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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask:
** Alternia has worn and literally continues to wear Celestia's appearance in public. The main story is from her point of view, so the reader follows along her inner thoughts even as she must continue to present herself as Celestia. It is implied that “Celestia’s” more puckish sense of humor that her closest confidants like Cadance and Twilight see is more from Alternia herself.
** We also get brief glimpses of Chrysalis in her private chambers in Chapter 13 following the failed attack on Canterlot. Chrysalis had forced herself to hide her emotions until she got back, where the fact that ultimate victory had been ''so close'' for her until one moment's letdown of her defenses ruined it all finally caught up to her.
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** Alternia's youngest changeling sister Belladonna is another name for the plant 'deadly nightshade'. Belladonna, although the youngest, is very good at combat. [[spoiler:She ends up leading the Shadow Empire hive, tenacious warriors who viciously attack Chrysalis’ hive after receiving news of Chrysalis slaying their mother and Alternia.]]

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** Alternia's youngest changeling sister Belladonna is another name for the plant 'deadly nightshade'. Belladonna, although the youngest, is very good at combat. [[spoiler:She ends up leading the Shadow Empire hive, tenacious warriors who viciously attack Chrysalis’ hive after receiving news of Chrysalis slaying their mother and Alternia. Her name also plays into the fact that she's been disguised as Zecora and learned extensive knowledge of herbal medicine from spending time among the zebras.]]
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* VillainousLament: Chrysalis has a DarkReprise of the canonical "This Day Aria" after she makes her way back to her personal chambers in her Badlands hive after the attack on Canterlot, mourning the failure of her plan to secure the love her hive is desperately short of.

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** Alternia has mentioning her sister Chrysalis.

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** Alternia has mentioning her sister Chrysalis.Chrysalis, who had driven her from the hive their mother Chamelia had ruled and was going to bequeath to Alternia as her successor via TheCoup which killed the former.



* GovernmentProcedural: The fic is mostly about how Alternia, disguised as Celestia, keeps Equestria's government running in the face of enemies foreign and domestic.



** [[spoiler:Alternia's HeroicSacrifice ends up revealing that Celestia was a changeling queen all along in front of a crowd of ponies, exposing the truth to all of Equestria. Blueblood and Candace manage to avert chaos by convincing the populance that she's indeed the benevolent princess that rule Equestria for a thousands years, while Shining Armor also convince the generals of the same thing.]]

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** [[spoiler:Alternia's HeroicSacrifice ends up revealing that Celestia was a changeling queen all along in front of a crowd of ponies, exposing the truth to all of Equestria. Blueblood and Candace manage to avert chaos by convincing the populance that she's indeed the benevolent princess that rule Equestria for a thousands years, while Shining Armor also convince convinces the generals of the same thing.]]]]
* RulerProtagonist: Alternia is the main character of the fic, ruling Equestria as Celestia's emergency-appointed surrogate and the problems she faces keeping the land together while hiding her status as a changeling from others.

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* AdaptationalHeroism:
** While Chrysalis is still a significant antagonist for "Princess Celestia", the story spends time showing her side of the story, including her MamaBear tendencies for her daughters, the desperate love shortage her hive faced that drove her to take such drastic action in the first place as to attack Canterlot, her [[spoiler:admitting to her regret about "killing" her sister Alternia when she launched her coup a thousand years ago, and her unprompted apology to the Equestrian public at the formal treaty signing]]. It still took appearances by [[spoiler:her sisters Simulacris, Belladonna, and Alternia herself to get her to go for the peace treaty]], but the canonical Chrysalis who ended the main series as an unredeemed villain, [[spoiler:turned to stone alongside Tirek and Cozy Glow]], would never have made the relatively more heroic kinds of decisions this Chrysalis did, [[spoiler:like doing everything she possibly could to save Alternia's life from the EQF attack by finding the real Celestia.]]
** Prince Blueblood is still something of a pompous RoyalBrat who loves to talk about himself, but here he uses it in the service of helping out his dear aunt first by using it in his interrogation of a captured changeling and then twice later by using the stories from his younger days as a means to persuade antagonists to change their minds: [[spoiler:his talking to Chrysalis at Camp Draco in order to get her to change her mind about banishing Cyndra for blabbing about Badlands Hive secrets, and after Alternia's disguise is blown away and there's a forming mob outside the castle gates wanting answers in order to win them over into accepting her.]]



* MamaBear: Chrysalis flies into a murderous rage whenever she perceives a danger towards her daughter; too bad that she's so easy to set off, and quite quick to jump to conclusions that are often wrong. Alternia has shades of this towards her student Twilight as well.

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* MamaBear: Chrysalis flies into a murderous rage whenever she perceives a danger towards her daughter; too bad that she's so easy to set off, and quite quick to jump to conclusions that are often wrong. Alternia has shades of this towards her student Twilight as well.well, herself having been denied the chance to have daughters of her own due to her duties as "Princess Celestia".

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** Alternia's mother's name is Chamelia, adapted from the animal 'chameleon'. She had been planning to reveal the existence of changelings to the pony princess sisters and sought to establish peaceful diplomatic relations with them; when Chrysalis [[TheCoup vetoed the idea by force]], Chamelia's last words to Chrysalis was a warning to Chrysalis that she had to adapt to the world changing around them, lest the whole hive fails.

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** Alternia's mother's name is Chamelia, adapted from the animal 'chameleon'. She had been planning to reveal the existence of changelings to the pony princess sisters and sought to establish peaceful diplomatic relations with them; when Chrysalis [[TheCoup vetoed the idea by force]], Chamelia's last words to Chrysalis was a warning to Chrysalis that she had to adapt to the world changing around them, lest the whole hive fails.fail.
** Chrysalis herself becomes a Meaningful Name in an Inverted manner (since the name comes from the canon source and is adapted into a particular meaning for the story): in particular, Chrysalis referring to the hard outer covering of insects reflects both her stubborn nature (contrasting with her mother's willingness to adapt to changing situations) and her MamaBear protection of her daughters.
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* GiveAwayTheBride: The do-over wedding between Shining Armor and Princess Cadance had the latter asking Alternia to give her away to Shining Armor as her surrogate mother, since Alternia had basically been this to Cadance throughout most of her formative years as "Celestia". Alternia tries to refuse at first, but eventually relents to Cadance's insistence and her own desire to be the mother her thousand years as "Celestia" had forbidden her from being.
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* WellDoneDaughterGal: At least part of Chrysalis' animosity towards her sister stems from jealousy at clearly not being the favored successor of their mother, as well as part of why Chrysalis launched the coup against Chamilia.

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* WellDoneDaughterGal: WellDoneSonGuy: At least part of Chrysalis' animosity towards her sister stems from jealousy at clearly not being the favored successor of their mother, as well as part of why Chrysalis launched the coup against Chamilia.
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** Subverted when Luna discovers Alternia’s true identity, as she immediately demands to know where Celestia is and threatens to torture her to get the information. This horrifies Twilight and Fluttershy, who desperately try to talk Luna down as torture had been outlawed for several centuries, only for a confused Luna to reveal that she ''wasn't'' going to torture [[spoiler:Alternia]] at all, she only wanted to intimidate her.

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** Subverted when Luna discovers Alternia’s true identity, as she immediately demands to know where Celestia is and threatens to torture her to get the information. This horrifies Twilight and Fluttershy, who desperately try to talk Luna down as torture had been outlawed for several centuries, only for a confused Luna to reveal that she ''wasn't'' going to torture [[spoiler:Alternia]] Alternia at all, she only wanted to intimidate her.
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** Subverted when Luna discovers Alternia’s true identity, as she immediately demands to know where Celestia is and threatens to torture her to get the information. This horrifies Twilight and Fluttershy, who desperately try to talk Luna down as torture had been outlawed for several centuries, only for a confused Luna to reveal that she ''wasn't'' going to torture spoiler:Alternia at all, she only wanted to intimidate her.

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** Subverted when Luna discovers Alternia’s true identity, as she immediately demands to know where Celestia is and threatens to torture her to get the information. This horrifies Twilight and Fluttershy, who desperately try to talk Luna down as torture had been outlawed for several centuries, only for a confused Luna to reveal that she ''wasn't'' going to torture spoiler:Alternia [[spoiler:Alternia]] at all, she only wanted to intimidate her.
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** Alternia's mother's name is Chamelia, adapted from the animal 'chameleon'.

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** Alternia's mother's name is Chamelia, adapted from the animal 'chameleon'. She had been planning to reveal the existence of changelings to the pony princess sisters and sought to establish peaceful diplomatic relations with them; when Chrysalis [[TheCoup vetoed the idea by force]], Chamelia's last words to Chrysalis was a warning to Chrysalis that she had to adapt to the world changing around them, lest the whole hive fails.
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* SpottingTheThread: While cobbling together various sources to make a pamphlet, Twilight consults with Zecora about Zebra folklore regarding changelings, with whom the zebras seem to have had a relatively cordial past; Zecora relays one story about a changeling that joined a zebra village and helped them when they were attacked. Twilight had already learned about that story from other books but the oral tradition of folklore means the details can change depending on who's telling the story, so it isn't until Twilight gets back to Golden Oaks Library that she realizes that Zecora's telling was the first version she heard where the story continued to follow the changeling rather than the zebras. From this, Twilight considers the possibility that Zecora is a changeling. [[spoiler:Her theory is proven correct when the Mane Six go back to the Everfree and witness an undisguised changeling bowing to Zecora, revealing her to be not just a changeling but a changeling queen. It isn't until Zecora goes to the Camp Draco peace conference, though, that she reveals herself to be Belladonna.]]
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** Part of the reason Chrysalis launches her coup against her mother is because Chamilia had been planning to establish diplomatic relations with the ponies and reveal the changelings' existence. To Chrysalis, that is suicidaly stupid since changelings live on deception and secrecy.

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** Part of the reason Chrysalis launches her coup against her mother is because Chamilia had been planning to establish diplomatic relations with the ponies and reveal the changelings' existence. To Chrysalis, that is suicidaly stupid since changelings live on deception and secrecy. Chrysalis' attack on Canterlot is also driven by desperation, as her hive had been harassed by a rival hive (the Shadow Empire, [[spoiler:led by her vengeful sister Belladonna]]) to the point where they couldn't collect love in the usual quiet manner.
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* FreudianTrio: Ultimately Invoked [[spoiler:in the final chapters of the story, after Celestia reawakens from her ''very'', very long slumber and Alternia from her not-quite-so-long-but-still-lengthy coma. Celestia (superego) and Luna (id) both conclude that the Nightmare Moon incident had stemmed at least partially because the two sister were unable to work out an agreement, and so ask Alternia (ego) to become a third Princess of Equestria to mediate disagreements between them. Alternia accepts the offer.]]

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* FreudianTrio: Ultimately Invoked [[spoiler:in the final chapters of the story, after Celestia reawakens from her ''very'', very long slumber and Alternia from her not-quite-so-long-but-still-lengthy coma. Celestia (superego) and Luna (id) both conclude that the Nightmare Moon incident had stemmed at least partially because the two sister sisters were unable to work out an agreement, and so ask Alternia (ego) to become a third Princess of Equestria to mediate disagreements between them. Alternia accepts the offer.]]
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* FreudianTrio: Ultimately Invoked [[spoiler:in the final chapters of the story, after Celestia reawakens from her ''very'', very long slumber and Alternia from her not-quite-so-long-but-still-lengthy coma. Celestia (superego) and Luna (id) both conclude that the Nightmare Moon incident had stemmed at least partially because the two sister were unable to work out an agreement, and so ask Alternia (ego) to become a third Princess of Equestria to mediate disagreements between them. Alternia accepts the offer.]]

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* BeneathTheMask: Literally for Alternia, who has had to wear the mask of Celestia for over a thousand years. While it’s not a total personality overhaul once she takes off her disguise, she's definitely a different character when she can let down her disguise.

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* BeneathTheMask: Literally for Alternia, who has had to wear the mask of Celestia for over a thousand years. While it’s not a total personality overhaul once she takes off her disguise, she's definitely a different character when she can let down show her disguise.true form.



* CoolHouse: During the ''Film/{{Inception}}''-like intrusion of Luna and Twilight into Fake Celestia's mind, they come across a house based on Canterlot Castle.

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* CoolHouse: During the ''Film/{{Inception}}''-like intrusion of Luna and Twilight into Fake Celestia's "Celestia's" mind, they come across a house based on Canterlot Castle.



* FallingChandelierOfDoom: At the end of Alternia's and Twilight's duel in a gravity-inverted wedding hall, an altar (from the ceiling/floor) drops onto Twilight's head -- well, it would have had Alternia not teleported to shield her at the last moment.

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* FallingChandelierOfDoom: At the end of Alternia's and Twilight's duel in a gravity-inverted wedding hall, an the altar (from from the ceiling/floor) now-ceiling drops onto Twilight's head -- well, or it would have had Alternia not teleported to shield her Twilight at the last moment.



* GoodAllAlong: Everypony thinks at first that Alternia replaced Celestia recently and that the real one is missing while the changeling is evil. But she's actually the Celestia they've known all along. Luna is the partial exception to this since this is not the same Celestia who banished her a thousand years ago. [[spoiler: Blueblood knew from years before, however, and supports his dear aunt.]]

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* GoodAllAlong: Everypony thinks at first that Alternia replaced Celestia recently and that the real one is missing while the changeling is evil. But she's actually the Celestia they've known all along. Luna is the partial exception to this since this is not the same Celestia who had banished her a thousand years ago. [[spoiler: Blueblood knew from years before, however, and supports his dear aunt.]]



* INeverSaidItWasPoison: Chrysalis realizes who "Celestia" really is when [[spoiler:Alternia lets slip that she knows exactly how Alternia was near-mortally wounded (a spear through the chest) during Chrysalis' coup of the Everfree Hive, something which only those who were there would know.]]

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* INeverSaidItWasPoison: Chrysalis realizes who "Celestia" really is when [[spoiler:Alternia lets slip that she knows exactly how Alternia was near-mortally wounded (a spear through the chest) midsection) during Chrysalis' coup of the Everfree Hive, something which only those who were there would know.]]



** This is also what the original Celestia's choice to forcibly implant her vast memories into Alternia's mind is portrayed as. Alternia has chronic problems keeping her own memories separate from those given by Celestia.

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** This is also what the original Celestia's choice to forcibly implant her vast memories into Alternia's mind is portrayed as. Alternia has chronic problems keeping her own memories separate from those given by Celestia.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Celestia tells [[spoiler:Custard exactly what his group's actions have led to and how they have betrayed Harmony after he is imprisoned but still refuses to renounce his racist views.]]
-->'''Celestia:''' Harmony demands of it, you say? Let me tell you what you and the rest of your organization has done for "harmony". You broke your oaths of loyalty to the Equestrian military, which were to protect and serve innocents of all species. You were selfish and never gave the changeling delegation any generosity. Instead, you selfishly chose to follow your own goals instead of considering the wishes of others. You failed to show kindness to those whose only crime is that they were born different from you. [[spoiler:You provoked the Invasion of Canterlot. Yes, your attack on Chrysalis’s daughter provoked her attack on Canterlot.]] Thus, your organization inadvertently ended the laughter of so many ponies in a time of celebration. You lied to yourselves. Feeding and creating a false dream of a supposedly better, pony-only Equestria, when for more than five hundred years, we’ve been accepting immigrants into our society and have seen no ill-effects. Finally, you rejected friendship without considering its magic and instead, abused magic to inflict heinous crimes. Crimes, whose only result, was to create an almost irreparable rift between ponies and changelings ever co-existing, never mind co-operating. You nearly caused a war! Have our military academies taught you nothing about the destructiveness of what conflict brings? Have you not attended the Hearth's Warming Eve celebrations? You were never getting rid of discord, [[spoiler:Corporal Custard]]. You’ve been causing it.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Celestia "Celestia" tells [[spoiler:Custard exactly what his group's actions have led to and how they have betrayed Harmony after he is imprisoned following the attempted assassination of Chrysalis at Camp Draco but still refuses to renounce his racist views.]]
-->'''Celestia:''' Harmony demands of it, you say? Let me tell you what you and the rest of your organization has done for "harmony". You broke your oaths of loyalty to the Equestrian military, which were to protect and serve innocents of all ''all'' species. You were selfish and never gave the changeling delegation any generosity. Instead, you selfishly chose to follow your own goals instead of considering the wishes of others. You failed to show kindness to those whose only crime is that they were born different from you. [[spoiler:You provoked the Invasion of Canterlot. Yes, your attack on Chrysalis’s daughter provoked her attack on Canterlot.]] Thus, your organization inadvertently ended the laughter of so many ponies in a time of celebration. You lied to yourselves. Feeding and creating a false dream of a supposedly better, pony-only Equestria, when for more than five hundred years, we’ve been accepting immigrants into our society and have seen no ill-effects. Finally, you rejected friendship without considering its magic and instead, abused magic to inflict heinous crimes. Crimes, whose only result, was to create an almost irreparable rift between ponies and changelings ever co-existing, never mind co-operating. You nearly caused a war! Have our military academies taught you nothing about the destructiveness of what conflict brings? Have you not attended the Hearth's Warming Eve celebrations? You were never getting rid of discord, [[spoiler:Corporal Custard]]. You’ve been causing ''causing'' it.


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* TorchesAndPitchforks: Reprisals by pony mobs, including those instigated by Equestria First, against suspected changelings in the wake of the Canterlot wedding attack pop around Equestria, though in the story these are mainly second-hand accounts that filter through to Canterlot via the Equestrian press and whatever is reported to the Equestrian government. [[spoiler:At least until Simulacris' hive near Baltimare is under imminent threat by an EQF-led militia unit, requring Alternia-disguised-as-Celestia as well as pony reinfocements to teleport there posthaste to help stop them via force.]]

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* TheCoup: A thousand years prior, Chrysalis seized control of her mother Chamlia's hive this way. It is how [[spoiler:Alternia was wounded to the edge of death fighting -- in futility, as it turn out -- trying to protect Chamlia]].

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* TheCoup: A thousand years prior, Chrysalis seized control of her mother Chamlia's hive this way. It is how [[spoiler:Alternia Alternia was wounded to the edge of death fighting -- in futility, as it turn out -- trying to protect Chamlia]].Chamlia.



* SpoilerOpening: See the title and coverart.

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* SpiderSense: Changeling queens that haven't ascended (i.e., started a hive of their own) have an instinctive sense that alerts them when other ascended changeling queens are nearby so that they don't inadvertently compete over the same love resources. As Alternia had spent the past thousand years pretending to be Celestia and thus is not ascended, she gets early warning that her sister Chrysalis is attempting to infiltrate Equestria. However, she could not pinpoint the exact nature of the threat and is limited to only having Shining Armor step up security via the magic shield around Canterlot and Blueblood review official paperwork for anomalies before the changeling attack.
* SpoilerOpening: See the title and coverart. Much of the fic is devoted to the fallout of the revelations that stem from the outing of "Celestia" as a changeling queen.




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* YouKilledMyFather: For several centuries after the coup that killed their mother, Alternia's desire for revenge against Chrysalis was what mainly drove her on with the long, complicated charade of pretending to be Celestia. [[spoiler:And as it turns out, she wasn't the only sister who wanted revenge -- Belladonna of the Shadow Empire, after taking in the surviving loyalists who managed to escape and learning about Chrysalis' treachery and the deaths of her mother Chamelia and (it was assumed) sister Alternia, began viciously attacking Chrysalis' hive to the point where Chrysalis hatched a desperate attack on Canterlot to get the love needed to feed her hive. It took Alternia, who eventually changed her mind about revenge after seeing how much more suffering would ensue among both ponies and changelings if she continues to pursue it, revealing herself to Belladonna and Simulacris to convince them to drop their blood feud against Chrysalis.]]
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* GoodAllAlong: Everypony thinks at first that Alternia replaced Celestia recently and that the real one is missing while the changeling is evil. But she's actually the Celestia they've known all along. Luna is the partial exception to this since this is not the same Celestia who banished her a thousand years ago. [[spoiler: Blueblood knew from years before, however, and [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming supports his dear aunt.]]]]

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* GoodAllAlong: Everypony thinks at first that Alternia replaced Celestia recently and that the real one is missing while the changeling is evil. But she's actually the Celestia they've known all along. Luna is the partial exception to this since this is not the same Celestia who banished her a thousand years ago. [[spoiler: Blueblood knew from years before, however, and [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming supports his dear aunt.]]]]]]
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* PeaceConference: Much of the second half of the story takes place at one in Camp Draco, as Equestria and Chrysalis' hive come to try to hammer out an agreement in order to avoid war.

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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: Alternia has worn and literally continues to wear Celestia's appearance. The main story is from her point of view, so the reader follows along her inner thoughts even as she must continue to present herself as Celestia. It is implied that “Celestia’s” more puckish sense of humor that her closest confidants like Cadance and Twilight see is more from Alternia herself.

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Alternia has worn and literally continues to wear Celestia's appearance.appearance in public. The main story is from her point of view, so the reader follows along her inner thoughts even as she must continue to present herself as Celestia. It is implied that “Celestia’s” more puckish sense of humor that her closest confidants like Cadance and Twilight see is more from Alternia herself.herself.
** We also get brief glimpses of Chrysalis in her private chambers in Chapter 13 following the failed attack on Canterlot. Chrysalis had forced herself to hide her emotions until she got back, where the fact that ultimate victory had been ''so close'' for her until one moment's letdown of her defenses ruined it all finally caught up to her.
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* FunWithAcronyms: Equestria's investigative and intelligence agency is the Royal Equestrian Intelligence and Naval Services, or REINS.
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A long, long, long, long, long, long, long, while later...\\

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A ''A long, long, long, long, long, long, long, while later...\\''\\



* EyePoke: Alternia and Twilight simultaneously, after they make up and Pinkie Promise to be friends.

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* EyePoke: Alternia and Twilight simultaneously, after they make up and screw up the Pinkie Promise to be friends.



** Alternia's mother, Chamelia throws herself to catch Chrysalis's spear, saving Alternia, but taking a mortal wound in the process.

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** Alternia's mother, Chamelia throws herself to catch Chrysalis's spear, saving Alternia, but taking a mortal wound in the process. A few of her loyal chevaliers also do so to prevent Chrysalis from delivering the finishing blow, allowing Alternia to escape via teleportation.



** Alternia thinks that this might have been Celestia's reasoning for spoiler: shoving all her memories into her. At the time, Alternia isn’t happy with what Celestia had done and swore to punish Celestia when she had the chance again -- Celestia’s last lines before going into a deep sleep is to let her, reasoning that in such case there would at least be an Equestria to return to.

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** Alternia thinks that this might have been Celestia's reasoning for spoiler: shoving all her memories into her. At the time, Alternia isn’t happy with what Celestia had done and swore to punish Celestia when she had the chance again -- Celestia’s last lines before going into a deep sleep is to let her, reasoning that in such case there would at least be an Equestria to return to.
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Too normal a source of anger to count.


** Alternia has a couple. Threatening her little ponies, threatening Twilight, mentioning her sister Chrysalis.

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** Alternia has a couple. Threatening her little ponies, threatening Twilight, mentioning her sister Chrysalis.
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* ParentalFavortism: Chamelia seemed to favor Alternia the most when the changeling sisters were little and had been grooming her to be her successor, something which Chrysalis noted all too well.

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* ParentalFavortism: ParentalFavoritism: Chamelia seemed to favor Alternia the most when the changeling sisters were little and had been grooming her to be her successor, something which Chrysalis noted all too well.
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** Changelings themselves hold ponies in suspicion as well, at least those who haven’t spent extensive amounts of time disguised among them.

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** Changelings themselves hold ponies in suspicion as well, at least those who haven’t spent extensive amounts of time disguised among them. Chrysalis, for instance, cites the Royal Pony Sisters' defeat of King Sombra, Discord, and the Windigoes as to their power and threat to changelings.

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* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times she tried to tell everypony that she is actually Celestia, it took Luna and Twilight invading the changeling's mind to figure out that Alternia was telling the truth.

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* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times she tried to tell tells everypony that she is actually Celestia, it took Luna and Twilight invading the changeling's mind to figure out that Alternia was telling the truth.



* CoolHouse: During the Film/{{Inception}}-like intrusion of Luna and Twilight into Fake Celestia's mind, they come across a house based on Canterlot Castle.

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* CoolHouse: During the Film/{{Inception}}-like ''Film/{{Inception}}''-like intrusion of Luna and Twilight into Fake Celestia's mind, they come across a house based on Canterlot Castle.



* TheExile: Alternia, after Chrysalis launches her coup against their mother and is believed dead.

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* TheExile: Alternia, after Chrysalis launches her coup against their mother and is believed dead. The desire to show her older sister that she was not some runt anymore drives her through all the years of pretending to be Celestia



* OhCrap: The magic of Shining and Cadance's love blasts all the Changelings out of Canterlot except for “Celestia”, exposing her true form and leading to a brief imprisonment by Twilight, Luna, Shining and Cadence. Alternia only had a couple seconds to realize what Shining Armor’s and Cadance’s love blast was going to do to her disguise, and could only get out one small telepathic plea: “I’m sorry, Twilight!”

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* OhCrap: The magic of Shining and Cadance's love blasts all the Changelings out of Canterlot except for “Celestia”, exposing her true form and leading to a brief imprisonment by Twilight, Luna, Shining and Cadence. Alternia only had a couple seconds to realize what Shining Armor’s and Cadance’s love blast was going to do to her disguise, and could only get out one small telepathic plea: “I’m ''"I’m sorry, Twilight!”Twilight!"''
* ParentalFavortism: Chamelia seemed to favor Alternia the most when the changeling sisters were little and had been grooming her to be her successor, something which Chrysalis noted all too well.



** [[spoiler:Zecora introduces herself formally to “Celestia” and Chrysalis at Camp Draco, whereupon she reveals herself to be Belladonna and publicly accuses Chrysalis of killing Alternia and Camilia.]]

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** [[spoiler:Zecora introduces herself formally to “Celestia” and Chrysalis at Camp Draco, whereupon she reveals herself to be Belladonna and publicly accuses Chrysalis of killing Alternia and Camilia.Chamelia.]]



* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: 'Equestria First']] is full of ponies that think they are this. In reality, [[spoiler: they are simply [[FantasticRacism racist]]]].

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: WellIntentionedExtremist:
** Part of the reason Chrysalis launches her coup against her mother is because Chamilia had been planning to establish diplomatic relations with the ponies and reveal the changelings' existence. To Chrysalis, that is suicidaly stupid since changelings live on deception and secrecy.
**
[[spoiler: 'Equestria First']] is full of ponies that think they are this. In [[spoiler:In reality, [[spoiler: they are simply [[FantasticRacism racist]]]].

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* AbsoluteXenophobe: [[spoiler: Equestria First has FantasticRacism towards all non-ponies]].
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Lamia lost a leg and an eye to a group of racist ponies, which would lead to Chrysalis' invasion of Canterlot.]]
* BatmanGambit:
** [[spoiler: It is implied that Celestia instigated this in her meeting with Alternia, betting that transferring her memories to Alternia would lead her along a set of outcomes that would lead the changeling queen to freeing Luna and reassembling the Element Bearers for that purpose.]]
** [[spoiler:Alternia makes a plan so that Chrysalis would forgive her daughter, Cyndra, for betraying her hive. It worked.]]
* BeneathTheMask: Literally for False Celestia, [[spoiler:Alternia]]. While its not a total personality overhaul once she takes off her disguise, she's definitely different.
* BerserkButton: False Celestia, [[spoiler: Alternia]], has a couple. Threatening her little ponies, threatening Twilight, [[spoiler: mentioning her sister, Chrysalis]].
* BigBad: [[spoiler:The leader of Equestria First turns out to be Major Golden Star, a relatively minor character among several that appear early in the story during the Equestrian chief of staff meeting only to return for the climax.]]
* BrainBleach: False Celestia, [[spoiler: also known as Alternia]], needs it after Twilight asks an innocent question on whether [[spoiler: her sister]] Chrysalis gives birth to her drones.
* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times she tried to tell everypony that she was actually Celestia, it took [[spoiler:Luna and Twilight invading the changeling's mind in order to figure out that Alternia (Fake Celestia) was telling the truth.]]
* ChekhovsSkill:
** Fake Celestia's rather fond of, and very good at, using changeling portal magic. [[spoiler: This is very useful when she has to save Twilight from a falling altar.]]
** An Inverted example with [[spoiler:Alternia's constant problems separating Celestia's memories from her own. The mix-up slip-ups happen enough that Chrysalis is able to deduce from careful observation that "Celestia" is a changeling queen.]]
* CliffHanger: There are multiple cliffhanger chapters in the beginning of the story.

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* AbsoluteXenophobe: [[spoiler: Equestria First has holds FantasticRacism towards all non-ponies]].
non-ponies.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Lamia Lamia lost a leg and an eye to a group of racist ponies, which would lead led to Chrysalis' invasion of Canterlot.Canterlot.
* BatmanGambit:
** It is implied that Celestia instigated this in her meeting with Alternia right after sealing Nightmare Moon, betting that transferring her memories to Alternia would lead her along a set of outcomes that would lead the changeling queen to freeing Luna and reassembling the Element Bearers for that purpose.
** Alternia makes a plan in Chapter 21 so that [[spoiler:Chrysalis would forgive her daughter Cyndra for betraying her hive via spilling their infiltration methods to “Celestia”. Alternia had judged that Chrysalis was torn between her love for her daughter and her anger plus changeling law about traitors, so she sent Prince Blueblood to deliver the formal request for forgiveness on behalf of the pony sisters as well as have him relay his story about his wanting anything to see his parents one more time; that led to a face-to-face meeting with Cyndra, where Chrysalis realizes that banishing her daughter never to see her again, even though she had betrayed her hive, was something she ultimately couldn’t do.
]]
* BatmanGambit:
** [[spoiler: It is implied that Celestia instigated this in her meeting with
BeneathTheMask: Literally for Alternia, betting that transferring who has had to wear the mask of Celestia for over a thousand years. While it’s not a total personality overhaul once she takes off her memories to disguise, she's definitely a different character when she can let down her disguise.
* BerserkButton:
**
Alternia would lead has a couple. Threatening her along a set little ponies, threatening Twilight, mentioning her sister Chrysalis.
** Chrysalis seethes with rage at the thought
of outcomes what those ponies did to her daughter Lamia.
* BigBad: The leader of Equestria First turns out to be [[spoiler:Major Golden Star, a relatively minor character among several
that would lead appear early in the changeling queen to freeing Luna and reassembling story during the Element Bearers Equestrian chief of staff meeting only to return for that purpose.the climax.]]
** [[spoiler:Alternia makes a plan so that Chrysalis would forgive her daughter, Cyndra, for betraying her hive. It worked.]]
* BeneathTheMask: Literally for False Celestia, [[spoiler:Alternia]]. While its not a total personality overhaul once she takes off her disguise, she's definitely different.
* BerserkButton: False Celestia, [[spoiler: Alternia]], has a couple. Threatening her little ponies, threatening Twilight, [[spoiler: mentioning her sister, Chrysalis]].
* BigBad: [[spoiler:The leader of Equestria First turns out to be Major Golden Star, a relatively minor character among several that appear early in the story during the Equestrian chief of staff meeting only to return for the climax.]]
* BrainBleach: False Celestia, [[spoiler: also known as Alternia]], Alternia needs it after Twilight asks an innocent question on whether [[spoiler: her sister]] Chrysalis gives changeling queens give birth to her their drones.
* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times she tried to tell everypony that she was is actually Celestia, it took [[spoiler:Luna Luna and Twilight invading the changeling's mind in order to figure out that Alternia (Fake Celestia) was telling the truth.]]
truth.
* ChekhovsSkill:
ChekhovsSkill:
** Fake Celestia's Alternia's rather fond of, and very good at, using changeling portal magic. [[spoiler: This is very useful when she has to save Twilight from a falling altar.]]
altar, as well as being able to rush to trouble spots as soon as she realizes something bad is happening there.
** An Inverted example with [[spoiler:Alternia's Alternia's constant problems separating Celestia's memories from her own. The [[spoiler:The mix-up slip-ups happen enough that Chrysalis is able to deduce from careful observation that "Celestia" is a changeling queen.]]
* CliffHanger: There are multiple cliffhanger chapters in the beginning of the story.
]]



* CoolHouse: [[spoiler: During the Inception-like intrusion of Luna and Twilight into Fake Celestia's mind, they come across a house based on Canterlot Castle.]]

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* CoolHouse: [[spoiler: During the Inception-like Film/{{Inception}}-like intrusion of Luna and Twilight into Fake Celestia's mind, they come across a house based on Canterlot Castle.]]



* DarkIsNotEvil: While "Celestia" is one of the Changeling species, [[spoiler: her care for her subjects, especially Twilight, is genuine, and not driven by the need to feed off love.]].
* EvilCounterpart: Chrysalis to False Celestia, [[spoiler: who is Chrysalis's younger sister]].

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* DarkIsNotEvil: While "Celestia" is one of the Changeling species, [[spoiler: her care for her subjects, especially Twilight, is genuine, and not driven by the need to feed off love.]].
love.
* EvilCounterpart: Chrysalis to False Celestia, [[spoiler: Alternia, who is Chrysalis's younger sister]].sister. The former came into power of a changeling hive as the last one standing via force by deposing her mother and believed force was the only way to survive; the latter became pretend-Princess of Equestria with the blessings of Celestia and would much rather prefer diplomacy to battle.
* TheExile: Alternia, after Chrysalis launches her coup against their mother and is believed dead.



* FallingChandelierOfDoom: At the end of false Celestia's and Twilight's duel in a gravity-inverted wedding hall, an altar (from the ceiling/floor) drops onto Twilight's head [[spoiler: false Celestia throws herself over Twilight and saves her.]]
* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: Equestria First is composed of ponies that are against non-ponies living in or even interacting with Equestria]]. False Celestia is not amused. [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] is [[YouMonster downright]] ''[[MamaBear murderous]]''.
* ForcefulKiss: [[spoiler: What Original Celestia does to Alternia to save the changeling's life (with a transfer of love energy to go along with it).]]
* GodsNeedPrayerBadly: The real Celestia doesn't, but the fake one relies on all ponies' love and admiration to perform the godly task of moving the sun and moon.
* GoodAllAlong: Everypony thinks false Celestia replaced Celestia and that the real one is missing and that false Celestia, a changeling, is evil. But she's actually the Celestia they've known all along. Luna is the partial exception to this since this is NOT the same Celestia who banished her a thousand years ago. [[spoiler: Blueblood knew from years before, however, and [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming supports his dear aunt.]]]]

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* FallingChandelierOfDoom: At the end of false Celestia's Alternia's and Twilight's duel in a gravity-inverted wedding hall, an altar (from the ceiling/floor) drops onto Twilight's head [[spoiler: false Celestia throws herself over Twilight and saves her.]]
-- well, it would have had Alternia not teleported to shield her at the last moment.
* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: FantasticRacism:
**
Equestria First is composed of ponies that are against non-ponies living in or even interacting with Equestria]]. False Celestia Equestria. Alternia is not amused. [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] furious; Chrysalis is [[YouMonster downright]] ''[[MamaBear murderous]]''.
** Changelings themselves hold ponies in suspicion as well, at least those who haven’t spent extensive amounts of time disguised among them.
* ForcefulKiss: [[spoiler: What Original the real Celestia does to Alternia to save the changeling's life (with a transfer of love energy to go along with it).]]
it).
* GodsNeedPrayerBadly: The real Celestia doesn't, but the fake one Alternia relies on all ponies' love and admiration to perform the godly task of moving the sun and moon.
* GoodAllAlong: Everypony thinks false Celestia at first that Alternia replaced Celestia recently and that the real one is missing and that false Celestia, a changeling, while the changeling is evil. But she's actually the Celestia they've known all along. Luna is the partial exception to this since this is NOT not the same Celestia who banished her a thousand years ago. [[spoiler: Blueblood knew from years before, however, and [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming supports his dear aunt.]]]]



* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Alternia's mother, Chamelia throws herself to catch Chrysalis's spear, saving Alternia, but taking a mortal wound in the process.]]
** [[spoiler:Her daughter, Alternia would end up doing the same thing, saving Chrysalis from a deadly fire spell, but nearly dying in the process.]]
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: False Celestia, [[spoiler: Alternia]], thinks that this might have been Original Celestia's reasoning for [[spoiler: shoving her memories into her]].
** [[spoiler: Custard and the 'Equestria First' ponies]] think that they are doing this. [[SubvertedTrope They are so very]], [[NiceJobBreakingItHero very wrong]].
* IKnewThereWasSomethingAboutYou: [[spoiler:More than one character knew that Celestia was hiding something, but Chrysalis is the only one that correctly deduce that Celestia is a changeling queen, however she didn't expect that she would be Alternia in disguise.]]

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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: GuileHero: Alternia falls into this type the most, as running Equestria as “Princess Celestia” means she has had and continues to rely on her political acumen and her ability to read others to maintain the facade and run the Equestrian government. She is no physical pushover and fights well, but her goals are better served with words and dealmaking.
* HeroicSacrifice:
**
Alternia's mother, Chamelia throws herself to catch Chrysalis's spear, saving Alternia, but taking a mortal wound in the process.
** [[spoiler:Her daughter, Alternia would end up doing the same thing, saving Chrysalis from a deadly fire spell at the formal treaty signing, but nearly dying in the
process.]]
* IDidWhatIHadToDo:
** [[spoiler:Her daughter, Alternia would end up doing the same thing, saving Chrysalis from a deadly fire spell, but nearly dying in the process.]]
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: False Celestia, [[spoiler: Alternia]],
thinks that this might have been Original Celestia's reasoning for [[spoiler: spoiler: shoving all her memories into her]].
** [[spoiler: Custard
her. At the time, Alternia isn’t happy with what Celestia had done and swore to punish Celestia when she had the 'Equestria First' ponies]] chance again -- Celestia’s last lines before going into a deep sleep is to let her, reasoning that in such case there would at least be an Equestria to return to.
** Equestria First ponies
think that they are doing this.this in order to protect Equestria. [[SubvertedTrope They are so very]], [[NiceJobBreakingItHero very wrong]].
* IKnewThereWasSomethingAboutYou: [[spoiler:More More than one character knew knows that Celestia was hiding something, but Chrysalis is the only one that to correctly deduce that Celestia is a changeling queen, however queen without anyone explicitly telling her. [[spoiler:However, she didn't didn’t expect that she would be Alternia in disguise.disguise until Chrysalis confronts her about it.]]



* IndyPloy: [[spoiler: When original Celestia decides to have Alternia take over as Celestia, after the former is badly wounded after the Nightmare Moon incident.]]
* [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask The Changeling Wearing The Mask of Celestia]]: Changeling Celestia has worn, and literally continues to wear Celestia's appearance.
* LivingLieDetector: [[spoiler:Becuase changelings can sense emotions they can also tell whenever someone is lying or not, Alternia and Chrysalis make heavy use of this.]]
* MamaBear: Chrysalis flies into a murderous rage whenever she perceives a danger towards her daughter; too bad that she's so easy to set off, and quite quick to jump to conclusions that are often wrong. Arguably, False Celestia has shades of this towards Twilight.
* MeaningfulName: On several occasions confirmed by WordofGod
** False Celestia's name [[spoiler:Alternia]] is a portmanteau of the words 'alternate' and 'Celestia'
** [[spoiler: Alternia's younger changeling sister Simulacris is an adaptation of the word 'simulacrum' which means likeness/similarity]]
** [[spoiler: Alternia's youngest changeling sister Belladonna, is another name for the plant 'deadly nightshade'. Belladonna, although the youngest is very good at combat.]]
** [[spoiler: Alternia's mother's name is Chamelia, adapted from the animal 'chameleon'.]]

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* IndyPloy: [[spoiler: When original Celestia decides to have Alternia take over as Celestia, Celestia when both of them are at death’s doorstep, after the former is badly wounded after the Nightmare Moon incident.]]
* [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask The Changeling Wearing The Mask of Celestia]]: Changeling Celestia has worn,
incident and literally continues to wear Celestia's appearance.
the latter just escaped being killed in a coup attempt, lest the nascent Equestria be left completely leaderless and the whole land be left in TheNightThatNeverEnds.
* LivingLieDetector: [[spoiler:Becuase Becuase changelings can sense emotions they can also tell whenever someone is lying or not, not. Alternia and Chrysalis make heavy use of this.]]
this, often towards each other when they talk.
* MamaBear: Chrysalis flies into a murderous rage whenever she perceives a danger towards her daughter; too bad that she's so easy to set off, and quite quick to jump to conclusions that are often wrong. Arguably, False Celestia Alternia has shades of this towards Twilight.
her student Twilight as well.
* MeaningfulName: On several occasions confirmed by WordofGod
WordofGod:
** False Celestia's name [[spoiler:Alternia]] Alternia is a portmanteau of the words 'alternate' “alternate” and 'Celestia'
“Celestia”.
** [[spoiler: Alternia's younger second changeling sister Simulacris is an adaptation of the word 'simulacrum' which means likeness/similarity]]
** [[spoiler: Alternia's youngest changeling sister Belladonna,
likeness/similarity. Simulacris is another name for the plant 'deadly nightshade'. Belladonna, although most adept of the youngest sisters at actual shape-shifting. [[spoiler:It makes the revelation that her Shade Stalkers’ hive is very good at combat.already inside Equestrian territory near Baltimare more explainable.]]
** [[spoiler: Alternia's youngest changeling sister Belladonna is another name for the plant 'deadly nightshade'. Belladonna, although the youngest, is very good at combat. [[spoiler:She ends up leading the Shadow Empire hive, tenacious warriors who viciously attack Chrysalis’ hive after receiving news of Chrysalis slaying their mother and Alternia.]]
**
Alternia's mother's name is Chamelia, adapted from the animal 'chameleon'.]]



** Luna and Twilight, in an attempt to determine where the original Celestia was, invades "Celestia's" to inspect her memories without her permission, something "Celestia" is furious about on learning what happened.
** [[spoiler: This is also what the original Celestia's choice to forcibly implant her memories into Alternia's mind is portrayed as.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Twilight has this reaction after she realize that Alternia was telling the truth all along.]]
** [[spoiler:Princess Luna doesn't take well at all the fact that she nearly killed her sister a thousands years ago, and has indirectly forced Alternia to rule Equestria as Celestia.]]
** [[spoiler:Cyndra has this realization after her sister reveals how much damaged she could've down by giving away vital information about the hive, even if it was for the greater good.]]
** [[spoiler:Queen Chrysalis reveals that she actually regret killing her mother and her sister, Alternia.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Twilight, when they are interrogating [[spoiler: and then invade the mind of "Celestia", only to find out that they really owe everything to her]].
** [[spoiler: Custard and the 'Equestria First' ponies attacked a changeling delegation led by Chrysalis's daughter, ultimately causing the changeling's invasion]]. And it wasn't even the first time they screwed up like that. [[spoiler:And while their attempt to take Chrysalis's life at the peace talks fails, exposing the group, it puts Chrysalis into hyper-paranoid mode]].
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:In-Universe, Chrysalis and her sisters are shocked once they realize that Alternia was alive.]]
* OhCrap: The magic of Shining and Cadance's love blasts all the Changelings out of Canterlot [[spoiler: except for Celestia, exposing her true form and leading to a brief imprisonment by Twilight, Luna, Shining and Cadence.]]
* PhysicalGoddess: Original Celestia. The False Celestia, while still powerful in her own right, needs love to fuel it in order to approach the Original Celestia's capabilities.

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** Luna and Twilight, in an attempt to determine where the original Celestia was, is, invades "Celestia's" Alternia’s mind to inspect her memories without her permission, something "Celestia" she is furious about on learning what happened.
when she learns about it.
** [[spoiler: This is also what the original Celestia's choice to forcibly implant her vast memories into Alternia's mind is portrayed as.as. Alternia has chronic problems keeping her own memories separate from those given by Celestia.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Twilight has this reaction after she realize that Alternia was telling the truth all along. Princess Luna has a similar reaction, compounded by the knowledge that she nearly killed her sister a thousands years ago and has indirectly forced Alternia to rule Equestria as Celestia.
** Cyndra has this realization after her sister reveals how much damaged she could've down by giving away vital information about the hive, even if it was for the greater good.
** [[spoiler:Queen Chrysalis reveals that she actually regrets killing her mother and her sister, Alternia. It also eventually dawns on her just how much damage her attack on Canterlot has done not just to her own hive but to all the changelings, as Equestria First is revitalized and attacking any changeling hive they find.
]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Twilight has this reaction after she realize that Alternia was telling the truth all along.]]
** [[spoiler:Princess Luna doesn't take well at all the fact that she nearly killed her sister a thousands years ago, and has indirectly forced Alternia to rule Equestria as Celestia.]]
** [[spoiler:Cyndra has this realization after her sister reveals how much damaged she could've down by giving away vital information about the hive, even if it was for the greater good.]]
** [[spoiler:Queen Chrysalis reveals that she actually regret killing her mother and her sister, Alternia.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Luna and Twilight, when they are interrogating [[spoiler: and then invade the mind of "Celestia", only to find out that they really owe everything to her]].
**
[[spoiler: Custard and the 'Equestria First' ponies attacked a changeling delegation led by Chrysalis's daughter, daughter Lamia, ultimately causing the changeling's changeling invasion]]. And it wasn't even the first time they screwed up like that. [[spoiler:And while their attempt to take Chrysalis's life at the peace talks fails, exposing fails and exposes the group, it puts Chrysalis into hyper-paranoid mode]].
mode and makes Alternia’s job that much harder]].
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:In-Universe, Chrysalis In-Universe, [[spoiler:Chrysalis and her sisters are shocked once they realize that Alternia was is still alive.]]
* OhCrap: The magic of Shining and Cadance's love blasts all the Changelings out of Canterlot [[spoiler: except for Celestia, “Celestia”, exposing her true form and leading to a brief imprisonment by Twilight, Luna, Shining and Cadence.]]
Cadence. Alternia only had a couple seconds to realize what Shining Armor’s and Cadance’s love blast was going to do to her disguise, and could only get out one small telepathic plea: “I’m sorry, Twilight!”
* PhysicalGoddess: Original The original Celestia. The False Celestia, Alternia, while still powerful in her own right, needs the love to fuel it of all Equestria in order to approach the Original original Celestia's capabilities.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Celestia tells [[spoiler:Custard exactly what his group's actions have led to and how they have betrayed Harmony]].
-->'''Celestia:''' “Harmony demands of it, you say? Let me tell you what you and the rest of your organization has done for "harmony". You broke your oaths of loyalty to the Equestrian military, which were to protect and serve innocents of all species. You were selfish and never gave the changeling delegation any generosity. Instead, you selfishly chose to follow your own goals instead of considering the wishes of others. You failed to show kindness to those whose only crime is that they were born different from you. You provoked the Invasion of Canterlot. Yes, your attack on Chrysalis’s daughter provoked her attack on Canterlot. Thus, your organization inadvertently ended the laughter of so many ponies in a time of celebration. You lied to yourselves. Feeding and creating a false dream of a supposedly better, pony-only Equestria, when for more than five hundred years, we’ve been accepting immigrants into our society and have seen no ill-effects. Finally, you rejected friendship without considering its magic and instead, abused magic to inflict heinous crimes. Crimes, whose only result, was to create an almost irreparable rift between ponies and changelings ever co-existing, never mind co-operating. You nearly caused a war! Have our military academies taught you nothing about the destructiveness of what conflict brings? Have you not attended the Hearth's Warming Eve celebrations? You were never getting rid of discord, Corporal Custard. You’ve been causing it.”
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Alternia's HeroicSacrifice ends up revealing that Celestia was a changeling queen all along in front of a crowd of ponies, exposing the truth to all of Equestria. Blueblood and Candace manage to avert chaos by convincing the populance that she's indeed the benevolent princess that rule Equestria for a thousands year, while Shining Armor also convince the generals of the same thing.]]
* SecretKeeper: After "Celestia" reveals her true nature, the Mane Six plus Blueblood, Shining Armor, Luna, and Cadance keep it a secret. [[spoiler:It holds for most of the story. Alternia's sisters Belladonna and Simulacris are told as well in order to convince them to drop their blood feud against Chrysalis, Chrysalis eventually puzzles it out and Alternia admits to it at the formal agreement to the peace treaty, and Equestria eventually finds out after Equestria First launches its attack at the signing ceremony and Alternia takes the shot meant for Chrysalis.]]
* SecretSecretKeeper: Prince Blueblood and Philomena actually discovered "Celestia's" true identity before she reveals it in the story, the former after "Celestia" rescued him from a fire when he was a young colt. They kept it secret because they still loved her as his aunt and her master.
* SliceOfLife: The first part of the fic is mostly Slice of Life, focusing on Celestia's reveal and [[spoiler: explaining her backstory, including how Alternia came to be Celestia]].

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Celestia tells [[spoiler:Custard exactly what his group's actions have led to and how they have betrayed Harmony]].
Harmony after he is imprisoned but still refuses to renounce his racist views.]]
-->'''Celestia:''' “Harmony Harmony demands of it, you say? Let me tell you what you and the rest of your organization has done for "harmony". You broke your oaths of loyalty to the Equestrian military, which were to protect and serve innocents of all species. You were selfish and never gave the changeling delegation any generosity. Instead, you selfishly chose to follow your own goals instead of considering the wishes of others. You failed to show kindness to those whose only crime is that they were born different from you. You [[spoiler:You provoked the Invasion of Canterlot. Yes, your attack on Chrysalis’s daughter provoked her attack on Canterlot. ]] Thus, your organization inadvertently ended the laughter of so many ponies in a time of celebration. You lied to yourselves. Feeding and creating a false dream of a supposedly better, pony-only Equestria, when for more than five hundred years, we’ve been accepting immigrants into our society and have seen no ill-effects. Finally, you rejected friendship without considering its magic and instead, abused magic to inflict heinous crimes. Crimes, whose only result, was to create an almost irreparable rift between ponies and changelings ever co-existing, never mind co-operating. You nearly caused a war! Have our military academies taught you nothing about the destructiveness of what conflict brings? Have you not attended the Hearth's Warming Eve celebrations? You were never getting rid of discord, Corporal Custard. [[spoiler:Corporal Custard]]. You’ve been causing it.”
it.
* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** [[spoiler:Zecora introduces herself formally to “Celestia” and Chrysalis at Camp Draco, whereupon she reveals herself to be Belladonna and publicly accuses Chrysalis of killing Alternia and Camilia.]]
**
[[spoiler:Alternia's HeroicSacrifice ends up revealing that Celestia was a changeling queen all along in front of a crowd of ponies, exposing the truth to all of Equestria. Blueblood and Candace manage to avert chaos by convincing the populance that she's indeed the benevolent princess that rule Equestria for a thousands year, years, while Shining Armor also convince the generals of the same thing.]]
]]
* SecretKeeper: After "Celestia" reveals her true nature, the Mane Six plus Blueblood, Shining Armor, Luna, and Cadance keep it a secret. [[spoiler:It holds for most of the story. Alternia's sisters Belladonna and Simulacris are told as well in order to convince them to drop their blood feud against Chrysalis, Chrysalis eventually puzzles it out and Alternia admits to it at the formal agreement to the peace treaty, and Equestria eventually finds out after Equestria First launches its attack at the signing ceremony and Alternia takes the shot meant for Chrysalis.]]
]]
* SecretSecretKeeper: Prince Blueblood and Philomena actually discovered "Celestia's" true identity before she reveals it in the story, the former after "Celestia" rescued him from a fire when he was a young colt. They kept it secret because they still loved love her as his aunt and her master.
* SliceOfLife: The first part SecretTestOfCharacter: Alternia, while attempting to prove that she is the Celestia they had known all along, lets loose to Shining Armor the fact that Shining actually failed the officer academy’s entrance exam (which he had never told Twilight Sparkle or their parents about) and the reason why: it wasn’t meant to be passed, it was designed to see if the test taker would cheat.
* ShoutOut: Several
of the fic is mostly Slice Equestrian Joint Chiefs of Life, focusing on Celestia's reveal Staff are named after military leaders both real and [[spoiler: explaining her backstory, fictional, including how [[UsefulNotes/TheDukeOfWellington Iron Duke]], [[Literature/{{Sharpe}} Lieutenant Sharpe]], [[Myth/KingArthur Meringue Le Fay]], [[UsefulNotes/PunicWars Hanna Belle]], [[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar Colonel Stonewall]], [[UsefulNotes/ErwinRommel Ermane Rommel]], and [[UsefulNotes/VladTheImpaler Vlad Pikehead]].
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: With changelings known to be running about, ponies resort to telling secrets about each other in order to prove that they’re not imposters. Ironically, in Chapter 4
Alternia came telling secrets that only the “real” Celestia would know about those interrogating her helps start to be Celestia]].germinate the idea in their heads that this changeling is, in fact, the Celestia they have known all along.



* TranquilFury: Fake Celestia, [[spoiler:Alternia,]] is notable for suppressing her anger very well.
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: Subverted. When Luna discovers [[spoiler:Alternia]]'s true identity, she immediately demands to know [[spoiler:where Celestia is]], and threatens to torture her to get the information. This horrifies Twilight and Fluttershy, who desperately try to talk Luna down... only for a confused Luna to reveal that she ''wasn't'' going to torture [[spoiler:Alternia]] at all, she only wanted to intimidate her.
** Played Straight, when Alternia,Luna, and Blueblood later interrogate several of Chrysalis's changelings, they use various tactics to make the changelings talk, but its:
*** Zig-Zagged, with Luna AGAIN in the same changeling interrogation scene. She frightens the changeling, then proceeds to act rather very friendly with her, consequently getting the changeling to slip up and [[spoiler: give her the location of Chrysalis's hive in the Badlands]]

to:

* TranquilFury: Fake Celestia, [[spoiler:Alternia,]] Alternia is notable for suppressing her anger very well.
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: Subverted. When WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk:
** Subverted when
Luna discovers [[spoiler:Alternia]]'s Alternia’s true identity, as she immediately demands to know [[spoiler:where where Celestia is]], is and threatens to torture her to get the information. This horrifies Twilight and Fluttershy, who desperately try to talk Luna down... down as torture had been outlawed for several centuries, only for a confused Luna to reveal that she ''wasn't'' going to torture [[spoiler:Alternia]] spoiler:Alternia at all, she only wanted to intimidate her.
** Played Straight, straight when Alternia,Luna, Alternia, Luna, and Blueblood later interrogate several of Chrysalis's changelings, they changelings. They use various tactics to make the changelings talk, but its:
***
it’s Zig-Zagged, with Luna AGAIN again in the same changeling interrogation scene. She frightens the changeling, then proceeds to act rather very friendly with her, her and insinuating that Equestria might surrender, consequently getting the changeling to slip up and [[spoiler: give her the location of Chrysalis's hive in the Badlands]]


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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: Alternia has worn and literally continues to wear Celestia's appearance. The main story is from her point of view, so the reader follows along her inner thoughts even as she must continue to present herself as Celestia. It is implied that “Celestia’s” more puckish sense of humor that her closest confidants like Cadance and Twilight see is more from Alternia herself.

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