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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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'''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of SuperDanganRonpa2.VisualNovel/SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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* DoesNotLikeMen: Koizumi appears to be portrayed this way.
-->'''Koizumi''': God, I hate men!
-->'''Koizumi''': God, I hate men!
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* NightmareFetishist: Sonia's amusing love of horror movies is brought up, and it's mentioned that she, as a princess, needs an adrenaline rush somehow.
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* OhCrap: It's mentioned that "the chef [[AccidentalInnuendo got stiff]]" after Hibiki refutes his argument that Pekoyama killed [[spoiler:Kimmie Rin]].
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* ScrewTheRulesImBeautiful: Hibiki attacks Monokuma and gets off with a warning (and a later peep into the shower) because she's pretty.
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* VisualPun: Hibiki finds Souda and "Fukashigi-senpai"/[[spoiler:Gundam]] in the closet.
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** Also in Chapter six, Souda has a crush ([[spoiler:Gundam Tanaka]]) and won't tell Hibiki the name of said crush. So, he settles on the nickname Fukashigi-senpai.
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* MoralDissonance: After Monokuma tells them to commit ThePerfectCrime by killing someone and not getting caught, Hibiki's first thought was, "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
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* WhatTheHellHero: Saionji, of all people, tells Hibiki, “Someone died, and all you care about is yourself!”
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Magazine companies and modeling agencies like Hibiki because of the scars on her legs. They say it shows [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment "the natural beauty of nature."]]
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''''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror'''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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* InformedAttractiveness: Hibiki is the Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, but she never outright states that she's pretty.
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* BreakTheCutie: The fic tries to do that in the first few chapters, but by chapter six, it quickly moves on.
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* PurpleEyes: Yep, Hibiki has purple eyes, which are natural, as she points out. This makes her special... somehow.
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* PurpleEyes: Yep, Hibiki has purple eyes, which are natural, as she points out. This makes her special... somehow.may be the reason why she could see [[spoiler: Komaeda attempting to murder Twogami]], despite it being pitch black.
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'''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
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* ShedTheFamilyName: Hibiki's given last name is Frolo, because that was the first magazine company that took her in.
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler: Kimmie Rin]] has their eyes open when they are shown dead. Hibiki even described it as "a hypnotic trance." [[spoiler: This is [[http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/292/9/d/kimmie_rin__silenced_by_murder_by_kawaiiwolf3-d6r3o85.png Kimmie's official art for her death]]. The blood is red though, so be warned. It's also worth noting that some changes were made in the fic from the art.]]
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* MoralDissonance: After Monokuma tells them to commit ThePerfectCrime by killing someone and not getting caught, Hibiki's first thought was, "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
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* HollywoodThin: Hibiki is 5'7" and ''102 pounds.''
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* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Kimmie Rin, Super High School Level Idol]] is the first to die that Hibiki cares about.
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* NonIndicativeName: The first chapter is called "Island and Kuma." Monokuma doesn't show up until the second chapter.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Souda claims that he fell in love with Fukashigi-senapi as soon as he laid eyes on them.
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** Also in Chapter six, Souda has a crush and won't tell Hibiki the name of said crush. So, he settles on the nickname Fukashigi-senpai.
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* SailorEarth: Hibiki is the seventeenth student, which is a nono in the universe. To make matters worse, she put in ''another'' Sue, which is a [[CopyCatSue rip off of Sayaka.]]
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* SailorEarth: Hibiki is the seventeenth student, which is a nono in the universe.universe (in both games, there are only 16 students). To make matters worse, she put in ''another'' Sue, which is a [[CopyCatSue rip off of Sayaka.]]
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* CanonDefilement: See SailorEarth below.
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* GratuitousJapanese: The author's notes have a ''lot'' of it, and the first line is literally in Japanese. Hibiki also called [[BitchInSheepsClothing Saionji]] {{Kawaiiko}} in Chapter Six.
* GratuitousJapanese: The author's notes have a ''lot'' of it, and the first line is literally in Japanese. Hibiki also called [[BitchInSheepsClothing Saionji]] {{Kawaiiko}} in Chapter Six.
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* PurpleEyes: Yep, Hibiki has purple eyes, which are natural, as she points out. This makes her special... somehow.
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* SailorEarth: Hibiki is the seventeenth student, which is a nono in the universe. To make matters worse, she put in ''another'' Sue, which is a [[CopyCatSue rip off of Sayaka.]]
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* IdiotHair: In Hibiki's offical art, she has a curly ahoge. However, it's not on any of her other art, not even the group picture with the rest of Kawaiiwolf's OC's, or in the newest art.
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!!This FanFic provides examples of:
* IdiotHair: In Hibiki's offical art, she has a curly ahoge. However, it's not on any of her other art, not even the group picture with the rest of Kawaiiwolf's OC's, or in the newest art.
* RedHeadedHero: Well, technically bright orange, but it still fits.
* TrollFic: Has been confirmed multiple times by the author herself. She uses her journals to write out of her troll character, to give updates on the progression.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair, which she dyes
!!This FanFic provides examples of:
* IdiotHair: In Hibiki's offical art, she has a curly ahoge. However, it's not on any of her other art, not even the group picture with the rest of Kawaiiwolf's OC's, or in the newest art.
* RedHeadedHero: Well, technically bright orange, but it still fits.
* TrollFic: Has been confirmed multiple times by the author herself. She uses her journals to write out of her troll character, to give updates on the progression.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hibiki has bright orange hair, which she dyes
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-> Ohio gozaimasu. My name is Hibiki Frolo.
'''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]]
ALL SPOILERS REGARDING SUPER DANGNA RONPA 2 WILL BE UNMARKED.
'''Super Dangan Ronpa 2: Swimming in Terror''' is a TrollFic created by [=Kawaiiwolf3=] on deviantArt. The fic follows a girl named Hibiki Hinata, Hajime Hinata's sister, Super High School Level Swimsuit Model, on what is basically a stripped down plot of SuperDanganRonpa2. Well, she's actually known as Hibiki Frolo, thinking that the last name is Hajime.
Read the first chapter [[http://kawaiiwolf3.deviantart.com/art/SDR2-FANFIC-Swimming-in-Terror-CHAPTER-1-409519809 here.]]
ALL SPOILERS REGARDING SUPER DANGNA RONPA 2 WILL BE UNMARKED.
