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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's very presumptive of him that he expects her to accept him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a ''villain.''
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's very presumptive of him that he expects her to accept him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's well, he ''is'' supposed to be a ''villain.'''''villain'''.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's very presumptive of him that he expects her to accept him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a '''villain.''
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's very presumptive of him that he expects her to accept him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a '''villain.''villain.''
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* BalefulPolymorph: When Apple torments him with her singing, he accidentally turns her into a swan to get her to stop. He, Raven and Sparrow have to rush to change her back before anyone finds out.
** Rotbart traps himself in owl form when he was too injured from a monster attack. He stays in his form when Apple rescues him and has to have Raven bail him out when Apple tried keeping him.
** Rotbart traps himself in owl form when he was too injured from a monster attack. He stays in his form when Apple rescues him and has to have Raven bail him out when Apple tried keeping him.
* ForcedTransformation: When Apple torments Rotbart with her singing, he accidentally turns her into a swan to get her to stop. He, Raven and Sparrow have to rush to change her back before anyone finds out.
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** To Rotbart's disgust, his crush Duchess is also like this. Duchess hated him for leaving their story despite him telling her that he did it because he wanted her to be happy. She is quick to condemn Apple to life as [[BalefulPolymorph a swan]] in the hopes of taking Apple's happy ending.
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** To Rotbart's disgust, his crush Duchess is also like this. Duchess hated him for leaving their story despite him telling her that he did it because he wanted her to be happy. She is quick to condemn Apple to life as [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation a swan]] in the hopes of taking Apple's happy ending.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Rotbart is originally from [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3845539/Janet-Mufasa Janet-Mufasa's]] ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10837556/1/Tales-as-old-as-time-should-ve-been-retired-years-ago Tales as old as time should've been retired years ago]]'' but ''Poisoning Apple's'' author got permission to use him.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Rotbart is originally from [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3845539/Janet-Mufasa Janet-Mufasa's]] ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10837556/1/Tales-as-old-as-time-should-ve-been-retired-years-ago Tales as old as time should've been retired years ago]]'' but ''Poisoning Apple's'' author got permission to use him.
* ShapeshifterModeLock: Rotbart traps himself in owl form when he was too injured from a monster attack. He stays in this form when Apple rescues him and has to have Raven bail him out when Apple tried keeping him.
* ShapeshifterModeLock: Rotbart traps himself in owl form when he was too injured from a monster attack. He stays in this form when Apple rescues him and has to have Raven bail him out when Apple tried keeping him.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs'': the son of the EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one, he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs'': ''Literature/SnowWhite'': the son of the EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one, he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs'': the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
Second, he is in [[VillainousCrush love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
Second, he is in [[VillainousCrush love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs'': the son of the EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one one, he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
Second, he isin [[VillainousCrush in love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
Second, he is
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' ''Literature/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs'': the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
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!Tropes found in ''Poisoning Apple''
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rotbart von Schwartz]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' ''Toys/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rotbart von Schwartz]].
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Third, he is actually having fun being in Apple White's story
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Third, he is actually having fun being in Apple White's storystory.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rotbart von Schwartz]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rotbart von Schwartz]]
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Second, he is in [[VillainousCrush love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make her suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
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Second, he is in [[VillainousCrush love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make her suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
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* BalefulPolymorph: When Apple torments him with her singing, he accidentally turns her into a swan to get to stop. He, Raven and Sparrow have to rush to change her back before anyone finds out.
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* BalefulPolymorph: When Apple torments him with her singing, he accidentally turns her into a swan to get her to stop. He, Raven and Sparrow have to rush to change her back before anyone finds out.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Rotbart's intial relationship with Apple consisted of this since he is trying to bring what sees as an entitled Royal down a peg.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Rotbart's intial initial relationship with Apple consisted of this since he is trying to bring down what sees as an entitled Royal down a peg.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's disrespectful that he expects to respect him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a '''villain.''
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's disrespectful very presumptive of him that he expects her to respect accept him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a '''villain.''
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* DidYouActuallyBelieve: Rotbart makes a bet with Apple to leave her story if he's wrong about the date of Raven's birthday. Apple quickly finds out that Rotbart doesn't make bets that he'll lose.
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** To Rotbart's disgust, his crush Duchess is also like this. Duchess hated him for their story despite him telling her that he did it because he wanted her to be happy. She is quick to condemn Apple to life as [[BalefulPolymorph a swan]] in the hopes of taking Apple's happy ending.
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** To Rotbart's disgust, his crush Duchess is also like this. Duchess hated him for leaving their story despite him telling her that he did it because he wanted her to be happy. She is quick to condemn Apple to life as [[BalefulPolymorph a swan]] in the hopes of taking Apple's happy ending.
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* RelativeError: Since Raven and Rotbart don't look anything alike and no one actually know that they share the same mother, Apple gets the impression that Rotbart and Raven are romantically involved. Apple doesn't know why Rotbart took Raven's place and doesn't why would Raven would tolerate a jerk like Rotbart. This is seemingly confirmed when Rotbart gives Raven the gift of his mother's jewelry.
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* PrimalScene: [[spoiler: During the Yule Ball, Apple and Rotbart accidentally walk in on Charming and Lizzie Harts having oral sex. Apple runs away in tears with the knowledge that her fiancee is cheating on her.]]
* RelativeError:Since Raven and Rotbart don't look anything alike and no one actually know that they share the same mother, mother. Apple gets the impression that Rotbart and Raven are romantically involved. Apple doesn't know involved to explain why Rotbart took Raven's place and doesn't why would Raven would tolerate a jerk like Rotbart. This is seemingly confirmed when Rotbart gives Raven the very romantic gift of his mother's jewelry.
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* CardCarryingVillain: In contrast to his sister, Rotbart loves being a villain and eager to play an antagonistic role to someone he doesn't like.
* EntertainlyWrong: Apple believes that Raven and Rotbart to have mutual romantic feelings for each other since Raven is the only one Rotbart listens to and who Rotbart goes out of his way to please.
* EntertainlyWrong: Apple believes that Raven and Rotbart to have mutual romantic feelings for each other since Raven is the only one Rotbart listens to and who Rotbart goes out of his way to please.
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* CardCarryingVillain: In contrast to his sister, Rotbart loves being fully embraces his destiny as a villain and eager to play an antagonistic role to villain. He cultivates his reputation as someone he one doesn't like.
mess with and is quick to describe himself as evil.
*EntertainlyWrong: EntertaininglyWrong: Apple believes that Raven and Rotbart to have mutual romantic feelings for each other since Raven is the only one Rotbart listens to and who Rotbart goes out of his way to please.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rothbart von Schwartz]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rothbart Rotbart von Schwartz]]
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* AdaptationNameChange: The EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'' is named Eric von Rotbart, whereas in story his name is Eric von Scwartz and his son's name is Rotbart.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'' is named Eric von Rotbart, whereas in story his name is Eric von Scwartz Schwartz and his son's name is Rotbart.
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* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Apple, Raven and Rotbart, the three protagonists of ''Poisoning Apple'' follow this archetype.
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* EntertainlyWrong: Apple believes that Raven and Rotbart to have mutual romantic feelings for each other since Raven is the only one Rotbart listens to and who Rotbart goes out of his way to please.
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* HiddenDepths:
** To Rotbart's surprise, Apple takes duty very seriously and she is genuinely kind. She also has a long vindictive streak when one earns her wrath.
** To Apple's surprise, Rotbart is a huge romantic and has a streak of honor in him.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Rotbart quit being the villain for ''Theatre/SwanLake'' because he couldn't stand the thought of making his crush, Duchess suffer a horrible fate. Since he knows that Duchess doesn't even like him, the best he could do is to make her free to pursue her own destiny and her own love.
** To Rotbart's surprise, Apple takes duty very seriously and she is genuinely kind. She also has a long vindictive streak when one earns her wrath.
** To Apple's surprise, Rotbart is a huge romantic and has a streak of honor in him.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Rotbart quit being the villain for ''Theatre/SwanLake'' because he couldn't stand the thought of making his crush, Duchess suffer a horrible fate. Since he knows that Duchess doesn't even like him, the best he could do is to make her free to pursue her own destiny and her own love.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Rotbart is a jerk and he reveals in being one. He picks on Apple frequently and will mess with other students. But he is kind to Raven and Duchess and is willing to help Apple if she's actually in trouble.
* LikeParentLikeSpouse: To Rotbart, Dexter Charming is very similar to Raven's father the Good King; nice but boring.
* RelativeError: Since Raven and Rotbart don't look anything alike and no one actually know that they share the same mother, Apple gets the impression that Rotbart and Raven are romantically involved. Apple doesn't know why Rotbart took Raven's place and doesn't why would Raven would tolerate a jerk like Rotbart. This is seemingly confirmed when Rotbart gives Raven the gift of his mother's jewelry.
* LikeParentLikeSpouse: To Rotbart, Dexter Charming is very similar to Raven's father the Good King; nice but boring.
* RelativeError: Since Raven and Rotbart don't look anything alike and no one actually know that they share the same mother, Apple gets the impression that Rotbart and Raven are romantically involved. Apple doesn't know why Rotbart took Raven's place and doesn't why would Raven would tolerate a jerk like Rotbart. This is seemingly confirmed when Rotbart gives Raven the gift of his mother's jewelry.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'' is named Eric von Rotbart, whereas in story his name is Eric von Scwartz and his son's name is Rotbart.
* BreakTheHaughty: Rotbart's intial relationship with Apple consisted of this since he is trying to bring what sees as an entitled Royal down a peg.
** Once Apple figures out Rotbart's buttons she does this right back.
** [[spoiler: Daring Charming is humiliated in front of the entire school, caught cheating on Apple.]]
* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's disrespectful that he expects to respect him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a '''villain.''
* CardCarryingVillain: In contrast to his sister, Rotbart loves being a villain and eager to play an antagonistic role to someone he doesn't like.
** Once Apple figures out Rotbart's buttons she does this right back.
** [[spoiler: Daring Charming is humiliated in front of the entire school, caught cheating on Apple.]]
* BothSidesHaveAPoint: The debate of Rotbart taking Raven's place as Apple's villain. Apple's right that Rotbart is abandoning his responsibility to his story which could doom both ''Literature/SnowWhite'' and ''Theatre/SwanLake'' and it's disrespectful that he expects to respect him. Rotbart is right that Apple's story will be fine with a replacement villain, especially someone who actually wants to play villain. If Apple complains that he's too evil, well he's a '''villain.''
* CardCarryingVillain: In contrast to his sister, Rotbart loves being a villain and eager to play an antagonistic role to someone he doesn't like.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The one line Rotbart refuses to cross is causing someone heartbreak or attacking someone experiencing one. [[spoiler: He grew up watching many of his father's swan maidens lose themselves to heartbreak. He empathized with the maidens and could not harden himself to their suffering.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The one line Rotbart refuses to cross is causing someone heartbreak or attacking someone experiencing one. [[spoiler: He grew up watching many of his father's swan maidens lose themselves to heartbreak. He empathized with the maidens and could not harden himself to their suffering.]]]]
* EvilRedhead: Rotbart is redheaded and reveals in his destiny as a villain.
* GoneHorriblyRight: Rotbart turned himself into an owl so Apple would help while he was defenseless without realizing Rotbart's helplessness. It works but then Apple tries to keep the owl she rescued!
* TheFourLoves: Rotbart's motive to abandon his own story and become a villain for another has a lot with his fraternal love for Raven and his romantic love for Duchess.
* EvilRedhead: Rotbart is redheaded and reveals in his destiny as a villain.
* GoneHorriblyRight: Rotbart turned himself into an owl so Apple would help while he was defenseless without realizing Rotbart's helplessness. It works but then Apple tries to keep the owl she rescued!
* TheFourLoves: Rotbart's motive to abandon his own story and become a villain for another has a lot with his fraternal love for Raven and his romantic love for Duchess.
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* {{Irony}}: While Rotbart's a ''Swan Lake'' villain, he does have a right to play the ''Snow White'' villain since he's the elder child of the Evil Queen.
* ItsAllAboutMe: What Rotbart dislikes about Apple is that she can be pretty spoiled and entitled, wanting things to go her way despite the offering of other options.
** To Rotbart's disgust, his crush Duchess is also like this. Duchess hated him for their story despite him telling her that he did it because he wanted her to be happy. She is quick to condemn Apple to life as [[BalefulPolymorph a swan]] in the hopes of taking Apple's happy ending.
* ItsAllAboutMe: What Rotbart dislikes about Apple is that she can be pretty spoiled and entitled, wanting things to go her way despite the offering of other options.
** To Rotbart's disgust, his crush Duchess is also like this. Duchess hated him for their story despite him telling her that he did it because he wanted her to be happy. She is quick to condemn Apple to life as [[BalefulPolymorph a swan]] in the hopes of taking Apple's happy ending.
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* {{Animorphism}}: Rotbart can turn himself into an owl [[spoiler: later a falcon.]]
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* BerserkButton: Do not make fun of Apple's singing.
** Don't mess with Rotbart's pet owl or force cute stuff on him.
** Don't mess with Rotbart's pet owl or force cute stuff on him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: The one line Rotbart refuses to cross is causing someone heartbreak or attacking someone experiencing one. [[spoiler: He grew up watching many of his father's swan maidens lose themselves to heartbreak. He empathized with the maidens and could not harden himself to their suffering.]]
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Rotbart does have a point that Apple should be happy that her story will continue since it has a eager replacement villain. Since Apple is so used to the non-threatening and benign Raven being her villain, she is not used to the idea that she would actually have to work for her happy ending with a genuinely evil villain.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Rotbart does have a point that Apple should be happy that her story will continue since it has a eager replacement villain. Since Apple is so used to the non-threatening and benign Raven being her villain, she is not used to the idea that she would actually have to work for her happy ending with a genuinely evil villain.villain.
* RecursiveFanfiction: Rotbart is originally from [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3845539/Janet-Mufasa Janet-Mufasa's]] ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10837556/1/Tales-as-old-as-time-should-ve-been-retired-years-ago Tales as old as time should've been retired years ago]]'' but ''Poisoning Apple's'' author got permission to use him.
* RecursiveFanfiction: Rotbart is originally from [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3845539/Janet-Mufasa Janet-Mufasa's]] ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10837556/1/Tales-as-old-as-time-should-ve-been-retired-years-ago Tales as old as time should've been retired years ago]]'' but ''Poisoning Apple's'' author got permission to use him.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rothbart Rotbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
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* BalefulPolymorph: When Apple torments him with her singing, he accidentally turns her into a swan to get to stop. He, Raven and Sparrow have to rush to change her back before anyone finds out.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Despite Rotbart being a true villain, he does have Raven's back.
* HateAtFirstSight: Apple and Rotbart hated each other from the first time they meet. Apple disliked him for replacing Raven and following his own destiny. Rotbart disliked how entitled and perfect she acted.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Rotbart does have a point that Apple should be happy that her story will continue since it has a eager replacement villain. Since Apple is so used to the non-threatening and benign Raven being her villain, she is not used to the idea that she would actually have to work for her happy ending with a genuinely evil villain.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Despite Rotbart being a true villain, he does have Raven's back.
* HateAtFirstSight: Apple and Rotbart hated each other from the first time they meet. Apple disliked him for replacing Raven and following his own destiny. Rotbart disliked how entitled and perfect she acted.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Rotbart does have a point that Apple should be happy that her story will continue since it has a eager replacement villain. Since Apple is so used to the non-threatening and benign Raven being her villain, she is not used to the idea that she would actually have to work for her happy ending with a genuinely evil villain.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rothbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother.
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To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rothbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother. He has his reasons for replacing Raven: one he is very close to his sister and he would do anything for her. Since Raven doesn't want to be evil and doesn't want her destiny, he decided to shoulder it for her.
Second, he is in [[VillainousCrush love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make her suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
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Second, he is in [[VillainousCrush love with Duchess Swan]] who he is destined to make her suffer. He doesn't want to hurt her and the best thing he could do is to leave so she would be free to pursue who or what she wants.
Third, he is actually having fun being in Apple White's story
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10884507/1/Poisoning-Apple Poisoning Apple]]'' is an ''Franchise/EverAfterHigh'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6023741/purplewombat225 purplewombat225]]'', starring Apple White, Raven Queen and [[OriginalCharacter Rothbart von Schwartz]]
To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rothbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother.
To Raven's surprise, she found someone willing to take her place as the villain of ''Literature/SnowWhite'' the son of EvilSorceror of ''Theatre/SwanLake'', Rothbart von Schwartz, Raven's half-brother.
