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* GoddamnedBats: Zubat, as per usual. In fact, their absence in Mount Moon something Lillie takes notice of since the amount there is ''legendary''.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Okala, being a Kartana and all.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Okala, being a Kartana and all.all, is one. Red, being a Pawnard, as well.
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* BigDamnHeroes: When being attacked by Team Z Grunts on her way out, Lillie calls for help and a Mystery Girl shows up to help her and change the tide of the battle.
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* BigDamnHeroes: When being attacked by Team Z Grunts on her way out, Lillie calls for help and a Mystery Girl (Mandy) shows up to help her and change the tide of the battle.
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* NonPoweredCostumedHero: The Mystery Girl who gave Lillie her Silk Scarf and is a fan of a hero called Masked Raider, plays the role of one, even with a BigDamnHeroes moment.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Red,the Pawniard, has one.
* SingleStrokeBattle: Red, the Pawniard, and Okala does this to Holliday and Oscar's Ariados and Magnemite in their battle.
* SingleStrokeBattle: Red, the Pawniard, and Okala does this to Holliday and Oscar's Ariados and Magnemite in their battle.
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* BigDamnHeroes: When being attacked by Team Z Grunts on her way out, Lillie calls for help and a Mystery Girl shows up to help her and change the tide of the battle.
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* RealityEnsues: Blaine was forced to quit his job as a Gym Leader, due to the fact that he's old and had a heat-stroke due to his age. Considering he handled fire-types in an enclosed environment, it was only a matter of time.
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* RealityEnsues: Blaine was forced to quit his job as a Gym Leader, due to the fact that he's old and had a heat-stroke due to at his age. gym that was far away from a hospital. Considering he handled fire-types in an enclosed environment, it was only a matter of time.time before it became fatal.
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* RealityEnsues: Blaine was forced to quit his job as a Gym Leader, due to the fact that he's old and had a heat-stroke due to his age. Considering he handled fire-types in an enclosed environment, it was only a matter of time.
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--> ''Karen:'' "Most people make assumptions from their typing and appearance, or maybe from rumors about their flames. They think they'll be vicious loners, who you can send into battle on their own and expect to defeat opponents in a single strike with precise attacks. That the best way to train one is to keep it separate from the rest of your Pokemon to prevent fights, and minimize its contact with others in general. But really, the opposite is true. Houndour thrive on socialization and teamwork. They may not be able to support other Pokemon directly, but they're at their best in a support role regardless.
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--> ''Karen:'' '''Karen:''' "Most people make assumptions from their typing and appearance, or maybe from rumors about their flames. They think they'll be vicious loners, who you can send into battle on their own and expect to defeat opponents in a single strike with precise attacks. That the best way to train one is to keep it separate from the rest of your Pokemon to prevent fights, and minimize its contact with others in general. But really, the opposite is true. Houndour thrive on socialization and teamwork. They may not be able to support other Pokemon directly, but they're at their best in a support role regardless.
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* BewareOfViciousDog: The Houndour that Lillie catches is fairly aggressive, going so far as blowing Smog (read: poison gas) into Slowpoke's nose just for it to take.
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* BewareOfViciousDog: The Hanohano, the Houndour that Lillie catches catches, is fairly aggressive, going so far as blowing Smog (read: poison gas) into Slowpoke's nose just for it to take.
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* BewareOfViciousDog: The Houndour that Lillie catches is fairly aggressive, going so far as blowing Smog (read: poison gas) into Slowpoke's nose just for it to take.
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* SavageWolves: Karen points out how this is a common misconception about Houndour.
--> ''Karen:'' "Most people make assumptions from their typing and appearance, or maybe from rumors about their flames. They think they'll be vicious loners, who you can send into battle on their own and expect to defeat opponents in a single strike with precise attacks. That the best way to train one is to keep it separate from the rest of your Pokemon to prevent fights, and minimize its contact with others in general. But really, the opposite is true. Houndour thrive on socialization and teamwork. They may not be able to support other Pokemon directly, but they're at their best in a support role regardless.
--> ''Karen:'' "Most people make assumptions from their typing and appearance, or maybe from rumors about their flames. They think they'll be vicious loners, who you can send into battle on their own and expect to defeat opponents in a single strike with precise attacks. That the best way to train one is to keep it separate from the rest of your Pokemon to prevent fights, and minimize its contact with others in general. But really, the opposite is true. Houndour thrive on socialization and teamwork. They may not be able to support other Pokemon directly, but they're at their best in a support role regardless.
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** Taking this into account, [[spoiler:Lillie suggest to Gladion using the Safari Zone to run an operation similar to the Pokepeleago. It would boost the economy and they'd have Janine's ninja to defend it against poachers and Team Z.]]
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** Taking this into account, [[spoiler:Lillie Lillie suggest to Gladion using the Safari Zone to run an operation similar to the Pokepeleago. It would boost the economy and they'd have Janine's ninja to defend it against poachers and Team Z.]]
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** Taking this into account, [[spoiler:Lillie suggest to Gladion using the Safari Zone to run an operation similar to the Pokepeleago. It would boost the economy and they'd have Janine's ninja to defend it against poachers and Team Z.]]
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* BalanceOfPower: Between the Elite Four, Gym Leaders, and the Champion. The Champion is the highest authority and does hold certain absolute rights, like the appointment of Gym Leaders. To prevent the Champion for getting ground over all of the Gym Leaders, their are restrictions on dismissing one and an agreement of eight Gym Leaders can have the Champion removed. If that fails, they can simply hire a better trainer to defeat him and take his rank. The Elite Four hold a sizable amount of power themselves and are often the ones doing the government work, including the current modernization project.
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* BalanceOfPower: Between the Elite Four, Gym Leaders, and the Champion. The Champion is the highest authority and does hold certain absolute rights, like the appointment of Gym Leaders. To prevent the Champion for from getting ground power over all of the Gym Leaders, their there are restrictions on dismissing one one, and an agreement of between eight Gym Leaders can have result in the Champion being removed. If that fails, they can simply hire a better trainer to defeat him the Champion and take his rank. their rank.
** The Elite Four also hold a sizable amount of power themselves and are often the ones doing the government work, including the current modernization project.
** The Elite Four also hold a sizable amount of power themselves and are often the ones doing the government work, including the current modernization project.
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* AllIssuesArePoliticalIssues: Lillie's inquiry into why a Pokemon Center is charging her to stay the night has different view points, with all of it boiling down to politic issues with Johto, Lance, or the Modernization of the Routes.
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* AllIssuesArePoliticalIssues: Lillie's inquiry into why a Pokemon Center is charging her to stay the night has different view points, with all of it boiling down to politic issues with Johto, Lance, or the Modernization modernization of the Routes.Routes.
** Karen cites she left the Elite Four for this reason.
** Karen cites she left the Elite Four for this reason.
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* AssimilationBackfire: Lusamine's merging with Nihilego into Mother Beast resulted in it nearly merging with her nervous system and thus resulted in spinal damage, not helped when separated by Nebby forcibly. She'll have trouble walking for the rest of her life, but [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/30415405/ Word Of God]] is that it could have been a lot worse if the merger lasted longer.
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* ArchEnemy: Bill's Alakazam considers Lusamine's Clefable this.
* AssimilationBackfire: Lusamine's merging with Nihilego into Mother Beast resulted in it nearly merging with her nervous system andthus resulted in spinal damage, not helped when separated by Nebby forcibly. She'll have trouble walking for the rest of her life, but [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/30415405/ Word Of God]] is that it could have been a lot worse if the merger lasted longer.
* AssimilationBackfire: Lusamine's merging with Nihilego into Mother Beast resulted in it nearly merging with her nervous system and
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* TeleportationMisfire: Kaz does this a few times since, without a beacon, he can't accurately teleport to a location.
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* TeleportationMisfire: Kaz does this a few times since, without a beacon, he can't accurately teleport to a location.location.
* {{Troll}}: Lusamine's Clefable. She enjoys annoying Lillie and Bill's Alakazam.
* {{Troll}}: Lusamine's Clefable. She enjoys annoying Lillie and Bill's Alakazam.
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* TheRival: Star has set herself up to be Lillie's.
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* AssimilationBackfire: Lusamine's merging with Nihilego into Mother Beast resulted in it nearly merging with her nervous system and thus resulted in spinal damage when separated by Nebby. She'll have trouble walking for the rest of her life, but WordOfGod is that it could have been a lot worse if the merger lasted longer.
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* AssimilationBackfire: Lusamine's merging with Nihilego into Mother Beast resulted in it nearly merging with her nervous system and thus resulted in spinal damage damage, not helped when separated by Nebby. Nebby forcibly. She'll have trouble walking for the rest of her life, but WordOfGod [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/30415405/ Word Of God]] is that it could have been a lot worse if the merger lasted longer.
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* AffectionateNickname: Most of the owned Pokemon in the fic have one.
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* AlwaysAccurateAttack: The "Lock-On" technique of Bill's Porygon 2.
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* GoddamnBats: Lillie feels this way about the Geodudes that she keeps running into on Route 5.
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** Okala is Hawaiian for "sharpening".
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** Okala is Hawaiian for "sharpening"."Sharpening".
* MustHaveCaffeine: Daphnis is obsessed with coffee.
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* PowerupLetdown: Star evolved her Growlithe into an Arcanine realtively quickly from what Miri could perceive, which inhibited it from learning most of its techniques outside of TM's and Tutors. Lillie also thinks to herself that Moon's Arcanine is stronger from her time in Alola.
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* PowerupLetdown: Star evolved her Growlithe into an Arcanine realtively relatively quickly from what Miri could perceive, which inhibited it from learning most of its techniques outside of TM's and Tutors. Lillie also thinks to herself that Moon's Arcanine is stronger from her time in Alola.
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* GoddamnBats: Lillie feels this way about the Geodudes that she keeps running into on Route 5.
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* BerserkButton:
** Miri's is the insinuation that she's an easy Gym Leader to beat.
** Star's appears to be one that insinuates that she is a "Fake".
* BreakTheHaughty: When Star challenges Lillie (almost to the extent of bullying) and is outright rude towards Miri, the Gym Leader decides to humble her in a battle.
** Miri's is the insinuation that she's an easy Gym Leader to beat.
** Star's appears to be one that insinuates that she is a "Fake".
* BreakTheHaughty: When Star challenges Lillie (almost to the extent of bullying) and is outright rude towards Miri, the Gym Leader decides to humble her in a battle.
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* {{Imprinting}}: Okala imprinted on either Lusamine or Lillie as its parent since it hatched in their dimension and the two are both Fallers. Lusamine's reaction to it was... less than welcomed.
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* {{Imprinting}}: Okala imprinted on either Lusamine or Lillie as its parent since it hatched in their dimension and the two are both Fallers. Lusamine's reaction to it was... less than welcomed.welcoming.
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* PowerupLetdown: Star evolved her Growlithe into an Arcanine realtively quickly from what Miri could perceive, which inhibited it from learning most of its techniques outside of TM's and Tutors. Lillie also thinks to herself that Moon's Arcanine is stronger from her time in Alola.
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* HallOfMirrors: Miri's Gym is set up as one.
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* AmusementPark: Miri's Gym shares the grounds with the local amusement park in Cerulean City.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Miri became a Gym Leader not because of her battling skills, but because she was a national celebrity and Lance really needed someone to fill in the position when Misty quit and she was the closest viable candidate they had that wouldn't stir up a commotion.
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* FoodAsBribe: How Lillie convinced her mother's Bewear, Boozle, to help her.
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* DyingTown: Fuchsia City. Between the cycling road being torn down so that bigger ships could get to Vermillion, the Zoo, and Safari Zone being torn down, it's lost a lot of the attractions that drew in tourist and you can't get anywhere from it easily without a long trip.
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* DyingTown: Fuchsia City. Between the cycling road being torn down so that bigger ships could get to Vermillion, the Zoo, Zoo being torn down, and the Safari Zone being torn down, closed, it's lost a lot of the attractions that drew in tourist and you can't get anywhere from it easily without a long trip.
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'''WARNING! UNMARKED SPOILERS ARE BELOW! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!'''
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''Lillie's Z-Powered Adventure!'' is a VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon quest running on SpaceBattles and SufficentVelocity by Arkanian that follows supporting protagonist Lillie as she begins her adventure in Kanto. Having vowed to meet up with Moon at the Unova World Tournament, Lillie must complete her journey as a trainer and take the spot as the Indigo Champion in order to be guaranteed a spot and keep her promise. That mean she must do as the champions before her and gather 8 badges before taking on the Elite Four.
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''Lillie's Z-Powered Adventure!'' is a VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon quest running on SpaceBattles and SufficentVelocity Sufficent Velocity by Arkanian that follows supporting protagonist Lillie as she begins her adventure in Kanto. Having vowed to meet up with Moon at the Unova World Tournament, Lillie must complete her journey as a trainer and take the spot as the Indigo Champion in order to be guaranteed a spot and keep her promise. That mean she must do as the champions before her and gather 8 badges before taking on the Elite Four.
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The quest is controlled by the votes of members of the SpaceBattles and SufficentVelocity forum and is currently active.
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The quest is controlled by the votes of members of the SpaceBattles [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/lillies-z-powered-adventure-pokemon-sm-post-game-quest.477829/ SpaceBattles]] and SufficentVelocity [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/lillies-z-powered-adventure-pokemon-sm-post-game-quest.35071/ Sufficent Velocity]] forum and is currently active.
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* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: Okala, partly due to its timid nature.
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* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: Okala, partly due to its timid nature.nature.
* TeleportationMisfire: Kaz does this a few times since, without a beacon, he can't accurately teleport to a location.
* TeleportationMisfire: Kaz does this a few times since, without a beacon, he can't accurately teleport to a location.
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''Lillie's Z-Powered Adventure!'' is a VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon quest running on SpaceBattles and SufficentVelocity by Arkanian that follows supporting protagonist Lillie as she begins her adventure in Kanto. Having vowed to meet up with Moon at the Unova World Tournament, Lillie must complete her journey as a trainer and take the spot as the Indigo Champion in order to be guaranteed a spot and keep her promise. That mean she must do as the champions before her and gather 8 badges before taking on the Elite Four.
However, things have changed since the time of Red's adventure. Kanto is suffering from what looks to be an economic crisis, a criminal organization known as Team Z have orchestrated terrorist attacks against several locations, and through unforseen circumstances, Lillie has also become a target of interest for them as well.
The quest is controlled by the votes of members of the SpaceBattles and SufficentVelocity forum and is currently active.
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!! This quest provides examples of:
* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Okala, being a Kartana and all.
* AllIssuesArePoliticalIssues: Lillie's inquiry into why a Pokemon Center is charging her to stay the night has different view points, with all of it boiling down to politic issues with Johto, Lance, or the Modernization of the Routes.
* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: The Champion of the League holds the final say on most things in regards to Kanto and Johto, or at least has to sign-off on things. While there are some checks in place with the Elite Four and Gym Leaders, they still hold a lot of power.
* BalanceOfPower: Between the Elite Four, Gym Leaders, and the Champion. The Champion is the highest authority and does hold certain absolute rights, like the appointment of Gym Leaders. To prevent the Champion for getting ground over all of the Gym Leaders, their are restrictions on dismissing one and an agreement of eight Gym Leaders can have the Champion removed. If that fails, they can simply hire a better trainer to defeat him and take his rank. The Elite Four hold a sizable amount of power themselves and are often the ones doing the government work, including the current modernization project.
* DelayedReaction: Kumu is slow to act outside of a fight.
* DyingTown: Fuchsia City. Between the cycling road being torn down so that bigger ships could get to Vermillion, the Zoo, and Safari Zone being torn down, it's lost a lot of the attractions that drew in tourist and you can't get anywhere from it easily without a long trip.
* {{Imprinting}}: Okala imprinted on either Lusamine or Lillie as its parent since it hatched in their dimension and the two are both Fallers. Lusamine's reaction to it was... less than welcomed.
* MeaningfulName:
** Okala is Hawaiian for "sharpening".
** Kumu is Hawaiian for "Sage".
* NotAMorningPerson: Kumu, being a Slowpoke and all.
* PaperPeople: The Kartana species.
* PerpetualSmiler: Kumu.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: Okala, who when first introduced had [[KillStreak defeated]] enough wild Pokemon to have a [[BattleAura Beast Boost]] aura several feet wide.
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: Okala, partly due to its timid nature.
However, things have changed since the time of Red's adventure. Kanto is suffering from what looks to be an economic crisis, a criminal organization known as Team Z have orchestrated terrorist attacks against several locations, and through unforseen circumstances, Lillie has also become a target of interest for them as well.
The quest is controlled by the votes of members of the SpaceBattles and SufficentVelocity forum and is currently active.
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!! This quest provides examples of:
* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Okala, being a Kartana and all.
* AllIssuesArePoliticalIssues: Lillie's inquiry into why a Pokemon Center is charging her to stay the night has different view points, with all of it boiling down to politic issues with Johto, Lance, or the Modernization of the Routes.
* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: The Champion of the League holds the final say on most things in regards to Kanto and Johto, or at least has to sign-off on things. While there are some checks in place with the Elite Four and Gym Leaders, they still hold a lot of power.
* BalanceOfPower: Between the Elite Four, Gym Leaders, and the Champion. The Champion is the highest authority and does hold certain absolute rights, like the appointment of Gym Leaders. To prevent the Champion for getting ground over all of the Gym Leaders, their are restrictions on dismissing one and an agreement of eight Gym Leaders can have the Champion removed. If that fails, they can simply hire a better trainer to defeat him and take his rank. The Elite Four hold a sizable amount of power themselves and are often the ones doing the government work, including the current modernization project.
* DelayedReaction: Kumu is slow to act outside of a fight.
* DyingTown: Fuchsia City. Between the cycling road being torn down so that bigger ships could get to Vermillion, the Zoo, and Safari Zone being torn down, it's lost a lot of the attractions that drew in tourist and you can't get anywhere from it easily without a long trip.
* {{Imprinting}}: Okala imprinted on either Lusamine or Lillie as its parent since it hatched in their dimension and the two are both Fallers. Lusamine's reaction to it was... less than welcomed.
* MeaningfulName:
** Okala is Hawaiian for "sharpening".
** Kumu is Hawaiian for "Sage".
* NotAMorningPerson: Kumu, being a Slowpoke and all.
* PaperPeople: The Kartana species.
* PerpetualSmiler: Kumu.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: Okala, who when first introduced had [[KillStreak defeated]] enough wild Pokemon to have a [[BattleAura Beast Boost]] aura several feet wide.
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: Okala, partly due to its timid nature.