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* GodzillaThreshold: This is how Ichigo describes everyone pinning their hopes on him stopping Aizen in the original timeline, despite Ichigo technically having no stake in the conflict besides protecting his hometown. All of them had something up their sleeve that they planned on using to stop Aizen, but always made sure to keep Ichigo in reserve in case it didn't work. As the only combatant with a bankai who hadn't seen Aizen's shikai, he was the only person with a chance of winning that would be able to fight Aizen at all if what they had failed.
-->'''Ichigo''': I wasn't their only hope. I was their last hope.
-->'''Ichigo''': I wasn't their only hope. I was their last hope.
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* ArchEnemy: After all their encounters in the first timeline, include the preceding battle that sent them back in time in the first place, it seems that Ichigo and Aizen have legitimately come to hate each other. Aizen openly shows anger and resentment over Ichigo's power and potential, while Ichigo would rather assassinate Aizen as soon as possible than risk another war and see his friends and family targeted again. [[spoiler:Towards the end of the story, after Aizen uses the Grand Fisher to draw out Isshin and kidnap his family as hostages, Ichigo refuses to settle for anything less than having ''Aizen's head on a stick'']].
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* ItsPersonal: See ArmourPiercingQuestion. While explaing to Ishida why Aizen needs to be stopped, not once does Ichigo deny Ishida's claim, suggesting that Ichigo did eventually come to resent Aizen like his allies in the Gotei 13 and the Vizards already had.
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* ItsPersonal: See ArmourPiercingQuestion. While explaing to Ishida why Aizen needs to be stopped, not once does Ichigo deny Ishida's claim, suggesting that Ichigo did eventually come to resent Aizen like his allies in the Gotei 13 and the Vizards already had. [[spoiler:The last chapters effectively confirm it, after Ichigo goes into a TranquilFury over Aizen taking his family hostage]].
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Ichigo ends up in this position, despite also being a GodModeSue]].
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Ichigo ends up in this position, despite also being a GodModeSue]].transcendent being.]]
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* TerminatorTwosome: The basic premise.
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** This is also how Ichigo manages to get the Gotei 13 to [[spoiler:let Muramasa live]]. The letter of the ruling only calls for [[spoiler:the nullification of Koga Kuchiki's zanpakutou. Since he's not Koga's zanpakutou anymore]], technically the ruling has been carried out.
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* StunnedSilence: When Mayuri suggests making a duplicate of Rukia's brain to prevent most of the events of ''Anime/BleachFadeToBlack'', the room goes so quiet that they can literally hear a pin drop.
-->''Ishida, watching from the back of the room, experimentally pulled out one of his sewing pins and listened as it dropped to the floor.''
-->''Ishida, watching from the back of the room, experimentally pulled out one of his sewing pins and listened as it dropped to the floor.''
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* {{MST}}: While done rather creatively, a large portion of the story is effectively the cast from the Soul Society arc commentating on the events of the later arcs of ''Manga/Bleach''.
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* {{MST}}: While done rather creatively, a large portion of the story is effectively the cast from the Soul Society arc commentating on the events of the later arcs of ''Manga/Bleach''.''Manga/{{Bleach}}''.
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* {{MST}}: While done rather creatively, a large portion of the story is effectively the cast from the Soul Society arc commentating on the events of the later arcs of ''Manga/Bleach''.
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* ContinuitySnarl: All filler arcs and movies are treated as having happened, even the ones that don't fit cleanly anywhere in the timeline. The issue of how exactly these conflicting events could all have occurred is never addressed.
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* ContinuitySnarl: All filler arcs anime content (filler episodes, arcs, and movies movies) that had been released up to Ichigo's final battle with Aizen are treated as having happened, canon to this story, even the ones that don't fit cleanly anywhere in the timeline. The issue which are explicitly said to take place after Aizen's defeat. Additionally, there are occasionally moments where Ichigo shows knowledge of how exactly these conflicting events could all he wasn't present for, nor would have occurred is never addressed.had the opportunity to learn of secondhand.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]]. It is the most popular Peggy Sue story, and the third most popular story overall, in the ''Bleach'' fandom.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]]. It is the most popular Peggy Sue story, and the third most popular story overall, in the ''Bleach'' fandom.
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It's different from most other PeggySue stories in that both TheHero and the BigBad get sent back in time, leaving both sides on a level playing field. Ichigo also wastes no time in explaining to everyone that time travel is going on, forgoing any masquerade or working behind the scenes.
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It's different from most other PeggySue stories in that both TheHero and ''and'' the BigBad get sent back in time, leaving both sides on a level playing field. Ichigo also wastes no time in explaining to everyone that time travel is going on, forgoing any masquerade or working behind the scenes.
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* NotSoStoic: Zangetsu has trouble suppressing laughter at some of the more ridiculous antics Ichigo gets up to. [[spoiler: He's also furious when Muramasa decides to take Ichigo as his wielder.]]
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* TheFettered: The reason Yamamoto obeys the Central 46, even when he personally has doubts, is precisely ''because'' he knows that he is powerful enough that no one could stop him if he were to disobey.
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* ObliviousToLove: And Admiration, Ichigo again. [[spoiler:This is why Muramasa manages to blindside him.]]
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* ObliviousToLove: And Admiration, Ichigo again.Ichigo. To the point where his hollow has to question whether or not he's gay. He's also oblivious to other forms of admiration. [[spoiler:This is why Muramasa manages to blindside him.]]
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Nnoitra gets annoyed by Aizen's complex plans and EvilGloating and wishes he would just kill the good guys and get it over with.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Nnoitra gets annoyed by Aizen's complex plans and EvilGloating and wishes he would just kill the good guys and get it over with. [[spoiler: Although Ichigo needs to be alive for Aizen to make the King's Key from him.]]
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** [[spoiler: Ichigo/[[TheLostLenore Senna]] happens to get shipped a fair bit in-story after everyone sees his forgotten memories of her, though as a TragicShip due to how it ended.]]
** Ichigo/[[spoiler:Neliel sneaks up early when [[SuperPoweredEvilSide The Hollow]] brings up her [[MarshmellowHell smothering]] Ichigo a few times. Then an adult-body-restored Neliel hears about Ichigo comparing her to one of his [[LikeBrotherAndSister sister's]] and [[ArentYouGoingToRavishMe takes offense]] and decides to [[TheTease prove a point]] when they meet up. [[ShipperOnDeck Ichigo's family]] invite her to visit in the future. ]]
** Ichigo/[[spoiler:Neliel sneaks up early when [[SuperPoweredEvilSide The Hollow]] brings up her [[MarshmellowHell smothering]] Ichigo a few times. Then an adult-body-restored Neliel hears about Ichigo comparing her to one of his [[LikeBrotherAndSister sister's]] and [[ArentYouGoingToRavishMe takes offense]] and decides to [[TheTease prove a point]] when they meet up. [[ShipperOnDeck Ichigo's family]] invite her to visit in the future. ]]
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** [[spoiler: Ichigo/[[TheLostLenore Senna]] happens to get shipped a fair bit in-story after everyone sees his forgotten memories of her, though as a TragicShip tragedy due to how it ended.]]
** Ichigo/[[spoiler:Neliel sneaks up early when [[SuperPoweredEvilSide The Hollow]] brings up her[[MarshmellowHell [[MarshmallowHell smothering]] Ichigo a few times. Then an adult-body-restored Neliel hears about Ichigo comparing her to one of his [[LikeBrotherAndSister sister's]] and [[ArentYouGoingToRavishMe takes offense]] and decides to [[TheTease prove a point]] when they meet up. [[ShipperOnDeck Ichigo's family]] invite her to visit in the future. ]]
** Ichigo/[[spoiler:Neliel sneaks up early when [[SuperPoweredEvilSide The Hollow]] brings up her
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: When [[spoiler: [[MsFanservice Neliel]], now an adult permanently due to [[TheMeddler Aizen]]]], hears that Ichigo [[spoiler: thought of her as one of his '[[LikeBrotherAndSister younger sisters]]' in the future,]] she's... [[ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne somewhat]] [[WomanScorned irked]]. [[spoiler: She very pointedly goes out of her way to [[TheTease remind]] [[ShipTease him]] that she's ''definitely'' not his sister when they meet up.]] [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Surprisingly]], he responds back positively.
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: When [[spoiler: [[MsFanservice Neliel]], now an adult permanently due to [[TheMeddler Aizen]]]], hears that Ichigo [[spoiler: thought of her as one of his '[[LikeBrotherAndSister younger sisters]]' in the future,]] she's... [[ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne somewhat]] [[WomanScorned irked]]. [[spoiler: She very pointedly goes out of her way to [[TheTease remind]] [[ShipTease him]] that she's ''definitely'' not his sister when they meet up.]] [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Surprisingly]], he responds back positively.
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* ShipTease: It's [[CluelessChickMagnet Ichigo]]. There's quite a bit. And he almost never notices any of it, as per canon.
** Ichigo/Orihime is featured on her part, but it's portrayed as one sided.
** [[spoiler: Ichigo/[[TheLostLenore Senna]] happens to get shipped a fair bit in-story after everyone sees his forgotten memories of her, though as a TragicShip due to how it ended.]]
** Ichigo/[[spoiler:Neliel sneaks up early when [[SuperPoweredEvilSide The Hollow]] brings up her [[MarshmellowHell smothering]] Ichigo a few times. Then an adult-body-restored Neliel hears about Ichigo comparing her to one of his [[LikeBrotherAndSister sister's]] and [[ArentYouGoingToRavishMe takes offense]] and decides to [[TheTease prove a point]] when they meet up. [[ShipperOnDeck Ichigo's family]] invite her to visit in the future. ]]
** Ichigo/Orihime is featured on her part, but it's portrayed as one sided.
** [[spoiler: Ichigo/[[TheLostLenore Senna]] happens to get shipped a fair bit in-story after everyone sees his forgotten memories of her, though as a TragicShip due to how it ended.]]
** Ichigo/[[spoiler:Neliel sneaks up early when [[SuperPoweredEvilSide The Hollow]] brings up her [[MarshmellowHell smothering]] Ichigo a few times. Then an adult-body-restored Neliel hears about Ichigo comparing her to one of his [[LikeBrotherAndSister sister's]] and [[ArentYouGoingToRavishMe takes offense]] and decides to [[TheTease prove a point]] when they meet up. [[ShipperOnDeck Ichigo's family]] invite her to visit in the future. ]]
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: When [[spoiler: [[MsFanservice Neliel]], now an adult permanently due to [[TheMeddler Aizen]]]], hears that Ichigo [[spoiler: thought of her as one of his '[[LikeBrotherAndSister younger sisters]]' in the future,]] she's... [[ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne somewhat]] [[WomanScorned irked]]. [[spoiler: She very pointedly goes out of her way to [[TheTease remind]] [[ShipTease him]] that she's ''definitely'' not his sister when they meet up.]]
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: When [[spoiler: [[MsFanservice Neliel]], now an adult permanently due to [[TheMeddler Aizen]]]], hears that Ichigo [[spoiler: thought of her as one of his '[[LikeBrotherAndSister younger sisters]]' in the future,]] she's... [[ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne somewhat]] [[WomanScorned irked]]. [[spoiler: She very pointedly goes out of her way to [[TheTease remind]] [[ShipTease him]] that she's ''definitely'' not his sister when they meet up.]]]] [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Surprisingly]], he responds back positively.
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: When [[MsFanservice Neliel]], now an adult permanently due to [[TheMeddler Aizen]], hears that Ichigo called her one of his '[[LikeASisterToME younger sisters]]' in the future, she's... [[ITakeOffenseToThatOne somewhat]] [[WomanScorned irked]].
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: When [[spoiler: [[MsFanservice Neliel]], now an adult permanently due to [[TheMeddler Aizen]], Aizen]]]], hears that Ichigo called [[spoiler: thought of her as one of his '[[LikeASisterToME '[[LikeBrotherAndSister younger sisters]]' in the future, future,]] she's... [[ITakeOffenseToThatOne [[ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne somewhat]] [[WomanScorned irked]].irked]]. [[spoiler: She very pointedly goes out of her way to [[TheTease remind]] [[ShipTease him]] that she's ''definitely'' not his sister when they meet up.]]
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* ItsPersonal: See ArmourPiercingQuestion. While explaing to Ishida why Aizen needs to be stopped, not once does Ichigo deny Ishida's claim, suggesting that Ichigo did eventually come to resent Aizen like his allies in the Gotei 13 and the Vizards already had.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]]. \n It is the most popular Peggy Sue story, and the third most popular story overall, in the ''Bleach'' fandom.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, but they're all revealed to have just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops. The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]]."
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, but they're all revealed to have just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops. The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]].awesome."
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** The various shinigami and visored commenting on how weird it is that Ichigo knows the future.
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* RetGone: Senna, to a greater extent than in her movie. [[ForWantOfANail Since Ichigo spent all of his time after Rukia's rescue in Soul Society, she never forms in the first place]]. He doesn't even remember her]] until the AppliedPhlebotinum reveals his [[RippleEffectProofMemory subconscious memories]] of the events surrounding her.
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* RetGone: Senna, to a greater extent than in her movie. [[ForWantOfANail Since Ichigo spent all of his time after Rukia's rescue in Soul Society, she never forms in the first place]]. [[spoiler: He doesn't even remember her]] until the AppliedPhlebotinum reveals his [[RippleEffectProofMemory subconscious memories]] of the events surrounding her.
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** When Hollow Ichigo invokes the You Need To Get Laid trope.
** Toshiro's reaction to Ichigo's Knight Templar Big Brother attitude.
** Toshiro's reaction to Ichigo's Knight Templar Big Brother attitude.
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** When Hollow Ichigo invokes the You Need To Get Laid YouNeedToGetLaid trope.
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Deleted All Amazons Want Hercules because the example has nothing to do with that trope. Deleted Arson Murder And Jaywalking because the last part is actually a serious offense to them, so it doesn't fit the trope. Deleted Blatant Lies because it's not just about something being completely false; it's about the lie obviously being a lie, which in the example given it's not. (Zangetsu has to clarify it's a lie later and explain the truth.) Deleted Fridge Logic because a quote isn't an example and the content is not something that makes no sense after you think about it a bit.
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->''In the final battle with Aizen [[ForWantOfANail a different choice is made]], and now Ichigo and his greatest enemy have [[PeggySue gone back to the beginning]]. His best friends are powerless, his allies don't know him, and everything he loves is in danger.''
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku Ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]].
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku Ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]].
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->''In the final battle with Aizen [[ForWantOfANail a different choice is made]], made, and now Ichigo and his greatest enemy have [[PeggySue gone back to the beginning]].beginning. His best friends are powerless, his allies don't know him, and everything he loves is in danger.''
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina HogyokuEx ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]].
-->--Fanfiction.net summary
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler: "Consorting with a declared threat to the peace! Offering to free a dangerous criminal! Releasing hundreds of Menos Grande into Soul Society! ''Merging with a second zanpakuto!''"]]
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler: "Consorting with a declared threat to the peace! Offering to free a dangerous criminal! Releasing hundreds of Menos Grande into Soul Society! ''Merging with a second zanpakuto!''"]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Because Muramasa isn't a zanpakuto formed from Ichigo's soul, Aizen isn't able to drain him into the King's Key's creation right away. Thus, Ichigo is able to call upon Muramasa before Aizen can kill them both.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save Ichigo from the hollowfied Tousen.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Because Muramasa isn't a zanpakuto formed from Ichigo's soul, Aizen isn't able to drain him into the King's Key's creation right away. Thus, Ichigo is able to call upon Muramasa before Aizen can kill them both.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save[[spoiler:Muramasa]] saves Ichigo from the hollowfied Tousen.]]Aizen's trap.
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save
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* BlatantLies: Zangetsu tells Renji that Ichigo is practicing how to [[LiteralSplitPersonality split himself up]] to make training in other areas easier. This is a brazen lie, as they have entirely different reasons to do this and it will actually make the training harder. Ichigo is rather disturbed that his ''sword'' is a much better liar than he is.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Ichigo, his hollow and Yamamoto discuss whether or not it's possible to [[spoiler:bind two zapakuto to a shinigami at once.]] All while [[spoiler: Tensa Zangetsu and Muramasa]] try to kill each other about 20 feet away.
* CelibateHero[=/=]ChasteHero[=/=]CluelessChickMagnet: Ichigo as usual and lampshaded mercilessly. In fact, his obliviousness to when people are interested in him [[spoiler:indirectly leads to Aizen's defeat]].
* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: Muramasa. Without him, [[TheBadGuyWins Aizen's plans would have succeeded]]. You really don't expect a filler character to carry so much weight]].
* CelibateHero[=/=]ChasteHero[=/=]CluelessChickMagnet: Ichigo as usual and lampshaded mercilessly. In fact, his obliviousness to when people are interested in him [[spoiler:indirectly leads to Aizen's defeat]].
* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: Muramasa. Without him, [[TheBadGuyWins Aizen's plans would have succeeded]]. You really don't expect a filler character to carry so much weight]].
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Ichigo, his hollow hollow, and Yamamoto discuss whether or not it's possible to [[spoiler:bind two zapakuto to a shinigami at once.]] All while [[spoiler: Tensa once]]. Meanwhile, [[spoiler:Tensa Zangetsu and Muramasa]] try to kill each other about 20 feet away.
* CelibateHero[=/=]ChasteHero[=/=]CluelessChickMagnet:Ichigo Ichigo, as usual usual, and lampshaded mercilessly. In fact, his obliviousness to when people are interested in him [[spoiler:indirectly leads to Aizen's defeat]].
* ChekhovsGunman:[[spoiler: Muramasa. [[spoiler:Muramasa]] joining Ichigo becomes integral to the plot later on. Without him, [[TheBadGuyWins his involvement, Aizen's plans would have succeeded]]. You really don't expect a filler character to carry so much weight]].[[TheBadGuyWins succeeded]].
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. When [[spoiler:Muramasa decides that Ichigo should be his next wielder, [[TheStoic Zangetsu]] does NOT [[NotSoStoic take it well]].]]
* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of them so far. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
* DeadpanSnarker: Ichigo's hollow. See DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything below.
* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of them so far. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
* DeadpanSnarker: Ichigo's hollow. See DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything below.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. When [[spoiler:Muramasa [[spoiler:Muramasa]] decides that Ichigo should be his next wielder, [[spoiler:next wielder]], [[TheStoic Zangetsu]] does NOT [[NotSoStoic doesn't take it well]].]]
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* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of themso far. up to that point. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able is grooming Ichigo to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
eventually take over his position.
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** Ichigo's hollow. See DoesThisRemindYouOfAnythingbelow.below.
** Ishida has a moment when Ichigo breaks the first projection crystal and Mayuri exclaims over Ichigo's lack of control despite Ishida's warning.
--->'''Ishida Uryu:''' Sorry, did you think I was worried about him dropping it?
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** Ichigo's hollow. See DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything
** Ishida has a moment when Ichigo breaks the first projection crystal and Mayuri exclaims over Ichigo's lack of control despite Ishida's warning.
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* DeusExMachina: See the title.
* DisguisedHostageGambit: Right after traveling back, [[spoiler: Aizen switches appearances with Ichigo, leading everyone to attack the wrong person]].
* DisguisedHostageGambit: Right after traveling back, [[spoiler: Aizen switches appearances with Ichigo, leading everyone to attack the wrong person]].
to:
* DeusExMachina: See DiabolusExMachina: Just when the title.
hero is about to defeat the villain, a magic rock saves the villain by sending both of them back in time, allowing the villain to get away and better prepare for next time.
* DisguisedHostageGambit: Right after traveling back,[[spoiler: Aizen switches appearances with Ichigo, leading everyone to attack the wrong person]].person.
* DisguisedHostageGambit: Right after traveling back,
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'''Ichigo:''' What?\\
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'''Ichigo:''' No, but- don't say it like that!\\
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, [[spoiler: but they're all revealed to have just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops.]] The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]]."
* [[spoiler:EarnYourHappyEnding: For Shakushi, the spirit of Kenpachi's zanpakuto. Kenpachi even promises to be a bit more responsible with him!]]
* [[spoiler:EarnYourHappyEnding: For Shakushi, the spirit of Kenpachi's zanpakuto. Kenpachi even promises to be a bit more responsible with him!]]
to:
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Subverted. Aizen effortlessly slaughters several Shinigami when he and Ichigo return to the past, [[spoiler: but they're all revealed to have just received a TapOnTheHead from Ichigo once Aizen's illusion drops.]] drops. The author even defies this trope in the following chapter's notes: "If I kill [Yoruichi], [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it'll be way more epic than that]]. [[{{Badass}} She's awesome]]."
*[[spoiler:EarnYourHappyEnding: For EarnYourHappyEnding: After untold years of agony, Shakushi, the spirit [[spoiler:spirit of Kenpachi's zanpakuto. zanpakuto]], finally comes to an understanding with Kenpachi. Kenpachi even promises to be a bit more responsible with him!]]about the matter going forward.
*
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Nearly everyone is sickened with the thought of another Tousen (enough to agree with the less-than-popular Gin), [[spoiler:and nearly everyone was enraged by Kouga's mistreatment of Muramasa, whether they showed it or not.]]
* FantasticRacism: After learning that the Vizards that had been cast out a century ago were still alive and not crazy, the Gotei 13 members decide to actively avert this by asking if they want to come back with no strings attached, [[spoiler: offering the two empty captain positions to them]], and make plans to appoint a less racist Central 46 this time around.
* FantasticRomance: The hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:Neliel.]]
* FantasticRacism: After learning that the Vizards that had been cast out a century ago were still alive and not crazy, the Gotei 13 members decide to actively avert this by asking if they want to come back with no strings attached, [[spoiler: offering the two empty captain positions to them]], and make plans to appoint a less racist Central 46 this time around.
* FantasticRomance: The hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:Neliel.]]
to:
* EveryoneHasStandards: Nearly everyone is sickened with the thought of another Tousen (enough to agree with the less-than-popular Gin), [[spoiler:and and nearly everyone was is enraged by Kouga's to see [[spoiler:Kouga's mistreatment of Muramasa, Muramasa]], whether they showed express it or not.]]
not.
* FantasticRacism: After learning that the Vizards that had been cast out a century ago were still alive and not crazy, the Gotei 13 members decide to actively avert this by asking if they want to come back with no strings attached,[[spoiler: offering the two empty captain positions to them]], them, and make making plans to appoint a less racist Central 46 this time around.
* FantasticRomance:The Ichigo's inner hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:Neliel.]]is fixated on Neliel, for some reason.
* FantasticRacism: After learning that the Vizards that had been cast out a century ago were still alive and not crazy, the Gotei 13 members decide to actively avert this by asking if they want to come back with no strings attached,
* FantasticRomance:
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Ichigo does not use the Final Getsuga Tensho release against Aizen in the FinalBattle. Another example of this is that Senna from the first film never exists since Ichigo spends all his time in Soul Society and she is never created]].
* FridgeHorror: In-universe example when Ishida and Ichigo explain TB and antibiotics to Unohana. Unohana suddenly has OhCrap moment when she realises that if Ukitake had TB, she'd been unintentionally strengthening the disease.
* FridgeLogic: "I guess antibiotics don't work on dead guys then."
* GoodNewsBadNews:
-->'''Ichigo:''' I have good news and bad news. The good news is that you got your powers back.
-->''*Ishida looks hopeful*''
-->'''Ichigo:''' The bad news is, you never told me how.
-->''*Ishida looks pissed*''
* FridgeHorror: In-universe example when Ishida and Ichigo explain TB and antibiotics to Unohana. Unohana suddenly has OhCrap moment when she realises that if Ukitake had TB, she'd been unintentionally strengthening the disease.
* FridgeLogic: "I guess antibiotics don't work on dead guys then."
* GoodNewsBadNews:
-->'''Ichigo:''' I have good news and bad news. The good news is that you got your powers back.
-->''*Ishida looks hopeful*''
-->'''Ichigo:''' The bad news is, you never told me how.
-->''*Ishida looks pissed*''
to:
* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Ichigo Ichigo does not use the Final Getsuga Tensho release against Aizen in the FinalBattle. Another example of this is that Senna from canon FinalBattle, which leads to the first film never exists since Peggy Sue Diabolus ex Machina. From there, Ichigo spends all his gradually notices increasingly large changes as a result of him doing things differently the second time in Soul Society and she is never created]].
* FridgeHorror: In-universe example when Ishida and Ichigo explain TB and antibiotics to Unohana. Unohana suddenly has OhCrap moment when she realises that if Ukitake had TB, she'd been unintentionally strengthening the disease.
* FridgeLogic: "I guess antibiotics don't work on dead guys then."
* GoodNewsBadNews:
-->'''Ichigo:''' I have good news and bad news. The good news is that you got your powers back.around.
-->''*Ishida looks hopeful*''
-->'''Ichigo:''' The bad* FridgeHorror: In-universe example when Ishida and Ichigo explain tuberculosis and antibiotics to Unohana. Unohana suddenly has an OhCrap moment when she realises that if Ukitake has TB, she's been unintentionally strengthening the disease with healing kido.
* GoodNewsBadNews: Ichigo has good newsis, you for Ishida: he got his powers back in the future. However, he also has bad news: Ishida never told me how.
-->''*Ishida looks pissed*''him how it happened, so he can't provide Ishida with the information now.
* FridgeHorror: In-universe example when Ishida and Ichigo explain TB and antibiotics to Unohana. Unohana suddenly has OhCrap moment when she realises that if Ukitake had TB, she'd been unintentionally strengthening the disease.
* FridgeLogic: "I guess antibiotics don't work on dead guys then."
* GoodNewsBadNews:
-->'''Ichigo:''' I have good news and bad news. The good news is that you got your powers back.
-->'''Ichigo:''' The bad
* GoodNewsBadNews: Ichigo has good news
-->''*Ishida looks pissed*''
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* [[spoiler:HeelFaceTurn: Muramasa and because she was restored to her rank, Nel.]]
* {{Hologram}}: Using specially formed crystals, Mayuri created a device that allows people to project memories of theirs as holograms. It's main purpose is to not have the audience sit through Ichigo constantly explaining the plot to everyone else.
* [[spoiler:[[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Family and Best Friend]]]]
* {{Hologram}}: Using specially formed crystals, Mayuri created a device that allows people to project memories of theirs as holograms. It's main purpose is to not have the audience sit through Ichigo constantly explaining the plot to everyone else.
* [[spoiler:[[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Family and Best Friend]]]]
to:
* [[spoiler:HeelFaceTurn: Muramasa and HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Muramasa]] and, because she was restored to her former rank, Nel.]]
[[spoiler:Neliel]].
* {{Hologram}}: Using specially formed crystals, Mayuri created a device that allows people to project memories of theirs as holograms.It's Its main purpose is to not have the audience sit through Ichigo constantly explaining the plot to everyone else.
*[[spoiler:[[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Family IHaveYourWife: Aizen manages to capture Ichigo's family and Best Friend]]]]forces Ichigo to comply with his plan by holding them hostage.
* {{Hologram}}: Using specially formed crystals, Mayuri created a device that allows people to project memories of theirs as holograms.
*
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-->'''Ikkaku''': Hmmm… you got guts, Ichigo. Even if you're blind I'm not gonna go easy on you. You sure you want to do this?
-->'''Ichigo''': You don't think this is a good idea? ''(ponders)'' Yeah, you're right. This is really unequal.
-->'''Ikkaku''': ''(surprised)'' Huh?
-->'''Ichigo''': ''(smirking)'' Maybe if I tied one arm behind my back?
-->'''Ikkaku''': Oh, you're going ''down,'' punk!
-->'''Ichigo''': You don't think this is a good idea? ''(ponders)'' Yeah, you're right. This is really unequal.
-->'''Ikkaku''': ''(surprised)'' Huh?
-->'''Ichigo''': ''(smirking)'' Maybe if I tied one arm behind my back?
-->'''Ikkaku''': Oh, you're going ''down,'' punk!
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-->'''Ichigo''':
'''Kurosaki Ichigo:''' You don't think this is a good idea?
-->'''Ikkaku''': ''(surprised)'' Huh?
-->'''Ichigo''': ''(smirking)''
'''Madarame Ikkaku:''' ''[surprised]'' Huh?\\
'''Kurosaki Ichigo:''' ''[smirking]'' Maybe if I tied one arm behind my
-->'''Ikkaku''':
'''Madarame Ikkaku:''' Oh, you're going ''down,'' punk!
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* IWarnedYou: When Ishida's warns Mayuri (not very hard, mind you) that it wouldn't be a good idea to have Ichigo attempt to place his reiatsu into a rare and valuable crystal because he's clumsy, Mayuri blows him off. Then Ichigo (having a ''massive'' amount of reiatsu and no control over it, hence “clumsy”) makes the crystal explode.
-->'''Mayuri:''' DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THAT ''COST?''
-->'''Ishida:''' I told you so.
-->'''Mayuri:''' DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THAT ''COST?''
-->'''Ishida:''' I told you so.
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* IWarnedYou: When Ishida's Ishida warns Mayuri (not very hard, mind you) that it wouldn't be a good idea to have Ichigo attempt to place his reiatsu into a rare and valuable crystal because he's clumsy, Mayuri blows him off. Then Ichigo (having a ''massive'' amount of reiatsu and no control over it, hence “clumsy”) makes the crystal explode.
-->'''Mayuri:''' -->'''Kurotsuchi Mayuri:''' DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THAT ''COST?''
-->'''Ishida:'''''COST?''\\
'''Ishida Uryu:''' I told you so.
-->'''Ishida:'''
'''Ishida Uryu:''' I told you so.
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* {{Irony}}: When Ichigo hears that Hitsugaya hung out with his sister, he says, [[KnightTemplarBigBrother “He dies.”]] When it's pointed out that Hitsugaya probably didn't reciprocate any possible feelings of affection, he replies, “He'd [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] better not have! He's at least ten times her age!”
-->'''Hitsugaya:''' He wants to kill me because I'm too ''old?'' (''There was just something [[ChildProdigy cosmically unfair]] about that.'')
-->'''Hitsugaya:''' He wants to kill me because I'm too ''old?'' (''There was just something [[ChildProdigy cosmically unfair]] about that.'')
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* KarmaHoudini: Gin. Justified by the fact that Ichigo simply wasn't around when he committed his worst crimes and couldn't mention them.
** Though to be fair, Ichigo's intervention also prevents those crimes from ever happening.
** Though to be fair, Ichigo's intervention also prevents those crimes from ever happening.
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* KarmaHoudini: Gin. Justified by the fact that Ichigo simply wasn't around when he committed his worst crimes the first time around and couldn't mention them.
** Thoughcan't testify to be fair, them, and Ichigo's intervention also prevents those crimes from ever happening.happening the second time around.
** Though
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* LoopholeAbuse: In this fanfic, ain't no rules say a kido-user can't serve in the Eleventh Division. Yumichika is surprised.
** [[spoiler:Muramasa claims this when he bonds with Ichigo as a zanpakuto. He and Tensa Zangetsu disagree but Muramasa simply refuses to go away.]]
** [[spoiler:Muramasa claims this when he bonds with Ichigo as a zanpakuto. He and Tensa Zangetsu disagree but Muramasa simply refuses to go away.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: LoopholeAbuse:
** In this fanfic, ain't no rules say a kido-user can't serve in the Eleventh Division. Yumichika is surprised.
**[[spoiler:Muramasa [[spoiler:Muramasa]] claims this when he bonds [[spoiler:bonds with Ichigo as a zanpakuto. zanpakuto]]. He and Tensa Zangetsu disagree but Muramasa [[spoiler:Muramasa]] simply refuses to go away.]]
** In this fanfic, ain't no rules say a kido-user can't serve in the Eleventh Division. Yumichika is surprised.
**
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* MentalTimeTravel: Because of how the two of them gained their powers, Ichigo keeps all of his power-ups while Aizen ends up back at square one. This has advantages and disadvantages for both of them.
* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction to Nel for this when they first see her in Ichigo's memories. They're very relieved when they learn about Nel's adult form.
* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction to Nel for this when they first see her in Ichigo's memories. They're very relieved when they learn about Nel's adult form.
to:
* MentalTimeTravel: Because of how the two of them gained their powers, Ichigo keeps all of his power-ups while whereas Aizen ends up back at square one. This has advantages and disadvantages for both of them.
* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction toNel "Nel" for this when they first see her in Ichigo's memories. They're very relieved when they learn about Nel's adult form.form, Neliel.
* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction to
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-->'''Gin''': Intrigue, action, and a tragic ending. I give it four sta—
-->''(Matsumoto kicks him in the shin)''
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association will NOT let Ichigo get a haircut for this reason, and they take great pains to keep it that way.
* MySisterIsOffLimits: When Ichigo discovers that Karin held an interest in Toshiro, he decides that he's going to kill Toshiro, as [[Really700YearsOld he's at least ten times her age.]] Toshiro, who along with the rest of the Gotei 13 is watching Ichigo via a surveillance device, is [[OhCrap less than enthusiastic]] about the idea.
-->''(Matsumoto kicks him in the shin)''
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association will NOT let Ichigo get a haircut for this reason, and they take great pains to keep it that way.
* MySisterIsOffLimits: When Ichigo discovers that Karin held an interest in Toshiro, he decides that he's going to kill Toshiro, as [[Really700YearsOld he's at least ten times her age.]] Toshiro, who along with the rest of the Gotei 13 is watching Ichigo via a surveillance device, is [[OhCrap less than enthusiastic]] about the idea.
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-->'''Gin''': Intrigue, action, and a tragic ending. I give it four sta—
-->''(Matsumotosta—\\
''[Matsumoto kicks him in theshin)''
shin]''
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Associationwill NOT let conspire and go to great lengths to prevent Ichigo get from getting a haircut for this reason, and until they take great pains have enough pictures of his new look to keep it that way.
fill their next calendar.
* MySisterIsOffLimits: When Ichigo discovers that Karin held an interest in Toshiro, he decides that he's going to kill Toshiro,as who's [[Really700YearsOld he's at least ten times her Karin's age.]] Toshiro, who along with the rest of the Gotei 13 is watching Ichigo via a surveillance device, is [[OhCrap less than enthusiastic]] about the idea.
-->''(Matsumoto
''[Matsumoto kicks him in the
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association
* MySisterIsOffLimits: When Ichigo discovers that Karin held an interest in Toshiro, he decides that he's going to kill Toshiro,
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* PassThePopcorn: Several characters watching parts of Ichigo's life via [[AppliedPhlebotinum projections of his memories]] (which they had permission for) and with hidden security cameras (...which they did not). At one gathering, they comment on how entertaining his life is, some bring popcorn and Coke (Rukia told them it was a tradition), and everyone, even [[StoicSpectacles Ishida]] and [[GrumpyOldMan Yamamoto]], ends up treating it like a movie night.
* PeggySue: In the final battle, Aizen and Ichigo kill each other simultaneously. The Hogyoku then makes them snap back to the point in time when Aizen first touched the Hogyoku three months ago. They both quickly take advantage of the new circumstances.
* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''Yamamoto's Bankai'' like so much tissue paper.
** And you know how powerful soul reapers have a heavy spiritual pressure? Ichigo's is like the sky: It's there, it's beyond immense, but you can't actually feel it, [[ShownTheirWork just like Aizen described when he first saw this form]]. This actually works against Ichigo when he needs to be healed; since the healer can't sense his reiatsu, they can't do anything.
* PeggySue: In the final battle, Aizen and Ichigo kill each other simultaneously. The Hogyoku then makes them snap back to the point in time when Aizen first touched the Hogyoku three months ago. They both quickly take advantage of the new circumstances.
* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''Yamamoto's Bankai'' like so much tissue paper.
** And you know how powerful soul reapers have a heavy spiritual pressure? Ichigo's is like the sky: It's there, it's beyond immense, but you can't actually feel it, [[ShownTheirWork just like Aizen described when he first saw this form]]. This actually works against Ichigo when he needs to be healed; since the healer can't sense his reiatsu, they can't do anything.
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* PassThePopcorn: Several characters snack on popcorn and soda while watching parts of Ichigo's life via [[AppliedPhlebotinum projections of his memories]] (which they had have his permission for) and with hidden security cameras (...which (which they did do not). At one gathering, they comment on how entertaining his life is, some bring popcorn and Coke (Rukia told them it was a tradition), and everyone, even [[StoicSpectacles Ishida]] and [[GrumpyOldMan Yamamoto]], ends up treating it like a movie night.
* PeggySue: In the canon final battle, Aizen and Ichigo kill each other simultaneously. The Hogyoku thenmakes sends them snap back to the point in time to the moment when Aizen first touched the Hogyoku three months ago.before. They both quickly take advantage of the new circumstances.
* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''Yamamoto'sBankai'' bankai'' like so much tissue paper.
** Andpaper. Also, you know how powerful soul reapers have a heavy spiritual pressure? Ichigo's is like the sky: It's there, it's beyond immense, but you can't actually feel it, [[ShownTheirWork just like Aizen described describes in canon when he first saw sees this form]]. This actually works against Ichigo when he needs to be healed; since the healer can't sense his reiatsu, they can't do anything.
* PeggySue: In the canon final battle, Aizen and Ichigo kill each other simultaneously. The Hogyoku then
* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''Yamamoto's
** And
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* PrecisionFStrike: After being told his plan will ultimately not work, Gin's eyes are [[EyesAlwaysShut wide open]] and he says, "Well....shit."
* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Shakushi. Also a ScaryBlackMan, literally.]]
** MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:"Red Death."]]
* RetGone: [[spoiler:Senna, to a greater extent than in her movie. [[ForWantOfANail Since Ichigo spent all of his time after Rukia's rescue in Soul Society, she never forms in the first place]]. [[RippleEffectProofMemory He doesn't even remember her]] until the AppliedPhlebotinum shows it]].
* RunningGag: The various shinigami and visored commenting on how weird it is that Ichigo knows the future.
-->'''Renji:'''"… that's gonna be creepy for a while, isn't it?"
* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Shakushi. Also a ScaryBlackMan, literally.]]
** MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:"Red Death."]]
* RetGone: [[spoiler:Senna, to a greater extent than in her movie. [[ForWantOfANail Since Ichigo spent all of his time after Rukia's rescue in Soul Society, she never forms in the first place]]. [[RippleEffectProofMemory He doesn't even remember her]] until the AppliedPhlebotinum shows it]].
* RunningGag: The various shinigami and visored commenting on how weird it is that Ichigo knows the future.
-->'''Renji:'''"… that's gonna be creepy for a while, isn't it?"
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* PrecisionFStrike: PrecisionFStrike:
** After being told his plan will ultimately not work,Gin's eyes are [[EyesAlwaysShut Gin's]] eyes go wide open]] open and he says, "Well....shit."
** When Zangetsu attempts to calm down Ichigo by mentioning that Toushirou probably didn't reciprocate or even notice Karin's affection, Ichigo exclaims that, "He'd better fucking not have!"
* RedEyesTakeWarning:[[spoiler:Shakushi. Also Shakushi is a ScaryBlackMan, literally.]]
** MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:"Red Death."]]
very dangerous character with glowing red eyes.
* RetGone:[[spoiler:Senna, Senna, to a greater extent than in her movie. [[ForWantOfANail Since Ichigo spent all of his time after Rukia's rescue in Soul Society, she never forms in the first place]]. [[RippleEffectProofMemory He doesn't even remember her]] until the AppliedPhlebotinum shows it]].
reveals his [[RippleEffectProofMemory subconscious memories]] of the events surrounding her.
*RunningGag: RunningGag:
** The various shinigami and visored commenting on how weird it is that Ichigo knows the future.
-->'''Renji:'''"… that's --->'''Abarai Renji:''' ...That's gonna be creepy for a while, isn't it?"it?
** After being told his plan will ultimately not work,
** When Zangetsu attempts to calm down Ichigo by mentioning that Toushirou probably didn't reciprocate or even notice Karin's affection, Ichigo exclaims that, "He'd better fucking not have!"
* RedEyesTakeWarning:
** MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:"Red Death."]]
* RetGone:
*
** The various shinigami and visored commenting on how weird it is that Ichigo knows the future.
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-->''"People keep stabbing me. It's not as easy to survive as I make it look."''
* SelectiveObliviousness: One could make a case for Ichigo since his hollow, who's a part of him, never fails to point out his ChickMagnet status.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: Several characters are saved from dying the second time around and most if not all of the conflicts outside of Aizen's rebellion are worked around with diplomacy or other similar planning]].
* ShoutOut: Ishida is able to [[TaughtByTelevision rile off several treatments for tuberculosis because of an episode of]] ''Series/{{House}}'' he saw.
* SelectiveObliviousness: One could make a case for Ichigo since his hollow, who's a part of him, never fails to point out his ChickMagnet status.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: Several characters are saved from dying the second time around and most if not all of the conflicts outside of Aizen's rebellion are worked around with diplomacy or other similar planning]].
* ShoutOut: Ishida is able to [[TaughtByTelevision rile off several treatments for tuberculosis because of an episode of]] ''Series/{{House}}'' he saw.
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* SelectiveObliviousness: One could make a case for Ichigo
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong:
* ShoutOut: Ishida is able to
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*** Unohana gets one too. When she notices that Ichigo is OnlyMostlyDead, she notes that this means he is slightly alive.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:When Aizen decides to make the King's Key out of Ichigo instead of Karakura Town, he doesn't realize Ichigo now has another zanpakuto. [[BigDamnHeroes Muramasa to the rescue!!]]]]
to:
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:When When Aizen decides to make [[spoiler:make the King's Key out of Ichigo instead of Karakura Town, Town]], he doesn't realize Ichigo [[spoiler:Ichigo now has another zanpakuto. zanpakuto]]. [[spoiler:Muramasa]] [[BigDamnHeroes Muramasa to the rescue!!]]]]rescue!]]
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* StraightManAndWiseGuy: Ichigo and his interactions with the hollow are HILARIOUS and must be read to be believed.
* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands: The Captains use security cameras to keep an eye on Ichigo (and to keep updated with the plot). Unohana is particularly disturbed when she finds out Mayuri had them installed long before Ichigo even showed up.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When presented with the AppliedPhlebotinum.
-->'''Ishida:''' Would it modify Ichigo's memories in any way?
-->'''[[MadScientist Mayuri]]:''' It is perfectly safe! Only the first test subjects went insane!
-->'''Ichigo:''' Um…
* TapOnTheHead: During the DisguisedHostageGambit, most of TheCavalry gets knocked out before any damage is inflicted on themselves or the hostage. It failed to work on Kyoraku and was deemed as not even worth attempting on Yamamoto.
* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands: The Captains use security cameras to keep an eye on Ichigo (and to keep updated with the plot). Unohana is particularly disturbed when she finds out Mayuri had them installed long before Ichigo even showed up.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When presented with the AppliedPhlebotinum.
-->'''Ishida:''' Would it modify Ichigo's memories in any way?
-->'''[[MadScientist Mayuri]]:''' It is perfectly safe! Only the first test subjects went insane!
-->'''Ichigo:''' Um…
* TapOnTheHead: During the DisguisedHostageGambit, most of TheCavalry gets knocked out before any damage is inflicted on themselves or the hostage. It failed to work on Kyoraku and was deemed as not even worth attempting on Yamamoto.
to:
* StraightManAndWiseGuy: Ichigo and his interactions with the hollow are HILARIOUS and must be read to be believed.
often run this way.
* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands: TheCaptains captains use security cameras to keep an eye on Ichigo (and to keep updated with the plot). Unohana is particularly disturbed when she finds out Mayuri had them installed long before Ichigo even showed up.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When presented with theAppliedPhlebotinum.
AppliedPhlebotinum:
-->'''Ishida:''' Would it modify Ichigo's memories in anyway?
-->'''[[MadScientistway?\\
'''[[MadScientist Mayuri]]:''' It is perfectly safe! Only the first test subjects wentinsane!
-->'''Ichigo:''' Um…
insane!\\
'''Ichigo:''' Um...
* TapOnTheHead: During theDisguisedHostageGambit, Disguised Hostage Gambit, most of TheCavalry gets The Cavalry get knocked out before any damage is inflicted on themselves them or the hostage. hostages. It failed fails to work on Kyoraku and was is deemed as not even worth attempting on Yamamoto.
* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands: The
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When presented with the
-->'''Ishida:''' Would it modify Ichigo's memories in any
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'''[[MadScientist Mayuri]]:''' It is perfectly safe! Only the first test subjects went
-->'''Ichigo:''' Um…
'''Ichigo:''' Um...
* TapOnTheHead: During the
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-->'''Ichigo:''' Hinamori? They were pretty close, right?
-->'''Matsumoto:''' Were?
-->'''Ichigo:''' Are. Sorry. She got… will get better.
* TooDumbToLive[=/=]AssholeVictim: Oh, ''Yammy.''
-->'''Matsumoto:''' Were?
-->'''Ichigo:''' Are. Sorry. She got… will get better.
* TooDumbToLive[=/=]AssholeVictim: Oh, ''Yammy.''
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-->'''Ichigo:''' Hinamori? They were pretty close, right?
-->'''Matsumoto:''' Were?
-->'''Ichigo:'''right?\\
'''Matsumoto:''' Were?\\
'''Ichigo:''' Are. Sorry. Shegot… got... will get better.
* %%* TooDumbToLive[=/=]AssholeVictim: Oh, ''Yammy.''
-->'''Matsumoto:''' Were?
-->'''Ichigo:'''
'''Matsumoto:''' Were?\\
'''Ichigo:''' Are. Sorry. She
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* TrustPassword: Yamamoto gives Ichigo one of these for when Rukia will be RetGone d in the future (i.e. the third film). [[spoiler: It also ends up being useful for identification against Aizen's illusions, though Ichigo almost gets killed then anyway since the password is a name and he has trouble remembering it.]]
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* TrustPassword: TrustPassword:
** Yamamoto gives Ichigo one of these for whenRukia everyone's memories will be RetGone d erased in the future (i.e. , the events of the third film). [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It also ends up being useful for identification against Aizen's illusions, though Ichigo almost gets killed then anyway since the password is a name and he has trouble remembering it.illusions.]]
** Yamamoto gives Ichigo one of these for when
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* TheUnreveal: [[spoiler: When Shinji decides to finally use his Bankai, Aizen knocks him out cold before he can even say, "Bankai".]]
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* TheUnreveal: [[spoiler: When Shinji decides to finally use his Bankai, bankai, Aizen knocks him out cold before he can even say, "Bankai".]]
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-->Ichigo's bankai was not the most powerful. It was not even the fastest. What it was, however, was the ''easiest to use''. Ichigo had attained it and fought a captain with decades of experience an hour later, and had been able to do so because it needed no special abilities or skills beyond the fighting techniques he was already familiar with.... who was permanently in Shikai release, who compensated for the lack of decades of practice by using his Bankai as though it were his Shikai, who used his mask as though it were his Bankai, and who had still further means to increase his fighting ability.
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--> "This isn't right. This is what he wants. Us distracted. Always reacting to what he does."
* ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: Oddly for [[{{Shounen}} the genre]], most of things that are [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong set right]] are done by talking to people. Telling people that their rebellion will fail and/or offering an olive branch has surprisingly good results. Notably, this did not work on [[spoiler: Tousen]].
* WakingNonSequitur: Subverted; [[TheMedic Unohana]] thinks this is happening when Ichigo wakes up after a two day coma and, when asked about his previous fight, answers with "Aizen… [[OneWingedAngel turned into a butterfly]]." [[EmpathicWeapon Zangetsu]] has to inform her that it actually happened.
* [[spoiler: WoundThatWillNotHeal: The power of Shakushi, Kenpachi's sword. The effect can be deactivated.]]
* ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: Oddly for [[{{Shounen}} the genre]], most of things that are [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong set right]] are done by talking to people. Telling people that their rebellion will fail and/or offering an olive branch has surprisingly good results. Notably, this did not work on [[spoiler: Tousen]].
* WakingNonSequitur: Subverted; [[TheMedic Unohana]] thinks this is happening when Ichigo wakes up after a two day coma and, when asked about his previous fight, answers with "Aizen… [[OneWingedAngel turned into a butterfly]]." [[EmpathicWeapon Zangetsu]] has to inform her that it actually happened.
* [[spoiler: WoundThatWillNotHeal: The power of Shakushi, Kenpachi's sword. The effect can be deactivated.]]
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* ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: Oddly for [[{{Shounen}} the genre]], largely averted: most of the things that are [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong set right]] are done by talking to people. Telling people that their rebellion will fail and/or offering an olive branch has surprisingly good results. Notably, this
* WakingNonSequitur:
*
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Ichigo gets told this word-for-word by his [[SuperpoweredEvilSide hollow self]] since he's severely weakening himself in order to not be a PoisonousPerson (it came with his PhysicalGod status) and he's a ChickMagnet anyway, so why waste it? [[ChasteHero Ichigo's so embarrassed and adverse to the idea]] that the hollow turns to Zangetsu and asks, "He's not gay, right? I'd know if he was gay."
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Ichigo gets told this word-for-word by his [[SuperpoweredEvilSide hollow self]] since he's severely weakening himself in order to not be a PoisonousPerson (it came (which comes with his PhysicalGod status) and he's a ChickMagnet ChickMagnet, anyway, so why waste it? [[ChasteHero Ichigo's so embarrassed and adverse to the idea]] that the hollow turns to Zangetsu and asks, "He's not gay, right? I'd know if he was gay."
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9424156/1/Further-Machinations Further Machinations]]'', had its first chapter published on June 24, 2013, but it has not been updated since then.
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9424156/1/Further-Machinations Further Machinations]]'', had its first chapter published came out on June 24, 2013, but it the author has not been updated made no updates to it since then.
the first chapter.
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* ILikeThoseOdds: When Ichigo starts up a sparring session with Ikkaku, the latter is somewhat unwilling to fight since the former is wearing a blindfold as practice for fighting Aizen:
-->'''Ikkaku''': Hmmm… you got guts, Ichigo. Even if you're blind I'm not gonna go easy on you. You sure you want to do this?
-->'''Ichigo''': You don't think this is a good idea? ''(ponders)'' Yeah, you're right. This is really unequal.
-->'''Ikkaku''': ''(surprised)'' Huh?
-->'''Ichigo''': ''(smirking)'' Maybe if I tied one arm behind my back?
-->'''Ikkaku''': Oh, you're going ''down,'' punk!
-->'''Ikkaku''': Hmmm… you got guts, Ichigo. Even if you're blind I'm not gonna go easy on you. You sure you want to do this?
-->'''Ichigo''': You don't think this is a good idea? ''(ponders)'' Yeah, you're right. This is really unequal.
-->'''Ikkaku''': ''(surprised)'' Huh?
-->'''Ichigo''': ''(smirking)'' Maybe if I tied one arm behind my back?
-->'''Ikkaku''': Oh, you're going ''down,'' punk!
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* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction to Nel for this. They're relieved when they learn about Nel's adult form.
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association will NOT let Ichigo get a haircut for this reason and they take great pains to keep it that way.
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association will NOT let Ichigo get a haircut for this reason and they take great pains to keep it that way.
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* MistakenForPedophile: The characters mistake Hollow Ichigo's attraction to Nel for this. this when they first see her in Ichigo's memories. They're very relieved when they learn about Nel's adult form.
* MomentKiller: A tearful silence follows Ichigo's showing of Muramasa's life, ending with his AlasPoorVillain death. Then Gin speaks up:
-->'''Gin''': Intrigue, action, and a tragic ending. I give it four sta—
-->''(Matsumoto kicks him in the shin)''
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association will NOT let Ichigo get a haircut for thisreason reason, and they take great pains to keep it that way.
* MomentKiller: A tearful silence follows Ichigo's showing of Muramasa's life, ending with his AlasPoorVillain death. Then Gin speaks up:
-->'''Gin''': Intrigue, action, and a tragic ending. I give it four sta—
-->''(Matsumoto kicks him in the shin)''
* MrFanservice: The Shinigami Women's Association will NOT let Ichigo get a haircut for this
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* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touches Ichigo's bare skin while he's in this form gets severely burned, which makes sense given what we know about spiritual pressure if the individual in question were indescribably powerful.
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* PoisonousPerson: The author added this effect to Ichigo's PhysicalGod form to give him a weakness; basically anyone who touches Ichigo's bare skin while he's in this form (even Yamamoto) gets severely burned, which makes sense given what we know about spiritual pressure if the individual in question were indescribably powerful.