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* AscendedExtra: Iruka, Anko and Haku.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes Shattered Eyes]]'' is a Anime/{{Naruto}} AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://m.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]] It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist: Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai, and not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. While the battle proceeds as in canon, before Haku dies, he forces Naruto to promise to keep his kekkei genkai a secret. Naruto, while trying to keep his final promise to Haku, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does. Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes Shattered Eyes]]'' is a Anime/{{Naruto}} AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://m.[[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]] It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist: Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai, and not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. While the battle proceeds as in canon, before Haku dies, he forces Naruto to promise to keep his kekkei genkai a secret. Naruto, while trying to keep his final promise to Haku, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does. Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes]] is a Anime/{{Naruto}} AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://m.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]] It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist: Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai, and not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. While the battle proceeds as in canon, before Haku dies, he forces Naruto to promise to keep his kekkei genkai a secret. Naruto, while trying to keep his final promise to Haku, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does. Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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[[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes Shattered Eyes]] is a Anime/{{Naruto}} AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://m.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]] It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist: Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai, and not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. While the battle proceeds as in canon, before Haku dies, he forces Naruto to promise to keep his kekkei genkai a secret. Naruto, while trying to keep his final promise to Haku, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does. Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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* BrainBleach: Naruto and Sasuke's reaction in chapter 19. (See CoitusInterruptus for more details).
-->'''Naruto''': [[spoiler: ...I felt a part of myself die that I'll never get back.]]
-->'''Sasuke''': [[spoiler: ...I had my Sharingan on. Now it's forever burned into my mind.]]
* CoitusInterruptus: [[spoiler: Iruka forgots he was on scroll duty. So when Team Seven use the two Heaven and Earth scrolls, he was ... busy with Anko.]]
-->'''Naruto''': [[spoiler: ...I felt a part of myself die that I'll never get back.]]
-->'''Sasuke''': [[spoiler: ...I had my Sharingan on. Now it's forever burned into my mind.]]
* CoitusInterruptus: [[spoiler: Iruka forgots he was on scroll duty. So when Team Seven use the two Heaven and Earth scrolls, he was ... busy with Anko.]]
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* OpenSecret: Naruto's status as a Jinchuuriki and a Transcendent Bloodline wielder.
--> '''Naruto''': Great! Can't I have a secret that's actually a secret?
--> '''Naruto''': Great! Can't I have a secret that's actually a secret?
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* SadisticChoice: On one hand, the Kyoukagan grant Naruto the power to copy other bloodlines, but it makes him lose his sanity the more he uses it. On the other hand, Kyubi's power is incredibly powerful, but will turn him into a mindless beast if he abuses it.
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* WhatBeautifulEyesWhatBeautifulEyes: Even '''Orochimaru''' is captivated.
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--> '''Kyubi''': The price of the Kyoukagan is your human sanity.
--> '''Haku''': While the price of the Kyubi's power is your humanity itself.
--> '''Kyubi''': The price of the Kyoukagan is your human sanity.
--> '''Haku''': While the price of the Kyubi's power is your humanity itself.
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* PowerCopying: The Kyoukagan's schtick.
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[[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes Shattered Eyes]] by [[http://m.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]]
It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist.
Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai. And not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. The battle goes mostly as did Canon. Although as Haku dies, he made Naruto promise to keep his new kekkei genkai a secret.
Naruto, while trying to keep Haku's final promise, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does.
Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist.
Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai. And not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. The battle goes mostly as did Canon. Although as Haku dies, he made Naruto promise to keep his new kekkei genkai a secret.
Naruto, while trying to keep Haku's final promise, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does.
Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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[[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes Shattered Eyes]] is a Anime/{{Naruto}} AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://m.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]]
Osmius]] It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist.
twist: Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai. And genkai, and not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. The While the battle goes mostly proceeds as did Canon. Although as in canon, before Haku dies, he made forces Naruto to promise to keep his new kekkei genkai a secret.
secret. Naruto, while trying to keep Haku's his final promise, promise to Haku, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does.
does. Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: Iruka could easily be an S-Class shinobi, jonin, he just chooses not to bebe.
* BigDamnHeroes: Iruka and Anko in the Team 7 vs Orochimaru fight
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: Sakura gets a katana that shename [[IcallItVera names [[NamedWeapons Bloody Rose.]]]]
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* MeaningfulName: Inverted with Shizuka Komoriuta. Her name literally translates as 'peaceful lullaby' and is an intended pun against her.
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* KatannasAreJustBetter: Sakura gets a katanna that she name [[IcallItVera Bloodlt Rose.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Sakura [[spoiler: thanks to her new bloodlimit.]] Even Orochimaru was impressed.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Iruka could easily be an S-Class shinobi, he just chooses not to be
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* DishingOutDirt[=/=]ExtraOreDinary: [[spoiler: Sakura]]
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* PosthumousCharacter: Haku
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Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]]]
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[[http://m.fanfiction.net/s/3922662/1/Shattered-Eyes Shattered Eyes]] by [[http://m.fanfiction.net/u/1156528/ Lithius Osmius]]Osmius]]
It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist.
Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai. And not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. The battle goes mostly as did Canon. Although as Haku dies, he made Naruto promise to keep his new kekkei genkai a secret.
Naruto, while trying to keep Haku's final promise, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does.
Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
It starts out with Naruto battling Haku, but with one twist.
Naruto not only activates the Kyuubi, but also his kekkei genkai. And not just any kekkei genkai, but one that has to ability to copy other bloodline limits. The battle goes mostly as did Canon. Although as Haku dies, he made Naruto promise to keep his new kekkei genkai a secret.
Naruto, while trying to keep Haku's final promise, is now is trying to figure out how his kekkei genkai works, which he dubs the Kyoukagan, and what else it does.
Although as Naruto learns how to control the Kyoukagan, [[BlessedWithSuck he also learns the trouble]] [[CursedWithAwesome of having the bloodline that can copy other bloodlines.]]
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