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* BadassUnintentional: Ironically, Mello at the age of three; he [[BadassTyke pulls a gun]] out and aims it at [[BadassGrandpa Quilish Wammy]], resulting in being ShroudedInMyth by everyone in Wammy's House. In reality, he wasn't trying to be cool, and was actually pretty terrified at the time. Not to mention, he had no idea just ''who'' he was dealing with anyway, and even admits it in the narrative.

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* BadassUnintentional: Ironically, Mello at the age of three; he [[BadassTyke pulls a gun]] out and aims it at [[BadassGrandpa Quilish Wammy]], Wammy, resulting in being ShroudedInMyth by everyone in Wammy's House. In reality, he wasn't trying to be cool, and was actually pretty terrified at the time. Not to mention, he had no idea just ''who'' he was dealing with anyway, and even admits it in the narrative.


Probably one of the few ''non''-{{yaoi}}[[hottip:*: though YourMileageMayVary]] [[Manga/DeathNote Matt/Mello]] fanfics out there, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2622414/CelticKawaii CelticKawaii]], centers on the story of how Mello and Matt came to be friends. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7436420/1/Pocky_in_Ramen here]]. ComedicSociopathy and HilarityEnsues.

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Probably one of the few ''non''-{{yaoi}}[[hottip:*: though YourMileageMayVary]] [[Manga/DeathNote ''non''-{{yaoi}}[[Manga/DeathNote Matt/Mello]] fanfics out there, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2622414/CelticKawaii CelticKawaii]], centers on the story of how Mello and Matt came to be friends. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7436420/1/Pocky_in_Ramen here]]. ComedicSociopathy and HilarityEnsues.


Probably one of the few ''non''-{{yaoi}}[[hottip:*: though YourMileageMayVary]] [[DeathNote Matt/Mello]] fanfics out there, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2622414/CelticKawaii CelticKawaii]], centers on the story of how Mello and Matt came to be friends. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7436420/1/Pocky_in_Ramen here]]. ComedicSociopathy and HilarityEnsues.

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Probably one of the few ''non''-{{yaoi}}[[hottip:*: though YourMileageMayVary]] [[DeathNote [[Manga/DeathNote Matt/Mello]] fanfics out there, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2622414/CelticKawaii CelticKawaii]], centers on the story of how Mello and Matt came to be friends. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7436420/1/Pocky_in_Ramen here]]. ComedicSociopathy and HilarityEnsues.


* PottyEmergency: Non-humorous example at the beginning of Chapter 4. Or [[{{Narm}} maybe it's humorous]], [[{{YMMV}} for some]].

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* PottyEmergency: Non-humorous example at the beginning of Chapter 4. Or [[{{Narm}} maybe it's humorous]], [[{{YMMV}} for some]].


* BadassUnintentional: Ironically, Mello at the age of three; he [[BadassTyke pulls a gun]] out and aims it at [[BadassGrampa Quilish Wammy]], resulting in being ShroudedInMyth by everyone in Wammy's House. In reality, he wasn't trying to be cool, and was actually pretty terrified at the time. Not to mention, he had no idea just ''who'' he was dealing with anyway, and even admits it in the narrative.

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* BadassUnintentional: Ironically, Mello at the age of three; he [[BadassTyke pulls a gun]] out and aims it at [[BadassGrampa [[BadassGrandpa Quilish Wammy]], resulting in being ShroudedInMyth by everyone in Wammy's House. In reality, he wasn't trying to be cool, and was actually pretty terrified at the time. Not to mention, he had no idea just ''who'' he was dealing with anyway, and even admits it in the narrative.



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* BadassUnintentional: Ironically, Mello at the age of three; he [[BadassTyke pulls a gun]] out and aims it at [[BadassGrampa Quilish Wammy]], resulting in being ShroudedInMyth by everyone in Wammy's House. In reality, he wasn't trying to be cool, and was actually pretty terrified at the time. Not to mention, he had no idea just ''who'' he was dealing with anyway, and even admits it in the narrative.


* CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutHim: How Matt and Mello feel about one another.

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* CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutHim: CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutThem: How Matt and Mello feel about one another.



* BrickJoke: In the beginning of Chapter 3, Mello, Matt and Linda realize they forgot to bring a flashlight to the basement. Later on, they here someone falling down the stairs, who turns out to be [[spoiler: Near]].
-->'''Matt''': Yeah, now we know why it's important to bring a flashlight.



* CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutHim: How Matt and Mello feel about one another.



* UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist

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* UnsympatheticComedyProtagonistUnsympatheticComedyProtagonist
* VitriolicBestBuds: That the two main characters in the story eventually become friends is a ForegoneConclusion; but take this little gem, for example:
-->'''Mello'''(dragging Matt across the floor): I'm not letting you back out of this, [[LastNameBasis Jeevas]]! I don't care if you're tired! It's not my fault you're out of shape!
-->'''Matt''': [[LampshadeHanging How come you're the one who's always eating chocolate but I'm the one who's out of shape?]]
-->'''Mello''': Life's not fair.
-->'''Matt''': I hate you.
-->'''Mello''': Same here, now get off your butt and move!
** Or this one:
--> ''"And finally, I think I finally figured out what it was about him [Matt], that I couldn't name earlier; he was [[{{Moe}} cute]]. You know, like a puppy you get from the shelter who thought of ripping up your pillows and eating your shoes. Yeah, [[ComedicSociopathy you still kicked the crap out of that thing]], [[CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutThem but then later on he came back and you're not mad anymore cause he's got]] [[PuppyDogEyes big brown eyes]] and wants to play. Yeah, Mail Jeevas was kind of like that."''


* CannotKeepASecret: Apparently, confiding in Linda is essentially "blasting it on a megaphone hooked up to amps from the roof". Unless of course, she's {{blackmail}}ed.
* ComedicSociopathy
* CrazyPrepared: Well, somehow Played Straight ''and'' {{subverted}}; [[spoiler: Mello actually had ''another'' supply of chocolate hidden under the floorboards. It's subverted in that he only had ten bars in said supply]].
* FromTheMouthsOfBabes: Despite being rated "K", there ''are'' occasional mild swear words.
* HypocriticalHumor: Mello occasionally finds Matt's gaming addiction totally ridiculous at times; never mind that he basically ''admits'' he's addicted to chocolate, and then [[UnreliableNarrator recants that statement within the same chapter]].
* ImStandingRightHere: Chapter 3, with Linda.
* LastNameBasis: Matt has yet to receive his codename yet, and Mello will typically address him as "Jeevas", only occasionally calling him "Mail".
* LifesWorkRuined: It took a ''long'' time to build up that chocolate stash...only for poor Mello to loose it. [[TheWoobie Aw]].



-->'''Matt''': Does this mean you're telling everyone that I still suck my thumbs?

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-->'''Matt''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Does this mean you're telling everyone that I still suck my thumbs?thumbs?]]


* MisplacedSorrow: Chapter 3:
-->'''Mello''': I-it's...it's gone. ''[[ItMakesSenseInContext (referring to his chocolate stash hidden in his mattress)]]''
-->'''Linda''': What?
-->'''Matt''': Does this mean you're telling everyone that I still suck my thumbs?
* OffscreenCrash: Near in Chapter 3.
* OhCrap: The chocolate is gone...
* PottyEmergency: Non-humorous example at the beginning of Chapter 4. Or [[{{Narm}} maybe it's humorous]], [[{{YMMV}} for some]].



-->'''Matt''': Oh wow, I think I was so excited, I just peed.

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-->'''Matt''': Oh wow, I think I was so excited, [[PottyFailure I just peed.peed]].


* AgeAppropriateAngst: Mello's reaction to losing his chocolate stash could count.
* BerserkButton: Maybe suggesting that Mello actually ''likes'' Near [[{{Understatement}} isn't the best idea]]...
* BrattyHalfPint: Mello, big time.
* BrickJoke: At the beginning of Chapter 3, Mello, Matt and Linda have to come back upstairs from the basement to get a flashlight. Then, after [[spoiler: Near trips down the stairs and knocks himself out]]...
-->'''Matt''': Yeah, now we know why it's important to bring a flashlight.
* BrilliantButLazy: Matt.
* {{Buttmonkey}}: Matt.
* ComedicSociopathy: Aplenty. One notable example being from Chapter 3 when [[spoiler: Near falls down the stairs and gets knocked out]].
-->'''Matt''': Hey, now we know where the stairs are!
* TheCutie: Linda.
* CuteAndPsycho: Mello. Matt even lampshades it at one point:
-->'''Matt''': And...so [Near]'s the demon spawn, eh?
* DeadpanSnarker: Matt.
* EverythingsBetterWithChocolate
* ExtremeDoormat: ''Matt''.
-->'''Mello''':Uh...you know, could you go in the closet for a sec?
-->'''Matt''':Uh...
-->'''Mello''': And shut the door.
-->'''Matt''': Alright.
-->'''Mello''': And don't come out until I tell you to, okay?
-->'''Matt''': Can I just have my [[CompanionCube Gameboy]]?
* FirstPersonSmartass
* GreenEyedRedhead: Matt; {{enforced}} because of AuthorAppeal.
* HeavySleeper: Matt.
* ImStandingRightHere: In Chapter 3.
* LemonyNarrator: seven-year-old Mello tells the story from his own POV.
* RunningGag: Matt still sucks his thumbs; Mello's chocolate addiction.

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* AgeAppropriateAngst: Mello's reaction to losing his chocolate stash could count.
* BerserkButton: Maybe suggesting that Mello actually ''likes'' Near [[{{Understatement}} isn't
RageAgainstTheAuthor: In the best idea]]...
author's notes.
* BrattyHalfPint: Mello, big time.
* BrickJoke:
RapidFireComedy: At the beginning of Chapter 3, Mello, Matt and Linda have to come back upstairs from the basement to get a flashlight. Then, after [[spoiler: Near trips down the stairs and knocks himself out]]...
-->'''Matt''': Yeah, now we know why it's important to bring a flashlight.
* BrilliantButLazy: Matt.
* {{Buttmonkey}}: Matt.
* ComedicSociopathy: Aplenty. One notable example being from Chapter 3 when [[spoiler: Near falls down the stairs and gets knocked out]].
-->'''Matt''': Hey, now we know where the stairs are!
* TheCutie: Linda.
* CuteAndPsycho: Mello. Matt even lampshades it at one point:
-->'''Matt''': And...so [Near]'s the demon spawn, eh?
* DeadpanSnarker: Matt.
* EverythingsBetterWithChocolate
* ExtremeDoormat: ''Matt''.
-->'''Mello''':Uh...you know, could you go in the closet for a sec?
-->'''Matt''':Uh...
-->'''Mello''': And shut the door.
-->'''Matt''': Alright.
-->'''Mello''': And don't come out until I tell you to, okay?
-->'''Matt''': Can I just have my [[CompanionCube Gameboy]]?
* FirstPersonSmartass
* GreenEyedRedhead: Matt; {{enforced}} because of AuthorAppeal.
* HeavySleeper: Matt.
* ImStandingRightHere: In Chapter 3.
* LemonyNarrator: seven-year-old Mello tells the story from his own POV.
times.
* RunningGag: Matt still sucks his thumbs; Mello's thumbs, and Mello is a chocoholic.
* {{Slapstick}}
* SophisticatedAsHell
* StraightManAndWiseGuy: [[LargeHam Mello]] and [[DeadpanSnarker Matt]], respectively.
* ThisIsNoTimeToPanic: Mello tells himself this after finding his old mattress is missing. When the
chocolate addiction.stash hidden turns out to have been cleaned, [[OhCrap well]]...



-->'''Matt''': Just kidding.

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-->'''Matt''': Just kidding.kidding.
* UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist


* RunningGag: Matt still sucks his thumbs; Mello's chocolate addiction.

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* RunningGag: Matt still sucks his thumbs; Mello's chocolate addiction.addiction.
* ToiletHumor: Matt in Chapter 4, briefly;
-->'''Matt''': Oh wow, I think I was so excited, I just peed.
-->'''Mello''': What?
-->'''Matt''': Just kidding.

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* GreenEyedRedhead: Matt; {{enforced}} because of AuthorAppeal.
* HeavySleeper: Matt.


* BerserkButton: Chocolate is '''SeriousBusiness''', kids.

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* BerserkButton: Chocolate is '''SeriousBusiness''', kids.Maybe suggesting that Mello actually ''likes'' Near [[{{Understatement}} isn't the best idea]]...



-->'''Matt''': And...so [Near]'s the demon spawn, eh

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-->'''Matt''': And...so [Near]'s the demon spawn, eheh?


Added DiffLines:

* EverythingsBetterWithChocolate
* ExtremeDoormat: ''Matt''.
-->'''Mello''':Uh...you know, could you go in the closet for a sec?
-->'''Matt''':Uh...
-->'''Mello''': And shut the door.
-->'''Matt''': Alright.
-->'''Mello''': And don't come out until I tell you to, okay?
-->'''Matt''': Can I just have my [[CompanionCube Gameboy]]?


Added DiffLines:

* ImStandingRightHere: In Chapter 3.

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