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* AbusivePrecursors: The Eldars. The prologue starts with the description on how the Eldar wiped out the original native species of the planet Tartarus by callously stealing their sun.

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* NamesTheSame: General Julius Augustus Perturabo and Primarch Perturabo, for good reason: the latter was either modeled, or modeled himself, after the former.


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* OneSteveLimit: Adverted. General Julius Augustus Perturabo and Primarch Perturabo, for good reason: the latter was either modeled, or modeled himself, after the former.
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** During the heroes stay in Warp, there is a part lifted from [[Film/LordOfTheRings the siege of Minas Tirith]]. The Federation is Mordor.

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** During the heroes stay in Warp, there is a part lifted from [[Film/LordOfTheRings [[Film/TheLordOfTheRingsTheReturnOfTheKing the siege of Minas Tirith]]. The Federation is Mordor.
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* RPGElements: The Solarian warriors' augments start off somewhat below Astartes level, but improve with time and experience all the way to Custodes at least.
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* CampingACrapper: There is a flashback to an Iron War incident where Perturabo dealt with a robotic infiltrator which "was ambushing personnel in the sanitary chambers".
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** After the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish.

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** After the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - -- the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish.



** Derain himself has cheerfully ripped off ''{{Manga/Berserk}}'' when creating [[spoiler: the Second Primarch]] -

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** Derain himself has cheerfully ripped off ''{{Manga/Berserk}}'' when creating [[spoiler: the Second Primarch]] - --



* HordeOfAlienLocusts: Tyranids. In a terrible confirmation of canon suspicions, an extra-galactic expedition is prevented from leaving the galaxy because of interference from the energy structures that Tyranids use as FTL. Then they find there is no way of going around said structures - there are too many of them. So they return to the main galaxy, predictably annoyed. This kicks off the third act of the fic.

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* HordeOfAlienLocusts: Tyranids. In a terrible confirmation of canon suspicions, an extra-galactic expedition is prevented from leaving the galaxy because of interference from the energy structures that Tyranids use as FTL. Then they find there is no way of going around said structures - -- there are too many of them. So they return to the main galaxy, predictably annoyed. This kicks off the third act of the fic.



* ReferenceOverdosed: standard operating procedure for the Order of the Sigilites and the Stone Men. The first are historians who organized during the Iron War to keep as much of Mankind's culture intact, the latter start out sub-sapient and take centuries if not millenia to 'spark' into full sapience - thus they are ''bloody old''. Most of the references they make fly over the head of other people, though...

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* ReferenceOverdosed: standard operating procedure for the Order of the Sigilites and the Stone Men. The first are historians who organized during the Iron War to keep as much of Mankind's culture intact, the latter start out sub-sapient and take centuries if not millenia to 'spark' into full sapience - -- thus they are ''bloody old''. Most of the references they make fly over the head of other people, though...



* ThreeActStructure Spread out over 20,000 (ish) years. The first act was set during the Iron war, around the 25th millenium - or M25 in canon Warhammer notation. The second act was restricted to Tartarus, in more ways than one, after it was [[spoiler: plunged into the warp]]. The third act is set in M42 and counting.
* ThrowItIn: the author has canonized numerous side-stories and tech files written by other board members. The very name of the faction - Federation Remnant - was cooked up in a side story.

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* ThreeActStructure Spread out over 20,000 (ish) years. The first act was set during the Iron war, around the 25th millenium - -- or M25 in canon Warhammer notation. The second act was restricted to Tartarus, in more ways than one, after it was [[spoiler: plunged into the warp]]. The third act is set in M42 and counting.
* ThrowItIn: the author has canonized numerous side-stories and tech files written by other board members. The very name of the faction - -- Federation Remnant - -- was cooked up in a side story.



** the Chronostrife: a massive act of sorcery, orchestrated by the four Chaos Gods themselves, through their mortal servants, to create [[spoiler:a weaker form of a StableTimeLoop, guaranteeing that ''some'' form of the Heresy will take place - but not necessarily the Heresy that happened in canon; other options were available, what was absolutely certain was that a Heresy was sure to happen.]]
** Lastly, there's the Dawn Blade. A semi-sentient, shape-shifting weapon, which has traveled across millions of years, been wielded by some of the greatest sophonts in history (including the Emperor), and is one of the most straightforward ways to kill a demon - you 'just' need to cut it twice. It was also nigh-impossible to analyze - those who tried (including the Emperor), could only conclde that the weapon itself was resisting attempts to study it, and was outright ''trolling'' its researchers. [[spoiler: It was created on Tartarus, during a knock-off Chronostrife, at the same time that it was shattered. It made itself from a blade of demon-killing psychoactive crystal, imprinted on a shard of General Perturabo's own soul, which it obtained because the man was stabbed through the eye and into the brain with it. It kills demons after two cuts because on the first cut it reads their True Name, then sends it back through time to properly descipher and unravel it, and on the second cut it 'reads' it inverted, which in this continuity unravels a demon]].

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** the Chronostrife: a massive act of sorcery, orchestrated by the four Chaos Gods themselves, through their mortal servants, to create [[spoiler:a weaker form of a StableTimeLoop, guaranteeing that ''some'' form of the Heresy will take place - -- but not necessarily the Heresy that happened in canon; other options were available, what was absolutely certain was that a Heresy was sure to happen.]]
** Lastly, there's the Dawn Blade. A semi-sentient, shape-shifting weapon, which has traveled across millions of years, been wielded by some of the greatest sophonts in history (including the Emperor), and is one of the most straightforward ways to kill a demon - -- you 'just' need to cut it twice. It was also nigh-impossible to analyze - -- those who tried (including the Emperor), could only conclde that the weapon itself was resisting attempts to study it, and was outright ''trolling'' its researchers. [[spoiler: It was created on Tartarus, during a knock-off Chronostrife, at the same time that it was shattered. It made itself from a blade of demon-killing psychoactive crystal, imprinted on a shard of General Perturabo's own soul, which it obtained because the man was stabbed through the eye and into the brain with it. It kills demons after two cuts because on the first cut it reads their True Name, then sends it back through time to properly descipher and unravel it, and on the second cut it 'reads' it inverted, which in this continuity unravels a demon]].
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/out-of-the-dark-daot-remnants-in-40k.444343/ Out of the Dark]] by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/derain-von-harken.310282/ Derain Von Harken]] is a Warhammer 40k fic about a vestigial civilization from humanity's Dark Age of Technology coming out into modern 40k.

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[[https://forums.''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/out-of-the-dark-daot-remnants-in-40k.444343/ Out of the Dark]] Dark]]'' by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/derain-von-harken.310282/ Derain Von Harken]] is a Warhammer 40k ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' fic about a vestigial civilization from humanity's Dark Age of Technology coming out into modern 40k.
''40k''.



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* DeathByPower: It's mentioned that an Endbringer Titan once used its harvester weapon to drain the WAAAGH energy of a Super Gargant. Without it, the construct promptly collapsed into its component junk.

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* DeathByPower: DeathByDepower: It's mentioned that an Endbringer Titan once used its harvester weapon to drain the WAAAGH energy of a Super Gargant. Without it, the construct promptly collapsed into its component junk.
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* DeathByPower: It's mentioned that an Endbringer Titan once used its harvester weapon to drain the WAAAGH energy of a Super Gargant. Without it, the construct promptly collapsed into its component junk.
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** after the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish.
** then, Feds pushed their Warp research further, and figured out how to [[spoiler: permanently obliterate demons; not merely banish into the warp, which is Imperium's standard operating procedure, but perma-kill]].
* Expy: Exacerbated by having multiple authors:
** Derain himself has cheerfully ripped off the manga [[Berzerk]] when creating [[spoiler: the Second Primarch]] -

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** after After the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish.
** then, Then, Feds pushed their Warp research further, and figured out how to [[spoiler: permanently obliterate demons; not merely banish into the warp, which is Imperium's standard operating procedure, but perma-kill]].
* Expy: {{Expy}}: Exacerbated by having multiple authors:
** Derain himself has cheerfully ripped off the manga [[Berzerk]] ''{{Manga/Berserk}}'' when creating [[spoiler: the Second Primarch]] -
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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: The Federation is using an alternate FTL travel domain called phase space. It's a set of multiple layers, each faster than the other, full of storms, reefs, flocks of some local wildlife, is extremely unpleasant for organics when transiting from layer to layer... and yet it's still preferable to Warp. At least phase space doesn't have sapient superentities actively trying to gobble you up.
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** A pariah fighter named [[WebAnimation/RWBY Ruby, using a gunscythe]].

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** A pariah fighter named [[WebAnimation/RWBY [[{{WebAnimation/RWBY}} Ruby, using a gunscythe]].



** One of the infantry weapons from the same package is called [[{{VideoGame/Doom}} BPG]] [[9000 VideoGame/QuakeII]] and uses [[{{VideoGame/Unreal}} tyridium]].

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** One of the infantry weapons from the same package is called [[{{VideoGame/Doom}} BPG]] [[9000 VideoGame/QuakeII]] [[VideoGame/QuakeII 9000]] and uses [[{{VideoGame/Unreal}} tyridium]].
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* ShoutOut: In addition to the aforementioned ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' case:
** The beginning of the fic has Federation scientists named after ''VideoGame/XCom'' ones.
** A pariah fighter named [[WebAnimation/RWBY Ruby, using a gunscythe]].
** During the heroes stay in Warp, there is a part lifted from [[Film/LordOfTheRings the siege of Minas Tirith]]. The Federation is Mordor.
** The naval tech given to Imperium has names from ''VideoGame/NexusTheJupiterIncident''.
** One of the infantry weapons from the same package is called [[{{VideoGame/Doom}} BPG]] [[9000 VideoGame/QuakeII]] and uses [[{{VideoGame/Unreal}} tyridium]].

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* NoGravityForYou: One Ork Warboss attempts it against Gottfried's force when fighting in a stronghold made out of a rebuilt Space Hulk. With Guts' Legion specialising in space actions, this isn't as effective as expected.



* SympatheticMagic: How Aldrea managed to corrupt the Iron Men

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* SympatheticMagic: How Aldrea managed to corrupt the Iron MenMen.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: As per canon Wh40K, extremely important when having anything to do with with demons. In this fic, it's expanded as being the very identity of a demon: demons don't ''have'' their names, demons ''are'' their names. Furthermore, demons can be undone by using their name backwards, which is also how [[spoiler: the Dawn Blade kills demons]].

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* IKnowYourTrueName: As per canon Wh40K, [=WH40k=], extremely important when having anything to do with with demons. In this fic, it's expanded as being the very identity of a demon: demons don't ''have'' their names, demons ''are'' their names. Furthermore, demons can be undone by using their name backwards, which is also how [[spoiler: the Dawn Blade kills demons]].

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** after the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish. ''Banish'', not kill.

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** after the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish. ''Banish'', not kill.



* Expy: Exacerbated by having multiple authors:
** Derain himself has cheerfully ripped off the manga [[Berzerk]] when creating [[spoiler: the Second Primarch]] -
** Ixnickel wrote a multi-post expy of Battle Tech, which is taken very seriously.
** ... and also a one-shot revolving around ancient blueprints for {{Star Wars}} LARP-ers which was extremely tongue-in-cheek.



* HordeOfAlienLocusts: Tyranids. In a terrible confirmation of canon suspicions, an extra-galactic expedition is prevented from leaving the galaxy because of interference from the energy structures that Tyranids use as FTL. Then they find there is no way of going around said structures - there are too many of them. So they return to the main galaxy, predictably annoyed. This kicks off the third act of the fic.



* KillItWithFire: The Federation developed a nasty little weapon called Banefire, which is essentially super-phosphex that can kill daemons. It's also sentient and hates everything.

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* IKnowYourTrueName: As per canon Wh40K, extremely important when having anything to do with with demons. In this fic, it's expanded as being the very identity of a demon: demons don't ''have'' their names, demons ''are'' their names. Furthermore, demons can be undone by using their name backwards, which is also how [[spoiler: the Dawn Blade kills demons]].
* KillItWithFire: The Federation developed a nasty little weapon called Banefire, which is essentially super-phosphex that can kill daemons. It's also sentient and hates everything.
* MayflyDecemberRomance An inadevertent example in the background, between General Perturabo and his long-dead wife, Maria. It's not like anybody expected him to live until M42...



* SympatheticMagic: How Aldrea managed to corrupt the Iron Men



* ThreeActStructure Spread out over 20,000 (ish) years. The first act was set during the Iron war, around the 25th millenium - or M25 in canon Warhammer notation. The second act was restricted to Tartarus, in more ways than one, after it was [[spoiler: plunged into the warp]]. The third act is set in M42 and counting.



* TimeyWimeyBall: Again, there are a few:
** Tartarus [[spoiler: in the warp]]. It behaves as a [[spoiler: reverse demon world of sorts, and it has its own time flow separate from the rest of the Universe]].
** Further complicating matters, there is no consistent time flow on Tartarus itself; portions of the planet experience time at different rates, and its greatest expression...

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* TimeyWimeyBall: Again, The Warp is involved, there are a few:
few:
** Tartarus [[spoiler: in the warp]]. It behaves as a [[spoiler: reverse demon world of sorts, sorts]], and it has its own time flow and causality separate from the rest of the Universe]].Universe.
** Further complicating matters, there is no consistent time flow on Tartarus itself; portions of the planet experience time at different rates, to the point where its inhabitants stopped counting, and its greatest expression...



** Lastly, there's the Dawn Blade. A semi-sentient weapon, which has traveled across millions of years, been wielded by some of the greatest sophonts in history, and is one of the most straightforward ways to kill a demon.

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** Lastly, there's the Dawn Blade. A semi-sentient semi-sentient, shape-shifting weapon, which has traveled across millions of years, been wielded by some of the greatest sophonts in history, history (including the Emperor), and is one of the most straightforward ways to kill a demon. demon - you 'just' need to cut it twice. It was also nigh-impossible to analyze - those who tried (including the Emperor), could only conclde that the weapon itself was resisting attempts to study it, and was outright ''trolling'' its researchers. [[spoiler: It was created on Tartarus, during a knock-off Chronostrife, at the same time that it was shattered. It made itself from a blade of demon-killing psychoactive crystal, imprinted on a shard of General Perturabo's own soul, which it obtained because the man was stabbed through the eye and into the brain with it. It kills demons after two cuts because on the first cut it reads their True Name, then sends it back through time to properly descipher and unravel it, and on the second cut it 'reads' it inverted, which in this continuity unravels a demon]].
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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ambadassador: Ambadassador]]: Astartes tend to be the interface between Federation and Imperium, in large part due to them being the only ones who don't immediately flip their lid when faced with people who don't worship the Emperor as a god.

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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ambadassador: Ambadassador]]: {{Ambadassador}}: Astartes tend to be the interface between Federation and Imperium, in large part due to them being the only ones who don't immediately flip their lid when faced with people who don't worship the Emperor as a god.
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Now, thousands of years later, they have emerged, and they've got some major bones to pick with several factions

Including the Eldar.

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Now, thousands of years later, they have emerged, and they've got some major bones to pick with several factions

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A collection of humans learn of this and decide that there's no hope in saving their own empire now. The best thing they can do is grab as much of Mankind's glory and get out of the Galaxy, to colonize the neighboring galaxies where the Eldar have not reached. But of course things don't go as planned; sabotage and treachery have been been afoot, and the expedition goes to Hell. [[Spoiler:Literally]].

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A collection of humans learn of this and decide that there's no hope in saving their own empire now. The best thing they can do is grab as much of Mankind's glory and get out of the Galaxy, to colonize the neighboring galaxies where the Eldar have not reached. But of course things don't go as planned; sabotage and treachery have been been afoot, and the expedition goes to Hell. [[Spoiler:Literally]].
[[spoiler: Literally]].



* Ambadassador: Astartes tend to be the interface between Federation and Imperium, in large part to them being the only ones who don't immediately lose their marbles when faced with people who don't worship the Emperor as a god.

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* Ambadassador: [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ambadassador: Ambadassador]]: Astartes tend to be the interface between Federation and Imperium, in large part due to them being the only ones who don't immediately lose flip their marbles lid when faced with people who don't worship the Emperor as a god.



** after the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish.

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** after the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish. ''Banish'', not kill.



** Planned but [[Averted]] for [[spoiler:a young Gottfried]]. For around a year, he was entrapped by a Nurgle-corrupted band of raiders; when Fed forces have closed in on them and were about to exterminate them, his at-least-halfway-demonic overseer tried to posess him, and succeeded in infesting his left arm; Perturabo had to cut it off. Helluva first meeting...

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** Planned but [[Averted]] averted for [[spoiler:a young Gottfried]]. For around a year, he was entrapped by a Nurgle-corrupted band of raiders; when Fed forces have closed in on them and were about to exterminate them, his at-least-halfway-demonic overseer tried to posess him, and succeeded in infesting his left arm; Perturabo had to cut it off. Helluva first meeting...



* NamesTheSame: General Julius Augustus Perturabo and Primarch Perturabo, for good reason: the latter was either modeled, or modeled himself, after the former.



* PlanetSpaceship: Tartarus, where most of the fic takes place. It was built to transit into the Andromeda galaxy. The 'spaceship' part got derailed after [[spoiler: the planet was dropped into the warp]], but the planet still has FTL capability and the mother of Orion drives strapped to a hemisphere.



* TimeyWimeyBall: Tartarus [[spoiler: in the warp]]. It behaves as a [[spoiler: reverse demon world of sorts, and it has its own time flow separate from the rest of the Universe]]. Further complicating matters, there is no consistent time flow on Tartarus itself; portions of the planet experience time at different rates. This has been used and abused by the Ruinous Powers to create [[spoiler:a weaker form of a StableTimeLoop, guaranteeing that ''some'' form of the Heresy will take place - but not necessarily the Heresy that happened in canon; other options were available, what was absolutely certain was that a Heresy was sure to happen.]]

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* TimeyWimeyBall: Again, there are a few:
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Tartarus [[spoiler: in the warp]]. It behaves as a [[spoiler: reverse demon world of sorts, and it has its own time flow separate from the rest of the Universe]].
**
Further complicating matters, there is no consistent time flow on Tartarus itself; portions of the planet experience time at different rates. This has been used rates, and abused its greatest expression...
** the Chronostrife: a massive act of sorcery, orchestrated
by the Ruinous Powers four Chaos Gods themselves, through their mortal servants, to create [[spoiler:a weaker form of a StableTimeLoop, guaranteeing that ''some'' form of the Heresy will take place - but not necessarily the Heresy that happened in canon; other options were available, what was absolutely certain was that a Heresy was sure to happen.]]]]
** Lastly, there's the Dawn Blade. A semi-sentient weapon, which has traveled across millions of years, been wielded by some of the greatest sophonts in history, and is one of the most straightforward ways to kill a demon.
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* Ambadassador: Astartes tend to be the interface between Federation and Imperium, in large part to them being the only ones who don't immediately lose their marbles when faced with people who don't worship the Emperor as a god.


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* FateWorseThanDeath: It's Warhammer 40k, so duh.
** Planned but [[Averted]] for [[spoiler:a young Gottfried]]. For around a year, he was entrapped by a Nurgle-corrupted band of raiders; when Fed forces have closed in on them and were about to exterminate them, his at-least-halfway-demonic overseer tried to posess him, and succeeded in infesting his left arm; Perturabo had to cut it off. Helluva first meeting...
** Farseer Aldrea, who was responsible for starting the Iron War. She was captured by Perturabo (the Elder), and had her mind completely mapped; then, after her death would have bore no loss to Mankind, she was forced to cast her sight further in time and witness [[spoiler:the birth of Slaanesh]]. She did not survive the experience. This was done entirely to punish her; no record of what she saw was preserved by the Federation, since although the exact details were unknown, there was an understanding that seeing this path to the end was a Very Bad Thing.


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* MindRape: Fed technology permits this, in a very thorough manner; they restrain themselves much more than any Inquisitor would. But it still seems to be an integral part of [[spoiler: checking people for corruption]], and [[spoiler: unmaking Demon Princes]].
* OddFriendship: a few are mentioned to crop up, between people expected to hate each other. One that's been shown in writing is between General Perturabo, who bears ''that'' name and has effectively become the patron of the IV legion, and a captain of Imperial Fists descent.
* OriginalCharacter: all of the main characters are original, and much of the backstoy was invented by Derain; a necessary consequence of Games Workshop not fleshing out anything earlier than M32.


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* ReferenceOverdosed: standard operating procedure for the Order of the Sigilites and the Stone Men. The first are historians who organized during the Iron War to keep as much of Mankind's culture intact, the latter start out sub-sapient and take centuries if not millenia to 'spark' into full sapience - thus they are ''bloody old''. Most of the references they make fly over the head of other people, though...


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* ThrowItIn: the author has canonized numerous side-stories and tech files written by other board members. The very name of the faction - Federation Remnant - was cooked up in a side story.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: The Federation comes off as nicer than the Imperium. Which is a bit odd, because their philosophy is that in a galaxy full of monsters, humanity must be the biggest monster to survive. See PayEvilUntoEvil.


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* PayEvilUntoEvil: This seems to be the philosophy of General Pertarubo and his group.
** When they learn from an Eldar Farseer that the Eldar were responsible for the AI Rebellion they force her to see the future she was so scared of (the birth of Slannesh), which leads to YourHeadASplode for the Farseer.
** When the Federation learned how to unmake Daemon Princes, a group of Word Bearers tore out their own eyes. The Federation forcibly implanted augmentic eyes into them and made them watch an umaking. Their reactions were recorded for educational purposes.

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A collection of humans learn of this and decide that there's no hope in saving their own empire now. The best thing they can do is hunker down in a pocket dimension with whatever they can hoard and wait out the storm. Now, thousands of years later, they have emerged, and they've got a major bone to pick with the Eldar.

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A collection of humans learn of this and decide that there's no hope in saving their own empire now. The best thing they can do is hunker down in a pocket dimension with whatever they can hoard grab as much of Mankind's glory and wait get out of the storm. Galaxy, to colonize the neighboring galaxies where the Eldar have not reached. But of course things don't go as planned; sabotage and treachery have been been afoot, and the expedition goes to Hell. [[Spoiler:Literally]].

Now, thousands of years later, they have emerged, and they've got a some major bone bones to pick with several factions

Including
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* TheFederation: The remnants that follow Perturabo (not the Primarch, but a guy whom he is named after in this story) call themselves this.

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* TheDeterminator: Federation Remnant as a whole. Oh, we just got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp and are currently ass-deep in demons? Hold my beer, and pass the ammunition.]]
** Plenty of individual examples, but one notable example is [[spoiler: the Lost Primarch of the Second Legion, Gottfried 'Gotz' Perturabo, who's widely regarded to embody the Emperor's drive, stubborness and determination.]]
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Multiple examples:
** after the planet Tartarus got [[spoiler: dumped into the warp]], its population, almost all of them veterans of the Iron War, learned real quick how to fight against the Legions of Hell. This resulted in humans killing Greater Demons - the sort of gribblies that habitually devastate planets, and require special forces of Grey Knights to banish.
** then, Feds pushed their Warp research further, and figured out how to [[spoiler: permanently obliterate demons; not merely banish into the warp, which is Imperium's standard operating procedure, but perma-kill]].
* TheFederation: The remnants that follow General Perturabo (not the Primarch, but a the guy whom he is named after in this story) himself after) call themselves this.this.
* HorrifyingTheHorror: Demons flee from Federation Remnant forces (except Khornate demons, of course). This is explained by [[spoiler: the Fed's warp researchers figuring out how to permanently destroy demons]].
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* VestigialEmpire: Though the Remnants stylize themselves as a federation, they still qualify as they are all that remains of time when humanity was at its most powerful. Recently, though, they've started expanding their realm in the material universe, so they might not stay vestigial for too long.

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* ScrewYouElves: A good portion of the Federation's society is essentially based on this. Since the Eldar (or rather a small group of them) was responsible for dismantling humanity's empire so that it could be used as a therapeutic punching bag for the rest of their race, it's not surprising that the remnants are dedicated to screwing the Eldar over however they can.
* SuperweaponSurprise: Since the Federation has access to all the technological feats that humanity had at its zenith, it would have been more surprising if they ''didn't'' have a veritable armory of OP superweapons.

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* KillItWithFire: The Federation developed a nasty little weapon called Banefire, which is essentially super-phosphex that can kill daemons. It's also sentient and hates everything.
* ScrewYouElves: A good portion of the Federation's society is essentially based on this. Since the Eldar (or rather a small group of them) was were responsible for dismantling humanity's empire so that it could be used as a therapeutic punching bag for the rest of their race, it's not surprising that the remnants are dedicated to screwing the Eldar over however they can.
can. Anything that hurts them is A-okay in their book.
* SuperweaponSurprise: Since the Federation has access to all the technological feats that humanity had at its zenith, it would have been more surprising if they ''didn't'' have a veritable literal armory of OP superweapons.
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* ArchEnemy: The Eldar to the Federation. As a result of a group of them essentially causing their empire to fall and reduce them to a shadow of their former glory in the hopes of having a punching bag for their own race, the remaining humans of Dark Age have a boundless hatred for the space elves.

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* TheFederation: The remnants that follow Perturabo (not the Primarch, but a guy whom he is named after in this story) call themselves this.
* SuperweaponSurprise: Since the Federation has access to all the technological feats that humanity had at its zenith, it would have been more surprising if they ''didn't'' have a veritable armory of OP superweapons.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Warhammer 40k was already of this mindset; in this fic, it manages to go even further.
* WarIsHell: If you were expecting war to ''not'' be horrifying here, you clearly don't know the franchise very well.
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"Oh Eldar, we're baaaack. '''NOS AUTEM TENEBRAS!'''

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"Oh Eldar, we're baaaack. '''NOS AUTEM TENEBRAS!'''
TENEBRAS!'''"



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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/out-of-the-dark-daot-remnants-in-40k.444343/ Out of the Dark]] by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/derain-von-harken.310282/ Derain Von Harken]] is a Warhammer 40k fic about a vestigial civilization from humanity's Dark Age of Technology coming out into modern 40k.

The story starts off during the Iron War, where the rebellion of the Men of Iron is in full swing. The author notes that this is an oddly beneficial time period for the Eldar; mankind is suddenly getting attacked by their creations which had stayed loyal for millennia, psyker populations are booming and an anti-tech movement is gaining traction. Seems pretty convenient for them, doesn't it? Well, turns out, the entire debacle was engineered by a group of Eldar, the idea being that having a little war with a weakened humanity would be just the thing to shake their race out of its current state of being horrifically depraved monsters.

A collection of humans learn of this and decide that there's no hope in saving their own empire now. The best thing they can do is hunker down in a pocket dimension with whatever they can hoard and wait out the storm. Now, thousands of years later, they have emerged, and they've got a major bone to pick with the Eldar.

"Oh Eldar, we're baaaack. '''NOS AUTEM TENEBRAS!'''
Eldar: Oh, shit.

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!!Tropes contained in Out of the Dark:
*ArchEnemy: The Federation's hatred of the Eldar is boundless.

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