History FanFic / TheCriesOfHaruhiSuzumiya

* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Ok, Itsuki]] isn't exactly one, but seeing him breaking down is... rather unsettling.

''The Cries of Haruhi Suzumiya'' [[note]]or, if you're a Japanese fan, ''Suzumiya Haruhi no Naku (Koro ni)'', 涼宮ハルヒのなく(頃に)[[/note]] is a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' / ''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'' {{Crossover}} FanFic written by {{@/Thnikkafan}}. It features nearly everything present in both shows: comedy, horror, MindScrew, a unique style of narration ([[OriginalFlavor or not]]), and death. Lots of death.

%%* BarehandedBladeBlock: Yes, it's a parallel to the one in LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya. Except it [[{{Fingore}} doesn't end as well]] for [[spoiler:Rika]].

* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Several scenes are [[WordOfGod intentionally]] reminiscent of scenes from the [[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya source]] [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry material]]. In fact, a few scenes have lines directly copied from the scripts as to provide a meta-IronicEcho.

* PaintingTheMedium: In the Wiki/TVTropes version at least, text size sometimes changes, as does the color. It even "fades out" as [[spoiler:Nagato]] is dying. Occasionally, there are even links to TV Tropes articles and background music too.

* DarkerAndEdgier: It's a given for the Haruhi cast, but it's DarkerAndEdgier than most ''[[UpToEleven Higurashi]]'' arcs as well when you take into account the [[spoiler:supernatural murders that Haruhi gets up to,]] not to mention the fact that Kamigoroshi-hen has a higher [[spoiler:non-gas]] related body count than any of the official Higurashi arcs.

* UpToEleven: The story tends to take aspects of Higurashi and take them past the logical conclusion. Bleeding maggots? [[spoiler:Haruhi has her period while sick with Hinamizawa Syndrome.]] Tearing your throat out? [[spoiler:Nagato [[OffWithHisHead doesn't stop.]]]]

* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:With only one or two (possible) exceptions.]]

* AlasPoorYorick: Done with [[spoiler:Yuki's]] head.
* AnyoneCanDie
* ArbitrarySkepticism: [[{{Irony}} Haruhi is an atheist]].
* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Mion implies that she is going to do this to Kyon in Kamigoroshi-hen after he and Haruhi are knocked out and chained in the torture chamber, however, Haruhi breaks free before she can do anything.]]
* AxCrazy: [[spoiler:Haruhi and Mion]] and possibly [[spoiler:Yuki]] as well.

* BarehandedBladeBlock: Yes, it's a parallel to the one in LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya. Except it [[{{Fingore}} doesn't end as well]] for [[spoiler:Rika]].
* BigDamnHeroes:
** Nagato, as usual. [[spoiler:[[CavalryBetrayal ...except for the last time.]]]]
** [[spoiler:Rika, desperately protecting Kyon from Homicidal!Nagato.]]
* BloodyMurder
* BoomHeadshot

* [[spoiler:CavalryBetrayal]]: Nagato.

* CharacterTags: Dark!Psycho![[spoiler:Über]]!Haruhi, Canon!Everyone else.
** Except for [[spoiler:Psycho!Yuki]].
* ChekhovsGun: More like Chekhov's Crossbow.
** '''Yuki:''' [[spoiler:I would advise refreshing that list. Nobody is to be trusted. Errant behavior is present in... '''all''' individuals here.]]

* DeusAngstMachina: Haruhi considers [[spoiler:Satoko's plight]] as this. By name.

* FlatWhat
* ForWantOfANail: Kyon refers to this one by name. And a [[PaintingTheMedium link to the article]] in the TV Tropes version.

* GroinAttack: Delivered by Haruhi to Shion.

* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted in the worst way possible... [[spoiler:with a side order of maggots.]]
* NoSenseOfDirection: Haruhi.

* OracularUrchin: Rika, as usual.
* OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank: Haruhi doesn't care.

* PrettyLittleHeadshots
* PsychicAssistedSuicide: Haruhi does this to [[spoiler:Mion.]]
* RightBehindMe: [[spoiler:Our narrator]] got hit with it, by [[spoiler:Mion]].
* SarcasmFailure
* ShootTheShaggyDog
* ShoutOut: Not on the [[ViewersAreGeniuses levels]] of the original, but they're there.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Used by Kyon, quite a bit. Haruhi references it by name, as well.

** Especially 4-5. [[spoiler:Haruhi ]]''[[spoiler:dies.]]''

* YourHeadAsplode: Finishes off both [[spoiler:Keiichi]] and Chapter Three.

* [[spoiler:DiabolusExMachina: So, although in a most messed up way possible, things wrapped themeselves up and Kyon survives.]]

* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: With only one or two (possible) exceptions.]]

* [[spoiler:PsychicAssistedSuicide]]: Haruhi does this to [[spoiler:Mion.]]

* [[spoiler:ShootTheShaggyDog]]

* [[spoiler:YourHeadAsplode]]: Finishes off both [[spoiler:Keiichi]] and Chapter Three.

* FamousLastWords: Quite a few (will be updated as the fanfic updates).
** "I... I'm very... sorry..." [[spoiler:Rena]]
** "Who... what are you?!" [[spoiler:"Mion"]]
*** This is notable because it's ''forced'' to be her last words.
** "No, please, that wasn't--" [[spoiler:Shion]]
** "Wait... I'm right, aren't I?" [[spoiler:Haruhi]]
** "It's good to have met you, Kyon. I'm glad that I met someone so... so interesting." [[spoiler:Rika]]
** "[[MeaningfulEcho That would be... you.]]" [[spoiler:Yuki]]

''The Cries of Haruhi Suzumiya'' [[note]]or, if you're a Japanese fan, ''Suzumiya Haruhi no Naku (Koro ni)'', 涼宮ハルヒのなく(頃に)[[/note]] is a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' / ''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'' {{Crossover}} FanFic written by {{@/Thnikkafan}}. It features nearly everything present in both shows: comedy, horror, MindScrew, a unique style of narration ([[OriginalFlavor or not]]), and death. Lots of death.

* CharacterTags: Dark!Psycho![[spoiler:Über]]!Haruhi, Canon!Everyone else.

''The Cries of Haruhi Suzumiya'' [[note]]or, if you're a Japanese fan, ''Suzumiya Haruhi no Naku (Koro ni)'', 涼宮ハルヒのなく(頃に)[[/note]] is a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' / ''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'' {{Crossover}} FanFic written by {{@/Thnikkafan}}. It features nearly everything present in both shows: comedy, horror, MindScrew, a unique style of narration ([[OriginalFlavor or not]]), and death. Lots of death.

* CharacterTags: Dark!Psycho![[spoiler:Über]]!Haruhi, Canon!Everyone else.

* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Kyon can't resist saying "[[MortalKombat Round 1: Fight!]]" as Haruhi and Mion square off.

* BigDamnHeroes: Nagato, as usual. [[spoiler:[[CavalryBetrayal ...except for the last time.]]]]

* BreakingTheFourthWall; In Tsukuribanashi-hen:

* PaintingTheMedium: In the TVTropes version at least, text size sometimes changes, as does the color. It even "fades out" as [[spoiler:Nagato]] is dying. Occasionally, there are even links to TV Tropes articles and background music too.

* [[spoiler:DiabolusExMachina: So, although in a most messed up way possible, things wrapped themeselves up and Kyon survives. Hello, Ryoko!]]
** [[spoiler:Actually, there was no Ryoko. [[MindScrew Figure that one out.]]]]
*** [[spoiler:Simple. Ryoko was not there like Mion was not there with the hammer killing Keiichi in Watanagashi-hen. Both of them hallucinated in their respective arcs and died because of the same thing, a heart attack.]]

A basic summary: In the small sleepy town of Hinamizawa, there have been a string of murders connected to the Watanagashi festival. This has piqued the interest of one Haruhi Suzumiya, who has decided to investigate it and bring the SOS Brigade with it. But things, naturally, are more than they seem…

* BigDamnHeroes: Nagato, as usual. [[spoiler:[[CavalryBetrayal …except for the last time.]]]]

* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Ok, Itsuki]] isn't exactly one, but seeing him breaking down is… rather unsettling.

** '''Yuki:''' [[spoiler:I would advise refreshing that list. Nobody is to be trusted. Errant behavior is present in… '''all''' individuals here.]]

* DidYouActuallyBelieve: Said by [[spoiler:Takano, to Haruhi, about the Hammer of Oyashiro-sama. Considering that Haruhi had just used "divine" powers to kill three people…]]
* DudeShesLikeInAComa: It's heavily implied that [[spoiler:Rena molested — or worse — Kyon]] after [[spoiler:he passed out.]] [[color:snow:She didn't, though.]]

** "I… I'm very… sorry…" [[spoiler:Rena]]
** "Who… what are you?!" [[spoiler:"Mion"]]

** "No, please, that wasn't—" [[spoiler:Shion]]
** "Wait… I'm right, aren't I?" [[spoiler:Haruhi]]
** "It's good to have met you, Kyon. I'm glad that I met someone so… so interesting." [[spoiler:Rika]]
** "[[MeaningfulEcho That would be… you.]]" [[spoiler:Yuki]]

* IWishedYouWereDead: Haruhi wants Keiichi to "…just '''die!'''". [[spoiler:Naturally, he [[YourHeadAsplode does.]]]]

* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted in the worst way possible… [[spoiler:with a side order of maggots.]]

* PottyFailure: Poor Satoko…

-> ''I'm pretty sure I don't like this place. We've ran into two girls with weapons, nobody seems trustworthy, and to top it off, Haruhi's acting like a psychopath. Although, compared to what she'd be acting like in a few days, it's practically the pinnacle of sanity. ''

->''You think this stuff is bad? ''

''The Cries of Haruhi Suzumiya'' [[note]]or, if you're a Japanese fan, ''Suzumiya Haruhi no Naku (Koro ni)'', 涼宮ハルヒのなく(頃に)[[/note]] is a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''/''VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry'' {{Crossover}} FanFic written by {{@/Thnikkafan}}. It features nearly everything present in both shows: comedy, horror, MindScrew, a unique style of narration ([[OriginalFlavor or not]]), and death. Lots of death.

A basic summary: In the small sleepy town of Hinamizawa, there have been a string of murders connected to the Watanagashi festival. This has piqued the interest of one Haruhi Suzumiya, who has decided to investigate it and bring the SOS Brigade with it. But things, naturally, are more than they seem...

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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: Mion implies that she is going to do this to Kyon in Kamigoroshi-hen after he and Haruhi are knocked out and chained in the torture chamber, however, Haruhi breaks free before she can do anything.]]
* AxCrazy: [[spoiler: Haruhi and Mion]] and possibly [[spoiler: Yuki]] as well.
* BackForTheFinale: [[spoiler: Satoko]] reappears in the fourth chapter [[spoiler: as Haruhi is about to kill Rika.]]

* BigDamnHeroes: Nagato, as usual. [[spoiler:[[CavalryBetrayal ...except for the last time.]]]]
** Rika, [[spoiler: Desperately protecting Kyon from Homidical!Nagato]]

* BreakTheCutie: Ok, [[spoiler:Itsuki]] isn't exactly one, but seeing him breaking down is....rather unsettling.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: in Tsukuribanashi-hen:

* CellPhonesAreUseless: There's no cell phone service at all in Hinimizawa. In fact, the SOS Brigade can't contact ''anyone'' in Hinamizawa. In fact, when they ''do'' receive a [[spoiler:fake]] call, it suprises everyone.
* CharacterTags: Dark!Psycho![[spoiler:Uber]]!Haruhi, Canon!Everyone else.

** '''Yuki:''' [[spoiler: I would advise refreshing that list. Nobody is to be trusted. Errant behavior is present in... in '''all''' individuals here.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Mion]]

* DarkerAndEdgier: It's a given for the Haruhi cast, but it's DarkerAndEdgier than most ''[[UpToEleven Higurashi]]'' arcs as well when you take into account the [[spoiler: supernatural murders that Haruhi gets up to,]] not to mention the fact that Kamigoroshi-hen has a higher [[spoiler: non-gas]] related body count than any of the official Higurashi arcs.

** These dominate the sequel, although [[spoiler: Given how similar the plot is to Onikakushi-hen]], this isn't that surprising.

* [[spoiler: DiabolusExMachina: So, although in a most messed up way possible, things wrapped themeselves up and Kyon survives. Hello, Ryoko!]]
** [[spoiler: Actually, there was no Ryoko. [[MindScrew Figure that one out.]]]]
*** [[spoiler: Simple. Ryoko was not there like Mion was not there with the hammer killing Keiichi in Watanagashi-hen. Both of them halucinated in thier respective arcs and died because of the same thing, a heart attack.]]
* DidYouActuallyBelieve: Said by [[spoiler: Takano, to Haruhi, about the Hammer of Oyashiro-sama. Considering that Haruhi had just used "divine" powers to kill three people...]]
* DudeShesLikeInAComa: It's heavily implied that [[spoiler:Rena molested - or worse - Kyon]] after [[spoiler: he passed out.]] [[color:snow:She didn't, though.]]

* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Keiichi]] gets hs eye sliced open with a razorblade arrow. Kyon himself calls it "an impromptu ranged recreation of ''Film/UnChienAndalou''".
* FamousLastWords: Quite a few (will be updated as the fanfic updates)
** "I... I'm very... sorry..." [[spoiler:Rena]]
** "Who... what are you?!" [[spoiler:"Mion"]]

** "No, please, that wasn't-" [[spoiler:Shion]]
** "Wait... I'm right, aren't I?" [[spoiler:Haruhi]]
** "It's good to have met you, Kyon. I'm glad that I met someone so... so interesting." [[spoiler:Rika]]
** "[[MeaningfulEcho That would be... you.]]" [[spoiler:Yuki]]

* ForWantOfANail: Kyon refers to this one by name. And a [[PaintingTheMedium link to the article]] in the TV Tropes version.
* IWishedYouWereDead: Haruhi wants Keiichi to "...just '''die!'''". [[spoiler:Naturally, he [[YourHeadAsplode does.]]]]
* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Kyon can't resist saying "[[MortalKombat Round 1: Fight!]]" as Haruhi and Mion square off.

* GratuitousJapanese: Averted: Only {{honorifics}} are retained.

* HelpfulHallucination: [[spoiler: Ryoko in the sequel]]
-->[[spoiler: "Yay! You've finally managed to figure out the difference between reality and mental images!"]]

* KnightTemplar: [[spoiler: Nagato becomes one, going as far as trying to kill Kyon to improve the situation]].

* NewspaperDating: Only used as a last-second conformation that [[spoiler:the SOS Brigade is in 1983]]: the real notification is that the date on [[spoiler:Kyon's cash]] is off.

* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted in the worst way possible...... [[spoiler: with a side order of maggots.]]

* PaintingTheMedium: In the TVTropes version at least, text size sometimes changes, as does the color. It even "fades out" as [[spoiler: Nagato]] is dying. Occasionally, there are even links to TV Tropes articles and background music too.
** Also, in first chapter of the second arc, [[spoiler: everything Hanyuu says is inserted as really faded font in the line breaks, making it possible to actually miss some of what she says]]. Good thing Kyon interacts with [[spoiler: her]], as it prevents the reader from missing it altogether.
* PottyFailure: Poor Satoko...
* PowerCreepPowerSeep: Averted: Yuki and Haruhi are depowered for some reason.
** It turns out that [[spoiler: that's either not true or irrelevant by the end, though.]] What's more, it shows exactly how [[spoiler: dangerous and scary two of the most powerful characters ever can be if they go crazy.]]

* WhamEpisode: All the chapters, even the first one.
** Especially 4-5. [[spoiler: Haruhi ]]''[[spoiler:dies.]]''

* UpToEleven: The story tends to take aspects of Higurashi and take them past the logical conclusion. Bleeding maggots? [[spoiler: Haruhi has her period while sick with Hinamizawa Syndrome.]] Tearing your throat out? [[spoiler: Nagato [[OffWithHisHead doesn't stop.]]]]
* VoiceOfTheLegion: Haruhi starts talking with the voices of [[spoiler: the people she killed]] after [[spoiler:she gets her throat slit.]]

Please post your thoughts and your discussions of it in the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=bacpo4u5vcm0quh63kziimkg&page=1 thread in the fora.]] Constructive criticism and brainstorming is welcome!

''The Cries of Haruhi Suzumiya'' [[note]]or, if you're a Japanese fan, ''Suzumiya Haruhi no Naku (Koro ni)'', 涼宮ハルヒのなく(頃に)[[/note]] is a ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' / ''VisualNovel/HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi'' {{Crossover}} FanFic written by {{@/Thnikkafan}}. It features nearly everything present in both shows: comedy, horror, MindScrew, a unique style of narration ([[OriginalFlavor or not]]), and death. Lots of death.

As of August 2010, the first arc, ''Kamigoroshi-hen'', is complete. There's humorous moments, but mostly, it's thoroughly a ''{{Higurashi}}'' question arc. The second arc, ''Tsukuribanashi-hen'', is completed as of December 2011. Like its previous chapter, it follows protocol of the Higurashi question arc.

It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5683647/1/The_Cries_of_Haruhi_Suzumiya here]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6735018/1/The_Cries_of_Haruhi_Suzumiya_Tsukuribanashi here.]] There's also a [[FollowTheLeader story inspired by this one]] which Thnikkafan has deemed to be in continuity with TheCriesOfHaruhiSuzumiya. You can find it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6747435/1/The_Realization_of_Haruhi_Suzumiya here.]]

* BarehandedBladeBlock: Yes, it's a parallel to the one in SuzumiyaHaruhi. Except it [[{{Fingore}} doesn't end as well]] for [[spoiler:Rika]].

* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Several scenes are [[WordOfGod intentionally]] reminiscent of scenes from the [[SuzumiyaHaruhi source]] [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi material]]. In fact, a few scenes have lines directly copied from the scripts as to provide a meta-IronicEcho.

* LampshadeHanging: Quite a bit of this creeps into the story, as we see Kyon's take on the craziness of ''HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi''.