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** "Hiiii Emma !"
** "Morons !"
** "Hey, bestie !"
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** "Morons !"
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Henry Mills is a ChildProdigy living under the care of his absent-minded (but sometimes caring) adoptive mother. He suddenly becomes certain that he and the other people from his town are fairy tales's protagonists from an abridged series, traped in the mind of a bored college student and that the others (except his adoptive mother) suffer from IdentityAmnesia.
He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary Margaret Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Grandma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
The worst thing, though? Henry is right!
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her [[BatmanGambit Batman Gambits]] always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some [[InnocentBystander Innocent Bystanders]] are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well: [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary Margaret Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Grandma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
The worst thing, though? Henry is right!
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her [[BatmanGambit Batman Gambits]] always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some [[InnocentBystander Innocent Bystanders]] are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well: [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
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Henry Mills is a ChildProdigy living under the care of his absent-minded (but sometimes caring) adoptive mother. He suddenly becomes certain that he and the other people from his town are fairy tales's tale protagonists from an abridged series, traped trapped in the mind of a bored college student student, and that the others (except his adoptive mother) suffer from IdentityAmnesia.
He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary Margaret Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him up for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Grandma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
The worst thing, though? Henry isright!
right!
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White'sstepmother, stepmother who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her [[BatmanGambit Batman Gambits]] always succeed... succeed...unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... answer...even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some [[InnocentBystander Innocent Bystanders]] are just as ruthless as him , him, and that Henry is no different. different? That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well: [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary Margaret Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him up for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned...
The worst thing, though? Henry is
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's
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** Paxington's opinion. His catchphrase is "Morons !".
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** Mr. Gold's friendship with Archie.
** ''(Is trying not to imagine this)''
** Hiiii Emma !
** The children would look weird !
** I have sustained my quota of making people cry for today !
** Lalalala
** I need you! I want you! I love you! I mixed you a CD !
** ''(Is trying not to imagine this)''
** Hiiii Emma !
** The children would look weird !
** I have sustained my quota of making people cry for today !
** Lalalala
** I need you! I want you! I love you! I mixed you a CD !
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s [[BatmanGambit Batman Gambits]] always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s [[InnocentBystander Innocent Bystanders]] are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well well: [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]]!
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* ExtremeDoormat: Archie. He grows out of it, and vi LampshadeHanging it is called a "CrowningMomentOfAwesome" by name !
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Oh, David, it was funny at the beginning, but you made Mary Margaret cry ! ThisMeansWar... with the whole universe !
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* MustHaveCaffeine: Mary Margaret. Whatever you do, don't refuse to hand her the coffee, but do not give her any by your own decision... seriously !
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* MustHaveCaffeine: Mary Margaret. Whatever you do, don't refuse to hand her the coffee, but do not give her any by your own decision... seriously ! seriously!
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* RageBreakingPoint: ''You did it, I'm going to marry Mr. Gold !''.
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* RageBreakingPoint: ''You did it, I'm going to marry Mr. Gold !''. Gold!''
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He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary M. Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result ? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Granma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
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He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary M. Margaret Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result ? result? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Granma Grandma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
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The worst thing, though ? Henry is right !
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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The worst thing, though ? though? Henry is right !
right!
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them allhere ! here! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henry is no different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
them]]!
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all
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* CreepyChild: In the end, even Emma is terrified by Henry, and his ''evil'' genes are revealed to be originating in young Snow White. This seems to have faded over time with her, so perhaps it will be the same thing for him. Well, he shows more and more sensitivity as time passes...
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* CreepyChild: In the end, even Emma is terrified by Henry, and his ''evil'' genes are revealed to be originating in young Snow White. This seems to have faded over time with her, so perhaps it will be the same thing for him. Well, he shows more and more sensitivity as time passes... passes...
** In the end, it's probably easier to count which children AREN'T creepy.
** In the end, it's probably easier to count which children AREN'T creepy.
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henru is no differend, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henru Henry is no differend, and different. That cute, harmless-looking little boy wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated all the women in town (except one, who refused an one he didn't ask) and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henru is no differend, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated or tried to date all the women in town (except one, who refused an one he didn't ask) and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as him , and that Henru is no differend, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary M. Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birtth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result ? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Granma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
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He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary M. Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birtth birth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result ? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Granma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated all the women in town (except one, who refused an one he didn't ask) and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention her son is just as ruthless as all the characters previously described and all those you will come to discover in this fic apart from her and a few InnocentBystanders, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[hipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated all the women in town (except one, who refused an one he didn't ask) and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention her son is every character from this fanfiction, apart from Emma and some {{InnocentBystander}}s are just as ruthless as all the characters previously described him , and all those you will come to discover in this fic apart from her and a few InnocentBystanders, that Henru is no differend, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[hipperOnDeck [[ShipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
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* Onlysaneman: Emma feels that way off and on throughout the series and gets extremely offended when Graham tells her she's starting to fit in nicely.
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* Onlysaneman: OnlySaneMan: Emma feels that way off and on throughout the series and gets extremely offended when Graham tells her she's starting to fit in nicely.
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* Onlysaneman: Emma feels that way off and on throughout the series and gets extremely offended when Graham tells her she's starting to fit in nicely.
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* RunningGag: Detective Man!
** Mary Margaret's caffeine craze.
** Mr. Gold's friendship with Archie.
** Mary Margaret's caffeine craze.
** Mr. Gold's friendship with Archie.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Sort of. Emma agrees to marry Mr. Gold in exchange for his helping exonerate Mary Margaret. It's later revealed that Mr. Gold just wants to go through with it because it would put him in line for Snow and Charming's throne and to irritate August. When Belle comes into the picture, Emma is immediately replaced but one has to wonder how she feels about that.
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* AntiHero: Emma is type III, arguably the only moral character in the fanfiction except Archie. Archie must be a type I, beginning in type IV.
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* AntiHero: Emma is type III, arguably the only moral character in the fanfiction except Archie. Archie must be a type I, beginning in type IV. IV.
* ArchNemesis: Regina and Emma naturally. Mr. Gold and Archie can slip into this when competing over Emma. August and Henry definately fall into this as well.
* ArchNemesis: Regina and Emma naturally. Mr. Gold and Archie can slip into this when competing over Emma. August and Henry definately fall into this as well.
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: WordofGod says Mary Margaret's character is based of this.
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime. \n It can be found [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/11439.html#cutid1 here]].
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'' is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'' Series'') is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' (also known as ''Once Upon A Time The Abridged Series'' is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.
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* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching ComedicHeroicSociopath and ComedicSociopathy status.
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* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching ComedicHeroicSociopath SociopathicHero and ComedicSociopathy status.
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* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching HeroicSociopathy and ComedicSociopathy status.
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* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching HeroicSociopathy ComedicHeroicSociopath and ComedicSociopathy status.
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* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching HeroicSociopath and ComedicSociopathy status.
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* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching HeroicSociopath HeroicSociopathy and ComedicSociopathy status.
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* CloudKuckooLander: Henry and Rumplestilskin/Mr. Gold.
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* CloudKuckooLander: CloudCuckooLander: Henry and Rumplestilskin/Mr. Gold. This makes them [[IncrediblyLamePun comedy gold]].
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* TheCasanova/KavorkaMan: Mr. Gold, except for [[spoiler: his two ex-wives, Granny, Kathryn, Regina]] and Emma...[[spoiler: though it gets put to doubt]].
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* TheCasanova/KavorkaMan: TheCasanova / KavorkaMan: Mr. Gold, except for [[spoiler: his two ex-wives, Granny, Kathryn, Regina]] and Emma...[[spoiler: though it gets put to doubt]].
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* TheCasanova/KavorkaMan: Mr. Gold, except for [[spoiler: his two ex-wives, Granny, Kathryn, Regina]] and Emma...[[spoiler: though it gets put to doubt]].
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''Once upon a time: Abridged'' is a FanFiction by [[http://daesgatling.livejournal.com/ daestgatling]], based on the TV series OnceUponATime.
Henry Mills is a ChildProdigy living under the care of his absent-minded (but sometimes caring) adoptive mother. He suddenly becomes certain that he and the other people from his town are fairy tales's protagonists from an abridged series, traped in the mind of a bored college student and that the others (except his adoptive mother) suffer from IdentityAmnesia.
He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary M. Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birtth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result ? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Granma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
The worst thing, though ? Henry is right !
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated all the women in town (except one, who refused an one he didn't ask) and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention her son is just as ruthless as all the characters previously described and all those you will come to discover in this fic apart from her and a few InnocentBystanders, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[hipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
!!This hilarious fanfiction contains example of the following tropes:
* AntiHero: Emma is type III, arguably the only moral character in the fanfiction except Archie. Archie must be a type I, beginning in type IV.
* BrainlessBeauty: Charming can be momentarly this sometimes in the abridged series, though he seems more HotBlooded and refusing to plan. [[TooDumbToLive David is much worse]]...
* ButtMonkey: David and Prince Charming. Mary Margaret sees him in a state close from BrainwashedAndCrazy... and comments that it can mean no good as he is way too likable. No one seems shocked at her bluntness.
* CreepyChild: In the end, even Emma is terrified by Henry, and his ''evil'' genes are revealed to be originating in young Snow White. This seems to have faded over time with her, so perhaps it will be the same thing for her.
* CuteButPsycho: Mary Margaret is a glorious example. Kind, romantic, idealistic... ready to kill anyone who stands in the way of friendship or an opportunity of romance, and so possessive it becomes creepy.
* DesperatelyCravesAffection: Mary Margaret, like in the series, though it is even more heartbreaking because she turns this UpToEleven.
* DeathGlare: Regina and Henry are fond of this... as is Mary Margaret. Emma cannot pull it off, despite all her efforts.
* {{Determinator}}: Everyone, except one shot characters and David.
* ExtremeDoormat: Archie. He grows out of it, and vi LampshadeHanging it is called a "CrowningMomentOfAwesome" by name !
* GranolaGirl: Belle, untill she meets Rumplestilskin. [[ItGotWorse It Got]] [[CruellaToAnimals Worse]].
* HandsomeLech: Rumplestilskin, Dr Whale, and, finally, David.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Oh, David, it was funny at the beginning, but you made Mary Margaret cry ! ThisMeansWar... with the whole universe !
* KavorkaMan: Mr. Gold, except for [[spoiler: his two ex-wives, Granny, Kathryn, Regina]] and Emma...[[spoiler: though it gets put to doubt]].
--->'''Mary Margaret:''' He told me he would treasure this apron forever !
* LoveHungry: Mary Margaret is definitely the trope... unless, of course, she doesn't think so. In this case, we will delete this entry, because we do ''not'' want to annoy her.
* MoodWhiplash: Sometimes, things ''do'' get sad... it doesn't last long.
* MustHaveCaffeine: Mary Margaret. Whatever you do, don't refuse to hand her the coffee, but do not give her any by your own decision... seriously !
* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching HeroicSociopath and ComedicSociopathy status.
* SerialRomeo: Graham.
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Henry Mills is a ChildProdigy living under the care of his absent-minded (but sometimes caring) adoptive mother. He suddenly becomes certain that he and the other people from his town are fairy tales's protagonists from an abridged series, traped in the mind of a bored college student and that the others (except his adoptive mother) suffer from IdentityAmnesia.
He thinks his mother, the elegant, headstrong, and haughty mayor Regina Mills, is an Evil Queen, that his schoolteacher who DesperatelyCravesAffection Mary M. Blanchard is Snow White, and that [[ItsAllAboutMe the]] [[TooDumbToLive aggravating]] ex-coma patient [[DesignatedHero David Nolan]] is Prince Charming. Naturally, both of them must be the parents of the biological mother who gave him for adoption ten years ago and is destined to come back [[TheChosenOne and save them all]]. Oh, and after finding his birtth mother, he tells her all about it, and she gets concerned... and a bit angry that he could think of a relation between her and David. The result ? Much like in the original, she remains in town, but must face a HandsomeLech, a psychopathic LadyKillerInLove who gives a new meaning to HellBentForLeather, a Badass Granma [[NeverMessWithGranny with whom you should never mess]], a ValleyGirl, and... Mary Margaret, her new bestie.
The worst thing, though ? Henry is right !
Regina, his other mom, is Snow White's stepmother, who sent them all here ! She is insanely rich, classy and powerful, and her {{BatmanGambit}}s always succeed... unless they are thwarted by Mr. Gold, Emma's only powerful ally... who happens to be an equally omnipotent AffablyEvil [[TheChessmaster mastermind]] who dated all the women in town (except one, who refused an one he didn't ask) and won't take "no" for an answer... even when it comes from Emma. Did we mention her son is just as ruthless as all the characters previously described and all those you will come to discover in this fic apart from her and a few InnocentBystanders, and wants Mr. Gold to make him his very own BastardUnderstudy and DaddysLittleVillain. Yes, you heard well [[hipperOnDeck he ships]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking them]] !
!!This hilarious fanfiction contains example of the following tropes:
* AntiHero: Emma is type III, arguably the only moral character in the fanfiction except Archie. Archie must be a type I, beginning in type IV.
* BrainlessBeauty: Charming can be momentarly this sometimes in the abridged series, though he seems more HotBlooded and refusing to plan. [[TooDumbToLive David is much worse]]...
* ButtMonkey: David and Prince Charming. Mary Margaret sees him in a state close from BrainwashedAndCrazy... and comments that it can mean no good as he is way too likable. No one seems shocked at her bluntness.
* CreepyChild: In the end, even Emma is terrified by Henry, and his ''evil'' genes are revealed to be originating in young Snow White. This seems to have faded over time with her, so perhaps it will be the same thing for her.
* CuteButPsycho: Mary Margaret is a glorious example. Kind, romantic, idealistic... ready to kill anyone who stands in the way of friendship or an opportunity of romance, and so possessive it becomes creepy.
* DesperatelyCravesAffection: Mary Margaret, like in the series, though it is even more heartbreaking because she turns this UpToEleven.
* DeathGlare: Regina and Henry are fond of this... as is Mary Margaret. Emma cannot pull it off, despite all her efforts.
* {{Determinator}}: Everyone, except one shot characters and David.
* ExtremeDoormat: Archie. He grows out of it, and vi LampshadeHanging it is called a "CrowningMomentOfAwesome" by name !
* GranolaGirl: Belle, untill she meets Rumplestilskin. [[ItGotWorse It Got]] [[CruellaToAnimals Worse]].
* HandsomeLech: Rumplestilskin, Dr Whale, and, finally, David.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Oh, David, it was funny at the beginning, but you made Mary Margaret cry ! ThisMeansWar... with the whole universe !
* KavorkaMan: Mr. Gold, except for [[spoiler: his two ex-wives, Granny, Kathryn, Regina]] and Emma...[[spoiler: though it gets put to doubt]].
--->'''Mary Margaret:''' He told me he would treasure this apron forever !
* LoveHungry: Mary Margaret is definitely the trope... unless, of course, she doesn't think so. In this case, we will delete this entry, because we do ''not'' want to annoy her.
* MoodWhiplash: Sometimes, things ''do'' get sad... it doesn't last long.
* MustHaveCaffeine: Mary Margaret. Whatever you do, don't refuse to hand her the coffee, but do not give her any by your own decision... seriously !
* ThePrankster: Belle and Rumplestilskin, reaching HeroicSociopath and ComedicSociopathy status.
* SerialRomeo: Graham.
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