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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Ditzy, in her Mademoiselle Doo persona, fills this roll when she shows up Rainbow Dash in the middle of ''Ditzy Don't''.
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** [[spoiler: Of course, this is due to the Magical Mimicry spell Twilight used on her, giving her all of the mane 6's traits.]]
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Quoted word for word by Scootaloo before she's [[spoiler: catapulted from a waterfall during her match with Rarity. Funnily enough, she ends up screaming suck as Pinkie is commentating about her and ends up thinking she's calling herself Scootasuck.]]
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** Chrysalis used to be the Element of Magic, before Discord turned her against her friends, and Erebos corrupted her.
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* BadassGrandpa: Lao Wu.
** And Amber Spark is a BadassGrandma.
** And Amber Spark is a BadassGrandma.
** That said, he only briefly shows up near the beginning of ''Atlas Strongest Tournament'', before leaving Chrysalis in charge of the plan. So he's really more of a BiggerBad of the series, with Chrysalis as the BigBad for that story.
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** This ends up happening again in ''Atlas Strongest Tournament'', except this time it's caused by ''changeling impersonating her''.
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* BeamOWar: A brief one between the Jupiter Lance and Sonic Wavebow.
* ElementalPunch: Applejack and Rainbow can do this with their auras, and the Jupiter Lance is the electric version of this mixed with LaserBlade.
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* BeamOWar: Lasts about a nanosecond with the Jupiter Lance versus the Sonic Wavebow.
* ElementalPunch: Applejack and Rainbow Dash pull this off using their magic earth pony and pegasus auras, respectively. The Jupiter Lance is the lightning version of this.
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* EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: Not only do we have the Elements of Harmony and Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainbow, we also get a MagicMissile in the form of the Sonic Wavebow.
* HeroicSacrifice: When [[spoiler: Rarity]] saves [[spoiler: Scootaloo]] from being captured by the changelings.
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* RideTheLightning: The Jupiter Lance technique allows a pony to do this.
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* EvilGloating: When the changelings reveal themselves during the final match of the tournament, Aurelia goes on into detail how they've been manipulating everyone in order to feed off of their skills and power, and will use it to conquer Equestria. Chrysalis sheds [[TearsOfJoy tears of pride]] on her artful delivery.
* MultipleChoicePast: Mentioned by name by Discord when he's talking to Celestia and mentions various realities with different origins for himself and the Princesses.
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* MoleInCharge: [[spoiler: At some point during the tournament, Chyrsalis replaced Luna.]]
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** [[spoiler: Then it turns out that Spike's scene was completely different from Aurelia's -- the imposter in his case was Wavedancer, who was helping Luna's other spies get him to safety.]]
** Then inverted later on, when [[spoiler: the changelings realize that the "Spike" they've captured is actually Scales disguised as him.]]
* SpySpeak: The trope is lampshaded during a conversation between Princess Luna and her spy among the changelings [[spoiler: who's been replaced by an actual changeling]].
** Then inverted later on, when [[spoiler: the changelings realize that the "Spike" they've captured is actually Scales disguised as him.]]
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** [[spoiler: Then it turns out that Spike's the first scene was completely different from Aurelia's -- Spike spotting Wavedancer as the imposter in his case was Wavedancer, imposter, who was helping Luna's other spies get him to safety.]]
**Then inverted Inverted later on, when [[spoiler: the changelings realize that the "Spike" they've captured is actually Scales disguised as him.him, and the reader realizes that the second abduction scene was Scales playing Spike in order to be abducted by Aurelia, who spectacularly failed to SpotTheImposter at first despite Scales having wings..]]
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* AllYourPowersCombined: By the final match of the tournament, Aurelia has copied the fighting skills and techniques of every competitor.
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** Ironically ends up saving her life when [[spoiler: the changelings trick Scootaloo into nearly killing her; even with a hole in her, the Crystal form keeps her alive]].
* FalseFlagOperation: Since the final match of the tournament, between Rarity and Scootaloo, is in a multi-leveled arena, when they're separated it gives Aurelia and another changeling a chance to lure them both into thinking the other is outright trying to kill them [[spoiler: leading to Scootaloo nearly killing Rarity with her finishing move]].
* MoleInCharge: [[spoiler: At some point during the tournament, Chyrsalis replaced Luna.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rarity and Scootaloo's reactions when they realize the changelings have been pitting them against each other. ''Especially'' Scoots, when she realizes she [[spoiler: almost ''killed'' Rarity]].
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* YouExclamation: Twilight, upon realizing that [[spoiler: Chrysalis has replaced Luna.]]
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* BecomingTheMask: Aurelia warns her team about this, and we see a few of them get a little too into character with the ponies they're impersonating.
* DanceBattler: One of Scootaloo's techniques apparently looks quite similar to ballet. Rarity teases her about it.
* HypocriticalHumor: When the changelings realize that the [[spoiler: "Spike"]] they've captured is a fake, one of them shouts "An imposter?! How horrible!"
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** Luna also suspects he was somehow influencing the conflict between the hippocampi and the Scaly Back River Clan.
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* TheSpock: A side effect of Rarity's Crystal Pony spell is that it temporarily shuts off her emotions. Twilight is worried that it might become permanent.
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** [[spoiler: Scootaloo]] turns into this as well.
* TheDragon: Chrysalis to Erobos, Aurelia to Chrysalis.
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* TrashTalk: All over the place in the tournament.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Spike ends up in the middle of one in ''Atlas Strongest Tournament'' -- he still has feelings for Rarity, but is also attracted to Ran Biao, who is using him to hurt Rarity, [[spoiler: who she has twisted feelings for, feelings Rarity is reluctantly starting to return, and on top of that, Scootaloo likes Spike too, and it's hinted he might feel the same way]].
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-->'''Luna''': These are standard espionage codes. One must do things properly.
-->'''Spy''': The princess will save the dragon, the apples are being sorted, and… do we really have to talk like this?
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* BerserkButton: Applejack accidentally stumbles on [[spoiler: Spike's]]. It's a temporary one, but understandable after walking in on [[spoiler: Rarity and Ran Biao making out]].
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* UnstoppableForceMeetsImmovableObject Shining Armor's talent is defensive magic while Argent Javelin's talent is attack magic. The chapter in which they fight is actually named after a [[BilingualBonus Chinese phrase]] "自相矛盾" (interacting shield spear), which is the Chinese name for this trope, referencing a story in which a man tries to sell [[ImmediateSelfContradiction a spear that can pierce any shield and a shield that can block any shield]]. Turns out [[spoiler: the unstoppable force knocks himself out.]]
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