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* FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: why Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both [[FantasticRacism a mutant]] and TheChosenOne.

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* FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: why Why Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both [[FantasticRacism a mutant]] and TheChosenOne.



* HitThemInThePocketbook: the Ministry tries to make Harry cooperate by seizing his trust bank vault. In return, he invokes an old law allowing him to claim twice the amount seized -- from each of the people who signed the order. Fudge and the Malfoys pay it off, the Zabini family goes broke, and Percy is effectively forced into slavery to Harry to WorkOffTheDebt.

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* HitThemInThePocketbook: the The Ministry tries to make Harry cooperate by seizing his trust bank vault. In return, he invokes an old law allowing him to claim twice the amount seized -- from each of the people who signed the order. Fudge and the Malfoys pay it off, the Zabini family goes broke, and Percy is effectively forced into slavery to Harry to WorkOffTheDebt.



* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo, Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's last wills...

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: several Several ideas and lines that hint at important future events are left hanging without a conclusion, such as Harry's dragon tattoo, Voldemort considering using mutants as CannonFodder, whatever was wrong with James' and Lily's last wills...
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* HitThemInThePocketbook: the Ministry tries to make Harry cooperate by seizing his trust bank vault. In return, he invokes an old law allowing him to claim twice the amount seized -- from each of the people who signed the order. Fudge and the Malfoys pay it off, the Zabini family goes broke, and Percy is effectively forced into slavery to Harry to WorkOffTheDebt.
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* ShapeshiftersDoItForAChange: When [[spoiler:Tonks impersonates Neville]], she attempts to get a bit touchy-feely with his girlfriend to fulfill some of her fantasies. Unfortunately for her, the guy is a lot more gentlemanly than she expected, so that give her away.
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* AcePilot: Harry is capable of piloting the X-Men's jump-jets and the Blackbird. ComicBook/{{Cyclops}} suggests that this might be a result of his flying with a broom.

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* AcePilot: Harry is capable of piloting the X-Men's jump-jets and the Blackbird. ComicBook/{{Cyclops}} Cyclops suggests that this might be a result of his flying with a broom.



* CrossoverRelatives: The fic starts with Harry finding out ComicBook/JeanGrey is his mother's twin sister and going to live with her and {{ComicBook/Cyclops}}

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* CrossoverRelatives: The fic starts with Harry finding out ComicBook/JeanGrey that Jean Grey is his mother's twin sister and going to live with her and {{ComicBook/Cyclops}}Cyclops.

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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter''[=/=]''Franchise/XMen'' {{Crossover}} fanfiction that considers what might happen if ComicBook/JeanGrey was Lily Evans' twin sister.

The story begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix''. The stress of having to handle both Sirius' death and the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through any object and teleport to any place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys does little to help him to recover from all the psychological damage caused by recent events - and his friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.

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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter''[=/=]''Franchise/XMen'' {{Crossover}} fanfiction that considers what might happen if ComicBook/JeanGrey Jean Grey was Lily Evans' twin sister.

The story begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix''. The stress of having to handle both Sirius' death and the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through any object and teleport to any place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys does little to help him to recover from all the psychological damage caused by recent events - -- and his friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.



* ShoutOut: When speaking about the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is planning to use to sneak Death Eaters into Hogwarts]], Hermione mentions they are similar to the ones used to travel to [[Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia Narnia]].

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* ShoutOut: When speaking about the Vanishing Cabinet [[spoiler:Malfoy is planning to use to sneak Death Eaters into Hogwarts]], Hermione mentions they are similar to the ones used to travel to [[Literature/ChroniclesOfNarnia [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Narnia]].



'''Harry:''' Where is the fun in that?

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'''Harry:''' Where is the fun in that?that?
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* ScrubbingOffTheTrauma: After Harry kills ([[spoiler:Lucius and Bellatrix]]) and another person ''with his bare hands'', he spends about an hour [[ShowerOfAngst sitting in a shower]] making washing motions with his hands...



* TheseHandsHaveKilled: After Harry kills for the first time ([[spoiler:Lucius and Bellatrix]]), including one person with his bare hands, he spends about an hour [[ShowerOfAngst sitting in a shower]] [[OutDamnedSpot making washing motions with his hands]]...
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* ExactWords: After [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped, Harry suggests dropping a bomb on the Death Eaters as revenge. Charles concedes to a talking bomb, to give the Death Eaters a warning to evacuate. Logan crafts it - and the bomb's message is that it is an "[[ExpospeakGag exothermic reaction device]]", a scientific term none of the Death Eaters understand. Cue KillEmAll.

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* ExactWords: After [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped, Harry suggests dropping a bomb on the Death Eaters as revenge. Charles concedes to a talking bomb, to give the Death Eaters a warning to evacuate. Logan crafts it - and the bomb's message is that it is an "[[ExpospeakGag exothermic reaction device]]", a scientific term none of the Death Eaters understand. Cue KillEmAll.
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* CrossoverPowerAcquisition: The plot is set off when, at the end of book 5, Harry's X-gene awakes, giving him {{Teleportation}} and {{Intangibility}}.
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* CrossoverRelatives: The fic starts with Harry finding out ComicBook/JeanGrey is his mother's twin sister and going to live with her and {{ComicBook/Cyclops}}
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* IsaneTrollLogic: Dumbledore is of the opinion that taking Potions lessons from Snape increases Harry's trust in Dumbledore. Exactly how he came to the conclusion that forcing a boy to spend time with someone who openly hates him and makes him miserable and refusing to improve the situation makes the boy trust him is... unclear.

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* IsaneTrollLogic: InsaneTrollLogic: Dumbledore is of the opinion that taking Potions lessons from Snape increases Harry's trust in Dumbledore. Exactly how he came to the conclusion that forcing a boy to spend time with someone who openly hates him and makes him miserable and refusing to improve the situation makes the boy trust him is... unclear.
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* IsaneTrollLogic: Dumbledore is of the opinion that taking Potions lessons from Snape increases Harry's trust in Dumbledore. Exactly how he came to the conclusion that forcing a boy to spend time with someone who openly hates him and makes him miserable and refusing to improve the situation makes the boy trust him is... unclear.

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The story begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix''. The stress of having to handle both Sirius' death and the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through any object and teleport to any place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys does little to help him to recover from all the damage caused by recent events - and his friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.

This does not go undetected: Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey detect the psychic energy Harry emits, which begins to break a memory block in Jean's mind. Charles reveals to Jean that Dumbledore and he met the Evans when Jean and Lily were eleven, and upon deciding how to act (Lily would go to Hogwarts, Jean to Charles' school), Dumbledore foolishly used an [[LaserGuidedKarma Obliviate charm]] on the Evans, making the parents, Lily and Petunia forget about Jean and leading to Jean forgetting about her family.

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The story begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix''. The stress of having to handle both Sirius' death and the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through any object and teleport to any place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys does little to help him to recover from all the psychological damage caused by recent events - and his friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.

This does not go undetected: At the other side of the ocean, Professor Charles Xavier and Jean Grey detect the psychic energy Harry emits, which begins to break a memory block in Jean's mind. emits. When Charles reveals to realizes who is doing this, he notices Jean that is starting to remember her past, so he decides to tell her the truth: when Jean was eleven, she lived with her family in England, among them her twin sister Lily, and both of them were offered schooling by himself and a wizard called Albus Dumbledore. Given the different power the girls had, Charles and Dumbledore and he met agreed to teach one of the Evans when girls each, with Jean and Lily were eleven, and upon deciding how to act (Lily would go to Hogwarts, Jean going to Charles' school), school while Lily would attend Hogwarts. Then Dumbledore foolishly used an [[LaserGuidedKarma a [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Obliviate charm]] on the Evans, making the parents, Lily and Petunia causing them to forget about that Jean was part of the family, and leading to Jean forgetting about her family.
recovering the memories became impossible. And the boy whose mind they are detecting is Lily's son.



* BoobyTrap: [[spoiler:Malfoy wants to use the Vanishing cabinet to let several Death Eaters get into Hogwarts undetected. Harry charms some wood pieces and exchanges them with original cabinet's parts with this idea in mind. The results are quite... [[{{Gorn}} fatal]], let's say.]]

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* BoobyTrap: [[spoiler:Malfoy wants to use the Vanishing cabinet to let several Death Eaters get into Hogwarts undetected. Harry charms some wood pieces and exchanges them with the original cabinet's parts with this idea in mind. The results are quite... [[{{Gorn}} fatal]], let's say.]]



* ButThouMust: Jean tells Harry he does not have to go back to Britain or to Hogwarts, but in the end they all but force him to return. Of course, Jean knows that Harry's idea (to go to school in America and then vanish from the magical world) is naive, and she wants him to confront his problems.

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* BrokenPedestal:
** Charles loses some of Jean's trust after she learns of her past.
** Harry completely loses any trust he had in both the Order's adults and his friends. Some of them manage to [[RebuiltPedestal regain it]].
** After Draco Malfoy is attacked, Dumbledore gives a speech stating he won't tolerate bullying. Given that the pureblood supremacist students have been bullying Muggle-borns and half-bloods for most of the year without such a response, Dumbledore's speech only ruins his reputation in the eyes of the student body.
* ButThouMust: Jean tells Harry he does not have to go back to Britain or to Hogwarts, Hogwarts if he wants, but in the end they all but force him to return. do so. Of course, Jean knows that Harry's idea (to go to school in America and then vanish from the magical world) is naive, and she wants him he needs to confront his problems.



* CessationOfExistence: [[spoiler:Snape and Voldemort are basically subject to this after they are killed due to the preceding destruction of their horcruxes]]

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* CessationOfExistence: [[spoiler:Snape and Voldemort are basically subject to this after they are killed killed, due to the preceding destruction of their horcruxes]]horcruxes.]]



** [[spoiler:The Carrow siblings get sucked into a huge tornado summoned by Storm when they try to [[IncrediblyLamePun storm]] into the X-Men's base in Britain, and crushed by the centrifugal force and the stones within the tornado.]]

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** [[spoiler:The Carrow siblings get sucked into a huge tornado summoned by Storm when they try to [[IncrediblyLamePun storm]] into the X-Men's base in Britain, and are crushed by the centrifugal force and the stones within the tornado.]]



* EarnYourHappyEnding: Harry. [[spoiler:He ends up getting married to Ginny, with two children in and another on the way, his friends are also happy thanks to what he has done with and for them, and has become the CEO of [[NGOSuperpower Potter Industries]], which seems to be bound to become the leader of the world.]]

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Harry. [[spoiler:He suffers a lot, trains like hell to learn everything he needs and has to fight for his life several times, but he ends up getting married to Ginny, with two children in and another on the way, his friends are also happy thanks to what he has done with and for them, and has become the CEO of his company, [[NGOSuperpower Potter Industries]], which seems to be bound to become is slowly establishing itself as the leader of world's economic cornerstone, allowing Harry to push through his plans for saving the world.world pretty much uncontested.]]



* ExpospeakGag: After [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped by Death Eaters, Logan prepares a talking bomb for Harry to drop at the Death Eater safehouse where [[spoiler:Jean]] is. The bomb loudly exclaims it is an "exothermic reaction device" every second for half a minute. [[KillEmAll Obviously, Death Eaters don't know the chemical term for an explosion.]]

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* ExpospeakGag: ExactWords: After [[spoiler:Jean]] is kidnapped by Death Eaters, Logan prepares a talking bomb for kidnapped, Harry to drop at the Death Eater safehouse where [[spoiler:Jean]] is. The suggests dropping a bomb loudly exclaims it is an "exothermic reaction device" every second for half a minute. [[KillEmAll Obviously, on the Death Eaters don't know as revenge. Charles concedes to a talking bomb, to give the chemical Death Eaters a warning to evacuate. Logan crafts it - and the bomb's message is that it is an "[[ExpospeakGag exothermic reaction device]]", a scientific term for an explosion.]]none of the Death Eaters understand. Cue KillEmAll.



* ForeShadowing: Maybe. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest to scare him into leaving him alone. [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, Harry sticks his hand into Voldemort's chest - but he actually pulls his heart out.]]

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* ForeShadowing: Maybe. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest and threatens to rip his heart out to scare him into leaving him alone. [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, Harry sticks his hand into Voldemort's chest - but he and actually pulls rips his heart out.]]



** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[{{Squick}} They end up cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:During the Battle of Hogwarts, the Death Eaters that come out of the Vanishing Cabinet do so in the wrong order (their skin is tightly wrapped around the spinal cord and the bones, so all their innards end up spilled on the ground). [[{{Squick}} They Then they end up cooked when the Cabinet explodes.]]]]



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Invoked; [[spoiler:when Dumbledore gives a speech about how he won't tolerate bullying of students after Draco Malfoy is attacked when muggle-borns are bullied throughout the year without such a response, it basically ruins his reputation in the eyes of the student body]].



** Non-lethal version with the British Fiscal Vendetta Law: if the Ministry illegally seizes a person's assets, that person can activate the law and get double that money from the Ministry, and then the highest-ranked people that were involved in the seizure until the money has been returned tenfold. Harry uses this when the British Ministry seizes his trust vault, claiming they just want to flush Harry out for questioning and to keep him safe (although [[spoiler:he relinquishes the authority this gives him over Percy when the Vendetta Law forces Percy into indentured servitude to pay off his share of the debt, requiring Harry to 'sell' Percy to his own family]].

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** Non-lethal version with the British Fiscal Vendetta Law: if the Ministry illegally seizes a person's assets, that person can activate the law and get double that money from the Ministry, and then the highest-ranked people that were involved in the seizure until the money has been returned tenfold. Harry uses this invokes the law when the British Ministry seizes his trust vault, claiming they just want to flush Harry out for questioning and to keep him safe (although [[spoiler:he relinquishes the authority safe. [[spoiler:When this gives him over Percy when the Vendetta Law forces ends up forcing Percy into indentured servitude to pay off his share of the debt, requiring servitude, Harry to 'sell' 'sells' Percy to his own family]].family, with Arthur freeing him after making it obvious Percy's going to have to work if he wants to atone for his actions.]]



* PrecisionFStrike: Ginny to the professors [[spoiler:as she and the other pro-Harry Hogwarts students leave the school by Portkey.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Some of the Hogwarts Professors - mostly [=McGonagall=] and Flitwick - and Amelia Bones.
* ReedRichardsIsUseless: Averted by Harry. [[spoiler:His company, Potter Industries, markets many potions in the non-magical market, among them one that cures the common cold, is making plans to modify one that could revert illnesses such as senility or Alzheimer and use Portkeys to transport materials into orbit for PI's satellite.]]

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* PrecisionFStrike: Ginny to the professors [[spoiler:as she and the other pro-Harry Hogwarts students leave the school by Portkey.]]
Portkey]].
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Some of the Hogwarts Professors - mostly [=McGonagall=] and Flitwick - and Amelia Bones.
Bones. Unfortunately, many of them have their hands tied up and can't prevent those with more power from messing up.
* ReedRichardsIsUseless: Averted by Harry. [[spoiler:His company, Potter Industries, markets many potions in the non-magical market, among them one that cures the common cold, is making plans to modify one that could revert illnesses such as senility or Alzheimer Alzheimer, and use uses Portkeys to transport materials into orbit for PI's satellite.]]



** Earlier, the Weasley twins quit the Order of the Phoenix after learning just how horrible Harry's home life is, and that Dumbledore allowed it to happen. They also don't hesitate to give everyone a WhatTheHellHero telling-off before leaving.

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** Earlier, the Weasley twins quit the Order of the Phoenix after learning just how horrible Harry's home life is, and that Dumbledore allowed it to happen. They also don't hesitate to give everyone a WhatTheHellHero telling-off [[WhatTheHellHero thorough telling-off]] before leaving.



* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to become intangible and teleport to any place in the world (or any object he can picture to him). He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].

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* SuperpowerLottery: Harry's mutation, which allows him to become intangible and teleport to any place in the world (or any object he can picture to him). He also has empathy and some telepathic ability, [[SuperpowerfulGenetics inherited from his mother]].mother]], which get boosted after Jean adopts him.



** Pansy Parkinson. After she disappears from the school (to avoid being turned into Voldemort's concubine), nothing else is said of her.

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** Pansy Parkinson. After she disappears from the school (to avoid being turned into Voldemort's concubine), nothing else is said of her.her role in the story ends.
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* OriginalPositionFallacy: Pansy Parkinson spends a lot of time claiming that other girls should be happy and pleased with their place in life once Voldemort takes over. Then, Bellatrix Lestrange gets killed, and Pansy gets a letter demanding she take her place as the Dark Lord's concubine without anyone caring about her opinion. The next day, she's groveling at the knees of the other side.
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** Earlier, the Weasley twins quit the Order of the Phoenix after learning just how horrible Harry's home life is, and that Dumbledore allowed it to happen. They also don't hesitate to give everyone a WhatTheHellHero telling-off before leaving.


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** Remus Lupin is last seen deciding to warn Harry about [[spoiler:Dumbledore and Scrimgeour's impending assault against Hogwarts]] instead of joining it. Whatever happens to him later goes unmentioned.
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* [[spoiler:AndShowItToYou: how Harry kills Voldemort.]]

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* [[spoiler:AndShowItToYou: how AndShowItToYou: [[spoiler:How Harry kills Voldemort.]]
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** Pansy Parkinson. After she disappears from the school (to avoid being turned into Voldemort's concubine), nothing else is said of her.

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** Pansy Parkinson. After she disappears from the school (to avoid being turned into Voldemort's concubine), nothing else is said of her.her.
* WheresTheFunInThat:
-->'''Jean:''' Since we're waiting, how did he do [as a pilot]?\\
'''Scott:''' Quite well, actually. I don't think it will be long before he starts thinking about buying a Blackbird for himself.\\
'''Jean:''' Harry, can't you be like a normal teenager and just want a car?\\
'''Harry:''' Where is the fun in that?
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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a Franchise/HarryPotter[=/=]Franchise/XMen {{Crossover}} fanfiction that considers what might happen if Jean Grey was Lily Evans' twin sister.

The story begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix. The stress of having to handle both Sirius' death and the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through any object and teleport to any place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys does little to help him to recover from all the damage caused by recent events - and his friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.

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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404056/1/Mutant-Storm Mutant Storm]]''''' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/777540/Bobmin356 Bobmin356]] is a Franchise/HarryPotter[=/=]Franchise/XMen ''Franchise/HarryPotter''[=/=]''Franchise/XMen'' {{Crossover}} fanfiction that considers what might happen if Jean Grey ComicBook/JeanGrey was Lily Evans' twin sister.

The story begins right after Harry's meeting with Dumbledore at the end of Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix.''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix''. The stress of having to handle both Sirius' death and the revelation of the Prophecy causes him to develop the ability to "phase" through any object and teleport to any place he has been in. Returning to the Dursleys does little to help him to recover from all the damage caused by recent events - and his friends' outright lying to him about their summer activities pretty much shatters him.



* AcePilot: Harry is capable of piloting the X-Men's jump-jets and the Blackbird. Cyclops suggests that this might be a result of his flying with a broom.

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* AcePilot: Harry is capable of piloting the X-Men's jump-jets and the Blackbird. Cyclops ComicBook/{{Cyclops}} suggests that this might be a result of his flying with a broom.
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* DessationOfExistence: [[spoiler:Snape and Voldemort are basically subject to this after they are killed due to the preceding destruction of their horcruxes]]

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* DessationOfExistence: [[spoiler:Snape and Voldemort are basically subject to this after they are killed due to the preceding destruction of their horcruxes]]



* HeroicRROD: Harry [[spoiler:breaks his arm when he kills Voldemort by pulling the latter's heart out, and later enters in shock.]]

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* HeroicRROD: Harry [[spoiler:breaks his arm when he kills Voldemort by pulling the latter's heart out, and later enters in shock.]]shock]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Invoked; [[spoiler:when Dumbledore gives a speech about how he won't tolerate bullying of students after Draco Malfoy is attacked when muggle-borns are bullied throughout the year without such a response, it basically ruins his reputation in the eyes of the student body]].



** Non-lethal version with the British Fiscal Vendetta Law: if the Ministry illegally seizes a person's assets, that person can activate the law and get double that money from the Ministry, and then the highest-ranked people that were involved in the seizure until the money has been returned tenfold. Harry uses this when the British Ministry seizes his trust vault, claiming they just want to flush Harry out for questioning and to keep him safe.

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** Non-lethal version with the British Fiscal Vendetta Law: if the Ministry illegally seizes a person's assets, that person can activate the law and get double that money from the Ministry, and then the highest-ranked people that were involved in the seizure until the money has been returned tenfold. Harry uses this when the British Ministry seizes his trust vault, claiming they just want to flush Harry out for questioning and to keep him safe.safe (although [[spoiler:he relinquishes the authority this gives him over Percy when the Vendetta Law forces Percy into indentured servitude to pay off his share of the debt, requiring Harry to 'sell' Percy to his own family]].
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Umbridge attempts to take credit for the successful Defence marks the previous year, naturally completely ignoring that it was Harry's teachings that were responsible for that success.


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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Jean Grey is Lily Evans' twin sister, and thus Harry's aunt.
* ReleasingFromThePromise: While wizards are normally not permitted to use magic in Gringotts, Harry is excused from his use of magic during a visit to the bank as he acted to protect a goblin from a Death Eater.

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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. In the meantime, ever since school started, Slytherin students have been attacking (or trying to attack) Muggleborn and half-blood students, and Dumbledore has not said anything.

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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. In the meantime, ever since school started, Slytherin students have been attacking (or trying to attack) Muggleborn and half-blood students, and Dumbledore has not said anything. See also WellIntentionedExtremist below.



* NoWomansLand: The Death Eaters consider witches to basically be brood mares, with their main role to be concubines and mothers to the future wizarding society.



* WellIntentionedExtremist: Dumbledore, who is completely unwilling to let any control he might have over Harry slip away, has little empathy for all the suffering Harry has gone through, and is only willing to help any Death Eater that ''might'' repent over the innocents that are being killed and injured by them, just because he thinks it is for the best of the Magical World.

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Dumbledore, who is completely unwilling to let any control he might have over Harry slip away, has little empathy for all the suffering Harry has gone through, and is only willing to help any Death Eater that ''might'' repent over the innocents that are being killed and injured by them, just because he thinks it is for the best of the Magical World. His monologues show this as a misplaced, and increasingly desperate, desire to save the wizarding world from being almost completely depleted of purebloods after the war, due to his belief that the magical world needs a healthy mix of purebloods and muggleborn to keep going.
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* MrFanservice: Harry after the summer he spent with the X-Men. A good lot of the girls in the school are left drooling when they see Harry running around the lake without a shirt on, and most are rather put out when Ginny manages to snag him.

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* MrFanservice: Harry after the summer he spent with the X-Men. A good lot of the girls in the school are left drooling when they see Harry running around the lake without a shirt on, and most are rather put out when Ginny manages to snag him.and him get together.
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** [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy loses his head via [[StuffBlowingUp Explosive Curse]].]]

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** [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy loses his head via [[StuffBlowingUp [[YourHeadASplode Explosive Curse]].]]

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* ForeShadowing: Maybey. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest to scare him into doing the chores and stop trying to do anything to him. [[spoiler:Revisited when Harry does the same to Voldemort, with more fatal results.]]

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* ForeShadowing: Maybey. Maybe. Harry sticks his intangible hand into Dudley's chest to scare him into doing leaving him alone. [[spoiler:During the chores and stop trying to do anything to him. [[spoiler:Revisited when Battle of Hogwarts, Harry does the same to Voldemort, with more fatal results.sticks his hand into Voldemort's chest - but he actually pulls his heart out.]]


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** [[spoiler:Harry uses his mutant power to rip Voldemort's heart - breaking his arm in the process.]]

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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. In the meantime, ever since school started,
Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns and half-bloods are being attacked by Slytherin students left and right on a weekly basis.

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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. In the meantime, ever since school started,
Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns and half-bloods are being attacked by
started, Slytherin students left have been attacking (or trying to attack) Muggleborn and right on a weekly basis.half-blood students, and Dumbledore has not said anything.

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** [[spoiler:Bellatrix Lestrange has her neck so thoroughly crushed by Harry that her head actually separates from her body.]]

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** [[spoiler:Bellatrix Lestrange has her neck so thoroughly crushed by Harry that her head he actually separates from her body.[[OffWithHisHead decapitates her]].]]



** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns and half-bloods are being attacked by Slytherin students left and right on a weekly basis.

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** Example: Draco Malfoy is tattooed "Dumbledore's toy" in the arse and sent naked to Voldemort with a Portkey intended for Pansy Parkinson. Upon Malfoy's return, Dumbledore proceeds to tell the school that such an attack will not go unpunished. In the meantime, ever since school started,
Most of the school can't believe it, particularly considering that Muggleborns and half-bloods are being attacked by Slytherin students left and right on a weekly basis.



* FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: the reason why [[spoiler:Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both a mutant and the Chosen One.]]

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* FreudianExcuse[=/=]GreenEyedMonster: the reason why [[spoiler:Ron Ron tells Rita Skeeter - while drunk - that Harry is both [[FantasticRacism a mutant mutant]] and the Chosen One.]]TheChosenOne.

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