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** In this universe both the Tohsaka and Sajyou families are related to each other. [[Anime/FatePrototype Ayaka]] herself is the grandmother of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Rin, Sakura,]], and Aya, the latter of whom is based on the Ayaka Sajyou from ''Literature/FateStrangeFake''.
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** In this universe both the Tohsaka and Sajyou families are related to each other. [[Anime/FatePrototype Ayaka]] herself is the grandmother of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Rin, Sakura,]], Sakura]], and Aya, the latter of whom is based on the Ayaka Sajyou from ''Literature/FateStrangeFake''.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi Archisorte. She was originally just a minor character in ''Literature/FateApocrypha'', but here she's the Master of Archer of Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi Archisorte. She was originally just a minor character in ''Literature/FateApocrypha'', but here she's the Master of Archer of Red. Similarly, Waver/Lord El-Melloi goes from a cameo to the Master of Rider of Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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* CatchPhrase: Siegfried's [[MemeticMutation "I'm sorry" and "My apologies"]]. Lampshaded by Achilles in chapter 29 when Sieg tried to copy it.
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*** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin of Black, rather [[Ligterature/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas' Master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
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*** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin of Black, rather [[Ligterature/FateZero [[Literature/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas' Master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
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** Averted in regards to the Archers, Riders, and Lancers of Red. Atalante, Karna, and Achilles are all still summoned, just not as they were in canon. Achilles is summoned as the Lancer of Red, whilst Iskander is summoned as the Rider of Red. Atalante and Karna are still summoned in their respective classes, but as Servants of Shirou Kotomine's Rogue Faction rather than apart of the Red Faction. Instead, [[Anime/FatePrototype Gilgamesh]] is summoned as the Archer of Red.
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** Averted in regards to the Archers, Riders, and Lancers of Red. Atalante, Karna, and Achilles are all still summoned, just not as they were in canon. Achilles is summoned as the Lancer of Red, whilst Iskander is summoned as the Rider of Red. Atalante and Karna are still summoned in their respective classes, classes but as Servants of Shirou Kotomine's Rogue Faction rather than apart of the Red Faction. Instead, [[Anime/FatePrototype Gilgamesh]] is summoned as the Archer of Red.
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The plot of the story starts in a similar fashion to ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha''- Jeanne d'Arc is summoned as Ruler, overseer of the Great Holy Grail War, but she quickly summons [[Anime/FatePrototype Arthur Pendragon]] as her Saber-class Servant to protect and aid her. It is quickly revealed that the Servant roster of the Red and Black Factions are different and there are more than 14 Servants at play, with a third Faction operating behind the scenes serving as the [[BigBad Big Bad]] followed by a fourth Faction.
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The plot of the story starts in a similar fashion to ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha''- ''Literature/FateApocrypha''- Jeanne d'Arc is summoned as Ruler, overseer of the Great Holy Grail War, but she quickly summons [[Anime/FatePrototype Arthur Pendragon]] as her Saber-class Servant to protect and aid her. It is quickly revealed that the Servant roster of the Red and Black Factions are different and there are more than 14 Servants at play, with a third Faction operating behind the scenes serving as the [[BigBad Big Bad]] followed by a fourth Faction.
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** Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker-Lancelot as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
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** Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker-Lancelot as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, Literature/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
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*** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin of Black, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas' Master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
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*** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin of Black, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero [[Ligterature/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas' Master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
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** It's noted in Literaturel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on an equal footing would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.
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** It's noted in Literaturel/FateApocrypha Literature/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on an equal footing would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate/Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate/Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' ''Literature/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Literature/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi Archisorte. She was originally just a minor character in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', ''Literature/FateApocrypha'', but here she's the Master of Archer of Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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** Gilgamesh fights Lancelot on two separate occasions in LightNovel/FateZero. They do the same thing in this fanfic, albeit with some slight differences and for different reasons.
** Iskandar mentions that if Arthur had regretted his rule at the banquet, [[Anime/FateZero he'd have to scold him]]. On the whole, the banquet really is just taken from Anime/FateZero, but with more characters and with a different ending.
** It's noted in LightNovel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on an equal footing would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.
** Iskandar mentions that if Arthur had regretted his rule at the banquet, [[Anime/FateZero he'd have to scold him]]. On the whole, the banquet really is just taken from Anime/FateZero, but with more characters and with a different ending.
** It's noted in LightNovel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on an equal footing would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.
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** Gilgamesh fights Lancelot on two separate occasions in LightNovel/FateZero.Literature/FateZero. They do the same thing in this fanfic, albeit with some slight differences and for different reasons.
** Iskandar mentions that if Arthur had regretted his rule at the banquet,[[Anime/FateZero [[Literature/FateZero he'd have to scold him]]. On the whole, the banquet really is just taken from Anime/FateZero, Literature/FateZero, but with more characters and with a different ending.
** It's noted inLightNovel/FateApocrypha Literaturel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on an equal footing would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.
** Iskandar mentions that if Arthur had regretted his rule at the banquet,
** It's noted in
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Now available on [=AO3=] [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7054051/chapters/16037098 here]].
