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->''It was an insipidly fine summers day, the birds sang sweet songs, all the children were playing and laughing, revelling in the gentle breeze that washed over them carrying the scent of a thousand wildflowers.''
->''Twieren Sparkljaeger hated it.''
->''She hated the bright, friendly sun for providing visibility to the enemy. She hated the children for not devoting themselves to building the factories they'd need to withstand the coming threat. She hated the adults for dismissing her claims, her pleas, as spiteful hate-speech. Could they not see the truth? Could they not feel the winds of change? How could an entire population be so blind?''
->''Twieren Sparkljaeger hated it.''
->''She hated the bright, friendly sun for providing visibility to the enemy. She hated the children for not devoting themselves to building the factories they'd need to withstand the coming threat. She hated the adults for dismissing her claims, her pleas, as spiteful hate-speech. Could they not see the truth? Could they not feel the winds of change? How could an entire population be so blind?''
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->''It was an insipidly fine summers day, the birds sang sweet songs, all the children were playing and laughing, revelling in the gentle breeze that washed over them carrying the scent of a thousand wildflowers.''
->''Twieren''\\
''Twieren Sparkljaeger hated it.''
->''She''\\
''She hated the bright, friendly sun for providing visibility to the enemy. She hated the children for not devoting themselves to building the factories they'd need to withstand the coming threat. She hated the adults for dismissing her claims, her pleas, as spiteful hate-speech. Could they not see the truth? Could they not feel the winds of change? How could an entire population be so blind?''
->''Twieren
''Twieren Sparkljaeger hated it.
->''She
''She hated the bright, friendly sun for providing visibility to the enemy. She hated the children for not devoting themselves to building the factories they'd need to withstand the coming threat. She hated the adults for dismissing her claims, her pleas, as spiteful hate-speech. Could they not see the truth? Could they not feel the winds of change? How could an entire population be so blind?''
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to Fluttershy whom she believes to be a spy in the first chapter... although in the third chapter it turns out she was right about Fluttershy, she is still really crazy.
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* '''AxCrazy''': AxCrazy: Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to Fluttershy whom she believes to be a spy in the first chapter... although in the third chapter it turns out she was right about Fluttershy, she is still really crazy.
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-->"[[Literature/HungerGames And may the Odds Be Ever in your Favour!]]"
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-->"''PONIES!''
-->''IT IS TIME! LOOK BEFORE YOU, LOOK TO YOUR QUEEN! IT WAS PROPHESISED LONG AGO THAT THE LESBIAN HORSES WOULD RETURN, PROPHESISED THAT THEIR COMING WOULD BE THE DEATH OF ALL LIFE, PROPHESISED THAT TODAY WOULD BE THE END OF DAYS! AND WHAT DO WE SAY TO THE GOD OF DEATH?! NOT TODAY! TODAY IS NOT A GOOD DAY TO DIE! YOU HAVE FAMILIES AND CHILDREN, PEOPLE YOU WANT TO PROTECT! AND TO DO THAT YOU MUST TAKE UP THE SWORD! CAST OFF THE SHACKLES OF YOUR MIND, ACKNOWLEDGE THAT THIS TOWN IS LOST! BUT YOU ARE NOT! USE THE HUMILIATION OF OPPRESSION TO POWER THE FIST OF RETALIATION! TODAY MANKIND HAS RECEIVED A GRIM REMINDER, THAT WE WILL LIVE IN FEAR OF THE LESBIAN HORSES INSIDE THESE CAGES WE CALL WALLS!''
-->''I HAVE PREPARED A SHELTER, A MIGHTY KEEP TO SAVE US! TO RECEIVE PROTECTION FROM THE THREAT YOU NEED ONLY ASK!''
-->'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''"
-->''IT IS TIME! LOOK BEFORE YOU, LOOK TO YOUR QUEEN! IT WAS PROPHESISED LONG AGO THAT THE LESBIAN HORSES WOULD RETURN, PROPHESISED THAT THEIR COMING WOULD BE THE DEATH OF ALL LIFE, PROPHESISED THAT TODAY WOULD BE THE END OF DAYS! AND WHAT DO WE SAY TO THE GOD OF DEATH?! NOT TODAY! TODAY IS NOT A GOOD DAY TO DIE! YOU HAVE FAMILIES AND CHILDREN, PEOPLE YOU WANT TO PROTECT! AND TO DO THAT YOU MUST TAKE UP THE SWORD! CAST OFF THE SHACKLES OF YOUR MIND, ACKNOWLEDGE THAT THIS TOWN IS LOST! BUT YOU ARE NOT! USE THE HUMILIATION OF OPPRESSION TO POWER THE FIST OF RETALIATION! TODAY MANKIND HAS RECEIVED A GRIM REMINDER, THAT WE WILL LIVE IN FEAR OF THE LESBIAN HORSES INSIDE THESE CAGES WE CALL WALLS!''
-->''I HAVE PREPARED A SHELTER, A MIGHTY KEEP TO SAVE US! TO RECEIVE PROTECTION FROM THE THREAT YOU NEED ONLY ASK!''
-->'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''"
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-->''IT
''IT IS TIME! LOOK BEFORE YOU, LOOK TO YOUR QUEEN! IT WAS PROPHESISED LONG AGO THAT THE LESBIAN HORSES WOULD RETURN, PROPHESISED THAT THEIR COMING WOULD BE THE DEATH OF ALL LIFE, PROPHESISED THAT TODAY WOULD BE THE END OF DAYS! AND WHAT DO WE SAY TO THE GOD OF DEATH?! NOT TODAY! TODAY IS NOT A GOOD DAY TO DIE! YOU HAVE FAMILIES AND CHILDREN, PEOPLE YOU WANT TO PROTECT! AND TO DO THAT YOU MUST TAKE UP THE SWORD! CAST OFF THE SHACKLES OF YOUR MIND, ACKNOWLEDGE THAT THIS TOWN IS LOST! BUT YOU ARE NOT! USE THE HUMILIATION OF OPPRESSION TO POWER THE FIST OF RETALIATION! TODAY MANKIND HAS RECEIVED A GRIM REMINDER, THAT WE WILL LIVE IN FEAR OF THE LESBIAN HORSES INSIDE THESE CAGES WE CALL
-->''I
''I HAVE PREPARED A SHELTER, A MIGHTY KEEP TO SAVE US! TO RECEIVE PROTECTION FROM THE THREAT YOU NEED ONLY
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'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''"
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-->'''Spiarmin''': I swear, if you were any more bloody conceited your head would explode from too much ego.
-->'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody dead!
-->'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
-->'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody dead!
-->'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
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-->'''Spiarmin''': I swear, if you were any more bloody conceited your head would explode from too much ego.
-->'''Twieren''':ego.\\
'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloodydead!
-->'''Spiarmin''':dead!\\
'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
-->'''Twieren''':
'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody
-->'''Spiarmin''':
'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
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* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: A big reason reason why Twieren hates the Lesbian Horses so passionately.
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* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: YouKilledMyFather: A big reason reason why Twieren hates the Lesbian Horses so passionately.
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-->''How could they all be so naïve? How could they all just go about their daily business, getting fat and lazy and slovenly? Look at those store owners, hawking cheap and gaudy trinkets instead of manuals in martial arts, ninja stars and assorted medieval armour!''
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-->''How could they all be so naïve? How could they all just go about their daily business, getting fat and lazy and slovenly? Look at those store owners, hawking cheap and gaudy trinkets instead of manuals in martial arts, ninja stars and assorted medieval armour!''
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-->''How could they all be so naïve? How could they all just go about their daily business, getting fat and lazy and slovenly? Look at those store owners, hawking cheap and gaudy trinkets instead of manuals in martial arts, ninja stars and assorted medieval armour!''
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-->''How could they all be so naïve? How could they all just go about their daily business, getting fat and lazy and slovenly? Look at those store owners, hawking cheap and gaudy trinkets instead of manuals in martial arts, ninja stars and assorted medieval armour!''
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* {{Badass}}: Even though she loses, Twieren's first fight against a Lesbian Horse still cements her as this, if only because of how valiantly she goes against it.
** Her adoptive sister, Miraibaka Dackerman, is this as well, and even moreso considering that she ''destroys'' the same Lesbian Horse that beat Twieren.
** Her adoptive sister, Miraibaka Dackerman, is this as well, and even moreso considering that she ''destroys'' the same Lesbian Horse that beat Twieren.
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** Her adoptive sister, Miraibaka Dackerman, is this as all, and even moreso considering that she ''destroys'' the same Lesbian Horse that beat Twieren.
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** Her adoptive sister, Miraibaka Dackerman, is this as all, well, and even moreso considering that she ''destroys'' the same Lesbian Horse that beat Twieren.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: A possible [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation interpretation]] of Fluttershy. Was she really a malicious Lesbian Horse spy the whole time or did she attempt to live in peace until Twieren's continued beatings made her snap?
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* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least both in regards to the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.pose and Fluttershy being a spy.
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* BlatantLies: Fluttershy says her kind "isn't really that bad", literally seconds before starting to devour ponies.
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: Miraibaka equips herself with two katana, and later slices through a Lesbian Horse as if it was made out of cardboard with them.
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: Miraibaka equips herself with two katana, katanas, and later slices through a Lesbian Horse as if it was made out of cardboard with them.
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* ScreamingWarrior: Twieren. And absolutely no one was surprised.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: The Lesbian Horses.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Miraibaka equips herself with two katana, and later slices through a Lesbian Horse as if it was made out of cardboard with them.
* NighInvulnerability: Not ''exactly''. A Lesbian Horse's body isn't particulary more invulnerable than a normal pony's, it's just that doing things like stabbing through their faces and cutting off their limbs doesn't even slow them down. But...
** AchillesHeel: Their weakpoint seems to be the nape of their neck, as Fluttershy immediately dies when Miraibaka cuts through it.
** AchillesHeel: Their weakpoint seems to be the nape of their neck, as Fluttershy immediately dies when Miraibaka cuts through it.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Twieren (red) is hot-headed, prone to anger and impulsiveness, while her adoptive sister Miraibaka Dackerman (blue) is stoic, generally keeps a cool head and is fairly reasonable.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Twieren (red) is hot-headed, prone to anger and impulsiveness, while her adoptive sister Miraibaka Dackerman (blue) is stoic, generally keeps a cool head and is fairly reasonable.
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to poor Fluttershy whom she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to poor Fluttershy whom she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...chapter... although in the third chapter it turns out she was right about Fluttershy, she is still really crazy.
* {{Badass}}: Even though she loses, Twieren's first fight against a Lesbian Horse still cements her as this, if only because of how valiantly she goes against it.
** Her adoptive sister, Miraibaka Dackerman, is this as all, and even moreso considering that she ''destroys'' the same Lesbian Horse that beat Twieren.
* {{Badass}}: Even though she loses, Twieren's first fight against a Lesbian Horse still cements her as this, if only because of how valiantly she goes against it.
** Her adoptive sister, Miraibaka Dackerman, is this as all, and even moreso considering that she ''destroys'' the same Lesbian Horse that beat Twieren.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Twieren, to dangerously insane levels. When animals gather around [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] (whom she believes to be a spy) due to her beautiful singing, her first thought is that they're ''spies themselves'' and [[KickTheDog massacres them.]] Though while she might be wrong about that, she ''is'' ProperlyParanoid about the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Twieren, to dangerously insane levels. When animals gather around [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] (whom she believes to be a spy) due to her beautiful singing, her first thought is that they're ''spies themselves'' and [[KickTheDog massacres them.]] Though while she might be wrong about that, she Then in chapter 3 it turns out that Fluttershy actually ''is'' ProperlyParanoid about the threat the a Lesbian Horses pose.Horse. Twieren was right the whole time! Though the thing with the animals was still her being crazy, probably.
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* KickTheDog: Twieren beating Fluttershy to a pulp and killing her animals, operating under the ''assumption'' that they are all spies.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, as poor Fluttershy and her animals in chapter 1 find out.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, as poor Fluttershy and her animals in chapter 1 find out.
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* KickTheDog: Twieren beating Fluttershy to a pulp and killing her animals, operating under the ''assumption'' that they are all spies.
spies. Though in chapter 3 it turns out she was right about Fluttershy, at least.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, aspoor Fluttershy and her animals in chapter 1 find out.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, as
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* TheStoic: Miraibaka, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
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* TheStoic: Miraibaka, Twieren's adoptive sister. To to the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.craziness.
** NotSoStoic: When Twieren is in danger. The Lesbian Horse Fluttershy finds it out the hard way in chapter 3.
** NotSoStoic: When Twieren is in danger. The Lesbian Horse Fluttershy finds it out the hard way in chapter 3.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9551328/1/Shingeki-no-Lesbian-Horses Shingeki no Lesbian Horses]]'', by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4021119/Ironypus Ironypus]]'' is a [[{{Crossover}} crossover]] between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Manga/AttackOnTitan''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9551328/1/Shingeki-no-Lesbian-Horses Shingeki no Lesbian Horses]]'', by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4021119/Ironypus Ironypus]]'' Ironypus]]'', is a [[{{Crossover}} crossover]] between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Manga/AttackOnTitan''.
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* CitadelCity: Twieren and her fellow ponies live in this ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Spiarmin]]) after Twieren raises Wall Sina, though the city is a smaller part. The interior of Wall Sina is mostly composed of rural areas.
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* CitadelCity: Twieren and her fellow ponies live in this ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Spiarmin]]) live in this after Twieren raises Wall Sina, though the city is a smaller part.part of it. The interior of Wall Sina is mostly composed of rural areas.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Twieren, to dangerously insane levels. When animals gather around [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] (who she believes to be a spy) due to her beautiful singing, her first thought is that they're ''spies themselves'' and [[KickTheDog massacres them.]] Though while she might be wrong about that, she ''is'' ProperlyParanoid about the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Twieren, to dangerously insane levels. When animals gather around [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] (who (whom she believes to be a spy) due to her beautiful singing, her first thought is that they're ''spies themselves'' and [[KickTheDog massacres them.]] Though while she might be wrong about that, she ''is'' ProperlyParanoid about the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
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* KickTheDog: Twieren beating Fluttershy to a pulp and killing her animals, operating under the ''assumption'' that they were all spies.
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* KickTheDog: Twieren beating Fluttershy to a pulp and killing her animals, operating under the ''assumption'' that they were are all spies.
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* TrainingFromHell: What Twieren plans to inflict on her fellow ponies, but considering what they're up against it's justified.
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to poor Fluttershy that she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to poor Fluttershy that whom she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...
* CitadelCity: Twieren and her fellow ponies live in this ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Spiarmin]]) after Twieren raises Wall Sina, though the city is a smaller part. The interior of Wall Sina is mostly composed of rural areas.
* CliffHanger: The first chapter ends with [[TheHighQueen Princess Dot Pixestia]] kissing the Lesbian Horse Nightmare Moon.
* CliffHanger: The first chapter ends with [[TheHighQueen Princess Dot Pixestia]] kissing the Lesbian Horse Nightmare Moon.
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* HaveANiceDeath: Princess Dot Pixestia at the end of chapter 1.
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* HaveANiceDeath: Princess Dot Pixestia at the end of chapter 1.
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to the poor thing that she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...
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* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to the poor thing Fluttershy that she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...chapter...
* BerserkButton: It's hard to count the things that ''don't'' make Twieren absolutely livid.
* ConspiracyTheorist: Twieren, to dangerously insane levels. When animals gather around [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] (who she believes to be a spy) due to her beautiful singing, her first thought is that they're ''spies themselves'' and [[KickTheDog massacres them.]] Though while she might be wrong about that, she ''is'' ProperlyParanoid about the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
* CrazyPrepared: Twieren makes a point of wearing full body armour, and carries at least seven swords, knives and other bladed weapons with her.
* BerserkButton: It's hard to count the things that ''don't'' make Twieren absolutely livid.
* ConspiracyTheorist: Twieren, to dangerously insane levels. When animals gather around [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] (who she believes to be a spy) due to her beautiful singing, her first thought is that they're ''spies themselves'' and [[KickTheDog massacres them.]] Though while she might be wrong about that, she ''is'' ProperlyParanoid about the threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
* CrazyPrepared: Twieren makes a point of wearing full body armour, and carries at least seven swords, knives and other bladed weapons with her.
* GoodIsNotNice: Twieren, although the "[[AntiHero go]][[KickTheDog od]]" part is debatable.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but Twieren is [[GoodIsNotNice not a nice or pleasant person]], and even can be a real bitch sometimes.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, as the poor "spy" in chapter 1 finds out.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, as the poor "spy" in chapter 1 finds out.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but Twieren is [[GoodIsNotNice [[{{Understatement}} not a nice or pleasant person]], and even can be a real bitch sometimes.
* KickTheDog: Twieren beating Fluttershy to a pulp and killing her animals, operating under the ''assumption'' that they were all spies.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, asthe poor "spy" Fluttershy and her animals in chapter 1 finds out.find out.
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]: Played with. Twieren ''thinks'' she is this. And while she ''is'' right about the Lesbian Horses, [[AxCrazy she is anything but sane.]]
* KickTheDog: Twieren beating Fluttershy to a pulp and killing her animals, operating under the ''assumption'' that they were all spies.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the Lesbian Horses, as
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]: Played with. Twieren ''thinks'' she is this. And while she ''is'' right about the Lesbian Horses, [[AxCrazy she is anything but sane.]]
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->'''Spiarmin''': I swear, if you were any more bloody conceited your head would explode from too much ego.
->'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody dead!
->'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
->'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody dead!
->'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
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* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: The other ponies, to Twieren's anger.
-->''How could they all be so naïve? How could they all just go about their daily business, getting fat and lazy and slovenly? Look at those store owners, hawking cheap and gaudy trinkets instead of manuals in martial arts, ninja stars and assorted medieval armour!''
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Twieren is cruel and merciless, but she really does have the best for the other ponies in mind.
-->''How could they all be so naïve? How could they all just go about their daily business, getting fat and lazy and slovenly? Look at those store owners, hawking cheap and gaudy trinkets instead of manuals in martial arts, ninja stars and assorted medieval armour!''
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Twieren is cruel and merciless, but she really does have the best for the other ponies in mind.
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* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the Lesbian Horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyFather killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
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* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the Lesbian Horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyFather killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's the ponies' survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
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* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the lesbian horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyFather killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
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* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the lesbian horses, Lesbian Horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyFather killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Twieren's speech at the end of chapter 2 has this gem:
--> "The Lesbian Horses will come after us, and ''lesbihonest'', I don't know what they're capable of!"
--> "The Lesbian Horses will come after us, and ''lesbihonest'', I don't know what they're capable of!"
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* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the lesbian horses, as the poor "spy" in chapter 1 finds out.
* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to the lesbian horses.
* RousingSpeech: Twieren to the other ponies at the beginning of chapter 2, after Princess Pixestia turns out to be a lesbian horse in a relationship with Nightmare Moon.
-->''PONIES!''
* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to the lesbian horses.
* RousingSpeech: Twieren to the other ponies at the beginning of chapter 2, after Princess Pixestia turns out to be a lesbian horse in a relationship with Nightmare Moon.
-->''PONIES!''
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* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the lesbian horses, Lesbian Horses, as the poor "spy" in chapter 1 finds out.
* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to thelesbian horses.
threat the Lesbian Horses pose.
* RedOniBlueOni: Twieren (red) is hot-headed, prone to anger and impulsiveness, while her adoptive sister Miraibaka Dackerman (blue) is stoic, generally keeps a cool head and is fairly reasonable.
* RousingSpeech: Twieren to the other ponies at the beginning of chapter 2, after Princess Pixestia turns out to be alesbian horse Lesbian Horse in a relationship with Nightmare Moon.
-->''PONIES!''
-->"''PONIES!''
* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to the
* RedOniBlueOni: Twieren (red) is hot-headed, prone to anger and impulsiveness, while her adoptive sister Miraibaka Dackerman (blue) is stoic, generally keeps a cool head and is fairly reasonable.
* RousingSpeech: Twieren to the other ponies at the beginning of chapter 2, after Princess Pixestia turns out to be a
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-->'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''
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-->'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''HUNTERS!]]'''''"
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* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
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* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Miraibaka, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.craziness.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Spiarmin gives one to Twieren in chapter 2.
->'''Spiarmin''': I swear, if you were any more bloody conceited your head would explode from too much ego.
->'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody dead!
->'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Spiarmin gives one to Twieren in chapter 2.
->'''Spiarmin''': I swear, if you were any more bloody conceited your head would explode from too much ego.
->'''Twieren''': If I weren't so bloody conceited, we'd all be bloody dead!
->'''Spiarmin''': No. That's not right, is it? You could easily have been a thousand times nicer from the start, not done everything on your own, but then you wouldn't get the pleasure of being Right. You wanted it to be like this, to have them all in your debt, have them all know deep down that you saved all their lives and that they can never repay you and you can spend the rest of your life lording it over them because otherwise you would have died alone, old and shrivelled and in tears because the idea of you, the long suffering, wrongly persecuted Twieren Sparkljaeger being Right was the only true love you would ever know.
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* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason why Twieren hates the lesbian horses so passionately.
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* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The A big reason reason why Twieren hates the lesbian horses Lesbian Horses so passionately.
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* INeedAFreakinDrink: Spiarmin certainly does, for which absolutely no one blames him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but she is [[GoodIsNotNice not a nice person in the slightest]], and no one can deny that Twieren is a real bitch sometimes.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but she is [[GoodIsNotNice not a nice person in the slightest]], and no one can deny that Twieren is a real bitch sometimes.
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* INeedAFreakinDrink: HaveANiceDeath: Princess Dot Pixestia at the end of chapter 1.
-->"[[Literature/HungerGames And may the Odds Be Ever in your Favour!]]"
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Spiarmin certainly does, for which absolutely no one blames him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, butshe Twieren is [[GoodIsNotNice not a nice person in the slightest]], or pleasant person]], and no one even can deny that Twieren is be a real bitch sometimes.sometimes.
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the lesbian horses, as the poor "spy" in chapter 1 finds out.
* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to the lesbian horses.
* RousingSpeech: Twieren to the other ponies at the beginning of chapter 2, after Princess Pixestia turns out to be a lesbian horse in a relationship with Nightmare Moon.
-->''PONIES!''
-->''IT IS TIME! LOOK BEFORE YOU, LOOK TO YOUR QUEEN! IT WAS PROPHESISED LONG AGO THAT THE LESBIAN HORSES WOULD RETURN, PROPHESISED THAT THEIR COMING WOULD BE THE DEATH OF ALL LIFE, PROPHESISED THAT TODAY WOULD BE THE END OF DAYS! AND WHAT DO WE SAY TO THE GOD OF DEATH?! NOT TODAY! TODAY IS NOT A GOOD DAY TO DIE! YOU HAVE FAMILIES AND CHILDREN, PEOPLE YOU WANT TO PROTECT! AND TO DO THAT YOU MUST TAKE UP THE SWORD! CAST OFF THE SHACKLES OF YOUR MIND, ACKNOWLEDGE THAT THIS TOWN IS LOST! BUT YOU ARE NOT! USE THE HUMILIATION OF OPPRESSION TO POWER THE FIST OF RETALIATION! TODAY MANKIND HAS RECEIVED A GRIM REMINDER, THAT WE WILL LIVE IN FEAR OF THE LESBIAN HORSES INSIDE THESE CAGES WE CALL WALLS!''
-->''I HAVE PREPARED A SHELTER, A MIGHTY KEEP TO SAVE US! TO RECEIVE PROTECTION FROM THE THREAT YOU NEED ONLY ASK!''
-->'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''
* ShoutOut: Way too many to count.
* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
-->"[[Literature/HungerGames And may the Odds Be Ever in your Favour!]]"
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Spiarmin certainly does, for which absolutely no one blames him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but
* KnightTemplar: Twieren is absolutely merciless in her fight against the lesbian horses, as the poor "spy" in chapter 1 finds out.
* ProperlyParanoid: Twieren, at least in regards to the lesbian horses.
* RousingSpeech: Twieren to the other ponies at the beginning of chapter 2, after Princess Pixestia turns out to be a lesbian horse in a relationship with Nightmare Moon.
-->''PONIES!''
-->''IT IS TIME! LOOK BEFORE YOU, LOOK TO YOUR QUEEN! IT WAS PROPHESISED LONG AGO THAT THE LESBIAN HORSES WOULD RETURN, PROPHESISED THAT THEIR COMING WOULD BE THE DEATH OF ALL LIFE, PROPHESISED THAT TODAY WOULD BE THE END OF DAYS! AND WHAT DO WE SAY TO THE GOD OF DEATH?! NOT TODAY! TODAY IS NOT A GOOD DAY TO DIE! YOU HAVE FAMILIES AND CHILDREN, PEOPLE YOU WANT TO PROTECT! AND TO DO THAT YOU MUST TAKE UP THE SWORD! CAST OFF THE SHACKLES OF YOUR MIND, ACKNOWLEDGE THAT THIS TOWN IS LOST! BUT YOU ARE NOT! USE THE HUMILIATION OF OPPRESSION TO POWER THE FIST OF RETALIATION! TODAY MANKIND HAS RECEIVED A GRIM REMINDER, THAT WE WILL LIVE IN FEAR OF THE LESBIAN HORSES INSIDE THESE CAGES WE CALL WALLS!''
-->''I HAVE PREPARED A SHELTER, A MIGHTY KEEP TO SAVE US! TO RECEIVE PROTECTION FROM THE THREAT YOU NEED ONLY ASK!''
-->'''''[[BadassBoast THEY ARE THE PREY AND WE ARE THE HUNTERS!]]'''''
* ShoutOut: Way too many to count.
* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
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->'''[[{{Jerkass}} Twieren]]''': [[KickTheDog I suppose a general would need to know his men, so they might throw themselves upon the enemies' swords at his command]].
* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
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* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
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The Festival of Light is a celebration of Princess Pixestia and her tireless crusade of raising the life-giving sun in the sky each morning. But to Twieren Sparkljaeger, it has a different meaning, the true meaning, a darker meaning. True, they need the sun, but it doesn't have to be so bright, and that brightness fed The Enemy.
The name is also a prophecy.
The name is also a prophecy.
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* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the lesbian horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyMother killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
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* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the lesbian horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyMother [[YouKilledMyFather killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Spiarmin might be a magic-induced slave to Twieren, but that doesn't mean he won't snark at her insanity.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Spiarmin might be a magic-induced slave to Twieren, but that doesn't mean he won't snark at her insanity.insanity.
* INeedAFreakinDrink: Spiarmin certainly does, for which absolutely no one blames him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but she is [[GoodIsNotNice not a nice person in the slightest]], and no one can deny that Twieren is a real bitch sometimes.
* TrueCompanions: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Spiarmin to Twieren, who points out that having comrades to watch your back during war would be benefitical. She agrees... for the wrong reason.
->'''[[{{Jerkass}} Twieren]]''': [[KickTheDog I suppose a general would need to know his men, so they might throw themselves upon the enemies' swords at his command]].
* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason why Twieren hates the lesbian horses so passionately.
* INeedAFreakinDrink: Spiarmin certainly does, for which absolutely no one blames him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her goals are admirable, but she is [[GoodIsNotNice not a nice person in the slightest]], and no one can deny that Twieren is a real bitch sometimes.
* TrueCompanions: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Spiarmin to Twieren, who points out that having comrades to watch your back during war would be benefitical. She agrees... for the wrong reason.
->'''[[{{Jerkass}} Twieren]]''': [[KickTheDog I suppose a general would need to know his men, so they might throw themselves upon the enemies' swords at his command]].
* TheStoic: Miraibaka Dackerman, Twieren's adoptive sister. To the point where she is utterly unfazed by Twieren's craziness.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason why Twieren hates the lesbian horses so passionately.
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On the first Festival of Light, back when it was called The Sundance Festival, a truly evil Dark Lord appeared. A Dark Lord by the name of Light. With his magic notebook, an artefact capable of bringing imagination to life, he created the Enemy among them. But the Dark Lord was sly, and the townspeople fools. His vile creations acted like everyone else, more human even, but for all their affability, they still preyed upon the town. Slowly at first, but gaining steam over a thousand years, and now, [[AntiHero Twieren]] was sure, They would strike with their full might and annihilate everything she'd ever known.
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On the first Festival of Light, back when it was called The Sundance Festival, a truly evil Dark Lord appeared. A Dark Lord by the name of Light. With his magic notebook, an artefact capable of bringing imagination to life, he created the Enemy among them. But the Dark Lord was sly, and the townspeople fools. His vile creations acted like everyone else, more human even, but for all their affability, they still preyed upon the town. Slowly at first, but gaining steam over a thousand years, and now, [[AntiHero Twieren]] was sure, They would strike with their full might and annihilate everything she'd ever known.
known. That was why she had to stop them.
That was why she had to be prepared.
That was why she had to be prepared.
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!!''Shingeki no Lesbian Horses'' provides examples of the following tropes:
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!!''Shingeki no Lesbian Horses'' provides examples of the following tropes:tropes:
* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the lesbian horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyMother killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to the poor thing that she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...
* DeadpanSnarker: Spiarmin might be a magic-induced slave to Twieren, but that doesn't mean he won't snark at her insanity.
* AntiHero: Twieren Sparkljaeger, of the [[UnscrupulousHero unscrupulous kind]]. She is extremely psychotic in her rage against the lesbian horses, but since they [[YouKilledMyMother killed her mother]] it's not hard to feel bad for her. And while she ''is'' undoubtedly cynical, extremely vicious, hateful and enslaved Spiarmin with her magic, she also has humanity's survival as her primary goal and vows to protect even the people who laughed at her before.
* '''AxCrazy''': Twieren. Dear God, alone the things that [[ConspiracyTheorist she]] does to the poor thing that she believes to be a spy in the first chapter...
* DeadpanSnarker: Spiarmin might be a magic-induced slave to Twieren, but that doesn't mean he won't snark at her insanity.
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->''It was an insipidly fine summers day, the birds sang sweet songs, all the children were playing and laughing, revelling in the gentle breeze that washed over them carrying the scent of a thousand wildflowers.''
->''Twieren Sparkljaeger hated it.''
->''She hated the bright, friendly sun for providing visibility to the enemy. She hated the children for not devoting themselves to building the factories they'd need to withstand the coming threat. She hated the adults for dismissing her claims, her pleas, as spiteful hate-speech. Could they not see the truth? Could they not feel the winds of change? How could an entire population be so blind?''
-->-- Our... "[[AntiHero heroic]]" main character in a nutshell
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9551328/1/Shingeki-no-Lesbian-Horses Shingeki no Lesbian Horses]]'', by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4021119/Ironypus Ironypus]]'' is a [[{{Crossover}} crossover]] between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Manga/AttackOnTitan''.
On the first Festival of Light, back when it was called The Sundance Festival, a truly evil Dark Lord appeared. A Dark Lord by the name of Light. With his magic notebook, an artefact capable of bringing imagination to life, he created the Enemy among them. But the Dark Lord was sly, and the townspeople fools. His vile creations acted like everyone else, more human even, but for all their affability, they still preyed upon the town. Slowly at first, but gaining steam over a thousand years, and now, [[AntiHero Twieren]] was sure, They would strike with their full might and annihilate everything she'd ever known.
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!!''Shingeki no Lesbian Horses'' provides examples of the following tropes:
->''Twieren Sparkljaeger hated it.''
->''She hated the bright, friendly sun for providing visibility to the enemy. She hated the children for not devoting themselves to building the factories they'd need to withstand the coming threat. She hated the adults for dismissing her claims, her pleas, as spiteful hate-speech. Could they not see the truth? Could they not feel the winds of change? How could an entire population be so blind?''
-->-- Our... "[[AntiHero heroic]]" main character in a nutshell
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9551328/1/Shingeki-no-Lesbian-Horses Shingeki no Lesbian Horses]]'', by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4021119/Ironypus Ironypus]]'' is a [[{{Crossover}} crossover]] between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Manga/AttackOnTitan''.
On the first Festival of Light, back when it was called The Sundance Festival, a truly evil Dark Lord appeared. A Dark Lord by the name of Light. With his magic notebook, an artefact capable of bringing imagination to life, he created the Enemy among them. But the Dark Lord was sly, and the townspeople fools. His vile creations acted like everyone else, more human even, but for all their affability, they still preyed upon the town. Slowly at first, but gaining steam over a thousand years, and now, [[AntiHero Twieren]] was sure, They would strike with their full might and annihilate everything she'd ever known.
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!!''Shingeki no Lesbian Horses'' provides examples of the following tropes: