHimAnger Teaching Light Anger]] [[{{Yangire}} [[CuteAndPsycho is a suicidal idea...]]
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Played with. Mello pranks Light by crawling into his bed while Light’s sleeping off a night of drink and dancing. HilarityEnsues.
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Played with. [[BedmateReveal Mello pranks Light by crawling into his bed bed]] while Light’s Light's sleeping off a night of drink and dancing. HilarityEnsues.
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*** Really more a FourTemperamentEnsemble-- Mello's Sanguine, Light' Choleric, L's Melancholic, and Matt is Phlegmatic.
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*** Really more a FourTemperamentEnsemble-- Mello's Sanguine, Light' Light's Choleric, L's Melancholic, and Matt is Phlegmatic.
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**[[spoiler: Though there was a very nice black Mercedes.]]
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The Leisure Suit Larry was renamed Casanova Wannabe.
* CasanovaWannabe: John Falstaff.
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* TheLeisureSuitLarry: John Falstaff.
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* VanInBlack: Matt and Mello make a bet whether there's one involved in Near's kidnapping. [[spoiler: There's not.]]
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* VanInBlack: Matt and Mello make a bet whether there's one involved in Near's kidnapping. [[spoiler: There's not.]]
