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* StuffedIntoTheFridge: Jack Slash killed and dismembered Kiritsugu's wife just to get a reaction out of him. The fact that it didn't honestly confuses him until believes that there's simply nothing that he treasures in the world.
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* TargetedToHurtTheHero: Jack Slash killed and dismembered Kiritsugu's wife just to get a reaction out of him. The fact that it didn't honestly confuses him until believes that there's simply nothing that he treasures in the world.
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Shriou Emiya arrives in Brockton Bay in search of an acquaintance and runs across a Cape being assaulted by some members of the ABB. Things spiral outwards from there and he becomes the independent hero known as ''Blade Crimson''.
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* AbusiveParents: Rina's mother was a bitch. [[spoiler:Her response for her daughter making a major accomplishment was to drag her by the hair and try and stick her head in a toilet at the ripe age of nine and then refusing to help assist her when she made it into college at 14.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Rina's mother was a bitch. [[spoiler:Her response for her daughter making a major accomplishment was to drag her by the hair and try and stick her head in a toilet at the ripe age of nine and then refusing to help assist her when she made it into college at 14. WordOfGod is that she "[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/4470912/ wanted her to know her place in the world]]".]]
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* AbusiveParents: Rina's mother was a bitch. [[spoiler:Her response for her daugther making a major accomplishment was to drag her by the hair and try and stick her head in a toilet at the ripe age of nine and then refusing to help assist her when she made it into college at 14.]]
* AttentionWhore: Rina. [[spoiler:Her professor rightfully pinned down that she didn't care of she went down in history for making great changes in the world or being a terrorist, only that she was put in the books. Both he and Lung call her out on ruining her name over this.]]
* AttentionWhore: Rina. [[spoiler:Her professor rightfully pinned down that she didn't care of she went down in history for making great changes in the world or being a terrorist, only that she was put in the books. Both he and Lung call her out on ruining her name over this.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Rina's mother was a bitch. [[spoiler:Her response for her daugther daughter making a major accomplishment was to drag her by the hair and try and stick her head in a toilet at the ripe age of nine and then refusing to help assist her when she made it into college at 14.]]
* AttentionWhore: Rina. [[spoiler:Her professor rightfully pinned down that she didn't careof if she went down in history for making great changes in the world or being a terrorist, only that she was put in the books. Both he and Lung ''Lung'' call her out on ruining her name over this.]]
* AttentionWhore: Rina. [[spoiler:Her professor rightfully pinned down that she didn't care
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* AttentionWhore: Rina. [[spoiler:Her professor rightfully pinned down that she didn't care of she went down in history for making great changes in the world or being a terrorist, only that she was put in the books.]]
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* AttentionWhore: Rina. [[spoiler:Her professor rightfully pinned down that she didn't care of she went down in history for making great changes in the world or being a terrorist, only that she was put in the books. Both he and Lung call her out on ruining her name over this.]]
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* TheCasanova: Tokiomi Tohsaka, who has between 2 to 8 mistresses around the world, [[spoiler:and is Rina Hahn's birth-father.]]
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* DisappearedDad: [[spoiler:Tokiomi Tohsaka left Rina to be raised by her abusive, rich mother.]]
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*** Rina[[spoiler:is ''not'' a Tinker, but a [Pioneer of the Stars]. She's capable of doing things that can advance humanity, many of which fall into the realm of what would normally be exclusive to parahumans. She just goes with the Cape thing because its convenient.]]
