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* AffablyEvil: the Scientist
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: after Red's third battle with Blue, [[TheRival Red]].
* BigBad: Giovanni.
* ChekhovsGun: the healing device the Scientist uses.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Blue at times.
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: after Red's third battle with Blue, [[TheRival Red]].
* BigBad: Giovanni.
* ChekhovsGun: the healing device the Scientist uses.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Blue at times.
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* MadScientist: The Scientist.
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* PetTheDog: Red's teaching [[ThePowerOfLove Return]] to Eevee.
* PrideBeforeAFall: Blue's Alakazam
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* ToBeAMaster
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[note]]He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.[[/note]]
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] something. [[note]]He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.[[/note]]
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[note]]He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.[[/note]]
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[note]]He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.[[/note]]
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[note]]He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.[[/note]]
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Gastly's Mama is a great friend of Instrutilus, creator of [[FanVerse/TheTravelsverse the Travelsverse]], so it should come as no surprise that the fanfic-in-the-works ''Dragon Days'' by Gastly's Mama was originally intended to be a standalone fic, until Instrutilus suggested it be connected to Rival's Story via the battle with Lance. With Instrutilus working on a one-shot set in the same continuity and both he and Flame Haze working on two fics that focus on two rivals, Agatha and Oak, it can be safe to say it has become it's own universe, named by Instrutilus and named outright by Gastly's Mama as The Rivalsverse.
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Gastly's Mama is a great friend of Instrutilus, creator of [[FanVerse/TheTravelsverse the Travelsverse]], ''Roleplay/TheTravelsverse'', so it should come as no surprise that the fanfic-in-the-works ''Dragon Days'' by Gastly's Mama was originally intended to be a standalone fic, until Instrutilus suggested it be connected to Rival's Story via the battle with Lance. With Instrutilus working on a one-shot set in the same continuity and both he and Flame Haze working on two fics that focus on two rivals, Agatha and Oak, it can be safe to say it has become it's own universe, named by Instrutilus and named outright by Gastly's Mama as The Rivalsverse.
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[hottip:*:He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.]]
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* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[hottip:*:He [[note]]He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.]][[/note]]
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* MadScientist: [[CompleteMonster The Scientist.]]
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* MadScientist: [[CompleteMonster The Scientist.]]
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Blue is portrayed in a more sympathetic light then his Game Counterpart. Same for many other characters, such as the insane Blaine... or is he?
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* BetterThanCanon: Most fans agree this is far better then the games.
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* CompleteMonster: the Scientist, who [[spoiler: kills Maxwell's Machop]].
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The Elite 4 battles, the fight with [[BigBad Giovanni]], and the numerous battles with [[TheRival Red]].
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Sailor Maxwell
* HilariousInHindsight: [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?p=696122#post696122 This post]] by the author shows he wasn't exactly expecting the fic to be so popular.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The Elite 4 battles, the fight with [[BigBad Giovanni]], and the numerous battles with [[TheRival Red]].
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Sailor Maxwell
* HilariousInHindsight: [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?p=696122#post696122 This post]] by the author shows he wasn't exactly expecting the fic to be so popular.
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It has won several awards and has sparked off an entire genre of different "Rival Stories", so you'll find it rather hard to find a member who hates the fic.
Gastly's Mama is a great friend of Instrutilus, creator of [[FanVerse/TheTravelsverse the Travelsverse]], so it should come as no surprise that the fanfic-in-the-works ''Dragon Days'' by Gastly's Mama was originally intended to be a standalone fic, until Instrutilus suggested it be connected to Rival's Story via the battle with Lance. With Instrutilus working on a one-shot set in the same continuity and both he and Flame Haze working on two fics that focus on two rivals, Agatha and Oak, it can be safe to say it has become it's own universe, named by Instrutilus and named outright by Gastly's Mama as The Rivalsverse.
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!! This work contains examples of:
* AffablyEvil: the Scientist
* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Blue is portrayed in a more sympathetic light then his Game Counterpart. Same for many other characters, such as the insane Blaine... or is he?
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: after Red's third battle with Blue, [[TheRival Red]].
* BetterThanCanon: Most fans agree this is far better then the games.
* BigBad: Giovanni.
* ChekhovsGun: the healing device the Scientist uses.
* CompleteMonster: the Scientist, who [[spoiler: kills Maxwell's Machop]].
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The Elite 4 battles, the fight with [[BigBad Giovanni]], and the numerous battles with [[TheRival Red]].
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Sailor Maxwell
* HilariousInHindsight: [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?p=696122#post696122 This post]] by the author shows he wasn't exactly expecting the fic to be so popular.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Blue at times.
* KickTheDog: Red's abuse of his Eevee.
* MadScientist: [[CompleteMonster The Scientist.]]
* TheMafia: Team Rocket, as usual.
* OCStandIn: Maxwell, who is perhaps the most minor character in the Pokémon games. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters And that's saying something.]] [[hottip:*:He appears in Emerald's Battle Tower, for those of you who don't know. Which is all of you. Come on, admit it.]]
* OldShame: [[KickTheDog Red's abuse of his Eevee.]]
* OriginalCharacter: Completely averted.
* PetTheDog: Red's teaching [[ThePowerOfLove Return]] to Eevee.
* PrideBeforeAFall: Blue's Alakazam
* TheRival: Red, naturally.
* SequelHook: Blue, [[TheRival Red]], and [[BigBad Giovanni]] try and capture Mewtwo.
* SympatheticPOV
* ToBeAMaster
* YouShouldKnowThisAlready
