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** In the later chapters, [[spoiler:Kyrie, Iris, and the Huckebein Family. Upon their arrival, they [[CurbStompBatter viciously tear apart the three Aces]] and make away with the Book of Darkness. Even the Mandarin is surprised that such a powerful faction ever existed, waiting to jump into al of the chaos.]]
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** In the later chapters, [[spoiler:Kyrie, Iris, and the Huckebein Family. Upon their arrival, they [[CurbStompBatter [[CurbStompBattle viciously tear apart the three Aces]] and make away with the Book of Darkness. Even the Mandarin is surprised that such a powerful faction ever existed, waiting to jump into al all of the chaos.]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Due]]
** ReverseMole: [[spoiler:This[[spoiler:Due; This isn't the only time she played the above trope.]]
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the moral high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's not willing to take the moral high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
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* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst of it,[[spoiler:seeing everyone she knows either getting slaughtered by LOGOS or becoming terrorists.]]
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* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst of it,[[spoiler:seeing it, [[spoiler:seeing everyone she knows either getting slaughtered by LOGOS or becoming terrorists.]]
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* DavidVersusGoliath: UpToEleven with a RagtagBandOfMisfits going against TheEmpire, a NebulousEvilOrganization, ''and'' the SpaceNavy.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Viletta, killed by during a surprise attack from LOGOS.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Viletta, killed by during a surprise attack from LOGOS.]]
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* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:No one foresees antoher party getting involved in the ongoing war. Simon knew about the Huckebein and Zilkhstan, and he was seemingly aware of Kyrie thanks to her sister. However, he never expected the former two would support the latter, making a faction dangerous enough to throw a SpannerInTheWorks.]]
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* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:No one foresees antoher another party getting involved in the ongoing war. Simon knew about the Huckebein and Zilkhstan, and he was seemingly aware of Kyrie thanks to her sister. However, he never expected the former two would support the latter, making a faction dangerous enough to throw a SpannerInTheWorks.]]
* GutFeeling:
** Fate has a strong belief that Lelouch is Zero despite having no evidence to back it up.
** [[spoiler:Shamna]] also suspects something about the true nature of [[spoiler:Iris and the Eternal Crystal]].
** Fate has a strong belief that Lelouch is Zero despite having no evidence to back it up.
** [[spoiler:Shamna]] also suspects something about the true nature of [[spoiler:Iris and the Eternal Crystal]].
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** C.C.'s Armed Device and spells are based on attacks from ''Anime/AuraBattlerDunbine''.
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* TheLopsidedArmOfTheLaw: The TSAB are portrayed like this as civilians get slaughtered on an unadministered world, but they're willing to arrest a masked vigilante because he's using magic to stop it. Granted, the affairs of unadministered worlds are outside of the Bureau's jurisdiction while terrorist Mages are not.
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* TheLopsidedArmOfTheLaw: The TSAB are portrayed like this as civilians get slaughtered on an unadministered world, but they're willing to arrest a masked vigilante because he's using magic to stop it. Granted, the affairs of unadministered worlds are outside of the Bureau's jurisdiction while terrorist Mages are not.not, but it still proves them to be far more obstructive than helpful.
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** [[spoiler:[[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaReflection Kyrie and Iris]] recruit the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Huckebein Family]] and the [[Anime/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheResurrection Kingdom of Zilkhstan]] into their personal force.forces.]]
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* MemoryWipingCrew: Charles uses his Geass to wipe the memories of those exposed to LOGOS and the TSAB's activities, [[spoiler:just like what he did to Euphemia, Guilford, and Darlton.]]
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Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind in service of the Time Space Administration Bureau. That includes Lelouch and Nunally, the exiled prince and princess sent to Japan as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess. He encounters a crashed truck driven by, Eleven terrorists, that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Things go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and sees his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
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Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind in service of the Time Space Time-Space Administration Bureau. That includes Lelouch and Nunally, the exiled prince and princess sent to Japan as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess. He encounters a crashed truck driven by, Eleven terrorists, that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Things go have gone even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and sees his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
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Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. They are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the war against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device that identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
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** The Huckebein have also crossed more into this territory. Aside from other Eclipse Drivers, it turns out [[spoiler:those who attacked Thoma's hometown on Vaizen were not the real Curren and Veyron]], and they have been busy killing clones who were sent on indiscriminate killings under their name. Furthermore, they loathe the Vandein Corporation and LOGOS, who they suspect to be collaborating with them.
** ''[[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]]'' of all
** The Huckebein have also crossed more into this territory. Aside from other Eclipse Drivers, it turns out [[spoiler:those who attacked Thoma's hometown on Vaizen were not the real Curren and Veyron]], and they have been busy killing clones who were sent on indiscriminate killings under their name. Furthermore, they loathe the Vandein Corporation and LOGOS, who they suspect to be collaborating with them.
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** BigBad: The Mandarin[[spoiler:/Simon Testarossa]]
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Suzuka]]
** TheEvilGenius: Colonel Kusakabe
** TheBrute: Gray Biaggi
** TheDarkChick: [[spoiler:Mao]]
** SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler:Due]]
** BigBad: The Mandarin[[spoiler:/Simon Testarossa]]
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Suzuka]]
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** TheBrute: Gray Biaggi
** TheDarkChick: [[spoiler:Mao]]
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* GenreBlind: Most of FoundFootageFilms: Parodied by Sein in Chapter 30 [[spoiler:upon investigating the Bureau have no idea how ''real'' Code R facility and ''effective'' terrorist organizations operate.uncovering Amitie Florian]].
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** Dr. Jail comments on how the [[spoiler:Iris Units]] play the same role as his [[MechaMooks Gadget Drones]].
** Dr. Jail comments on how the [[spoiler:Iris Units]] play the same role as his [[MechaMooks Gadget Drones]].
** [[spoiler:Then, a new faction composed of Kyrie, Iris, the Huckebein, and the Kingdom of Zilkhstan take ''everyone'' by surprise. And even LOGOS still doesn't understand what's going on.]]
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** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severely injure or kill you. [[spoiler:Zafira learned the hard way at Narita.]]
* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler:Schneizel]] has been aware of all strange phenomenon that has happened ever since Zero's appearance, and those under his command work independently from the Emperor to keep the existence of magic and the TSAB from going public.
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* ThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are a little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]]
** [[spoiler: Jeremiah, on the other hand, is learning the hard way.]]
** [[spoiler: Now, General Darlton and the Glaston Knights have become unneeded witnesses.]]
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** [[spoiler: Now, General Darlton and the Glaston Knights have become unneeded witnesses.]]
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* ThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are a little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]] However, by the time of Chapter 30, so many members in the Britannian military have become aware of magic and the TSAB, namely [[spoiler:Jeremiah, Darlton, the Glaston Knights, and the Camelot unit.]]
**[[spoiler: Jeremiah, on It turns out that [[spoiler:Schneizel has been aware of these activities for quite some time as been working with the other hand, is learning the hard way.]]
** [[spoiler: Now, General Darlton and the Glaston Knights have become unneeded witnesses.units under his command to keep it all a secret.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: More of "second chapter spoiler", but you know the rails are gonna tear off upon [[spoiler:Quattro stealing the Lancelot.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: FirstEpisodeTwist: More of a "second chapter spoiler", but you know the rails are gonna tear off upon [[spoiler:Quattro stealing the Lancelot.]]
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** Another one in Chapter 30, [[spoiler:with Veyron and Kyrie wiping the floor of the Aces, Chrono, and two of the Wolkenritter.]]
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* PreAssKickingOneLiner:
** Delivered by [[spoiler:Veyron]] in Chapter 30.
--> "Let neogitations break down so I can tear into the lot of you!"
* PreAssKickingOneLiner:
** Delivered by [[spoiler:Veyron]] in Chapter 30.
--> "Let neogitations break down so I can tear into the lot of you!"
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* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:No one foresees antoher party getting involved in the ongoing war. Simon knew about the Huckebein and Zilkhstan, and he was seemingly aware of Kyrie thanks to her sister. However, he never expected the former two would support the latter, making a faction dangerous enough to throw a SpannerInTheWorks.]]
* KnightOfCerberus:
** The Mandarin's organization, LOGOS introduces itself like this. Armed with powerful weapons that could take on the Bureau, they inflict significant casualties that include [[WouldHurtAChild Nanoha's students]], then calls them out for their corruption while inciting riots throughout the Dimensional Sea.
** In the later chapters, [[spoiler:Kyrie, Iris, and the Huckebein Family. Upon their arrival, they [[CurbStompBatter viciously tear apart the three Aces]] and make away with the Book of Darkness. Even the Mandarin is surprised that such a powerful faction ever existed, waiting to jump into al of the chaos.]]
** The Mandarin's organization, LOGOS introduces itself like this. Armed with powerful weapons that could take on the Bureau, they inflict significant casualties that include [[WouldHurtAChild Nanoha's students]], then calls them out for their corruption while inciting riots throughout the Dimensional Sea.
** In the later chapters, [[spoiler:Kyrie, Iris, and the Huckebein Family. Upon their arrival, they [[CurbStompBatter viciously tear apart the three Aces]] and make away with the Book of Darkness. Even the Mandarin is surprised that such a powerful faction ever existed, waiting to jump into al of the chaos.]]
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** Even more so by Chapter 30. [[spoiler:A new player is involved, composed of Kyrie, Iris, Zilkhstan, and the Huckebein as a unified group. Their entrance reveals General Darlton and the Glaston Knights the existence of magic, and Amitie is rescued by the Camelot Research team.]]
** [[spoiler:It goes further off the rails when Kyrie and Iris show up with the assistance of the Huckebein Family and Zilkhstan. Prince Clovis is captured, and the A.S.S.E.C. unit and Glaston Knights are exposed to the existence of magic and the TSAB.]]
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all sharing it to the public.[[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Terrorist groups rise up and commit public atrocities against the Britannian civilians as a result.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but what comes after them.
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all sharing it to the public. [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Terrorist groups rise up and commit public atrocities against the Britannian civilians as a result.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but what comes after them.
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** [[spoiler:Then, Kyrie gets involved with the help of the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Huckebein]] and [[Anime/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRessurection Kingdom of Zilkhstan]].]]
** [[spoiler:Then, Kyrie gets involved with the help of the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Huckebein]] and [[Anime/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRessurection Kingdom of Zilkhstan]].]]
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** On second note, terrorist or rebel groups won't wage war against great powers until they have the weapons and resources to do so.
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** In Nanoha, on the other hand, you now have people getting slaughtered, heavy corruption within the Bureau, and not being able to help your friends due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause. Oh, and that includes said friends being your enemies, whether you're [[ArrestedForHeroism trying to arrest them for saving countless lives]] or [[spoiler:them trying to kill you for leaving them in the first place.]]
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* ThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are a little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]]
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** [[spoiler: Now, General Darlton and the Glaston Knights have become unneeded witnesses.]]
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** [[spoiler:[[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaReflection Kyrie and Iris]] recruit the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Huckebein Family]] and the [[Anime/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRessurection Kingdom of Zilkhstan]] into their personal force.]]
** [[spoiler:[[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaReflection Kyrie and Iris]] recruit the [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Huckebein Family]] and the [[Anime/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRessurection Kingdom of Zilkhstan]] into their personal force.]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[OriginalCharacter Gray Biaggi]], the Heretic Knight of the Saint Church is [[Anime/Gundam00 Ali Al-Saachez]].
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* {{Expy}}: [[OriginalCharacter Gray Biaggi]], the Heretic Knight of the Saint Church is [[Anime/Gundam00 [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Ali Al-Saachez]].
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* TrappedTheWrongTarget: [[spoiler:The tanker trap at Yokosuka doesn’t get Gray, it kills the TSAB team instead.]]
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* FiveBadBand: LOGOS
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* FiveBadBand: FiveManBand: LOGOS
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** [[MetalGearRising "You deny your weapon its purpose!"]]
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** [[MetalGearRising [[VideoGame/MetalGearRising "You deny your weapon its purpose!"]]
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* ElCidPloy: With the death of [[spoiler:General Katase]], the Black Knight attempt to bait the Britannians into a trap. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, the TSAB falls into the same trap. It ends disastrously.]]
** [[spoiler:Colonel Tohdoh]] was well against this, placing HonorBeforeReason.
** [[spoiler:Colonel Tohdoh]] was well against this, placing HonorBeforeReason.
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* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Tohdoh and the JLF remnants under his command choose to honor General Katase by not taking part in the Black Knights' LeCidPloy.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Tohdoh and the JLF remnants under his command choose to honor General Katase by not taking part in the Black Knights' LeCidPloy.ElCidPloy.]]
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* LeCidPloy: With the death of [[spoiler:General Katase]], the Black Knight attempt to bait the Britannians into a trap. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, the TSAB falls into the same trap. It ends disastrously.]]
** [[spoiler:Colonel Tohdoh]] was well against this, placing HonorBeforeReason.
** [[spoiler:Colonel Tohdoh]] was well against this, placing HonorBeforeReason.
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With his old friends back in the picture, will Lelouch have what it takes overcome his new obstacles and succeed in creating a happier place?
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With his old friends back in the picture, will Lelouch have what it takes to overcome his new obstacles and succeed in creating a happier place?
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler:Viletta, who gets cut down by LOGOS's MechaMooks.]]
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler:Viletta, who gets cut down by LOGOS's LOGOS' MechaMooks.]]
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** Lelouch and Nunally were reported dead to the Empire.
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** Lelouch and Nunally Nunnally were reported dead to the Empire.
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* {{Foil}}: Not by people (well, ''maybe''), but by devices. Raising Heart is a GlassCannon who concentrates on [[MemeticMutation maximum power]], Abyss Soul is fit for a FragileSpeedster who uses illusions and precision.
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* {{Foil}}: Not by people (well, ''maybe''), but by devices. Raising Heart is a GlassCannon who concentrates on [[MemeticMutation maximum power]], Abyss Soul is fit for a FragileSpeedster who that uses illusions and precision.
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* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate within Britannia is described as one. [[spoiler:It's property of LOGOS.]]
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* MegaCorp: The Donovian Donovan Technology Conglomerate within Britannia is described as one. [[spoiler:It's property of LOGOS.]]
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-->([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose]])
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-->([[spoiler:after Shinjiku Shinjuku disaster and expose]])
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: [[spoiler:The battle at Port Yokosuka. For ''everyone''.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Tohdoh and the JLF remnants under his command choose to honor General Katase by not taking part in the Black Knights' LeCidPloy.]]
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* LeCidPloy: With the death of [[spoiler:General Katase]], the Black Knight attempt to bait the Britannians into a trap. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, the TSAB falls into the same trap. It ends disastrously.]]
** [[spoiler:Colonel Tohdoh]] was well against this, placing HonorBeforeReason.
** [[spoiler:Colonel Tohdoh]] was well against this, placing HonorBeforeReason.
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** The final words from [[spoiler:the fake image of General Katase]] are eerily familiar to [[Film/{{Inception}} another Japanese criminal/terrorist leader]].
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--> "Some people call me a terrorist. I consider myself a teacher."
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--> "Some "[[Film/IronMan3 Some people call me a terrorist. I consider myself a teacher."]]"
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** Just because you're the primary resistance movement doesn't mean everyone is willing to join you. Some resistance groups try to remain independent and are resentful over Kyoto House suddenly redirecting the supply lines.
** Similar to the ''Film/TheDarkKnight'', the Black Knights' successes gave rise to a lot of copycats who vandalize in their name.
** Similar to the ''Film/TheDarkKnight'', the Black Knights' successes gave rise to a lot of copycats who vandalize in their name.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch form the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former stating the Bureau was responsible for creating the BigBad.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch form create the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former stating the Bureau was responsible for creating the BigBad.
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** Ever since [[spoiler:Cornelia's capture]], rioters and resistance movements take up the Black Knights' name and start vandalizing. [[Film/TheDarkKnight Lelouch comments over how it wasn't his idea for inspiring people]].
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Peter states that he's working with the Black Knights and fighting the TSAB because the latter is responsible for the Mandarin's creation.
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* CovertGroupWithMundaneFront: [[spoiler:The purpose of LOGOS and it's privately owned corporation in Britannia.]]
* CreateYourOwnVillain:Peter states that he's working with the Black Knights and fighting the The TSAB because the latter is was responsible for the Mandarin's creation.
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** BigBad: The Mandarin
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** BigBad: The MandarinMandarin[[spoiler:/Simon Testarossa]]