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* CharacterShilling: Hinata. Just...Hinata. Whoo boy, where to start? Everyone in the world seems to line up to give her the utmost respect, even in their thoughts or when she's not even around. It's pretty jarring when its various ninja of the village. A Chunin at an outpost practically creams himself at the idea that she is coming there on a mission. But when it's the Hokage and even the DAIMYO of all people, it gets extremely jarring. Sasuke mentally compliments her on her incredible power, which the reader has never seen, while in a fight that's she's nowhere near and Naruto worships her on a level that is just plain creepy.
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** Due to the Branch House of the Hyuuga Clan not existing in it's canon incarnation, Neji is equal to or possibly ''stronger'' than his canon counterpart's Chunin Exam Finals strength by the time the Second Round Preliminaries occur.
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** Due to the Branch House of the Hyuuga Clan not existing in it's its canon incarnation, Neji is equal to or possibly ''stronger'' than his canon counterpart's Chunin Exam Finals strength by the time the Second Round Preliminaries occur.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic posted by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]] and cowritten by his twin brother [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic posted by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]] and cowritten by his twin brother [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: On top of the already large original ''{{Naruto}}'' cast, there's also a decently sized group of OC's, most of whom are members of the Hyuuga Clan, that have been added to the cast as well.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: On top of the already large original ''{{Naruto}}'' ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' cast, there's also a decently sized group of OC's, most of whom are members of the Hyuuga Clan, that have been added to the cast as well.
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* BlindfoldedVision: [[spoiler:Hinata]] begins training herself to fight without needing to see shortly after becoming a genin on her jonin instructor, [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s, suggestion. [[spoiler:Hinata]] [[UpToEleven goes above and beyond]] [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s suggestion by deciding to wear the blindfold at all times rather than just while training.
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* BlindfoldedVision: [[spoiler:Hinata]] begins training herself to fight without needing to see shortly after becoming a genin on her jonin instructor, [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s, suggestion. [[spoiler:Hinata]] [[UpToEleven goes above and beyond]] [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s suggestion by deciding to wear the blindfold at all times rather than just while training. Her obsession with it screams mental illness at times.
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* BattleCouple: They haven't quite advanced to that stage, but [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata's fight against Shukaku]] certainly had these vibes.
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The second part of the trilogy, ''Seal Master of Konoha'', can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12055783/1/Seal-Master-of-Konoha here]].
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: They really, really aren't. [[spoiler:Hinata]] winds up learning this the hard way, and barely stays together under the pressure that followed.
* DefrostingIceQueen: It took a whole hell of a lot of work on his part, but there's no denying that Hinata's come to feel closer to Naruto--indeed, closer than anyone else other than Hanabi. No one can behave around her the way she permits Naruto to.
* DisappointedInYou: When Hinata [[spoiler: doesn't take Naruto seriously in their fight despite what they had together, Naruto wonders if they were ever even friends if she wouldn't respect him that much. The she finally pulls out the Byakugan...]]
* DisappointedInYou: When Hinata [[spoiler: doesn't take Naruto seriously in their fight despite what they had together, Naruto wonders if they were ever even friends if she wouldn't respect him that much. The she finally pulls out the Byakugan...]]
* IceQueen: Hinata keeps tight rein over her emotions, has trained to make decisions for the sake of the clan that may be ruthless, and holds her distance from everyone. But she can still feel, and Naruto's been working on [[DefrostingIceQueen warming up that ice]] ever since they met.
* LongDistanceRelationship: [[spoiler: When Naruto and Hinata set off on separate ways at the beginning of the sequel, they keep in close, frequent contact with one another. Though not a romantic relationship--yet--what they are maintaining over the long distance is more than just friendship.]]
** [[spoiler:Naruto's response to discovering that for the first part of their fight ''Hinata hadn't used the Byakugan at all''. Of course, since he wanted her to go all-out on him in the first place...]]
* {{Ojou}}: Hinata is a spectacular one, and Naruto's not all that far off when he dubbed her the Princess of Konoha.
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* PaintTheTownRed: Due to a combination of Naruto's [[HealingFactor healing factor]], [[CrazyPrepared a fanny pack full of blood replenishing pills]], and his status as a {{Determinator}}, he manages to paint almost the entire floor of the arena for the Chunin Exams Finals ''with his own blood'' during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]].
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* PaintTheTownRed: Due to a combination of Naruto's [[HealingFactor healing factor]], [[CrazyPrepared a fanny pack full of blood replenishing pills]], and his status as a {{Determinator}}, he manages to paint almost the entire floor of the arena for the Chunin Exams Finals ''with his own blood'' during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]].[[spoiler:Hinata. And it's [[HavingABlast entirely intentional.]]]]
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** Less prominent examples include Naurot(Red)/[[spoiler:Haku]](Blue) and Kiba(Red)/Hinata(Blue)
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** Less prominent examples include Naurot(Red)/[[spoiler:Haku]](Blue) Naruto(Red)/[[spoiler:Haku]](Blue) and Kiba(Red)/Hinata(Blue)
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* TerrainSculpting: The final seal Naruto uses during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] does this, creating a large, stone, flower-shaped structure at its epicenter.
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* TerrainSculpting: The final seal Naruto uses during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] does this, creating a large, stone, flower-shaped structure at its epicenter.epicenter as a byproduct of [[spoiler:massive seal-based explosion meeting the spinning of the Rotation]].
** [[spoiler:Even Jiraiya]] didn't expect him to win, and didn't bother attending the match. It's not much of a surprise that he has so little respect for him when they go training.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Naruto is incredibly enamored with Hinata's eyes to the point he's transfixed by them to the point of distraction when she [[spoiler:takes off her blindfold during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Naruto is incredibly enamored with Hinata's eyes to the point he's transfixed by them to the point of distraction when she [[spoiler:takes off her blindfold during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]]]
* WorthyOpponent: Hinata never thought that Naruto was weak, but eventually she acknowledged him as being her equal, something that no one except Naruto himself ever believed possible.
* WorthyOpponent: Hinata never thought that Naruto was weak, but eventually she acknowledged him as being her equal, something that no one except Naruto himself ever believed possible.
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--> '''Rule 46:''' Avoid unnecessary collateral damage.
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--> '''Rule 45:''' Don't out yourself to anyone, even your friends. [[TheWallsHaveEyes You never know who'll be listening.]]
--> '''Rule 46:''' Avoidunnecessary collateral damage.damage. It just causes more trouble.
--> '''Rule 46:''' Avoid
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* BonusMaterial: The [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ tumblr page]] for the story has a good deal of this, including artwork, snippets of the upcoming/just released chapter and songs chosen to fit the current chapter or specific characters.
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--> '''Rule 50:''' Never settle for anything less than the perfect prank for the intended target.
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--> '''Rule 51:''' Always prank your ''intended'' target.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of May 12, 2015 it sits at 52 Chapters and approximately 476,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is was updated on a weekly basis and as of May 12, June 21, 2015 it sits complete at 52 59 Chapters and approximately 476,000 536,608 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 29, 2015 it sits at 49 Chapters and approximately 447,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 29, May 12, 2015 it sits at 49 52 Chapters and approximately 447,000 476,000 words.
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--> '''Rule 54:''' Prank friend and foe.
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* IgnoredEpiphany: After being defeated by [[spoiler:Naruto]] in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that [[spoier:Naruto]]'s first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
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* IgnoredEpiphany: After being defeated by [[spoiler:Naruto]] in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams,]] Exams, Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that [[spoier:Naruto]]'s [[spoiler:Naruto]]'s first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
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* GeniusSlob: Naruto has gained extensive knowledge of mathematics, physics and chemistry [[RequiredSecondaryPowers due to his efforts to become a fūinjutsu master]], but his apartment is a disaster area.
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* GeniusSlob: Naruto has gained extensive knowledge of mathematics, physics and chemistry [[RequiredSecondaryPowers due to his efforts to become a fūinjutsu fuinjutsu master]], but his apartment is a disaster area.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Sakura saves Sasuke just as he's about to be gutted by an enemy shinobi during The Invasion Arc by [[Gorn blowing said shinobi's skull apart]] with a single punch.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Sakura saves Sasuke just as he's about to be gutted by an enemy shinobi during The Invasion Arc by [[Gorn [[{{Gorn}} blowing said shinobi's skull apart]] with a single punch.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 21, 2015 it sits at 48 Chapters and approximately 441,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 21, 29, 2015 it sits at 48 49 Chapters and approximately 441,000 447,000 words.
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* GeniusSlob: Naruto has gained extensive knowledge of mathematics, physics and chemistry [[RequiredSecondaryPowers due to his efforts to become a fūinjutsu master]], but his apartment is a disaster area.
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--> '''Rule 20:''' [[TaughtByExperience Learn from your mistakes.]]
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** He also has a passable knowledge of physics and chemistry.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 15, 2015 it sits at 48 Chapters and approximately 441,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 15, 21, 2015 it sits at 48 Chapters and approximately 441,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 15, 2015 it sits at 47 Chapters and approximately 433,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated on a weekly basis and as of April 15, 2015 it sits at 47 48 Chapters and approximately 433,000 441,000 words.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Sakura saves Sasuke just as he's about to be gutted by an enemy shinobi during The Invasion Arc by [[Gorn blowing said shinobi's skull apart]] with a single punch.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Sakura uses several of these while she's taking [[spoiler:Sasuke]] to task during the Invasion for completely abandoning the mission they'd been given and going on a bloody rampage to assuage his wounded pride.
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** The [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ tumblr page]] has two kinds of posts that further expand upon certain topics that aren't directly covered in the fanfic.
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** The [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ tumblr page]] has two several kinds of posts posts/sections that further expand upon certain topics that aren't directly covered in the fanfic.
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*** DramatisPersonae: Is a section dedicated to listing all of the various major and minor characters and a brief mentioning of their position and important relationships they have.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of April 3, 2015 it sits at 45 Chapters and approximately 414,000 words.
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* TeleportationSickness: Kiba gets this after experiencing Naruto's long range replacement seal.
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** There are several Omakes that are on the [[hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com tumblr page]] only.
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** There are several Omakes that are on the [[hyuugatheeldestson.[[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com com/ tumblr page]] only.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of March 25, 2015 it sits at 44 Chapters and approximately 404,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of March 25, April 3, 2015 it sits at 44 45 Chapters and approximately 404,000 414,000 words.
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* CharacterFilibuster: Shino's main method of discourse, even when there ''[[AvertedTrope really]]'' [[TalkingIsAFreeAction isn't time]] to go on about something at length.
** Hinata expresses visible annoyance at this tendency during the Chunin Exams Invasion and Naruto calls him out on it shortly after that.
** Hinata expresses visible annoyance at this tendency during the Chunin Exams Invasion and Naruto calls him out on it shortly after that.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of March 21, 2015 it sits at 43 Chapters and approximately 394,000 words.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of March 21, 25, 2015 it sits at 43 44 Chapters and approximately 394,000 404,000 words.
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*** Things you ought to know: Various pieces of information that may not have been picked up on by the readers that are relevant to [[spoiler:The Chunin Exams Invasion Arc]].
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*** Things you ought to know: Various pieces of information that may not have been picked up on by the readers that are relevant to [[spoiler:The Chunin Exams The Invasion Arc]].Arc.
** There are several Omakes that are on the [[hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com tumblr page]] only.
*** The first is a short extension of Interlude Six(Chapter 41)
*** The second is an expansion on a series of flashbacks from Chapter 43
** There are several Omakes that are on the [[hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com tumblr page]] only.
*** The first is a short extension of Interlude Six(Chapter 41)
*** The second is an expansion on a series of flashbacks from Chapter 43
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* CouldHaveBeenMessy: Naruto nearly has his head skewered by one of Gaara's sand spikes during their fight [[spoiler:in the Chunin Exams Finals]].
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of March 3rd, 2015 it sits at 42 Chapters and approximately 384,000 words.
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** Naruto's reaction to Shukaku taking control after he manages to knock Gaara out [[spoiler:during the Championship Round of the Chunin Exams Finals.]]
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