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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Although their first conversation was presumably nowhere ''near'' as profound or life altering for her as it was for Naruto, Hinata shows recognition of its occurrence during their second conversation two years later.
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* NoSuchThingAsBadPublicity: Applied [[InUniverse In-Universe]] by Naruto. Until he starts to differentiate between "good" and "bad" attention in chapter 28, Naruto runs on the idea that any attention or form of acknowledgement is worth getting.
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* SenseLossSadness: [[spoiler:Hinata]] is nearly overwhelmed by the sudden helplessness [[spoiler:she]] feels after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal, before powering through it on [[Determinator sheer willpower.]]
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* SenseLossSadness: [[spoiler:Hinata]] is nearly overwhelmed by the sudden helplessness [[spoiler:she]] feels after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal, before powering through it on [[Determinator [[{{Determinator}} sheer willpower.]]
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* BerserkButton: Neji's is seeing anyone act what he deems "inappropriately" around Hinata. This of course means that Naruto, being Naruto, pushes this button relentlessly.
** If his reaction to thinking Hinata had been struck blind [[spoiler:the first time he saw her wearing a blindfold]] is any indication, Naruto has no compunctions with brutally murdering anyone who harms her.
** If his reaction to thinking Hinata had been struck blind [[spoiler:the first time he saw her wearing a blindfold]] is any indication, Naruto has no compunctions with brutally murdering anyone who harms her.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The Hyuuga's most powerful members are called the Yin, who leads the clan, and Yang, who leads the Military Police, and wear white and black respectively to indicate their status. The closer one's position in the family is to either position, the closer the color of their attire is to pure black or white. The standard Hyuuga uniform is grey.
** As the heir to the clan and Yin, Hinata wears a pure white ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kimono&redirect=no#Accessories_and_related_garments Haori]]'' as a part of her combat uniform.
** As the person who'd once been the Yang, before Hanabi was born, Neji has an honorary position in the Military Police and wears a very dark grey uniform to represent this.
** Before the importance of color in the Hyuuga uniform had been fully explained in the [[AllThereInTheManual KJ Corner]] in chapter 31, Naruto makes note of how the darker the grey a Hyuuga Policemen's uniform was, the harder it was to successfully prank them.
** As the heir to the clan and Yin, Hinata wears a pure white ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kimono&redirect=no#Accessories_and_related_garments Haori]]'' as a part of her combat uniform.
** As the person who'd once been the Yang, before Hanabi was born, Neji has an honorary position in the Military Police and wears a very dark grey uniform to represent this.
** Before the importance of color in the Hyuuga uniform had been fully explained in the [[AllThereInTheManual KJ Corner]] in chapter 31, Naruto makes note of how the darker the grey a Hyuuga Policemen's uniform was, the harder it was to successfully prank them.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Naruto is completely thrown off by how ''eager'' Neji seems to be to fight in his [[spoiler:Second Round Preliminary Match]], because his actions are far more hasty than any Hyuuga he'd ever met. After Naruto realizes that ''he's'' the one Neji is fighting, he's even more confused because he doesn't remember ever pranking him and he's made a habit of not messing with Hyuuga Police with a uniform as [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience dark in color]] as Neji's
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* SustainedMisunderstanding: Naruto Clone #35 asks Iruka where he can get blood replenishing pills in bulk for cheap. Iruka somehow misconstrues this as Naruto asking for the purpose of entering into a BDSM relationship of some sort and begins a somewhat incoherent tangent on how Naruto "should forget everything the nurses told him, but that it's not a bad thing, only it requires two ''consenting'' adults..." To put things into context, Iruka is dating ''[[TooKinkyToTorture Anko]]''.
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* TerrainSculpting: The final seal Naruto uses during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] does this, creating a large, stone, flower-shaped structure at its epicenter.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it only exists different incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it only exists in a different incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: Near the end of their match [[spoiler:Hinata]] asks Naruto to stand down, because even though [[spoiler:she]] can't quite spell out to herself why, [[spoiler:she]] ''really'' doesn't want to kill him.
--> '''[[spoiler:Hinata]]:''' Stand ''down'', Uzumaki-san. It is not my wish to kill you.
--> '''[[spoiler:Hinata]]:''' Stand ''down'', Uzumaki-san. It is not my wish to kill you.
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* Determinator: Naruto, so very much so.
** His fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exam Finals is a resounding example. He's bled so much all over the arena that it's ''literally'' the only thing [[spoiler:Hinata]] can smell anymore, a good portion of his body is rendered numb and unresponsive and he still keeps himself moving on sheer willpower.
** His fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exam Finals is a resounding example. He's bled so much all over the arena that it's ''literally'' the only thing [[spoiler:Hinata]] can smell anymore, a good portion of his body is rendered numb and unresponsive and he still keeps himself moving on sheer willpower.
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* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: Naruto, so very much so.
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** His fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exam Finals is a resounding example. He's bled so much all over the arena that it's ''literally'' the only thing [[spoiler:Hinata]] can smell anymore, a good portion of his body is rendered numb and unresponsive and he still keeps himself moving on sheer willpower. It gets to the point that several people begin to wonder whether or not he's suicidal.
** His fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exam Finals is a resounding example. He's bled so much all over the arena that it's ''literally'' the only thing [[spoiler:Hinata]] can smell anymore, a good portion of his body is rendered numb and unresponsive and he still keeps himself moving on sheer willpower. It gets to the point that several people begin to wonder whether or not he's suicidal.
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* IndyPloy: Contrary to his canon counterpart, Naruto [[AvertedTrope avoids this]] almost as often as he relies on it. Most of his fights rely on the long term goal of getting a powerful seal off on his opponent, than flying by the seat of his pants until a victory condition appears.
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* MakesUsEven: This concept is what drives Hinata [[spoiler:to give Naruto's team the scroll they need during the Second Round of the Chunin Exams]] because she's not fully capable of understanding that Naruto's actions during [[spoiler: the First Round]] were entirely altruistic and she wishes to repay her "debt" as quickly as possible.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Naruto is moments away from attempting to kill Kiba the first time he sees Hinata [[spoiler:blindfolded]] because he assumes Kiba let her get hurt. The situation was resolved before bloodshed, but the killing intent Naruto released was enough to cause [[spoiler:Neji]] to freeze in terror.
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* OnlySaneMan: After finding the remains of a team that appears to have clashed with Gaara in the Forest of Death, Kiba feels like he fills this position on his team when Hinata insists that they continue scroll poaching regardless.
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--> '''Rule 9:''' Don't unnecessarily over-complicate things aka [[MundaneSolution Keep it Simple, Stupid.]]
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--> '''Rule 9:''' Don't unnecessarily over-complicate [[ComplexityAddiction over-complicate]] things aka [[MundaneSolution Keep it Simple, Stupid.]]
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* BloodMagic: Naruto uses his first blood seal during his match with [[spoiler:Hinata]] in the Chunin Exams Finals.
** Naruto walks into his fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exams Finals with enough blood replenishing pills on hand to survive dying of blood loss ''several times over''.
* Determinator: Naruto, so very much so.
** His fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exam Finals is a resounding example. He's bled so much all over the arena that it's ''literally'' the only thing [[spoiler:Hinata]] can smell anymore, a good portion of his body is rendered numb and unresponsive and he still keeps himself moving on sheer willpower.
* Determinator: Naruto, so very much so.
** His fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the Chunin Exam Finals is a resounding example. He's bled so much all over the arena that it's ''literally'' the only thing [[spoiler:Hinata]] can smell anymore, a good portion of his body is rendered numb and unresponsive and he still keeps himself moving on sheer willpower.
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* SenseLossSadness: [[spoiler:Hinata]] is nearly overwhelmed by the sudden helplessness [[spoiler:she]] feels after being affected by Naruto's Five Senses Seal, before powering through it on [[Determinator sheer willpower.]]
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* TheCommandments: Naruto has a massive list of rules based around how to go about successfully pranking people that he also applies to his day to day activities at times.
** Rule 2: [[CrazyPrepared Always be prepared.]]
** Rule 9: Don't unnecessarily over-complicate things aka Keep it Simple, Stupid.
** Rule 10: Stack the deck in your favor.
** Rule 13: Don't get caught.
** Rule 14: [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.]]
** Rule 21: Never stay too long at the scene.
** Rule 22: Never let your guard down after a prank.
** Rule 24: Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
** Rule 28: Don't get upset if you aren't progressing as fast as you'd like.
** Rule 38: [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.]]
** Rule 40: [[AwesomenessByAnalysis Always figure out your targets habits and patterns before pranking.]]
** Rule 47: Don't make risks you don't have to take.
** Rule 49: Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
** Rule 55: Always pull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.]]
** Rule 56.5: A Prank is only truly great if there are witnesses to it.
** Rule 2: [[CrazyPrepared Always be prepared.]]
** Rule 9: Don't unnecessarily over-complicate things aka Keep it Simple, Stupid.
** Rule 10: Stack the deck in your favor.
** Rule 13: Don't get caught.
** Rule 14: [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.]]
** Rule 21: Never stay too long at the scene.
** Rule 22: Never let your guard down after a prank.
** Rule 24: Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
** Rule 28: Don't get upset if you aren't progressing as fast as you'd like.
** Rule 38: [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.]]
** Rule 40: [[AwesomenessByAnalysis Always figure out your targets habits and patterns before pranking.]]
** Rule 47: Don't make risks you don't have to take.
** Rule 49: Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
** Rule 55: Always pull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.]]
** Rule 56.5: A Prank is only truly great if there are witnesses to it.
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* TheCommandments: Naruto has a massive list of rules rules, called the "Master Pranking Rules", based around how to go about successfully pranking people that he also applies to his day to day activities at times.
** Rule 2: --> '''Rule 2:''' [[CrazyPrepared Always be prepared.]]
** Rule 9: Don't unnecessarily over-complicate things aka Keep it Simple, Stupid.
** Rule 10: Stack the deck in--> '''Rule 3:''' [[GutFeeling Follow your favor.
** Rule 13: Don't get caught.
** Rule 14: [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.gut.]]
** Rule 21: Never stay too long at --> '''Rule 7:''' The first excuse is ''always'' the scene.
** Rule 22: Never let your guard down after a prank.
** Rule 24: Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
** Rule 28:best excuse.
--> '''Rule 9:''' Don'tget upset if you aren't progressing as fast as you'd like.
** Rule 38: [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.unnecessarily over-complicate things aka [[MundaneSolution Keep it Simple, Stupid.]]
** Rule 40: [[AwesomenessByAnalysis Always figure out --> '''Rule 10:''' Stack the deck in your targets habits and patterns before pranking.favor.
--> '''Rule 13:''' Don't get caught.
--> '''Rule 14:''' [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.]]
** Rule 47: Don't make risks you don't have to take.
** Rule 49: Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
** Rule 55:--> '''Rule 15:''' Weigh your options and either prank or run.
--> '''Rule 16:''' [[CrazyPrepared Alwayspull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.plan an escape route.]]
** Rule --> '''Rule 19:''' [[KnowWhenToFoldEm If there's no hope, cut your losses.]]
--> '''Rule 21:''' Never stay too long at the scene.
--> '''Rule 22:''' Never let your guard down after a prank.
--> '''Rule 24:''' Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
--> '''Rule 27:''' [[ComplainingAboutThingsYouHaventPaidFor Never look a gift horse in the mouth.]]
--> '''Rule 28:''' Don't get upset if you aren't progressing as fast as you'd like.
--> '''Rule 30:''' [[NervesOfSteel Remain calm and think clearly.]]
--> '''Rule 32:''' If a plan is working, don't mess with it.
--> '''Rule 33:''' [[MundaneSolution Always go with the simpler plan.]]
--> '''Rule 35:''' Temporary pleasures aren't worth the sacrifice of [[LongGame long term goals.]]
--> '''Rule 38:''' [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.]]
--> '''Rule 40:''' [[AwesomenessByAnalysis Always figure out your targets habits and patterns before pranking.]]
--> '''Rule 42:''' Spend more time on the setup if it will make the prank easier.
--> '''Rule 43:''' Never do more prep work than necessary.
--> '''Rule 47:''' Don't make risks you don't have to take.
--> '''Rule 48:''' No life is worth the completion of a prank.
--> '''Rule 49:''' Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
--> '''Rule 52:''' It's not a successful prank if you get caught.
--> '''Rule 53:''' Always assume kunoichi will [[DisproportionateRetribution kill you]] if [[ThePeepingTom caught in a questionable situation.]]
--> '''Rule 55:''' Always pull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.]]
--> '''Rule 56:''' [[AllOrNothing Go big or go home.]]
--> '''Rule 56.5: 5:''' A Prank is only truly great if there are witnesses to it.it.
* CrazyPrepared: Many of Naruto's "Master Pranking Rules" run on this trope.
** Rule 10: Stack the deck in
** Rule 13: Don't get caught.
** Rule 14: [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.
** Rule 22: Never let your guard down after a prank.
** Rule 24: Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
** Rule 28:
--> '''Rule 9:''' Don't
** Rule 38: [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.
--> '''Rule 13:''' Don't get caught.
--> '''Rule 14:''' [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.]]
** Rule 49: Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
** Rule 55:
--> '''Rule 16:''' [[CrazyPrepared Always
--> '''Rule 21:''' Never stay too long at the scene.
--> '''Rule 22:''' Never let your guard down after a prank.
--> '''Rule 24:''' Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
--> '''Rule 27:''' [[ComplainingAboutThingsYouHaventPaidFor Never look a gift horse in the mouth.]]
--> '''Rule 28:''' Don't get upset if you aren't progressing as fast as you'd like.
--> '''Rule 30:''' [[NervesOfSteel Remain calm and think clearly.]]
--> '''Rule 32:''' If a plan is working, don't mess with it.
--> '''Rule 33:''' [[MundaneSolution Always go with the simpler plan.]]
--> '''Rule 35:''' Temporary pleasures aren't worth the sacrifice of [[LongGame long term goals.]]
--> '''Rule 38:''' [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.]]
--> '''Rule 40:''' [[AwesomenessByAnalysis Always figure out your targets habits and patterns before pranking.]]
--> '''Rule 42:''' Spend more time on the setup if it will make the prank easier.
--> '''Rule 43:''' Never do more prep work than necessary.
--> '''Rule 47:''' Don't make risks you don't have to take.
--> '''Rule 48:''' No life is worth the completion of a prank.
--> '''Rule 49:''' Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
--> '''Rule 52:''' It's not a successful prank if you get caught.
--> '''Rule 53:''' Always assume kunoichi will [[DisproportionateRetribution kill you]] if [[ThePeepingTom caught in a questionable situation.]]
--> '''Rule 55:''' Always pull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.]]
--> '''Rule 56:''' [[AllOrNothing Go big or go home.]]
--> '''Rule 56.
* CrazyPrepared: Many of Naruto's "Master Pranking Rules" run on this trope.
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** Rule 13: Don't get caught.
** Rule 14: [[CrazyPrepared Never leave anything to chance.]]
** Rule 13: Don't get caught.
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** Rule 40: [[AwesomenessByAnalysis Always figure out your targets habits and patterns before pranking.]]
** Rule 47: Don't make risks you don't have to take.
** Rule 49: Know who you're targeting before starting a prank.
** Rule 47: Don't make risks you don't have to take.
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* TheCommandments: Naruto has a massive list of rules based around how to go about successfully pranking people that he also applies to his day to day activities at times.
** Rule 2: [[CrazyPrepared Always be prepared.]]
** Rule 9: Don't unnecessarily over-complicate things aka Keep it Simple, Stupid.
** Rule 14: Never leave anything to chance.
** Rule 21: Never stay too long at the scene.
** Rule 22: Never let your guard down after a prank.
** Rule 24: Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
** Rule 38: [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.]]
** Rule 55: Always pull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.]]
** Rule 2: [[CrazyPrepared Always be prepared.]]
** Rule 9: Don't unnecessarily over-complicate things aka Keep it Simple, Stupid.
** Rule 14: Never leave anything to chance.
** Rule 21: Never stay too long at the scene.
** Rule 22: Never let your guard down after a prank.
** Rule 24: Wait for everyone to leave an area before setting up a prank.
** Rule 38: [[WorkHardPlayHard Work hard, but play hard too.]]
** Rule 55: Always pull the biggest prank possible no matter the consequences, because [[AttentionWhore the more attention, the better.]]
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* AttentionWhore: Much like his canon counterpart, Naruto craves the acknowledgement and attention of those around him to the point that he's willing to completely embarrass himself to receive. Several of his "Pranking Rules" reflect this attitude.
** As of chapter 28 Naruto has begun to differentiate between "good" and "bad" attention.
** As of chapter 28 Naruto has begun to differentiate between "good" and "bad" attention.
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Guy]]: Much like her canon counterpart, Hinata craves her father's acknowledgement and she inwardly reacts very negatively to the thought of disappointing him.
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Guy]]: Much like her canon counterpart, Hinata craves her father's acknowledgement and she inwardly reacts very negatively to the thought of disappointing him.him.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Naruto is incredibly enamored with Hinata's eyes to the point he's transfixed by them to the point of distraction when she [[spoiler:takes off her blindfold during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Naruto is incredibly enamored with Hinata's eyes to the point he's transfixed by them to the point of distraction when she [[spoiler:takes off her blindfold during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]
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* BlindfoldedVision: [[spoiler:Hinata]] begins training [[spoiler:herself]] to fight without needing to see shortly after becoming a genin on [[spoiler:her]] jonin instructor, [[spoiler:Itachi's]], suggestion. [[spoiler:Hinata]] [[UpToEleven goes above and beyond]] [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s suggestion by deciding to wear the blindfold at all times rather than just while training.
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* BlindfoldedVision: [[spoiler:Hinata]] begins training [[spoiler:herself]] to fight without needing to see shortly after becoming a genin on [[spoiler:her]] jonin instructor, [[spoiler:Itachi's]], [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s, suggestion. [[spoiler:Hinata]] [[UpToEleven goes above and beyond]] [[spoiler:Itachi]]'s suggestion by deciding to wear the blindfold at all times rather than just while training.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: On top of the already large original ''{{Naruto}}'' cast, there's also a decently sized group of OC's, most of whom are members of the Hyuuga Clan, that have been added to the cast as well.
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* BrainBleach: Kiba wishes he had some after walking in on his sister, Hana, and [[spoiler:Itachi]] in bed together the morning of the Final Round of the Chunin Exams.
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* ForWantOfANail: Instead of the Uchiha Clan it's the [[spoiler:Hyuuga Clan]] that the Senju Clan has a blood feud with prior to Konoha's founding in this fic.
* IgnoredEpiphany:[[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After being defeated by Naruto in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that Naruto's first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
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* AllThereInTheManual: Aside from the story itself, there are two sections that come with almost every chapter that help to further explain/define terms used within the fic.
** The denshi jisho (review) is used at the start of each chapter to define the various Japanese words/terms the authors use in the fic.
** KJ's Corner is used at the end of each chapter to further explain or refresh on specific terms and abilities that are used in the chapter.
** The denshi jisho (review) is used at the start of each chapter to define the various Japanese words/terms the authors use in the fic.
** KJ's Corner is used at the end of each chapter to further explain or refresh on specific terms and abilities that are used in the chapter.
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: Naruto's skill in fūinjutsu requires that he excel in mathematics. He's good enough that he easily [[spoiler: answers the questions on the test for the First Round of the Chunin Exams with time to spare.]]
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]] [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]] [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Naruto uses several Shadow Clones during the month before the Chunin Exam Finals to observe the [[spoiler:Hyuuga]] fighting style. Come his first match with [[spoiler:Hinata]], he knows enough about the style that despite the differences in [[spoiler:Hinata's]] own rendition of it to maneuver [[spoiler:her]] onto his Five Senses Seal even while [[spoiler:she believes that she's avoided letting him do so.]]
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Naruto uses several Shadow Clones during the month before the Chunin Exam Finals to observe the [[spoiler:Hyuuga]] fighting style. Come his first match with [[spoiler:Hinata]], he knows enough about the style that despite the differences in [[spoiler:Hinata's]] own rendition of it to maneuver [[spoiler:her]] onto his Five Senses Seal even while [[spoiler:she believes that she's avoided letting him do so.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: There are several noticeable differences between canon and this fanfic, the most notable being that the Hyuuga Clan is far more prominent and powerful than they were in canon, being described as Konoha's most powerful clan even with the Uchiha Clan still alive.
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* AlternateUniverse: AlternateUniverseFic: There are several noticeable differences between canon and this fanfic, the most notable being that the Hyuuga Clan is far more prominent and powerful than they were in canon, being described as Konoha's most powerful clan even with the Uchiha Clan still alive.
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* EmotionlessGirl: Hinata fits the bill perfectly to most observers.
** It's quickly revealed that extreme emotional control is seen as a necessity within the Hyuuga Clan, ''especially'' in the heir. Furthermore, because of the Hyuuga Clan's Byakugan, Hinata has been conditioned to maintain emotional control even when she's physically alone. During the times the story shifts to her point of view it's shown that [[BeneathTheMask underneath]] the stoic facade, Hinata [[spoiler:is a lonely girl who adores her little sister and distinctly feels the enormous weight of the responsibilities heaped upon her young shoulders.]]
** It's quickly revealed that extreme emotional control is seen as a necessity within the Hyuuga Clan, ''especially'' in the heir. Furthermore, because of the Hyuuga Clan's Byakugan, Hinata has been conditioned to maintain emotional control even when she's physically alone. During the times the story shifts to her point of view it's shown that [[BeneathTheMask underneath]] the stoic facade, Hinata [[spoiler:is a lonely girl who adores her little sister and distinctly feels the enormous weight of the responsibilities heaped upon her young shoulders.]]
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* UnderdogsNeverLose: [[spoiler:Much like his canon counterpart, Naruto]] seems to make a habit of playing this straight.
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* UnderdogsNeverLose: [[spoiler:Much like his canon counterpart, Naruto]] seems to make a habit of playing this straight.straight.
* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Guy]]: Much like her canon counterpart, Hinata craves her father's acknowledgement and she inwardly reacts very negatively to the thought of disappointing him.
* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Guy]]: Much like her canon counterpart, Hinata craves her father's acknowledgement and she inwardly reacts very negatively to the thought of disappointing him.
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* MustMakeHerLaugh: Naruto makes it one of his goals to make Hinata laugh after his first conversation with her when they're ten.
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]] [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]] [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] Lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]
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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]]] [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the title of chapter 40.
