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** Harry calls Remus Lupin, and indirectly most of the Order, out on their inability to do anything that goes against Dumbledore's orders.

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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: After Harry kills for the first time Harry ([[spoiler:Lucius and Bellatrix]]), including one person with his bare hands, he spends about an hour [[ShowerOfAngst sitting in a shower]] [[OutDamnedSpot making washing motions with his hands]]...

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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a Franchise/HarryPotter[=/=]Franchise/XMen {{Crossover}} fanfiction that begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix. The stress caused on him by the combination of Sirius' death and that conversation are enough to activate something within him, that allows him to "phase" through objects and teleport to any place. Having to go back to the Dursleys helps little in regards to his psychological health, even if he can keep them away with his newfound abilities.

Meanwhile, at the other side of the Atlantic, Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey manage to detect the psychic energy emitted by Harry, and, with the aid of Cerebro, Charles manages to find out what is going on, only for him to be forced - not too unwillingly - to reveal a secret he has had to keep for more than twenty years: Jean Grey is actually Lily Potter's (née Evans) twin sister, and she also has the ability to use magic. The reason why neither Jean nor her biological family remembered the connection was because Dumbledore used a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Obliviate charm]] on the entire family to make them forget Jean was an Evans. Jean decides to do the correct thing and get Harry out of England, to take care of him and get him out of his funk. However, with Voldemort still on the loose, and a war in the horizon that Harry will have to get involved with no matter what he thinks, the X-Men will have to go to Britain and help Harry...

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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a Franchise/HarryPotter[=/=]Franchise/XMen {{Crossover}} fanfiction that considers what might happen if Jean Grey was Lily Evans' twin sister.

The story
begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix. The stress caused on him by the combination of having to handle both Sirius' death and that conversation are enough to activate something within him, that allows the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through objects any object and teleport to any place. Having to go back place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys helps does little in regards to help him to recover from all the damage caused by recent events - and his psychological health, even if he can keep them away with his newfound abilities.

Meanwhile, at the other side of the Atlantic,
friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.

This does not go undetected:
Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey manage to detect the psychic energy emitted by Harry, and, with the aid of Cerebro, Harry emits, which begins to break a memory block in Jean's mind. Charles manages reveals to find out what is going on, only for him to be forced - not too unwillingly - to reveal a secret he has had to keep for more than twenty years: Jean Grey is actually Lily Potter's (née Evans) twin sister, and she also has the ability to use magic. The reason why neither Jean nor her biological family remembered the connection was because that Dumbledore and he met the Evans when Jean and Lily were eleven, and upon deciding how to act (Lily would go to Hogwarts, Jean to Charles' school), Dumbledore foolishly used a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia an [[LaserGuidedKarma Obliviate charm]] on the entire family to make them Evans, making the parents, Lily and Petunia forget about Jean was an Evans. and leading to Jean decides forgetting about her family.

Deciding
to do the correct thing and get right thing, Jean takes Harry out of England, to take care of in and brings him to America, so he can heal, find more about the world and get him out of his funk. However, train with Voldemort still on the loose, both his mutant powers and a war in the horizon that his magic. Harry will wants to have little to get involved do with the British Magical world, but, no matter what he thinks, desires, war will be coming to him, so the X-Men will have to go eventually bring Harry back to Britain and help Harry...
to aid him in this momentous task.



* AntiHero: Harry tends to be this, mostly following Logan's lead.
* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but Harry rightfully points out that the way he does things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them, giving Death Eaters free reign while hoping they will repent on their own) do not exactly tell "good intentions".
** Several narrative lines about Dumbledore's thought-processes regarding Harry are quite disturbing. To wit, when he is forced to reveal to the Order that Harry was severely abused at the Dursleys, one of his thoughts is remembering that he had asked them to ''tone down'' the abuse, and that, ''for the most part'' they complied. And he considered this a ''good outcome''!

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* AntiHero: Harry tends to be this, mostly following follows Logan's lead.
lead, although with some less violent methods.
* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, has his 'good' moments, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but is doing what's best for Britain, but, as Harry rightfully points out that the out, his way he does of doing things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them, giving Death Eaters pretty much free reign while hoping they will waiting for them to repent on of their own) do actions, trying to control what Harry does) does not exactly tell "good intentions".
make the man look good.
** Several narrative lines about Dumbledore's thought-processes regarding Harry are quite disturbing. To wit, when he is forced to reveal to the Order that Harry was the Dursleys severely abused at the Dursleys, one of Harry, his thoughts first thought is remembering considering that he had asked them to ''tone down'' the abuse, abuse and that, that they complied ''for the most part'' they complied. And he considered this was a ''good outcome''!good outcome.



* BoobyTrap: Harry decides to change a few wood planks from the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is going to use to let Death Eaters into Hogwarts]] with this idea in mind. [[spoiler:The results are quite... fatal, let's say.]]
* BoomHeadshot: surprising for a magic-based story, it can happen. [[spoiler:Harry uses an Explosive Charm against Lucius Malfoy, which blows up his head.]]
* ButThouMust: how Harry feels the situation is being presented to him re: going back to England, because, no matter how much Jean tells him he can simply choose not to go back, in the end they all but force him to do so. Of course, Jean has good reasons for this - she knows that Harry's plan to end his schooling and vanish from the magical world is a bit naive.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Dumbledore becomes the objective of this at least once every two chapters.

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* BoobyTrap: Harry decides to change a few wood planks from the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is going wants to use the Vanishing cabinet to let several Death Eaters get into Hogwarts]] Hogwarts undetected. Harry charms some wood pieces and exchanges them with original cabinet's parts with this idea in mind. [[spoiler:The The results are quite... fatal, [[{{Gorn}} fatal]], let's say.]]
* BoomHeadshot: surprising for a magic-based story, it can happen. [[spoiler:Harry uses an Explosive Charm against Lucius Malfoy, which blows blowing up his the latter's head.]]
* ButThouMust: how Harry feels the situation is being presented to him re: going back to England, because, no matter how much Jean tells him Harry he can simply choose does not have to go back, back to Britain or to Hogwarts, but in the end they all but force him to do so. return. Of course, Jean has good reasons for this - she knows that Harry's plan idea (to go to end his schooling school in America and then vanish from the magical world world) is a bit naive.
naive, and she wants him to confront his problems.
* CallingTheOldManOut: CallingTheOldManOut:
** Harry, Jean, Charles Xavier and some others call
Dumbledore becomes the objective of this at least once every two chapters.out for his actions.



* CruelAndUnusualDeath: quite a few in here.

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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: quite a few in here.CruelAndUnusualDeath:



* DoubleStandard: Dumbledore is all about this, giving Death Eaters all the chances he can (and more) to "see the error of their ways" over protecting the innocents that are in danger of being attacked.

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* DoubleStandard: Dumbledore is all about this, giving Death Eaters all the chances he can (and more) to "see the error of their ways" over protecting ways", while the innocents that are in danger of being attacked.get little thought beyond reprimanding them if they defend themselves.



* ExpospeakGag: after [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped by Death Eaters, Logan prepares a talking bomb for Harry to drop at the Death Eater safehouse where [[spoiler:Jean]] is. The bomb loudly exclaims it is an "exothermic reaction device" every second for half a minute. [[KillEmAll Obviously, Death Eaters don't know the chemical term for an explosion.]]
* FantasticRacism: apart from the one against Muggle-borns, there is much against mutants, who are considered Dark creatures by Britain's magical government.
* ForeShadowing: possibly. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest to scare him into doing the chores and stop trying to do anything to him. [[spoiler:Revisited when Harry does the same to Voldemort, with more fatal results.]]
* FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: the reasons why [[spoiler:Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both a mutant and the Chosen One.]]

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* ExpospeakGag: after After [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped by Death Eaters, Logan prepares a talking bomb for Harry to drop at the Death Eater safehouse where [[spoiler:Jean]] is. The bomb loudly exclaims it is an "exothermic reaction device" every second for half a minute. [[KillEmAll Obviously, Death Eaters don't know the chemical term for an explosion.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: Some former Dumbledore's Army members join the Death Eaters.
* FantasticRacism: apart Apart from the one against Muggle-borns, there is much against mutants, who are considered Dark creatures by Britain's magical government.
* {{Flanderisation}}: Dumbledore undergoes this. By the end of the story [[spoiler:(before the Battle of Hogwarts)]] he thinks that even ''Voldemort'' is salvageable due to his magical blood.
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ForeShadowing: possibly.Maybey. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest to scare him into doing the chores and stop trying to do anything to him. [[spoiler:Revisited when Harry does the same to Voldemort, with more fatal results.]]
* FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: the reasons reason why [[spoiler:Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both a mutant and the Chosen One.]]



* HeelFaceTurn: some former Dumbledore's Army members decide to join the Death Eaters.



* LaserGuidedKarma: each and every Death Eater that dies [[spoiler:particularly the ones that came through the Vanishing Cabinet.]] Also, [[spoiler:the Dursleys]], no matter what Harry might say later.

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* LaserGuidedKarma: each and every The Death Eater that dies Eaters, [[spoiler:particularly the ones that came through the Vanishing Cabinet.]] Also, [[spoiler:the Dursleys]], no matter what Harry might say later.



* MindRape: as in the source, Legillimency. Even called out by name as [[spoiler:what Snape did to Harry the previous year when he was supposed to teach him Occlumency.]]

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* MindRape: as As in the source, Legillimency. Even called out by name as [[spoiler:what what Snape did to Harry the previous year when he was supposed to teach him Occlumency.]]



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: some of the Hogwarts Professors - mostly [=McGonagall=] and Flitwick - and Amelia Bones.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: some Some of the Hogwarts Professors - mostly [=McGonagall=] and Flitwick - and Amelia Bones.



* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to become intangible and teleport to any place in the world. He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].

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* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to become intangible and teleport to any place in the world.world (or any object he can picture to him). He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].



* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo (which might get him some help with the world's dragons), Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's testaments...

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo (which might get him some help with the world's dragons), tattoo, Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's testaments...last wills...
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo (which might get him some help with the world's dragons), Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's testaments...

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo (which might get him some help with the world's dragons), Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's testaments...testaments...
** Pansy Parkinson. After she disappears from the school (to avoid being turned into Voldemort's concubine), nothing else is said of her.
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* ShoutOut: when speaking about the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is planning to use to sneak Death Eaters into Hogwarts]], Hermione mentions they are similar to the ones used to travel to [[Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia Narnia]].

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* ShoutOut: when When speaking about the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is planning to use to sneak Death Eaters into Hogwarts]], Hermione mentions they are similar to the ones used to travel to [[Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia Narnia]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:most of Hogwarts' students decide to leave for America in order to avoid the problems that will be caused by the Ministry's decisions post-Voldemort's death.]]

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:most [[spoiler:Most of Hogwarts' students decide to leave for America in order to avoid the problems that will be caused by the Ministry's decisions post-Voldemort's death.]]
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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's boy toy" in the arse and sent to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns are being attacked by bigot purebloods almost daily.

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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's boy toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns and half-bloods are being attacked by bigot purebloods almost daily.Slytherin students left and right on a weekly basis.
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** Jean on Minister Scrimgeour, after the latter demands Harry to fight Voldemort - while the Ministry has been sitting on their arses since the beginning of the war - and for sending Umbridge back to Hogwarts even though he knew what she had been doing.


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* InconvenientHippocraticOath: Madame Pomfrey is reluctant to heal Umbridge after she attacked Harry on the back (Harry retaliated with a curse that caused several dozen wounds at the same time). She solves her conundrum by healing her sloppily enough that she is left with numerous scars.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Dumbledore, who is completely unwilling to let any control he might have over Harry slip away, has little empathy for all the suffering Harry has gone through, and is only willing to help any Death Eater that ''might'' repent over the innocents that are being killed and injured by them, just because he thinks it is for the best of the Magical World.

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Dumbledore, who is completely unwilling to let any control he might have over Harry slip away, has little empathy for all the suffering Harry has gone through, and is only willing to help any Death Eater that ''might'' repent over the innocents that are being killed and injured by them, just because he thinks it is for the best of the Magical World.World.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo (which might get him some help with the world's dragons), Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's testaments...

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** Several narrative lines about Dumbledore's thought-processes regarding Harry are quite disturbing. To wit, when he is forced to reveal to the Order that Harry was severely abused at the Dursleys, one of his thoughts is remembering that he had asked them to ''tone down'' the abuse, and that, ''for the most part'' they complied. And he considered this a ''good outcome''!
---> Dumbledore stared at [Jean], aghast that she'd even consider he'd condone [Snape [[MindRape mind-raping]] Harry]. While he would allow Snape some liberties, he would never condone the man hurting a student, ''even Harry''.



* ButThouMust: how Harry feels the situation is being presented to him re: going back to England, because, no matter how much Jean tells him he can simply choose not to go back, in the end they all but force him to do so.

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* ButThouMust: how Harry feels the situation is being presented to him re: going back to England, because, no matter how much Jean tells him he can simply choose not to go back, in the end they all but force him to do so. Of course, Jean has good reasons for this - she knows that Harry's plan to end his schooling and vanish from the magical world is a bit naive.



* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to change his body density, become intangible and teleport. He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].

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* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to change his body density, become intangible and teleport.teleport to any place in the world. He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].



* UnexpectedInheritance: Harry knew he inherited a lot of money from his parents, and some more from Sirius Black, but during a visit to Gringotts he is told that he actually owns a lot more than what he believed. Just his trust vault (which he thought only had the equivalent to a bit more than $220K) had the equivalent to more than 10 million dollars before it was seized (see LaserGuidedKarma).

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* UnexpectedInheritance: Harry knew he inherited a lot of money from his parents, and some even more from Sirius Black, but during a visit to Gringotts he is told that he actually owns a lot more than what he believed. Just his trust vault (which he thought only had the equivalent to a bit more than $220K) had the equivalent to more than 10 million dollars before it was seized (see LaserGuidedKarma).
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* RonTheDeathEater: downplayed with the TropeNamer, who develops an irrational dislike of mutants out of nowhere and becomes jealous and/or angry with Harry, but he later apologizes to Harry, obviously not expecting forgiveness (which Harry gives). Played more straight with Dumbledore, who, while opposed to Voldemort, is willing to give Death Eaters free rein with the hope that they will repent on their own while berating Harry for defending himself.

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Meanwhile, at the other side of the Atlantic, Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey manage to detect the psychic energy emitted by Harry, and, with the aid of Cerebro, Charles manages to find out what is going on, only for him to be forced to reveal a secret he has had to keep for more than thirty years: Jean Grey is actually Lily Potter's (née Evans) twin sister, and she also has the ability to use magic. The reason why neither Jean nor her biological family remembered the connection was because Dumbledore used a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Obliviate charm]] on the entire family to make them forget Jean was an Evans. Jean decides to do the correct thing and get Harry out of England, to take care of him and get him out of his funk. However, with Voldemort still on the loose, and a war in the horizon that Harry will have to get involved with, the X-Men will have to go to Britain and help Harry...

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Meanwhile, at the other side of the Atlantic, Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey manage to detect the psychic energy emitted by Harry, and, with the aid of Cerebro, Charles manages to find out what is going on, only for him to be forced - not too unwillingly - to reveal a secret he has had to keep for more than thirty twenty years: Jean Grey is actually Lily Potter's (née Evans) twin sister, and she also has the ability to use magic. The reason why neither Jean nor her biological family remembered the connection was because Dumbledore used a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Obliviate charm]] on the entire family to make them forget Jean was an Evans. Jean decides to do the correct thing and get Harry out of England, to take care of him and get him out of his funk. However, with Voldemort still on the loose, and a war in the horizon that Harry will have to get involved with, with no matter what he thinks, the X-Men will have to go to Britain and help Harry...



* CallingTheOldManOut: Dumbledore becomes the objective of this at least once per two chapters.

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* CallingTheOldManOut: Dumbledore becomes the objective of this at least once per every two chapters.



** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's boy toy" in the arse and sent to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns are being attacked by bigot purebloods almost daily.



* ExpospeakGag: after [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped by Death Eaters, Logan prepares a talking bomb for Harry to drop at the Death Eater safehouse where [[spoiler:Jean]] is. The bomb loudly exclaims it is an "exothermic reaction device" every second for half a minute. [[KillEmAll Obviously, Death Eaters don't know the chemical term for an explosion.]]



* GreenEyedMonster: the reason why [[spoiler:Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both a mutant and the Chosen One.]]

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* GreenEyedMonster: FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: the reason reasons why [[spoiler:Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both a mutant and the Chosen One.]]



** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, we get a [[SarcasmMode wonderful]] description of how the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (basically, their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[{{Squick}} And those end up getting cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, we get a [[SarcasmMode wonderful]] description of how the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (basically, their (their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[{{Squick}} And those They end up getting cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]]]]]
* HeelFaceTurn: some former Dumbledore's Army members decide to join the Death Eaters.



* MrFanservice: Harry after the summer he spent with the X-Men. A good lot of the girls in the school are left drooling when they see Harry running around the lake without a shirt on, and most are rather put out when Ginny manages to snag him.



* ReedRichardsIsUseless: Averted by Harry in the ending. [[spoiler:His company, Potter Industries, markets many potions in the non-magical market, among them one that cures the common cold, and is making plans to modify one that could revert illnesses such as senility or Alzheimer.]]

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* ReedRichardsIsUseless: Averted by Harry in the ending. Harry. [[spoiler:His company, Potter Industries, markets many potions in the non-magical market, among them one that cures the common cold, and is making plans to modify one that could revert illnesses such as senility or Alzheimer.]]Alzheimer and use Portkeys to transport materials into orbit for PI's satellite.]]
* RonTheDeathEater: downplayed with the TropeNamer, who develops an irrational dislike of mutants out of nowhere and becomes jealous and/or angry with Harry, but he later apologizes to Harry, obviously not expecting forgiveness (which Harry gives). Played more straight with Dumbledore, who, while opposed to Voldemort, is willing to give Death Eaters free rein with the hope that they will repent on their own while berating Harry for defending himself.
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* Gorn: when a fight gets physical, there are descriptions that reach this.

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* Gorn: {{Gorn}}: when a fight gets physical, there are descriptions that reach this.

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* TheEmpath: Harry, which might explain why he is in a constant emotional rollercoaster.



* IJustWantToBeNormal: Harry spends a good half of the story wishing to just finish his schooling and vanish from the public face. One of Jean's tasks is to help him come to terms that it won't be possible.



* TheEmpath: Harry, which might explain why he is in a constant emotional rollercoaster.

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* TheEmpath: Harry, which might explain why TheUnchosenOne: Jean points out to Harry several times that, no matter what he is in a constant emotional rollercoaster.does, Voldemort will keep coming after him because he has been prophecized to be the one to defeat Voldemort.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Ginny to Malfoy [[spoiler:as she and the other pro-Harry Hogwarts students leave the school by Portkey.]]

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* PrecisionFStrike: Ginny to Malfoy the professors [[spoiler:as she and the other pro-Harry Hogwarts students leave the school by Portkey.]]
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* ReedRichardsIsUseless: Averted by Harry in the ending. [[spoiler:His company, Potter Industries, markets many potions in the non-magical market, among them one that cures the common cold, and is making plans to modify one that could revert illnesses such as senility or Alzheimer.]]
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* DoubleStandard: Dumbledore is all about this, giving Death Eaters all the chances he can (and more) to "see the error of their ways" over protecting the innocents that are in danger of being attacked.
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* EntitledBastard: Magical Britain. They treat Harry like dirt, particularly after [[FantasticRacism the fact that he is mutant becomes public]], and yet they demand that Harry fight and stop Voldemort.
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* AcePilot: Harry is capable of piloting the X-Men's jump-jets and the Blackbird. Cyclops suggests that this might be a result of his flying with a broom.
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* FantasticRacism: apart from the one against Muggle-borns, there is much against mutants, who are considered Dark creatures by Britain's magical government.

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* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but Harry rightfully points out that the way he does things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them) do not exactly tell "good intentions"

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* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but Harry rightfully points out that the way he does things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them) them, giving Death Eaters free reign while hoping they will repent on their own) do not exactly tell "good intentions"intentions".
* BoobyTrap: Harry decides to change a few wood planks from the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is going to use to let Death Eaters into Hogwarts]] with this idea in mind. [[spoiler:The results are quite... fatal, let's say.]]



* VomitIndiscretionShot: [=McGonagall=] is described as "unloading her breakfast" when she enters the Room of Requirement [[spoiler:post-Battle of Hogwarts. The Death Eaters that came through the Vanishing Cabinet were incorrectly reconstituted after Harry swapped several planks with others that had different charms on them.]]

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* VomitIndiscretionShot: [=McGonagall=] is described as "unloading her breakfast" when she enters the Room of Requirement [[spoiler:post-Battle of Hogwarts. The Death Eaters that came through the Vanishing Cabinet were incorrectly reconstituted after Harry swapped several planks with others that had different charms on them.died while doing so (see {{Gorn}}) and then, when it exploded, it fried their internal organs.]]
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* UnexpectedInheritance: Harry knew he inherited a lot of money from his parents, and some more from Sirius Black, but during a visit to Gringotts he is told that he actually owns a lot more than that. Just his trust vault had the equivalent to more than 10 million dollars before it was seized (see LaserGuidedKarma).

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* UnexpectedInheritance: Harry knew he inherited a lot of money from his parents, and some more from Sirius Black, but during a visit to Gringotts he is told that he actually owns a lot more than that. what he believed. Just his trust vault (which he thought only had the equivalent to a bit more than $220K) had the equivalent to more than 10 million dollars before it was seized (see LaserGuidedKarma).
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* NeverLiveItDown: Professor [=McGonagall=] ignoring Harry when he complained over what Umbridge was doing to him ([[FandomSpecificPlot never mind that this never happens in the books]]).



* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: not the story itself, which is really good, but Harry's magical tattoo of a dragon, which, according to Hagrid, would ensure that dragons considered Harry a friend and probably give him some abilities. They had a chance to make an awesome subplot out of it, and nothing came! Though, it could be said that FanFic/TheQueenWhoFellToEarth delivered on that promise.
** Voldemort mentions using mutants in the same way werewolves are. The chance to have a meeting between Magneto (who gets mentioned only once in the entire story) and Voldemort is there, but it never happens.
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** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, we get a [[SarcasmMode wonderful]] description of how the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (basically, their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[Squick And those end up getting cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, we get a [[SarcasmMode wonderful]] description of how the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (basically, their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[Squick [[{{Squick}} And those end up getting cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]

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* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but Harry rightfully points out that the way he does things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them) do not exactly

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* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but Harry rightfully points out that the way he does things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them) do not exactly tell "good intentions"



* ButThouMust: how Harry feels the situation is being presented to him re: going back to England, because, no matter how much Jean tells him he can simply choose not to go back, in the end they all but force him to do so.



** [[spoiler:Most Hogwarts students on the Ministry and the Hogwarts professors, after Malfoy and the Slytherins that tried to help Voldemort take over Hogwarts are allowed to return while Harry is being persecuted just because he is a mutant.]]

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** [[spoiler:Most Hogwarts students on the Ministry and the Hogwarts professors, after Malfoy and the Slytherins that tried to help Voldemort take over Hogwarts are allowed to return to school completely unpunished while Harry is being persecuted just because he is a mutant.]]



** [[spoiler:The Carrow siblings get sucked into a huge tornado summoned by Storm when they try to get into the X-Men's base in Britain, and crushed by the centrifugal force and the stones within the tornado.]]
** [[spoiler:Harry kills Voldemort by making his arm intangible, push it into Voldemort's chest and then pulling out his heart.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Harry. [[spoiler:He ends up getting married to Ginny, with two children in and another on the way, and has become the CEO of Potter Industries, which markets many remedies and other supplies from the magical world in the Muggle world.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Carrow siblings get sucked into a huge tornado summoned by Storm when they try to get [[IncrediblyLamePun storm]] into the X-Men's base in Britain, and crushed by the centrifugal force and the stones within the tornado.]]
** [[spoiler:The Death Eaters that sneaked into Hogwarts through the Vanishing Cabinet were, let's say, wrongly reconstituted (see Gorn below).]]
** [[spoiler:Harry kills Voldemort by making his arm intangible, push pushing it into Voldemort's chest and then pulling out his heart.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Harry. [[spoiler:He ends up getting married to Ginny, with two children in and another on the way, his friends are also happy thanks to what he has done with and for them, and has become the CEO of [[NGOSuperpower Potter Industries, Industries]], which markets many remedies and other supplies from seems to be bound to become the magical world in leader of the Muggle world.]]



* GreenEyedMonster: the reason why [[spoiler:Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both a mutant and the Chosen One.]]



** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, we get a [[SarcasmMode wonderful]] description of how the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (basically, their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[Squick And those end up getting cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Ron, even if it doesn't show at the beginning.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Ron, even if it doesn't show at eventually.
* LaserGuidedKarma: each and every Death Eater that dies [[spoiler:particularly
the beginning.ones that came through the Vanishing Cabinet.]] Also, [[spoiler:the Dursleys]], no matter what Harry might say later.
** Non-lethal version with the British Fiscal Vendetta Law: if the Ministry illegally seizes a person's assets, that person can activate the law and get double that money from the Ministry, and then the highest-ranked people that were involved in the seizure until the money has been returned tenfold. Harry uses this when the British Ministry seizes his trust vault, claiming they just want to flush Harry out for questioning and to keep him safe.



* NGOSuperpower: [[spoiler:Potter Industries in the Epilogue. Created to lead the slow introduction of the Magical World to the rest of it through the marketing of potions and other magical things, it becomes so important that, apparently, in just a few years any disruption to the company will hurt the world economy. They even have their space station and project to use Portkeys to deliver material to orbiting stations!]]

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* NeverLiveItDown: Professor [=McGonagall=] ignoring Harry when he complained over what Umbridge was doing to him ([[FandomSpecificPlot never mind that this never happens in the books]]).
* NGOSuperpower: [[spoiler:Potter Industries in the Epilogue. Created to lead the slow introduction of the Magical World to the rest of it through the marketing of potions and other magical things, it becomes so important that, apparently, in just a few years any disruption to the company will hurt the world economy. They even have their own space station and project station, to use Portkeys to which they deliver material to orbiting stations!]]materials with Portkeys!]]



* PrecisionFStrike: Ginny to Malfoy [[spoiler:as she and the other pro-Harry Hogwarts students leave the school by Portkey.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: some of the Hogwarts Professors - mostly [=McGonagall=] and Flitwick - and Amelia Bones.



* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to change his body density, become intangible and teleport.

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* ShoutOut: when speaking about the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is planning to use to sneak Death Eaters into Hogwarts]], Hermione mentions they are similar to the ones used to travel to [[Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia Narnia]].
* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to change his body density, become intangible and teleport. He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].
* TheEmpath: Harry, which might explain why he is in a constant emotional rollercoaster.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: not the story itself, which is really good, but Harry's magical tattoo of a dragon, which, according to Hagrid, would ensure that dragons considered Harry a friend and probably give him some abilities. They had a chance to make an awesome subplot out of it, and nothing came! Though, it could be said that FanFic/TheQueenWhoFellToEarth delivered on that promise.
** Voldemort mentions using mutants in the same way werewolves are. The chance to have a meeting between Magneto (who gets mentioned only once in the entire story) and Voldemort is there, but it never happens.
* UnexpectedInheritance: Harry knew he inherited a lot of money from his parents, and some more from Sirius Black, but during a visit to Gringotts he is told that he actually owns a lot more than that. Just his trust vault had the equivalent to more than 10 million dollars before it was seized (see LaserGuidedKarma).
* VomitIndiscretionShot: [=McGonagall=] is described as "unloading her breakfast" when she enters the Room of Requirement [[spoiler:post-Battle of Hogwarts. The Death Eaters that came through the Vanishing Cabinet were incorrectly reconstituted after Harry swapped several planks with others that had different charms on them.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Dumbledore, who is completely unwilling to let any control he might have over Harry slip away, has little empathy for all the suffering Harry has gone through, and is only willing to help any Death Eater that ''might'' repent over the innocents that are being killed and injured by them, just because he thinks it is for the best of the Magical World.
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* HeroicRROD: Harry [[spoiler:breaks his arm when

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* HeroicRROD: Harry [[spoiler:breaks his arm when he kills Voldemort by pulling the latter's heart out, and later enters in shock.]]

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* [[spoiler:AndShowItToYou: how Harry kills Voldemort.]]
* AntiHero: Harry tends to be this, mostly following Logan's lead.
* AntiVillain: Dumbledore. He tries to be a good person, and believes he has the good interests of Britain in his mind, but Harry rightfully points out that the way he does things (manipulating people, keeping tracking charms on Harry after saying he would stop using them) do not exactly



* CruelAndUnusualDeath: quite a few in here.
** [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy loses his head via [[StuffBlowingUp Explosive Curse]].]]
** [[spoiler:Bellatrix Lestrange has her neck so thoroughly crushed by Harry that her head actually separates from her body.]]
** [[spoiler:The Carrow siblings get sucked into a huge tornado summoned by Storm when they try to get into the X-Men's base in Britain, and crushed by the centrifugal force and the stones within the tornado.]]
** [[spoiler:Harry kills Voldemort by making his arm intangible, push it into Voldemort's chest and then pulling out his heart.]]



* ForeShadowing: possibly. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest to scare him into doing the chores and stop trying to do anything to him. [[spoiler:Revisited when Harry does the same to Voldemort, with more fatal results.]]



* HeroicRROD: Harry [[spoiler:breaks his arm when



* MindRape: even called out by name as [[spoiler:what Snape did to Harry during the Occlumency lessons in the previous year.]]

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* MindRape: even as in the source, Legillimency. Even called out by name as [[spoiler:what Snape did to Harry during the Occlumency lessons in the previous year.year when he was supposed to teach him Occlumency.]]

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* BoomHeadshot: surprising for a magic-based story, it can happen. [[spoiler:Harry uses an Explosive Charm against Lucius Malfoy, which blows up his head.]]



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:most of Hogwarts' students decide to go to America in order to avoid the problems that will be caused by the Ministry's decisions.]]

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* CoolOldGuy: Professor Xavier and Logan.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Harry. [[spoiler:He ends up getting married to Ginny, with two children in and another on the way, and has become the CEO of Potter Industries, which markets many remedies and other supplies from the magical world in the Muggle world.]]
* Gorn: when a fight gets physical, there are descriptions that reach this.
* HeroicBSOD: Harry at the beginning of the story, and [[spoiler:after killing Lucius Malfoy and Bellatrix Lestrange.]]
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Ron, even if it doesn't show at the beginning.
* MindRape: even called out by name as [[spoiler:what Snape did to Harry during the Occlumency lessons in the previous year.]]
* NGOSuperpower: [[spoiler:Potter Industries in the Epilogue. Created to lead the slow introduction of the Magical World to the rest of it through the marketing of potions and other magical things, it becomes so important that, apparently, in just a few years any disruption to the company will hurt the world economy. They even have their space station and project to use Portkeys to deliver material to orbiting stations!]]
* [[OffWithHisHead Off With Her Head]]: [[spoiler:Harry kills Bellatrix Lestrange by squeezing her neck (with some aid of his magic) so hard that her head is separated from her body.]]
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:most of Hogwarts' students decide to go to leave for America in order to avoid the problems that will be caused by the Ministry's decisions.]]decisions post-Voldemort's death.]]
* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to change his body density, become intangible and teleport.
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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a Franchise/HarryPotter[=/=]Franchise/XMen {{Crossover}} fanfiction that begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix. The stress caused on him by the combination of Sirius' death and that conversation are enough to activate something within him, that allows him to "phase" through objects and teleport to any place. Having to go back to the Dursleys helps little in regards to his psychological health, even if he can keep them away with his newfound abilities.

Meanwhile, at the other side of the Atlantic, Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey manage to detect the psychic energy emitted by Harry, and, with the aid of Cerebro, Charles manages to find out what is going on, only for him to be forced to reveal a secret he has had to keep for more than thirty years: Jean Grey is actually Lily Potter's (née Evans) twin sister, and she also has the ability to use magic. The reason why neither Jean nor her biological family remembered the connection was because Dumbledore used a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Obliviate charm]] on the entire family to make them forget Jean was an Evans. Jean decides to do the correct thing and get Harry out of England, to take care of him and get him out of his funk. However, with Voldemort still on the loose, and a war in the horizon that Harry will have to get involved with, the X-Men will have to go to Britain and help Harry...

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!!This fanfic provides examples of:

* AdultsAreUseless: Harry does think this sometimes, and, sadly, he tends to be proven right.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Dumbledore becomes the objective of this at least once per two chapters.
** Harry calls Remus Lupin, and indirectly most of the Order, out on their inability to do anything that goes against Dumbledore's orders.
** [[spoiler:Most Hogwarts students on the Ministry and the Hogwarts professors, after Malfoy and the Slytherins that tried to help Voldemort take over Hogwarts are allowed to return while Harry is being persecuted just because he is a mutant.]]
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:most of Hogwarts' students decide to go to America in order to avoid the problems that will be caused by the Ministry's decisions.]]

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